Questionable Questing

Bob is bob

Post in thread 'A Bastard's Glory - An ASOIAF/D&D3.5 Sequel Thread(AU Jon Snow, In Character Creation)' https://forum.questionablequesting....snow-in-character-creation.30230/post-9605269 Update for you

Andy333

Or my other idea, is that while on the surface Amy seems to be fine with her parentage. There's a part of her that desperately wants to be just like her family and she's slowly experimenting on herself, altering her DNA and body to formally become a Dallon. Kind of tying together the whole clone and identify themes.

Bob is bob

I like how the films fuck with reality in these subtle ways adding to character story

Andy333

Yep, the idea is as the videos spread around like a plague it becomes harder and harder for everyone to know what's real and isn't. With the main antagonist or hero depending on how you look at it, Armsmaster who thanks to his nasty workaholic tendencies never joins in on any movie nights or sleepovers everyone else had, struggling to know who he can trust as it spreads.

Andy333

But your newest chapter was pretty cool. I liked the detail of the cave being unnaturally smooth and how it was Ygritte who noticed it, especially after boasting about how good she was at hunting with that pretty good tit joke at the beginning.

Bob is bob

The cave was all Jsckal. What you think of Hurik's characterization?

Andy333

I liked the stuff with the wolf and dragon, although I think it was a little too heavy on the symbolism, and I also liked that even after a lot of growing up he's still a pretty big hothead and has to remind himself of what would Ned too to calm down sometimes. It makes a more negative trait endearing. lol

Bob is bob

Got ya on symbolism. Trying to have them avatars of his magic that can serve as guides and metaphor fuel

Andy333

I get that, and I do think they work, but I would tone down the more visual aspects and make it more auditory. Like a wolf growingly in his ear or an aristocratic voice advising him instead of visually seeing and feeling a crown. Especially during more tense scenes or stuff with lots of dialogue since it acts as a break.

Bob is bob

Got ya. I do like visuals but can keep that more for magic

Andy333

It'll help keep the magic feeling more separated and special. But back to brainstorming. Do you need any ideas or help with any future chapters? Or would you rather talk my idea again? I mean you're still technically in character creation and I'm guessing this first tutorial monster's already been pre-planned so you're probably good. But I'm here if you need anything.

Bob is bob

Nah we good. A big thing as you saw in update is offering the choice to focus less on incest happy times as Lyanna did and embrace the lusty conquest of a Conan. Hurik focusing more honor and power for the smut

Andy333

Wonder how Lyanna will take these changes? If she'll be happy with them, resist them? Lots of fun character reactions and drama.

Bob is bob

Hurik isn't against fucking a hot mom or making a mom or and sister porn slut hot. But for him it's about the will of the person doing it. He doesn't care to spread seduction. He's focused on his lordship. Players can defin over time how broad his Way extends to others.

Lyanna'a Queen's way actively encourages horny spread. Hurik? Who knows yet

Andy333

Would be interesting to see if the readers play him differently, but we'll see.

Bob is bob

Indeed. Now more superhero porno costumes. Greg or Taylor next?

Andy333

Well Taylor's the main character so she's obviously next. lol. Not really, but I do plan on including her and judging on how it ends up she'll probably get involved with Greg too.

Bob is bob

A rare pairing those two. Greg evil boyfriend?

Andy333

Not sure if I should go him being a total Dom, or if just have him act as the bicycle for her and her bullies turned girlfriends.

Bob is bob

I favor Dom but here's a question. What is Greg to you?