Argentis
Lord of Cinders (retired)
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the first paragraph repeats it self twice.
I still fell like the characters don't speak as they should, too modern but still a good chapter. but in regards to Moat Calin maybe they should repair it SOME the thing is practically a ruin some repairs so it doesnt collapse on it self are in order.
I still fell like the characters don't speak as they should, too modern but still a good chapter. but in regards to Moat Calin maybe they should repair it SOME the thing is practically a ruin some repairs so it doesnt collapse on it self are in order.