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Okay, I eventually figured it out upon reading the front page banners for the first time in what feels like forever lol Seems that the alias was being auto blocked by the system and the microsoft backed accounts were just never getting the emails. Which is weird since I'm the business admin for...
Hey, sorry to bug you, but been stuggling to get confirmation email when I decided to switch my contact info; tried to switch back and still not coming through. It's pretty much broken an account I use heavily :/
It's cool lol I don't need to exactly understand Ankos shota-fetish to enjoy the ride :)
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still find the lack of audience fallout over it ironic given the last chapter reactions though lmao
I still fail to understand how Anko remotely finds Daisuke physically attractive or relationship material; I actually wonder if she's in a healthy mindset at all really given the allusions to failed past relationships.
I kinda wonder if others looking at this in the setting don't think...
Just small reminder:
1) You originally burnt yourself out over this and then explicitly stated that in this re-write and other stories you'd be writing for you, what you like.
2) A character that is perfectly likable or has zero morally questionable or objectionable actions does not exist...
Wanted to respond to this:
Fundamentally, on a day to day level, I agree with this. However, i do think it's also important to be able to sit down, meditate on your life, and still find inner peace and happiness.
I kinda need the idea of free will to meet that criteria. Otherwise, it becomes...
Don't know if I would suggest changing the chapter, honestly.
As for Sakura's decision making?
I mean, I'd largely file that under the same reasoning that sex with a minor is a federal offense
There's just a large aspect of the dynamic there that calls into question her ability to not be...
Well, I guess we differ there, because I take the position that without free will you might as well not be alive, ergo what's the point of your continued existence? Thus, I must take a counter stance.
Even ignoring that:
I think we can reasonably assume most people avoid decision paralysis...
All things in context:
The idea of manipulation and free will in the context of moral and ethical debate, largely comes down to what exactly is being discussed, for most people.
Going back to the Naruto and Hinata pairing, as an example; if this would wipe out humanity, then it becomes a...
Happy to give my input.
I think that while you have removed some of the overt flaws and character growth of the first iteration of the story from the MC, you could still make the interpersonal relations as interesting by avoiding the "Superman" / "Benevolent God-Emperor" trap of the 1st...
So, not gonna lie, the entire harem thought process felt incredibly creepy; least of all because it would literally be intentional bride grooming for Hinata, Sakura, etc...
That's not even touch on the questionable morality of manipulating Hinata and Naruto's love life away from what is...
Nice, an update!
Wow, big departure from the original; going the harem route?
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While I still prefer the character flaws shown in the 1st, it's nice to see some of that show through in this chapter
That would explain why people outside the village don't use it, but just seems like one of those things you'd think she'd share with the rest of her friends or something.
I mean, otherwise, it literally just boils down to "this incredibly simple technique that could help the entire village was...
well, yes, but as seen with tree walking; ninja are basically always doing such things to some degree
It's not like the super punch is a "new" technique, so much as it is maximizing effectiveness of existing ones
Naruto for instance should be able to use it, to some extent, with minimal...
Not sure if someone mentioned it:
There's nothing really stopping Lee from learning Tsunade Mega Punch; it's literally just well timed chakra release like the Hyuuga finger attacks, but more explosive and less precise
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If you need to justify the chakra control req in story, I'd place...
Irony here is that I don't really have issues with whatever depicted in hentai or the more lewd stories on this site; I'm just mentally struggling with *Anko* seeing Daisuke as an equal, in the romantic sense, nevermind the physical attraction.
Like, stories that do it for the lewd, sure, it's...
Anyone else slightly disturbed by the fact that Anko is showing such interest in Daisuke when he isnt even a late teen yet? Correct me, if I'm wrong, but he's like 13-15 right?
Hmm. Old reader of the first draft here: I think the writing is tighter this time, but honestly I miss socially inept MC. I really, really enjoyed how much the first draft showcased what living life as a game did to his mentality and what having 1 CHA did to him. The slower pace also helped to...