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Veni, Vidi, (Re)aedificavi "I Came, I saw, I (Re)built" (A Commissioned Battletech Isekei)

Chapter 19 New
Chapter 19

Date: December 20, 3027

"It's with great pleasure that I can finally say that we'll be opening our doors for full business on January 3rd, Thirty Twenty Eight!" I said to the crowded entry room of the factory complex to a bunch of cheers. It'd taken a year, but we were finally about to get started. Our machines were ready, our people were trained, and it was time to get started on making the very things that were going to set us apart. "Now, enjoy the party and the next few weeks off," I spoke into the mic with a grin on my face. "We've got plenty of food and booze. So have a great evening, and a Merry Christmas!"

With that final word, I stepped down from the small podium we'd set up and nodded for the hired DJ to start playing his music again.

"This is nice," Rebecca said, meeting me with a glass of wine. I'd invited her as my date for the evening after having spent the last few months going on a handful of dates. "I don't think I've seen any factories with something like this."

She pointed at the 'glass' encased Mackie that stood in the middle of the room. We'd spent some extra money, but in the end, it really did make the room look perfect. Our flagship product on display with myomer muscles flexing and weapons pointed at the front gates for any potential intruders.

"The Interior designers didn't agree until they saw what we'd done with it," I replied with a chuckle. "Once they did, they fell over themselves trying to figure out which one of them got to play with the design that went around the 'mech."

"Well, they certainly seemed to go with something practical yet elegant," Rebecca indicated the polished and painted concrete mixture that was under our feet.

"It was all we'd let them do," I said, sipping my glass of wine. "This is a factory, we don't need to get too fancy with it. Practical's the main throughline of our entire business model, it wouldn't make sense for us to throw that away."

As we walked towards the tables laden with food, we were intercepted by Sylvie and her date. The FWL officer was as at ease here as he would have been in any environment, or at least it seemed like it.

"Rebecca!" Sylvie rushed and hugged my date. "It's so good to see you again! I keep telling Edmund to bring you around more."

"That'd be my fauly," Rebecca admitted shamelessly. "I'm trying to help him find a work-life balance. So, any dates with me means he's not allowed to think about coming back here until the next day," She shrugged. "It's a work in progress, but I think I'll have it working in a couple of years."

"Good luck," Sylvie laughed. "We're lucky if he's not here before we get here and after we leave for the day."

"Startups rely on blood, sweat, and the time you pour into the first few years," I replied. "I work hard now so that later, I don't have to do nearly as much."

Rebecca just shook her head at me before continuing to pull me towards the food table.

"I hate to move on, but I'm hungry, and my boyfriend here promised some good food," Rebecca elbowed me in the ribs.

"That, I did," I nodded. "Not that I made any of it, I'd burn water if I weren't careful. But all the catering should be good, you're the one who gave me the recommendations."

"That's why I want to get to the table," Rebecca tugged me along, her olive dress and dark skin flowing just right in the twinkling lights that we'd decorated the place in. "The smoked meats from Oscar's are divine, I don't want to miss out on them."

"Well, I'll let you be the one to point me in the right direction then," I followed until we reached the table and picked out foods with a bit less spice before finding a seat at one of the tables.

The conversation between Rebecca and I found a natural lull as we ate, and I began watching what my employees were doing. Billy and Eddy were with a group of veteran factory workers, laughing and chatting at some story that had likely already been told between them for decades. In another area, the office people congregated, less loud, but no less engaged in whatever was going on. Then, there were all younger folks taking the opportunity to tear up the dance floor.

They danced, the music played, and the groups began to dissolve and mingle in new and interesting ways.

"You did good here," Rebecca said in a quiet moment as she looked at what I was observing. "Real good," She squeezed my hand and went back to chowing down on the smoked brisket.

This felt right. I'd always enjoyed the moments when I could see the fruits of my labor and celebrate it with the people that helped make it happen. Sure, I had some sort of special ability now. But didn't really mean jack shit without each and every one of the people who were helping me to run the factory. I was one man, and no one man was the sole source of everything. Hell, I'd have never even been able to do this in the first place if it weren't for Sylvie being willing to take a chance on a crazy guy who'd just quit Quikscell.


