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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)
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RoninSword
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And then he changed back at some unspecified time before the white light burst.
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I think part of the problem is due to that specific yellow ring. It was forged through blood sacrifice via a connection to the realm of shadows, and was specifically brought to working order a qwardian who would happily see Paul dead.
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I wouldn't go that far. Diataria Lysis would be more ambivalent or wary of killing Paul because she wouldn't know how the OLC would retaliate.
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23rd July 2013
09:05 GMT -7
"…the Storm Guard who were working for Tempest told the other Storm Guard, and now the Storm King is in the dungeon and Princess Celestia's put Blueblood in charge until we can work out what sort of treaty works for both sides."
Twilight smiles as I nod. "And all it took was them spending a few months in a county not ruled by a power-hungry tyrant to show them the light."
"Yes!" She nods. "Exactly! It gave me an idea, and… Well, you're the only pony I know who's got experience with government administration-" I frown. "-except for the Princess." My frown deepens. "Es-"
"Passable recovery."
"-so I thought I'd run it by you and see what you thought."
"Okay." I nod. "Hit me."
"I was thinking of opening a school-" I start to nod. "-dedicated to teaching friendship."
I continue nodding. "Good show."
She looks at me slightly suspiciously. "So… You think it's a good idea?"
"Yes. Honestly, Equestria's young offender system has been in need of someone taking a look-" Her face falls slightly. "-at it for a while, and I think that removing young ponies from their difficult home environments and-"
She awkwardly raises her right forehoof. "Um."
"-teaching them the social skills they didn't acquire from their parents is a jolly good way to spend your time."
"That…" She looks away awkwardly. "Wasn't exactly what I meant."
"Ah. Sorry, no. I suppose that would be a bit of a big step for your first project. A… Summer school, then? Youths spending time away from home to give their parents a week's respite while they learn self-reliance and camaraderie?"
"Um. Maybe? I was really thinking of a full time program of study."
"Ah, okay." I nod. "And who were you going to get to run it?"
She blinks. "I was going to run it." I wince. "Is..? That a problem?"
"Perhaps… Perhaps not. What sort of curriculum did you intend to have?"
She takes a deep breath, looking happier. "I was going to base it around the Elements of Harmony, with each of my friends teaching the same lessons to the next generation that they taught me."
"Okay." I nod. "And what about geography?"
"Ah-. Pardon?"
"Geography. The study of places, geology, settlements, that sort of thing? Or history?" She blinks. "Thaumaturgy?"
"Well it's… Really more of a Friendship school…"
"So…" I frown. "What? No academic subjects at all?"
"Um."
"Oh!" I perk up. "So you're handling the sociology and personal and social development stuff while Ponyville School handles the academics."
"Not… Not as such…"
"Oh. Ah, okay. So… You were planning on teaching purely friendship-related classes… Full time, as your student's main avenue of education."
"Ah-. Pretty much?" She grins unsettlingly at me.
Breathe in. Breathe out.
"Twilight, have you trained as a teacher?"
"Well… No, not… Formally."
"Because there are a few things you pick up… About what the aim of teaching is-." Huh. Oh. "And… Ah. I don't wish to be mean about this, but do you actually have… A scholastic qualification yourself?"
"I… Went to the School for Gifted Unicorns..?"
"Right, but… You were studying there when Celestia sent you to Ponyville… Then you stayed here, and didn't go back. I was just wondering if you ever formally graduated? Did you complete-" There's a growing look of horror on her face, and behind her Spike's eyes widen for a moment before he scurries into the basement. "-your courses by correspondence? I know that Sunset had to fill in a few forms to get her Bachelor of Thaumaturgy at the same time as she was preparing her thesis defence for her doctoral level work." I smile. "You should have seen the holes she wore in the mountain with her pacing. Ah. Was it something like that?"
Twilight is… Hugging her tail to her chest and stroking it, her eyes staring and unseeing.
"Um."
"I'm a high school drop out. Like Rainbow Dash!"
Dash sticks her head in through a nearby window. "Like what now? Oh, hey Grayven."
"Good morning, Miss Dash. Twilight just realised that she technically didn't graduate Unicorn School."
