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Interesting. Angella's been alive in this alternate dimension ever since disappearing and wasn't aware that it is actively drawing in more "nearby" sentients instead of just its local inhabitants. If it was patterned after Desperados during the portal incident it would make sense that it would...
Catra was the MVP here with that major "Gotcha!" moment and keeping Jack as "Good cop" by her being faster at "Bad cop". If it hadn't looked like Jack and Entrapta understood from his perspective he probably would have clammed up and ran off.
:D The latter half of this had me grinning the whole...
As long as I keep having the time I'm probably going to keep reading and liking these story posts. My favorite part of stories tends to be the settings and this one is looking to be expansive.
Be advised that most readers are going to lose track of details and events in a 50 chapter story let...
This one (which is the chapter before the one you just posted) is missing a threadmark.
I wish i had more solid comments for you but I have trouble doing more than just enjoying this jump's story.
the threadmarks skip over this chapter. I have been enjoying the story in this thread and its megathread for the entire jumpchain, thank you for the content.
A very nice tidying up; Charlie's tone is also genuine, I can believe he has faith and is soul-tired. I should be at the next one if the Follow function works the way I think it does.
In order to stop the Human Order Incineration Ritual Flynn made a BEAST1 Correction Ritual to turn it back into the Human Order Correction Ritual? Seems legit. He even did it the same way we do so in real life (communicating consensus). If this is the end it was a wild ride that I mucho enjoyed...
So, where is Fou? Did it just not follow them? Are they with Romani? This story is my only real exposure to FGO so if this was to be expected I wouldn't know.
I guess Excalibur's Promised Victory aura is a poor man's substitute to actual Hope. What with Chaldea having enough of them to be paper...
Fou is a Beast, specifically of Comparison which is what is causing Mash's distress in this chapter. As a Beast he can potentially gain power equivalent to that of all of human history (as Beasts are pretty much cancers within our nature) and with Comparison he will continuosly rise in power...
Um... it's pretty obvious that Mash acts with the same level of "Drive" towards Charlie that Medea did when she was under Aphrodite's pull towards Jason? Medea likes Flynn and we ALL remember how Medea+Jason turned out....
A very tragic chapter with the <1yr old misunderstanding everything...
This is quality "Show, don't tell" writing.
You are very good at writing inexperienced protagonists. If she had explained the entire encounter instead of her conclusion I am pretty sure Sea Hawk would quickly share her suspicion.
If Charlie does fail in the final fight with Goetia I really hope a version of Gilgamesh is there who remembers this conversation so Charlie can get off a "Thank you" to him for this shit. I mean it isn't like deliberately hurting a "broken, pathetic man" who is stepping up to save your people...
C147+Interlude Gil: Chaldea is a bit more fragile than I expected. Very Well! Servants go forth and nudge Chaldea into saving Uruk and all My Subjects(Humanity et all)! Without Us (and us them but my pride precludes that possibility) they are doomed.
C152 Gil: ... They didn't need me? They...
Perpetua(?) escaped and went Dark Monitor on the universe. To the point that the Bleed can't output into Bleed Tech anymore. She is now trying to finish that section of the multiverse so she can escape back through the Wall into other areas to feed some more. ( Pretty sure the Source Wall is a...