"What's that smile for?" Rebecca asked, polishing off her food before wiping the corners of her mouth. Whatever lipstick she'd had one wasn't there anymore.

"Just thinking about how far we've come," I gestured around me. "If you'd have asked me two years ago, I'd have said this sort of thing was impossible and called them a liar."

"Waiting for things to go wrong again so things feel right?" Rebecca finished. "Sometimes, we forget that good things can happen. We get so sucked up into thinking that everything is always balanced that we dont' realize the good can continue. By waiting and hesitating thinking that the bad part's about to hit, we stop and brace for something that never comes. Making us the ones who set ourselves up for the failure, not fate or Murphy, or what have you."

My date shrugged. "Good happens, bad happens, we kick some snow, mutter a few cusswords, pick up our snowboard, and we climb back up the slopes. Now, throw away these plates and meet me on the dancefloor."

"I'm warning you that I'm terrible," I laughed. "I havent danced in a long time."

"Neither have I," She stage whispered. "Which means it'll be twice as fun when we both mess it up!"

She was crazy, but she was also exactly the kind of person I'd been looking for all my life. It was a shame I'd had to die to find her.






Date: April 15, 3028

We had started operations on January 3rd, and as a result, we had a full lance of Mackies ready for the FWL milita trials. The funny thing was, even if we didn't end up selling these to the militia, we already had a mercenary buyer lined up.

Hammer lance had apparently hit a windfall after being one of our very first customers. They'd expanded from a lance to a near-company in the last few years, and were looking for something solid to back them up. They'd remembered us and had reached out to see if we could free up any of our production of the Mackies beyond what we were selling to the militia.

While I appreciated the faith that Hammer placed in our products, I actually wanted the 'mechs to pass the militia's trials. Not that smaller customers like Hammer weren't going to be important. But we were seeking a government contract that would fill our main coffers, then we could worry about pushing out more production to sell to the mercenaries like Hammer.

That said, he'd seemed in good spirits when I diverted him over to the salvage side of things, and he ended up picking up a pair of refit 'mechs before heading back offworld with a promise to return and see if we were selling any of the assault mechs later.

Still, if nothing else, the trials were at least somewhat satisfying to watch on a primal level. A big gun and pretty lights leading to things burning, blowing up, and being destroyed was just enjoyable to my brain. It was like getting to watch Mythbusters in person.

The test pilot was a guy named Jack from Solaris who specialized in testing new and unusual equipment.

A grizzled and graying man who had been there, done that, and gotten nothing but scars from it.

It'd honestly been a relief to hear his first words once he'd powered it up and walked around for a bit.

"She handles smooth and has a big gun," he commented. "Let's hope it stays that way."

Unfortunately, while I was allowed to watch the warm ups and first performance, I wasn't allowed to watch the full trials. I'd be permitted to review the footage and the results later, but the FWL surprisingly didn't want any CEOs influencing the peopel conducting the grading. At least not overtly.

Apparently most companies just figured out who the people issuing the tests and bribed them well in advance. Not that I would have done that in the first place, but it was definitely something interesting to see now that I was amidst this world.

"Don't you want to see what's happening?" Sylvie asked me, tossing her magazine down in frustration.

"Of course I do," I admitted. "I'm as curious as you are to how things are going. I also was really looking forward to the explosions. That said, you're forgetting something, Sylvie. We don't just get to watch through the external cameras. We get to watch everything via the Roms later. Everything Jack said, did, or shot at."

"I suppose I can wait for that," She sighed. "It just feels like we're finally getting somewhere only to get held back, again."

"Even if we don't pass the FWL militia trials, we can sell units to mercenary groups," I shrugged. "But I don't think that'll be an issue here. We're not trying to pass the trails mandated for front-lines, we're aiming for the second-line and garrison troops. It'll work out."




"Well," Colonel Lezzhov said after he and his staff had come back into the room following the trials a week later. "I almost wish that you had been pushing this for the front lines. It's a fucking zombie of a 'mech."

"How'd you figure that?" I asked, not having looked through the paperwork they'd given me yet.

