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  1. poyac

    I Was Destined To Destroy the World But Chose to Sell Llamas Instead. (Original-Shounen Inspired.)

    Nice dialogue! Thanks for the update :)
  2. poyac

    I Was Destined To Destroy the World But Chose to Sell Llamas Instead. (Original-Shounen Inspired.)

    The fights were cool, the end was funny, characters good.
  3. poyac

    I Was Destined To Destroy the World But Chose to Sell Llamas Instead. (Original-Shounen Inspired.)

    Ah that was fun. I missed the last chapter but its cool that the confrontation ended. Do you enjoy writing this or benefit from it in some way? Do what you want to do, whether you want to continue or leave it for some undetermined time. Thanks for the chapter.
  4. poyac

    I Was Destined To Destroy the World But Chose to Sell Llamas Instead. (Original-Shounen Inspired.)

    Nice work! The first paragraph is accidentally in quotation marks.
  5. poyac

    I Was Destined To Destroy the World But Chose to Sell Llamas Instead. (Original-Shounen Inspired.)

    Hmmm I slightly like Sol here, and I like the protag's considerations for their environment. Perhaps they'll become frenemies. Sure he's not going all out but it's cool too see him trying much more than he usually does. Thanks for the chapter!!
  6. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    I love everyone's dialogue! And this is a suitably large challenge for Itachi. It seems like magic is pretty similar to the three energies thing. Or they are a different combination of them, I don't know. There was one instance where Ozpin said "prey" but it shouldve been "pray".
  7. poyac

    Hermione Granger: Gamer, Monster [Outside POV Gamer SI in Harry Potter]

    Skitterdoc is in the top 5 best fanfics I've read. Possibly #1. It's amazing, not too easy and not depressing.
  8. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Let me guess, the chakra and aura want to combine but Itachi keeps habitually separating them? Nice fight scenes. These should all have commas at the start. If there's 3+ consecutive sentences with the same structure like this one, I think that's a good indicator to vary it. For example, "I...
  9. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Wow, thank you. This is another great chapter. I like how the class is arranged! No BS accepted, no favoritism.
  10. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Wow that's a reallllly wild ride, but it makes sense. You might want to put it in a spoiler for others though I'm perfectly fine with getting that knowledge early.
  11. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Great reasoning! And interesting changes. Did Qrow's .. romantic relations with Willow start way earlier and result in Jacques treating his daughters worse? And maybe Itachi went on some anti-white fang missions that made Blake's life harder?
  12. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Weiss and Jaune? Jesus Christ that is a flaming dumpster fire. His ego will be cold and dead by the time he gets in any fighting shape. At least she's not on the same team as Blake. And Pyrrha did deserve better so I'm glad she got with Ruby. Itachi's arguments were quite convincing though...
  13. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Those are good points, but I think it's more accurate to say that she has around the highest potential to be a world class fighter when her opponents are people . She hasn't even gone to beacon yet -- she not going to defeat the average hunter right now.
  14. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Him... Together together if the guy with the lucky semblance strolls in. I'm just quietly celebrating Willow killing her stupid husband, and polite society can't do shit about that. She's the rightful head of the SDC. That's kind of a first for me in RWBY fanfiction. This was another good...
  15. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Yup it was really good. I saw nothing to critique since I just quickly read the chapter. I liked everyone's characterizations here, and I'm happy with how the fight went. It had a few surprises for both, and people didn't treat Itachi like a Fabulous Gary Sue in the post-fight commentary. I...
  16. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Good chapter but the missing commas and repetitive sentence structure brought down the quality. Yang was... Well, maybe that fits her canon characterization. She prided herself in protecting her sister and being tough, and here's some guy that does it all better.
  17. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Dialogue was good! They made good arguments. Taiyang was reasonably angry and Summer was too. He didn't trust Itachi right away and that's good as well.
  18. poyac

    The Arrogant Xianxia Protagonist Wants To Kill God

    Bing Chilling reminds me of... Bing Meilu in that icy cultivator story, whose cultivation revolves around ice. And she's an ancient cultivator that saw stars get born and die. Kai Xiulan is most likely a reference to Cai Xiulan in Beware of Chicken... The character I like the most so far? The...
  19. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    At times it felt like Summer warmed up to Itachi and was impressed too quickly... Like when she just hugged him without permission a little while after threatening him and acknowledging her mistake. Many fics do that just because they're interacting with the protagonist. If you added a few...
  20. poyac

    Corvid [RWBY/Naruto]

    Dialogue and character interactions felt a bit rushed at the beginning, and the talk with the god of death was edgy af, but the interactions were good and believable in this chapter. Summer checked if she could trust him. Its good. Since Itachi's 14, he's not going to have a romantic...
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