She recoils in shock. "No way! Like, ever?"
Twilight's head jerks around. "But that's okay, right? You manage perfectly well without a diploma."
Dash frowns in puzzlement. "Ah, Twilight? I dropped out of flight school. I still got a BTEC in Weather Management. I couldn't be Ponyville's weathermare without it."
Twilight's horror only deepens.
"Besides, the entry requirements for Wonderbolt training are at a higher level in, like, every category. I could probably apply for it now, I just didn't think it was worth it. I mean, It's not like I need a piece of paper to tell me I can fly."
Twilight… Appears to have collapsed somewhat.
Rainbow Dash leans in further through the window, looking down at her friend. "Ah… And… You don't need one to tell you you can do magic, right? That's your whole thing! You're great at magic."
Hm. Perhaps I could ask..? "Miss Dash, while Twilight's recovering from her existential crisis, could I ask you a few questions?"
Dash pulls herself fully through the window and lands on the floor, looking down at the slowly-rocking Twilight. "Ah… Sure? What is it?"
"I understand that being a Wonderbolt is a full-time job."
"Actually, it's more like a three quarters-time job. The on-season is pretty much full time and a half with training and performing, but off-season it's just regular training and sometimes doing a demo."
"Would you consider dropping the whole thing to become a full time school teacher?"
"Huh? Ah, no? It's, like, my life's ambition. I mean… I guess I could teach a flying class off-season..." She thinks for a moment. "That sounds kinda fun, actually. Good idea!"
"But not full time."
"Maybe when I…" She shudders, pulling a face. "Age.. out.. of the Wonderbolts. But not until then."
"And I assume that Rarity would feel the same about clothing?"
"Ah, yeah?" She frowns at me in confusion. "We've all got jobs, dude. And none of us have… Whatever piece of paper it is you need that says you know how to teach ponies stuff."
I nod. "That's what I thought."
We both look down at Twilight for a moment.
"So… Is it alright to leave her like that, or do I need to find some sort of rare first edition to use as smelling salts?"
09:05 GMT -7
"…the Storm Guard who were working for Tempest told the other Storm Guard, and now the Storm King is in the dungeon and Princess Celestia's put Blueblood in charge until we can work out what sort of treaty works for both sides."
Twilight smiles as I nod. "And all it took was them spending a few months in a county not ruled by a power-hungry tyrant to show them the light."
"Yes!" She nods. "Exactly! It gave me an idea, and… Well, you're the only pony I know who's got experience with government administration-" I frown. "-except for the Princess." My frown deepens. "Es-"
"Passable recovery."
"-so I thought I'd run it by you and see what you thought."
"Okay." I nod. "Hit me."
"I was thinking of opening a school-" I start to nod. "-dedicated to teaching friendship."
I continue nodding. "Good show."
She looks at me slightly suspiciously. "So… You think it's a good idea?"
"Yes. Honestly, Equestria's young offender system has been in need of someone taking a look-" Her face falls slightly. "-at it for a while, and I think that removing young ponies from their difficult home environments and-"
She awkwardly raises her right forehoof. "Um."
"-teaching them the social skills they didn't acquire from their parents is a jolly good way to spend your time."
"That…" She looks away awkwardly. "Wasn't exactly what I meant."
"Ah. Sorry, no. I suppose that would be a bit of a big step for your first project. A… Summer school, then? Youths spending time away from home to give their parents a week's respite while they learn self-reliance and camaraderie?"
"Um. Maybe? I was really thinking of a full time program of study."
"Ah, okay." I nod. "And who were you going to get to run it?"
She blinks. "I was going to run it." I wince. "Is..? That a problem?"
"Perhaps… Perhaps not. What sort of curriculum did you intend to have?"
She takes a deep breath, looking happier. "I was going to base it around the Elements of Harmony, with each of my friends teaching the same lessons to the next generation that they taught me."
"Okay." I nod. "And what about geography?"
"Ah-. Pardon?"
"Geography. The study of places, geology, settlements, that sort of thing? Or history?" She blinks. "Thaumaturgy?"