"Well, there are a lot of criteria when it comes to procurement of a 'mech or any piece of war equipment," Lezzhov stated. "The first one is salvageability. Despite what we tell people to recruit them, a 'mech is far more valuable to us than the mechwarrior within it. So, we shot the shit out of the 'mech, blew it up with everything we could, and then had our techs rebuild it. In most cases we could have it back up and running again within five or six hours. Now, we don't test engine hits in these tests, but if we did, I suspect it would endure that as well."

The Colonel tapped the papers.

"The next criteria is lethality," He continued. "How much damage is it going to do to another 'mech, tank, etc. While back in the Star League Era, we'd have had tests against other mechs, tanks, etc. Nowadays it's an industrialmech chassis with a bunch of armor on it. We did ding you a bit on the long-range, but PPCs are scarce nowadays, so that one was still a pass."


"Where did we fail?" I asked, nervously tapping my hands on the conference room table.

"That's the thing, you didn't," Lezzhov stated. "We're willing to purchase the full lance you have available now as well as the next two off the line. That's our budget for this year. Unfortunately, it looks like Quikscell's going to get more money out of us. But that's the price we're going to have to pay to get extra firepower like this."

"About Quikscell," I smirked and leaned forward…
 
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So what was the final weapons loadout for this variant? I don't think it was ever said.
 
Mackie MSK-7M New
Mackie MSK-7M
Mass: 100 tons
Chassis: Industrial Industrial Biped
Power Plant: 300 Fusion
Cruising Speed: 32.4 kph
Maximum Speed: 54 kph
Jump Jets: None
Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Jump Booster: 0 meters
Armor: Standard
Armament:
1 AC/20
1 Medium Blazer
2 Large Lasers
Communication System: Unknown
Targeting & Tracking System: Unknown
Introduction Year: 3028
Tech Rating/Availability: D/X-X-E-D
Cost: 5,506,250 C-bills
Type: Mackie
Technology Base: Inner Sphere (Standard)
Tonnage: 100
Battle Value: 1,542

Equipment Mass
Internal Structure

Industrial

20
Engine

300 Fusion

19
Walking MP:

3
Running MP:

5
Jumping MP:

0
Heat Sink:

21

11
Gyro:

3
Cockpit:

3
Armor Factor: 248

15


Internal
Structure
Armor
Value
Head

3

9
Center Torso

31

35
Center Torso (rear)

12
R/L Torso

21

26
R/L Torso (rear)

8
R/L Arm

17

26
R/L Leg

21

32


Weapons
and Ammo
Location Critical Tonnage
2 Heat Sink

LL

2

2
2 Heat Sink

CT

2

2
Heat Sink

RT

1

1
AC/20 Ammo (15)

RT

3

3
Large Laser

RT

2

5
Medium Blazer

LA

3

2
Heat Sink

LT

1

1
Large Laser

LT

2

5
2 Heat Sink

RL

2

2
Heat Sink

HD

1

1
AC/20

RA

10

14

Features the following design quirks: Easy to Maintain, Protected Actuators, Rugged (1 Point), Oversized

Notes: Medium Blazers do 7 damage, take up 3 crits, has the range of the medium laser, and have a heat factor of 5.
 
Hmm, seems a bit undergunned considering the space and weight that would've been saved from upgrading from the original Mackie's Primitive components. Then again perhaps that's due to using an industrial chassis instead of a standard chassis, been a long while since I played around with Battletech's mech building rules outside of the stripped down version from HBS' game.
 
Hmm, seems a bit undergunned considering the space and weight that would've been saved from upgrading from the original Mackie's Primitive components. Then again perhaps that's due to using an industrial chassis instead of a standard chassis, been a long while since I played around with Battletech's mech building rules outside of the stripped down version from HBS' game.
It is a bit undergunned. Industrial skeletons weigh more than standard battlemech ones. They're also a bit cheaper than Primitive ones. But you can't mix and match armor types on a primitive mech in RAW. But you can on an industrialmech.
 
Chapter 20 New
Chapter 20

Date: June 8, 3028
Location: Shiloh, Free Worlds League

"Incoming missile," Bitchin' Betty announced, the warning locks screaming in Justin Hammer's ear to evade the flurry of missiles that were homing in on his Griffin. Despite the age of the 'mech, he was able to pivot on his side, hit his jump jets, and move a small hop away from the majority of the missiles, with two pickmarking the armor on his left side, the side without any armaments.

