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Questionable Questing

Andy333
Andy333
But idea's for mind control. You know that clone idea I had a while back, the one where its a rouge like quest with each time the MC dies they get re-cloned and they have to deal with a harem of increasingly bimbofied and horny girls? Trying to balance keeping them sane while dealing with an even bigger horde of mindless sex dolls outside?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Indeed I do
Andy333
Andy333
I've been trying to come up with a good game system for it. Something to give the readers control without clogging it up with too much math or stats, but I'm having trouble with that. So I'm debating if it would work better as a story and coming up with some idea's for that.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
My bias is pushing you to make that Invincible thing and talking you about My Therapist. Clone idea is creative but doesn't grab me
Andy333
Andy333
It's set in the background of those waifu catalog stories, you know the one's about shady corporations cloning powerful heroes to serve as their slaves. Well my idea was the concept of quarantine worlds. Basically setting where the creatures inside are so dangerous the company specifically refuses to allow any teleportation tech inside and risk these things getting out.
Andy333
Andy333
Stuff like the flood from halo or necromorps from dead space. Shit that can't really be stopped if it starts snowballing and that would act as a good overarching enemy and a reason for why the cloning facility was abandoned.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Ah. I like
Andy333
Andy333
And I do plan on sticking with My Therapist and Invincible, I just thought you wanted to take a break and talk about new stuff for a little while. Lol
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I really like Invincible horny viltrumite breeding talk inspired by violent combat and My Therapist mind control is great.
Andy333
Andy333
I do really like how I've finally reached the point with My Therapist where Robin has a very distinct voice and backstory. I mean I had a pretty good idea even when I started, but the last couple chapters I think its really finally settled in. It makes senses, why she needs to feel smart, why she's obsessed with looking good, why she needs to stay in control. It all came together.
Andy333
Andy333
With a lot of Hentai stories, you don't ever get good explanations a lot of times for why the characters do what they do. Why their so slutty. Or why their so controlling. I don't know. I like my stories having logical consistency in character motivation as much as world building.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I like how unique you make her whore house background. There's a lot more to it then sell body for sex. Her devotion to the matron and her thought girls get fucked and boys fuck
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I like my stories with deep emotion and with shit like that Black Pharoh Justice League thing I sent you there ain't none of that.
Andy333
Andy333
It's also a good explanation for why someone who obviously loves and cares about her family and her lovers, almost always defaults to manipulating and controlling them even when she feel's bad about it. It's what she was taught was normal as a kid and she's finding it impossible to break those habits.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And it serves to make good porn. Very good porn. Her teaching Gavin how to dominate and rule? How to be a boy as she would put it
Andy333
Andy333
Next weekend going to have some good opportunities once Midnight get's introduced to the family in-between a pretty fun mission.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Do tell
Andy333
Andy333
I'm thinking since Robin has been using the Hero commission badge as a shield that eventually they would come knocking and start asking what exactly she's doing. With Robin acting as a triple agent. lol. Feeding the hero commission just enough information about some of recent moves All For one is making, that they tolerate Robin making waves in the hero world.
Andy333
Andy333
I mean she has her blackmail but you could only threaten to use that so many times before they decided its better to get rid of you. Better to be seen as a potential asset rather than an enemy. Yet, Robin know's it corrupt enough that she can't trust them to protect her or her family so she's giving them the bare minimum and making sure All for one's name doesn't get spoken and risk him looking in that direction.
Andy333
Andy333
And the idea was, after the "cover" was blown by Nezu, the cover being the fake one with the commission, they reach out to her and offer her a deal to make her cover look a hundred percent solid in return for doing some more dirty work for them.
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