"Well it's… Really more of a Friendship school…"
"So…" I frown. "What? No academic subjects at all?"
"Um."
"Oh!" I perk up. "So you're handling the sociology and personal and social development stuff while Ponyville School handles the academics."
"Not… Not as such…"
"Oh. Ah, okay. So… You were planning on teaching purely friendship-related classes… Full time, as your student's main avenue of education."
"Ah-. Pretty much?" She grins unsettlingly at me.
Breathe in. Breathe out.
"Twilight, have you trained as a teacher?"
"Well… No, not… Formally."
"Because there are a few things you pick up… About what the aim of teaching is-." Huh. Oh. "And… Ah. I don't wish to be mean about this, but do you actually have… A scholastic qualification yourself?"
"I… Went to the School for Gifted Unicorns..?"
"Right, but… You were studying there when Celestia sent you to Ponyville… Then you stayed here, and didn't go back. I was just wondering if you ever formally graduated? Did you complete-" There's a growing look of horror on her face, and behind her Spike's eyes widen for a moment before he scurries into the basement. "-your courses by correspondence? I know that Sunset had to fill in a few forms to get her Bachelor of Thaumaturgy at the same time as she was preparing her thesis defence for her doctoral level work." I smile. "You should have seen the holes she wore in the mountain with her pacing. Ah. Was it something like that?"
Twilight is… Hugging her tail to her chest and stroking it, her eyes staring and unseeing.
"Um."
"I'm a high school drop out. Like Rainbow Dash!"
Dash sticks her head in through a nearby window. "Like what now? Oh, hey Grayven."
"Good morning, Miss Dash. Twilight just realised that she technically didn't graduate Unicorn School."
She recoils in shock. "No way! Like, ever?"
Twilight's head jerks around. "But that's okay, right? You manage perfectly well without a diploma."
Dash frowns in puzzlement. "Ah, Twilight? I dropped out of flight school. I still got a BTEC in Weather Management. I couldn't be Ponyville's weathermare without it."
Twilight's horror only deepens.
"Besides, the entry requirements for Wonderbolt training are at a higher level in, like, every category. I could probably apply for it now, I just didn't think it was worth it. I mean, It's not like I need a piece of paper to tell me I can fly."
Twilight… Appears to have collapsed somewhat.
Rainbow Dash leans in further through the window, looking down at her friend. "Ah… And… You don't need one to tell you you can do magic, right? That's your whole thing! You're great at magic."
Hm. Perhaps I could ask..? "Miss Dash, while Twilight's recovering from her existential crisis, could I ask you a few questions?"
Dash pulls herself fully through the window and lands on the floor, looking down at the slowly-rocking Twilight. "Ah… Sure? What is it?"
"I understand that being a Wonderbolt is a full-time job."
"Actually, it's more like a three quarters-time job. The on-season is pretty much full time and a half with training and performing, but off-season it's just regular training and sometimes doing a demo."
"Would you consider dropping the whole thing to become a full time school teacher?"
"Huh? Ah, no? It's, like, my life's ambition. I mean… I guess I could teach a flying class off-season..." She thinks for a moment. "That sounds kinda fun, actually. Good idea!"
"But not full time."
"Maybe when I…" She shudders, pulling a face. "Age.. out.. of the Wonderbolts. But not until then."
"And I assume that Rarity would feel the same about clothing?"
"Ah, yeah?" She frowns at me in confusion. "We've all got jobs, dude. And none of us have… Whatever piece of paper it is you need that says you know how to teach ponies stuff."
I nod. "That's what I thought."
We both look down at Twilight for a moment.
"So… Is it alright to leave her like that, or do I need to find some sort of rare first edition to use as smelling salts?"
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It's fun seeing Grayven inspiring dread with casual conversations even after being purged by the Magic of Friendship.
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"to base"
"friends"
Haha.
Dash is more qualified than you.
Remove one ".
The dustier it is the better.
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hah. Renegade has to break them down first before rebuilding them. Poor Twilight running into Conquest.
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Can I recommend Thomas Paine's Common Sense?
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It's mostly just Twilight's mind being that fragile.
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Thank you, corrected.