"I'm feeding telemetry data," Hammer spoke into his short company's frequency as he returned fire against the medium-weight lance that was scouting out the old Lyran world. "Primary target is the Trebuchet, then we can hammer the light 'mechs as they enter our crosshairs."

"Affirmative, lead," his primary lance began to respond. The missile carriers they'd bought a year and a half ago, along with the Scorpion, had been just the resurgence in material they'd needed amidst their contract issues back then. Even better, said vehicles and his ancient Griffin were the best machines they owned. The parts never seemed to wear out at the same rate everything they'd salvaged since did, and thei were also easier to repair.

So, when he told them to hit the Trebuchet, they did. Adam's team in the LRM carrier got a lock almost immediately, and Scott's team in the Scorpion began to unload the autocannon into the medium 'mech's legs while missiles arced around and fell around its shoulders.

"Hammer Lead, be advised, there's a Commando and a Locust moving to attempt to flank, we're going to cut them off," Castle reported. When they'd expanded after salvage, she'd moved into the Vindicator they'd salvaged from the Capellans six months ago. Her lance consisted of another pair of Scorpions and a Manticore they'd somehow managed to talk the FWL into footing the bill for the repairs in the last contract.

"Copy that, Castle," Hammer replied, striking at the Trebuchet's partner that had finally shown up. "I've got an ID on the last of this lance. Looks like we've got a Wasp here to round out the rest of them."

The short company signaled their acknowledgement, and the small skirmish continued. Even if Hammer and his people outmassed the scout lance, he wasn't going to take chances. Besides, if he was right and that insignia was the unit he though, then the Black Cobras wouldn't be happy that he had wiped out one of their lone mercenary lances.

Major Burr wasn't the main head of the Black Cobras, but he was in charge of one of their battalions, and he had always been a spiteful man, and they'd look for contracts to hit Hammer and his people all the harder. Problem was, the Black Cobras had the funding and 'mechs to come after the scout lance and kill him and his people. He was going to have to reach back out to Siler's to see if they would allow him to purchase one or two of those Mackies.

Slow and old, might the tech be, but he couldn't really knock it after using the five-ton heavier Griffin they'd bought from Siler's. It worked just as well as the other 'mechs he'd used. Something he put to careful use as he dodged the laser fire from the Wasp and retaliated with the strike from a PPC, the purple-blue bolt of manmade lightning struck the knee joint and sheered the leg off the light 'mech, causing it to fall to the earth and leave a trench where it had almost dug its own grave.

"Sarah, cover that Wasp," Hammer ordered the last tank commander that was a part of his lance. The SRM carrier was lethal to anything in range of it, and it was the perfect babysitter. "If he tries to get up, take out the cockpit."

"I'll see what I can swing, boss," Sarah said, and Hammer could hear the savage grin on the woman's face.

With that handled, he turned his attention back to the Trebuchet that was harassing his people.

"Attention Lyran Mercenaries, power down and surrender now, and we'll allow you to leave with your 'mechs and your pilot," Hammer broadcast on the open frequency. "We're keeping the Wasp."

"This is Lieutenant Dunman," the Trebuchet replied. "I didn't realize that the Free Worlds League was so down on their luck that they couldn't afford for people to have modern Griffins."

"If it works, it works," Hammer said, locking on and pulling the trigger on his twin LRM-5 racks, while also slamming his feet down on his jump jets, the plasma sending him soaring up and over the medium lasers that had attempted to carve away at him. Coming down on the side, Hammer grinned as Scott's Scorpion's class-five autocannon ripped the armor off the left shoulder of the 'medium 'mech. Leaving it vulnerable to the missile fire from Adam's LRM carrier.

Of course, now Hammer was in perfect range for an extra weapon Siler's salvage had installed on the 60 ton Griffin. The Medium laser bit deep into the already compromised shoulder and caused it to fall off the medium 'mech, the myomers connecting the shoulder and the torso cut by the lone laser after all the damage it had taken.

A few seconds later, Hammer's PPC rammed deep into the side of the torso, staggering Dunman and causing him to dump the ammunition bins on his 'mech before the autoeject system tried to kick him out of his 'mech.

