Questionable Questing

Andy333

But the issue I have is that in the entire paragraph the only connection I have between Debbie and the barbecue is the glass of wine she drank. I have two other paragraphs below it explaining Blackfires history and role in the family. And in those paragraphs there's zero lines about the barbecue, which doesn't seem like that big of a deal.

Andy333

But I'm worried it'll just be a bunch of expository text instead of flowing naturally. It's the balancing act between trying to provide a bunch of information in a short amount of time while not having it feel like I'm reading off a bunch of textbooks, you know? lol.

Andy333

But I'm glad you liked seeing Debbie being a momma bear. I'm glad that part came through since it's a nice way to show that Debbie might be a biased narrator without having to say it.

Bob is bob

Simply use the sensory input of the barbaque to create tone. The barbaque doesn't matter. Her girls eating and playing does. The heat, the smell, this is all part of the family being safe and happy. It is the feeling of her actions at the barbaque you build up

Andy333

I like that. That actually really helped me.

Bob is bob

Build chains of thought and emotion triggering on character action, reactions, and environment immersion

Bob is bob

Question, how dark you want Mark's viltrumite lust to get?

Andy333

Still debating. I don't want open rape, but some noncon play is acceptable.

Bob is bob

The super strength makes him extremely controlling in regards to deciding what happens. Add in any Viltrumite phereomnes the girls are ingesting

Andy333

I sleep. Been dealing with a headache for awhile, but we'll talk more tomorrow. Sorry about the discord drama. I didn't really care, but I saw you were pretty torn up about it.

Bob is bob

She invited me to her private server and just no porn talk and we good. Made my day.

Bob is bob

Yes. I was both angry and sad and confused and then not confused and very emotionally fucked up. But now that she aint't in my server, feel free to talk weird porn shit with Antoni

Bob is bob

Sadly he ain't into hot people incest.

Andy333

I'm glad it was all settled.

Bob is bob

How writing go

Bob is bob

Ignore porn and talk plot for a while

Bob is bob

I get Hinge girl last night. Curvy redhead. Not perfect but pretty enough face and nice tits. Get talking to her, learning about instrument she plays and show interest in her like of trashy romance. Get her talking about Percy Jackson and liking the books. End night on saying the TV Show looks good.

Bob is bob

Everything seems well. Ghosted dematched today. A reminder to be cold and distant, thinking only of is this girl theoretically worth a fuck and knowing do not attempt to feel excited.

Waste of time. It's all ghosts. So yeah. Another bullshit online dating interaction. Debbie porn of her in sexy outfits or slave Debbie? And Wondewoman slave collar?

Bob is bob

I know don't be mean to girls or think of them only for sex. With online dating its think only of how hot the chick with personality you might like is and give the fuck up immediately when it fades in a day or two.

Bob is bob

Talk later tonight if I get edits I'm working on done after work. Maybe 11 or maybe 11:30