InZodwetrust
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Which clan was Strom from?
Which clan was Strom from?
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I think you should've dropped this into the nsfw creative writing forum. It would've got far more attention because it's an excellent story!!
Lmao, I was wondering why this story had such a low interaction level seeing as it's really top notch and then noticed it's in the SFW thread.Oh damn! Did he not do that? MAGIKUSER! YOu should have known better. Time to migrate this story over there
Lmao, I was wondering why this story had such a low interaction level seeing as it's really top notch and then noticed it's in the SFW thread.
I planned on slowly moving this story over to that side as well. so I will be moving hopefully two chapters a week on Mondays and Fridays till we are caught up. Hopefully the mods don't mind me double dipping...I think you should've dropped this into the nsfw creative writing forum. It would've got far more attention because it's an excellent story!!
I wonder who beat Myr? Was it Isendra? On one hand I don't think she would do such a thing, on the other hand if Myr "harassed" her for her clothes at a really bad time and she was super emotional about something, maybe... But I really hope that's not the case.
I also think it's clear Myr was expecting to Izuku to request "other" services from her. Goes to show that while Izuku is growing up fast, he isn't fully acclimated/grown the way another boy around his age might be in this world. Not that Izuku would take advantage of Myr regardless, but the fact that he didn't know what happened there shows he hasn't grown up as quickly as might be expected for a native his age.
I like that Izuku still maintains some innocence in this world though, it keeps him as a more vituous figure compared to the grim world he finds himself in.
It makes sense Myr would do that, either at the behest/insinuation of some "well meaning" person advising her or entirely on her own behest since her survival and quality of life depends on Izuku's good will, and unfortunately that means Myr probably feels the need to prove her value beyond menial tasks like washing clothes.Nono, Isendra beats her ass later for the harassment. This one she didn't deserve.
And you're correct, that is what I was instructed to insinuate and I'm happy to hear that I succeeded.
And I agree. I am trying to maintain as much of his innocence as possible for as long as possible. It will not survive.
It makes sense Myr would do that, either at the behest/insinuation of some "well meaning" person advising her or entirely on her own behest since her survival and quality of life depends on Izuku's good will, and unfortunately that means Myr probably feels the need to prove her value beyond menial tasks like washing clothes.
but because from his perspective Myr's pseudo maid services is basically a full-time job, he wouldn't consider that to Myr, it isn't and she's doesn't understand why he isn't demanding more of her since he's being so generous, so assumes he means to "take advantage" of her in other ways.
Beyond the obvious implications, it's rather tragic because, if Izuku does figure out she's making herself "available", he might potentially assume it's because she has a crush or wants to be his girlfriend, and while she may develop feelings for him later, at the moment it's purely and reluctantly/fearfully transactional.
Of course, it's also worrying because we don't know if this is a learned behavior from Myr, or simply her imitating older women in similar positions as her and fearfully assuming she needs to do the same to keep her position. Hopefully it's the latter and not the former or else Izuku should go full punisher lmao.
Post Traumatic Stress Disorder.
So what the hell's happening with Myr? I'm surprised Izuku never bothered to investigate or question to discover who beat and abused Myr earlier, it seems out of character for him to ignore that, although his personal discomfort and general business could've distracted him.
But now we see Myr running with another sign of injury, a red handprint, though obviously not nearly as bad as before, could it be related? I'm starting to worry it really is Isendra beating her, since the way it was written it seemed that she came running from where Isendra was.
I really hope it's not the case because I really like Isendra and her interactions with Izuku.
does anybody ever come from the MHA side to this again? some kind of expedition, maybe when izuku is a bit farther away and they trace his steps and see his achievements? maybe showing hes an outlier and anybody else doesn't nearly adapts as easily as he does. they want to catch up to him but hes always a few steps ahead.
Will Midoriya eventually return to MHA? Or is the entire story just going to follow Diablo plot?Sadly, no. I tried to steer it that way, but the commissioner said absolutely not. I even wrote a chapter where the nighteye agency believably figured out what happened to him and sent an ectoplasm clone through and that was going to be a side story for a while. But demons invaded MHA and heroes/villains invading Diablo aint heppening.
Will Midoriya eventually return to MHA? Or is the entire story just going to follow Diablo plot?
I really hope this story does go back to the MHA world.
It would be an adjustment for Izuku as well, he would have to return to a modern mindset, and not just kill any villain that comes his way.
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Will Midoriya eventually return to MHA? Or is the entire story just going to follow Diablo plot?
Yes Grimes, the plan is for Izuku to find his way back to Japan at his worst moment when he has accepted death and plans on taking as many demons with him as possible.
Oh yes Zebrin there will be a definite adjustment phase.
Plus Izuku will due to stress and a few years of hard labor will make him more physically attractive to some of the ladies plus he will be economically attractive as well. So he better watch out