Dunman's reactor must have sustained some minor damaged, because as he dumped the ammo, the heat signature on Hammer's thermal sensors lit up with a white-hot glow and the 'mech stopped moving for a critical few seconds.

Said seconds were just enough time for Hammer to get close and hammer the cockpit on the lighter 'mech with his fist, sending the stock-still 'mech crashing to the ground into a crater of its own making.

"This is Hammer Lead, we've eliminated the pair over here," Justin stated. "Castle, report."

"Enemy 'mechs are retreating," she reported. "It appears we've scared them off for now."

"Let's hope that Burr doesn't decide to make this a grudge match," Hammer sighed. "He outmasses us overall, and has the rest of the Crater Cobras to call on. Now, let's get salvage and recovery in here, it looks like we've got a pretty good haul."







Date: June 10, 3028
Location: Shiloh, Free Worlds League

"I want to sell the Wasp," Hammer looked around at the rest of his staff. "Now, I'm the first of us to admit that we need a light 'mech in the mix with everything else that we have. However, with the combat bonus we just earned, we've got enough that we can afford to gain a bit of an anchor for our forces."

"I don't like twenty-tonners," Adam said, stroking at his five o'clock shadow. "I'd be okay with selling it as long as we replace it with something that's better."

"Siler's is supposed to be done with supplying the local militia forces with the Mackie in the next few months," Castle stated. "Based on our previous negotiations, we can likely work our way into an early spot before the production has been sold out."

"So, instead of a light 'mech, we're going with an assault," Scott commented. "Isn't she supposed to be super slow?"

"Yes," Hammer admitted. "She's going to be the slowest of everything we have if we purchase her, and she's not going to have quite the range of everything else. But she'll have a class twenty, and I have no doubt that someone will underestimate it and we'll end up with more salvage that way."

"It's also only a single jump away," Castle stated. "I do think that this is a worthwhile investment, but that we will need to look into keeping any further salvage for our own use."

"I'd prefer we make this a vote among the senior officers instead of me just making the decision here," Hammer stated, looking around the table. "I think it's the better option for us in the long term. It'll give us an anchor for the lighter forces, and give us more firepower where it's important. But, we could also keep the Wasp and buy a Demolisher instead for the same price."

"There are pros and cons to every decision," Adam shrugged. "Way I see it, the 'mech's the easier thing to keep in the fight and maneuver over all sorts of terrain. So, my vote is for the Mackie."

"I want to have my cake and eat it too," Scott smirked. "Sorry, Adam, I want to take out a loan to buy the Mackie. We can afford the payments. Especially if we keep doing as well as we did today. Combat bonuses and salvage makes for a good day."

"If we could count on that, I'd agree," Sarah sighed. "But we can't. There's no possible way we maintain our current win ratio. We're eventually going to lose hard and we'll end up back where we started if we aren't smart about this. My vote is for the Mackie."

"Castle's lance always agrees with her," Adam commented. "So, we should just send someone to pick up the Mackie and start working it into our formations."

"I'll list the Wasp on the market," Hammer nodded. "It shouldn't be long before we get a few hits on it. Hell, the Cobras might want to buy it back. Seeing as it's all fixed now and we haven't stripped the paint off it yet."

"I guess that's all we've got to discuss then," Castle said. "I'll send a message to Edmund Blaze and we'll get started on the paperwork. Now that they're an approved distributor for the Free Worlds League, we may be able to get a discount due to the logistical support side of our contract with the local militia."

"Well, it's at least worth a shot," Hammer agreed. "I don't know anyone that wants to pay full price for a 'mech. That said, after our current contract's up, we might want to see about dipping our toes into the corporate world a bit."

"I'll ask around and see if they're looking to hire any security contractors in exchange for access to their facilities and discounts," Castle nodded. "It may very well be that it enables us to grow and get our forces truly repaired."

"It'll at least move us a bit further away from the border," Hammer shrugged. "I have a feeling that things are going to go very hot soon, and I'd rather have a gravy contract before it boils over."

"I think you just spoke for all of us, boss," Scott laughed. "Let's hope that they're looking to hire."
 
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