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  TheCenterAct

• Oct 19, 2021

I follow you on FFnet, but I had no idea you were here too.

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What are your thoughts on Xander abuse? (overuse of an item e.i. substance abuse)

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  KinKrow

• Jun 21, 2021

"I can't feel my heartbeat," she noted hopefully before stripping off her baggy sweater and too small bra and placing a hand over the left side of her chest. "My heart's in the right place!"

Lmaooo, I like that that got brought up. It was such a weird part of Meg's character her heart was always something I remembered.

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  KinKrow

• Jun 14, 2021

">Our projected lifespan is only one hundred and eighty years on average," Linda said
I'm pretty sure you're low-lying the life expectancy of Synths, my guy.

Keep in mind that Kellogg is 108 years old and he looks like any other middle aged adult. He's a baseline human that has been living in the Wasteland since, in addition to his Cybernetics not being as in depth or advanced as the stuff Synths are loaded up with.

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  Hidden One

• May 15, 2021

Thanks for updating With Sprinkles, its always nice to wake up and see one of your stories updated.

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  Evilhippy

• Apr 27, 2021

I love With Sprinkles, Naruto doing his impossible princess stuff is so funny.

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  Hidden One

• Apr 14, 2021

I had another one of those Xander ideas I am better of handing over. Remember Xanders troubles with soda machines? Just before Episode 1 he tries to get a drink but ends up with the Essence of the Chad in a can instead. Probably works with all other Essences but Chad!Xander may be amusing.

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  KinKrow

• Mar 23, 2021

Oh my God, you made the ring/lantern monstrosity.

Are you sure your story shouldn't be titled 'With These Rings'?

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  KinKrow

• Mar 16, 2021

"We don't repeat humanity's mistakes!"

"We make entirely new ones!"

These synth women have some Pinky and Brain vibes going on, lol

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  KinKrow

• Dec 25, 2020

"Don't interact with your former self and a lesbian orgy composed of one witch will cause a paradox unless they are properly blindfolded?"

God, what was that from?

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  Hidden One

• Nov 29, 2020

Elite Beat Agents is one of the more obscure DS rythem games, the jump document for it and the cnaon lore are weird but fun. The devs took inspiration from Bluesx Brothers, Ghostbusters and MIB to remake the japanese game which was based on male cheer squads.

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  Hidden One

• Nov 29, 2020

I hav en't seen a James Bond one yet. Elite Beat agents kind of wrap probability and reality by cheering, dancing and singing. Cordy would likely be shocked by the dancing skills alone.

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  Hidden One

• Nov 28, 2020

Got jumped by a plotbunny that wanted to meet you. Xander loses a bet and gets forced to wear a generic alphabet soup agent costume for halloween. Xander decides that he is actually THE best elite beat agent that ever was and will be.

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  Hidden One

• Oct 25, 2020

Had to split the message since QQ insists on 420 signs or less. The idea below happened while re-reading some of your stuff and shooting ideas with someone. Enjoy ~

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  Hidden One

• Oct 25, 2020

Alexander Lavelle Harris is the most boring and just barely average student Sunnydale ever saw. Until the CIA decided that he'd make the perfect secret agent and invited him to a summer camp. His new friend and training partner just needs to get a bit less tense with the ladies. The friend? Agent Cody Banks.

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  KinKrow

• Oct 21, 2020

You said you didn't have any good title names for that new story idea you have?

How about 'Harry Potter and the Prisoner's Montage', or 'Harry Potter and the Azkaban Hustle'?

How are those for a couple suggestions?

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  Hidden One

• Sep 13, 2020

I feel a need to point out that I low key blame you for thinking about xander.
For example: "What would happen if Xander got access to the Celestial Forge on the last day of middleschool?"
... I wonder if that would lead to getting on Hephaestus radar instead of Aphrodites...

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  Luke Dragneel

• Sep 10, 2020

Thanks for the update to Wood It Work

• macdjord

• Jun 20, 2020

I've been wondering for years: why Dogbert and Carroll? That seems like a really weird combination.

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  Evilhippy

• Apr 15, 2020

Has anyone picked your Slave Driver tier on your patreon? I also found your descriptions on the various level amusing.

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  KinKrow

• Mar 14, 2020

Back of the Turtle is back!

Hooray!

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  KinKrow

• Feb 24, 2020

I'd actually just reread the Control Freak story a couple days ago, so your new update is a pleasant surprise.

Also, I've seen you mention Libriomancers like that before, what setting are they from?

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  KinKrow

• Feb 11, 2020

I'm really enjoying your ghost Xan story, it's a good time!

• Cyguy7

• Nov 20, 2019

Thanks so much for all your work. Whenever I get an update on your fanfiction account, it makes my day.

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  Evilhippy

• Oct 27, 2019

I would like to say I am a fan of your work. I am also glad you started to pull out some of your stories from you many miscellaneous files and made them independent. I liked rereading some of your stuff and it got hard to find it sometimes.

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  Diver

• Oct 17, 2019

Just saw that you have a QQ account and wanted to say I've followed your stories on fan fiction.net for years and think you're an awesome and creative writer.

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  KinKrow

• May 14, 2019

Sorry to hear life got crazy.

I'm settling into a new job, and am honestly surprised I found the time to push a chapter out last week.

I hope you're doing well, dude.

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  Fasd

• Apr 16, 2019

Do you not post on here, if you do, why can I not find it?

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  KinKrow

• Mar 31, 2019

I think you like to write sorta 'slice of life' type stuff as general plot instead of overarching plots.

I've noticed that you'll write actiony stuff, but it's more like those moments are just part of that given characters life.

...does that make sense?

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  KinKrow

• Feb 19, 2019

Just saw your Colors and Capes update, it was pretty great. Can't wait for the next one.

Damn you and you cliffhangers!

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  KinKrow

• Jan 28, 2019

Glad to see DIC is getting updated, it's one of my favorites.

A vaguely coherent multicross is always a pleasure to see.

Actual critique I have would be to focus on the currently established characters and settings.

Everything you're currently juggling is a bit much, but also good and interesting enough to warrant further development.

I look forward to the next update!