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Questionable Questing

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Bob is bob
Bob is bob
She's starting to think as a Viltrumite slave matriarch. Find breeders and trophy wives for her Viltrumite son
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
How you want to portray Omiman in these early parts? How AU does he start
Andy333
Andy333
Caring and loving, but with an edge. So kind of similar to canon but just a little more open about how he's feeling and a little more willing to reveal some stuff about himself.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Showing him interacting with Clark and Bruce in the Justice League from Mark's perspective? From the start, how are you tempting readers with the AU? How much different you want to show from Canon?
Andy333
Andy333
So he's the kind of guy who can tell a side kick its okay to flinch the first time your on the field and how to breathe properly to help next time, while at the same time threatening and then following through, with ripping a villain's legs off if he doesn't release the hostages.
Andy333
Andy333
He's a mentor figure to Clark, telling him stories of Krypton and Viltrum while training him, and in the process coming to terms with some feelings and questions he had about his home-world for a long time. While with Batman there's a quiet respect but almost also rivalry between the two as they have very fundamentally different world views and clash a lot in the decision making.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I like here the empathsis on Omiman as teacher to the Justice League. Molding many young heroes and that is what helps him change to a better person.
Now name some coed heroines he can harem
Andy333
Andy333
I honestly don't know. I focused on him having a harem of girls with daddy issues he adopted and just kept it at that.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
No teacher abuse? I advocate Blackfire for Mark and have him adopt anissa later into his harem
Andy333
Andy333
Maybe. I'll think about it. A lot of times with Romance I try not to force it too much because there's nothing worse than a forced romance in a story. I just write the story and see how the chemistry develops.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Fair on Anisa for Omiman. Blackfire and Mark has that delicious crazy sexy paycho protective sister vibe
Andy333
Andy333
Of the three sisters Blackfire is also the most dangerous, blood thirsty, and impulsive. Psycho sister indeed. lol.
Andy333
Andy333
I'm getting some sleep, night.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Sleep well.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Heyo.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Talk Blackfire going more slutty outfit?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And breeding porn as a concept in general. The best I find include domination, slave and master play, sow and brood mare dirty talk, and others forms of control
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Ownership
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Above for ya. How day
Andy333
Andy333
Stomach's been kind of hurting a little bit. But other than that pretty good.
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