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She's going to completely miss his jab at Equestria's rulers, isn't she? That's the 'Movie' plot gone by in the background, then. I suppose if the Renegade had been here, he'd have poked a hoof into it.
If she's going to be in charge of the country, she's gonna have to stop putting her hoof in her mouth.
Otherwise she may get a reputation.It's going to be totally unworkable in a realistic situation, entirely run on hopes and dreams and likely raise his blood pressure a fraction of a point, isn't it?
Oh, that. Given the trouble she apparently had with it in the series, getting some real advice is definitely a good plan.
I'd be amused if that's a lot of why some ponies are actually criminals...
And having legal opportunities and credentials is likely to make them less likely to re-offend, of course.
...Something some people need for sure, but not quite what she had in mind, I think.
Because, you know, she's also going to be managing the country at some stage.
...I could hear the 'sucking air between his teeth' tone in his voice.
And now we see Twilight's lack of real-world practical experience kicking in...
Given the links between friendship and magic, I could see that one being useful.
And here we see the point at which he realises she's serious, yet totally out of her depth.
Not a bad idea as a test case, really. Just needs a lot more thought.
A lot more thought.
I have to wonder if there's going to be any wall left if he starts head-desking against it once he gets done here.
He's got so much to say, he can't pick just one thing to begin with, eh?
Oh, no. She's...
...Monumentally unqualified for anything, it seems...
Boy, that's gonna be hilarious when she takes the throne...
Somehow, I doubt it's that simple.
So, bets on whether she literally shatters like glass, or turns to stone and crumbles into dust?
Ah, She's chosen to simply dissolve into a puddle of shame and regret.
That's a classic. All she needs is the 'soul escaping out her mouth' to complete the performance.I hope Spike's got something brewing to revive her, or you may be a while.
So she's not really working as the main Ponyville weathermare at the moment, I take it. Or she's spreading her time really thin.
Strike... Two? Against Twilight's plan.
Ah, not looking forwards to getting older, I see. A very youthful outlook.
Strike Three, and Twilight's outta there. Also out of life, by the looks of her.
I don't know, she might need to suck her soul back in first before you worry about waking her up.
Ah, Renegade. Inadvertently poking enough holes in the later-season scenarios to turn them into window-screens. And mortally wounding the pride of the future ruler of Equestria in the process. I suspect Twilight's going to need a couple of old, rare books, some warm tea and a blanket to shake herself out of this one... And hopefully she does the research before thinking up another hare-brained idea like this one.
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if > it
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Thank you, corrected.
He did so accidentally. By hiring Tempest Shadow and giving her Storm Guards exposure to Equestrian society, he accidentally caused a coup.
Since canonically Twilight turned out to be a worse ruler than Tirek, I doubt that anyone will complain.
He's just taking cover. When Twilight gets angry, she canonically turns into a mini-Daybreaker.
No, she quit that when she became a full-time Wonderbolt.
Kind of. Rainbow Dash knows perfectly well that ascension is now on offer to her. She's spent enough time with Scootaloo to know that the process doesn't really have downsides. She's sort of mentally decided to try it when aging out looms.
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Thinking on it that tracks. Of all the Mane Six Dash is the most likely to have actually needed higher education of some sort.
AJ runs the family farm. Rarity has a privet business. Fluttershy and Pinkie… don't seem to do actual work, just full-time hobbies. Pinkie in particular seems to have dropped out of primary school and never looked back.
In fairness unless ascension becomes really common then being an alicorn rather undermines the whole 'best flyer in Equestria' thing she has going on. People expect physical gods to pull epic feats, so it isn't impressive.
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I thought she ran a clothing business.
I think Fluttershy runs a pet shop/grooming parlor, though I have read fanfics where she's a famous 'romance' writer under a pen name.
I'm pretty sure that Pinkie works in the Cake's bakery and was homeschooled.
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Renegade is my favorite alt Paul.
Still no Luna, so little sad, but renegade is still the best.
I do hope for more Luna x Grayven, because they were cute
Still no Luna, so little sad, but renegade is still the best.
I do hope for more Luna x Grayven, because they were cute