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  1. gaouw

    [Dragon Ball Z] Dragon Ball Isekai: Gohan Gamer

    Maybe "sly"? Because slutty when facing that old non-binary alien sure make me confused. And no, it's not political at all. The Namekian is canonically a unigender species. They have no primary, secondary and tertiary or any kind of distinctive sexual characteristics, and reproduce asexually...
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    Might and Magic (and Mirelurks)

    Thank you for the chapter. Keep up the good work.
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    Iron Dawn [Horizon Zero Dawn, Marvel CU]

    Thanks for the chapter.
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    Iron Dawn [Horizon Zero Dawn, Marvel CU]

    IIRC, pre-Aloy creature will still defend themselves when hunted. So while there should be less purpose-built "hunter" robot, their programmed behavior shouldn't differ that much compared to post-Aloy. This, in turn, will make it easier for you to write. Just, don't make it too difficult for...
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    Iron Dawn [Horizon Zero Dawn, Marvel CU]

    Aloy is literally the clone of the Mother of the Creator Goddess. And I'm quite sure that Gaia also optimize her DNA and made her the equivalent of "natural born" Captain 'Murica On the bows and spear taking down robots, there's myriad of elemental attack and traps to hold them. And they're...
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    Iron Dawn [Horizon Zero Dawn, Marvel CU]

    Very nice. Thank you for the re-write. Tho maybe next time keep the old version, and post a new one. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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    The Warg Lord (ASOIAF)(SI)

    I dunno... I don't think I like this chapter. Previously, Jon leverage his modern knowledge and magical tactic to win his battles, be it through violence or diplomacy. Relatively elegantly. The fact that he's directly threatening the dude in this chapter feels... forced? And not as...
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    Don'tcha know, that while Pandora unleashed all the Evil to the World at large, she managed to...

    Don'tcha know, that while Pandora unleashed all the Evil to the World at large, she managed to keep the Greatest of Evil for Man's exclusive use? You know, that last Evil she kept boxed up in Her Box? That's what we peddle.
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    Hey now, We're just a cute mascot selling hope for all.

    Hey now, We're just a cute mascot selling hope for all.
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    Forging Ahead (GURPS Interstellar Wars/Celestial Forge)

    So, the Genius Patrol totally bugs her lab time, right? They might not get her raw data and the Ceph nano-stuff, but they should know that she destroyed something with extreme prejudice. After all, they already missed her "turtling" steps.
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    Youngest Winchester

    Nice. Now, I don't think you actually need to write an entire arc in a chapter. Just, reduce the blow-by-blow Monster-of-the-Week chapters, maybe just imply what happen, and focus more on the greater season arc. Thank you for the story. Keep up the good work.
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    Youngest Winchester

    So, first... Nice to see this back. I like this fic. Especially the MC with mid-game power and problems in the tutorial stage. Now, the critique... First, maybe you don't need to follow the blow-by-blow scene of the series? I mean, the series is LONG. 15 season, methink. Even if you...
  13. gaouw

    Hey now... Since when did our race limit ourselves to only Shoujo? We're equal-opportunity...

    Hey now... Since when did our race limit ourselves to only Shoujo? We're equal-opportunity farmer. We gave hope to all, and then harvest their despair. In fact, we've been working since ancient times, even got immortalized on that story with Pandora, Yanno? We're that giver of hope, the...
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    There is an actual series called Mahou Shounen, yanno... Even Kore Ha Zombie Desuka used a...

    There is an actual series called Mahou Shounen, yanno... Even Kore Ha Zombie Desuka used a Mahou Shounen as one of MC's power up. And of course, there's always Mil-Tan from Highschool DxD and Puri-Puri Prisoner from One Punch Man.
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  15. gaouw

    ShouNEN

    ShouNEN
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    The Body Shop [Worm]

    Nice. It's really nice to see how abrupt Fortuna's action can be when she's following her path.
  17. gaouw

    Hey man. Any news on Bone Rakshasa? I'm waiting with bated breath.

    Hey man. Any news on Bone Rakshasa? I'm waiting with bated breath.
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    The Body Shop [Worm]

    Neat. Amy really sell the school of SUPER villain hero Because she has the most important part down pat.
  19. gaouw

    Bone Rakshasa

    Nice. I really want to see Pakura's word be proven in that the duo has beaten all the Masters, Hokages, and other Strongmen of the world and when everyone is worried that they'll take over just leave into the sunset.
  20. gaouw

    Youngest Winchester

    Still a bit too close to canon. It's good that MC made an invention of salted iron to their tools. However, there is still not enough butterfly to show the difference that MC's existence should bring. Hopefully the next chapters will start to diverge from the series. Keep up the good work.
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