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Questionable Questing

Andy333
Andy333
Going by canon? An awkward teenager, probably a little autistic, but definitely a lot smarter and aware than even he himself gives credit for. He just unfortunately lacked the power or maturity to make a difference when he could with Taylor.
Andy333
Andy333
But in terms of fanfiction. Someone with a lot of potential despite his appearance. He could be an everyman, he could be a villain, he could be the hero. He's the Jaune from RWBY of any fanfic. Someone with the least and most potential at the same time. He would be a lot more popular if you didn't have strong characters like Panpan, Taylor, Vicky, or Lisa to latch onto.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Smarter and aware how?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Panpan Amy? And what ya want here, hero or villain liked by audience
Andy333
Andy333
Yes, Panpan is Amy. And yeah Greg is actually very smart. He was one of the first people, other than Lisa obviously, to know Taylor was Skitter. He tried to talk to her about it, but she thought he was trying to threaten her instead of helped and covered him in spiders until he promised not to say anything. It was a pretty dick move on Taylor's part and a pretty big early hint she was becoming a villain.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Tay Tay did nothing wrong. Fanfic says so. Greg is a creepy asshole:V
Andy333
Andy333
But with the whole hero and villain thing, it's not as important in this one since all the characters are being mind controlled So even the more villainous characters are either going to talk in such an exaggerated way, like any stereotypical NTR plot or porn villain, that they'll come off as goofy rather than intimidating.
Andy333
Andy333
But with the more serious villains, you'll get signs there not fully in control and will thus be by default more sympathetic than canon. Plus a key aspect of the videos is they soften a lot of things. Not just in looks, but heroes become less flawed and moody. Villains take things less personal and there less full on murders since that doesn't make for good porn.
Andy333
Andy333
But afterward, whatever complaint I have about Taytay's behavior has been rectified. She unironically did nothing wrong. The assholes of Earth Bet deserved to be mind controlled and turned into a slave army and they should be praying for her return.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Interesting. For Greg, Tony Stark hero? Or oh, A hulk hero. Rage and lust
Andy333
Andy333
I'll think about it. But I think hulk will work better or at least the dynamic. Because the big story beat for Taylor is the normality of it all. That she wakes up in the morning sucks her dad's dick then goes to school without a second thought. How the video has made it all banal. So with Greg he'll be a nerdy friend that will also occasionally join in on gangbangs with her girlfriends.
Andy333
Andy333
But has an alter ego of a wrecking machine. Him and Sophia along with a recently triggered Taylor make up a new superhero team ready to punish the villains. I like it, sounds goofy enough to fit in with the banality and slice of life aspect, but the three slowly growing from nerds into punisher level edgy anti heros is a nice arc I can have too in the background.
Andy333
Andy333
Which also neatly corresponds with the growing depravity of the whole city as everyone's twisted by the videos.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Okay. First rule of logic altering hypno. You have her sucking her dad's dick and wanting to be bred by him then you have that be erotic. Normalized but still with passion and lust. Porn parody with heart.

Idea for Greg. Iron man hulk fusion. As in tinker tech but has mutant rage form to break into if loses control
Andy333
Andy333
It goes without saying there'll be more passion and emotion and I want to avoid any Ironman stuff with Greg because I want him to be seen as more than a nerd. But I sleep, will talk more about it tomorrow. Hopefully then I'll have a chapter to show you.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I like that nerd not being all he is. Inner Hulk fan it is. Could just do the classic super giant werewolf. Mix with Sabertooth
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I don't think I have ever seen a Hulk greg before. Werewolf hulk or what ya thinking
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Heyo. You want to talk hulk Greg tonight?
Andy333
Andy333
Sure. Sounds fun. But how was your day? Mine was alright, went to red Robin earlier and had some burgers. Gonna go for ice cream later. No movies this weekend. lol. My aunt's still a little traumatized from Nosferatu.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Watching Dan Dan Dan and it is freaking wild. Also a canon romance the story is based around shipping.

So hulk, just super strength or other powers? I also think avoid dumb hulk. The best hulks are the ones with alt personalities to Banner.
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