cosoco
Not too sore, are you?
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Yeah. I mean, Leviathan doesn't emit gravity like he's got the mass of a galaxy, he doesn't have the inertia you'd expect, he could accomplish everything he did without a galaxy of matter, etc etc etc.That is a WOG I specifically ignore. Wildbow should feel dumb for posting it IMO.
I wouldn't describe her as an antagonist, exactly. It's more accurate to say that Cauldron's PR department is terrible. (Seriously. Worm would be very different if Cauldron hired Glenn Chambers.)Contessa's existence (arguably) - you need to rethink your antagonist. (Or your outline.)
There's a related problem, which is that Contessa's power as written would bulldoze through the majority of the problems of the setting. Therefore, you need to constantly invent reasons why she can't or is unwilling to use her power.