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Gotta make a lie of how she was deaged as everyone would be looking for her to do that to them, even damyos.
Naruto has talk no jutsu, Hinata has talk to dead jutsu
I don't really think Hinata should of been able to deage her that much, but I'm not complaining. Poor Jiraya, he's two most favorite things in the world are gone!
Hinata cursed tsunade with puberty, Also very ironic that orochimaru ended up giving the power over life and death. something he wanted to someone else, and tsunade ended up de aged instead of orochimaru like he desired
The whole situation had started when a new enemy launched attacks from a massive steel vessel from the sea. Gaara, along with his ninjas, had fought off the enemy commanders before: the woman who wielded lightning and the other who specialized in genjutsu.
Suna's forces had fended off the attack, destroying one of the ships, but the commanders had escaped.
Inside the destroyed vessel, countless civilians were strapped to strange machinery, which drained their life force to power the ship. None had survived its destruction.
Then more reports arrived. Entire settlements taken overnight; armies of the same undying creatures ravaging the land.
That had been only the start.
Temari led a team sent to investigate rumors spread among people and one of their destinations was Takumi Village.
It was a strategic asset for Sunagakure. The village housed several skilled craftsmen who still supplied Suna with weapons. Only, when they arrived there, the village was empty, no one left behind to tell what had happened, even a few graves had been dug out.
With Temari's report came more information and acting on that, a specialist team tracked enemy overland movements while most of Suna's forces reinforced the coastal villages to fend off the attack from sea.
Gaara led this team. They found and assaulted the mobile fortress. Not something that Suna could leave be.
Gaara kept one of the enemy commanders busy, protecting his troops from the woman's lightning, but he couldn't deal with her while the genjutsu user was still around. That other woman could fly and was always out of reach of his sand.
The battle had been a forced stalemate, with his forces contending with the constructs, while Kankuro and Temari tried to kill the genjutsu user.
All the while, Shukaku had been quiet. Not a peep, yell, or demand for blood.
The one tail had quieted after his battle with Naruto. Or maybe it was because Gaara had been honest with the one-tail for once. Even if he at one point hated the thing sealed inside him, Gaara was also grateful to Shukaku. If it wasn't for the tailed beast, he'd never have met Naruto, and would probably still live in that same darkness.
Perhaps Shukaku had mellowed because Gaara had stopped usurping his chakra.
The battle raged on and amid that, the Slug Princess arrived.
Gaara had seen the woman's bingo book entry. S-class, age unknown, monstrous physical strength, near-mythical healing techniques, capable of shifting an entire battlefield on her own.
He had the privilege of witnessing that last one. He'd always thought the entry about shifting a battlefield alone was because of her healing abilities: it was literal.
Between devastating punches and kicks, the woman upturned earth, flattened overlooks, and destroyed barricades.
He'd received more reports. The sannin wasn't alone. A duo of Konoha shinobi had braved the genjutsu trap and captured the genjutsu user. After that, things moved fast.
Using sand to create lightning rods and make his enemy vulnerable, he crushed her with Sand Waterfall Imperial Funeral. Sand Coffin hadn't been enough to stop her.
The captured commander, who looked like a mix of woman and bat, ended up being killed by one of Kankuro's dolls.
Tsunade left to regroup with Konoha's shinobi, while Gaara oversaw the end of the battle.
He received more reports. About the enemy fortress, the strange machinery used to power the vehicle. Most of the civilians inside were dead. Their life force sucked dry to power the fortress shields. Rescuers removed those who survived and gave them proper support.
Would Naruto have done better?
Gaara looked over the devastation and shook his head. Probably yes, but this was a step in the right direction.
"Gaara of the Desert," a woman's voice called out.
He turned, watching the slug princess approach. She had an unconscious old man on her back. By her side, there were two other shinobi. He recognized them both.
The blonde girl from the Yamanaka clan, carrying another unconscious girl. A dark-haired one: the estranged Hyuga offspring.
More information flitted through his mind. Suggestions from the council and actions that would benefit Suna. One of those called for trying to poach the Hyuga offspring. If they could entice her to join Suna, there was a chance to spread the bloodlimit to their own forces. He discarded those thoughts.
He nodded politely. "Thank you for your help, Tsunade-sama."
No need to cause problems here. The woman in front of him wasn't someone he could offend lightly.
Tsunade looked around the devastated area.
"Is this matter settled?"
Gaara looked over the battlefield again, and at his shinobi still carrying civilians from inside the machine.
"Yes."
Gently, Tsunade placed the old man on the ground. The old man didn't look injured, but Gaara couldn't say more than that.
"His name is Kahiko," she said. "We rescued him from inside the palace."
"What happened there?" he asked, looking at the Yamanaka girl and the Hyuga offspring. Their clothing wasn't in the best shape, with blood and tears and marks of combat.
"There was a mine inside," Tsunade said. "We destroyed it ourselves."
Gaara nodded. Suna's intelligence department would give him a better report later.
A commotion nearby caught his attention.
Approaching the fortress were six shinobis, four of them decked in strange weapons. The other two bore Konoha's protectors: two other girls. One which he recognized. A student of Maito Gai, a friend of Rock Lee.
The strange shinobies stopped some distance away using the two girls as hostages.
The two girls from Konoha had a few scuff marks, a few bruises, but nothing immediately life-threatening.
Yamanaka girl called out. "Karin, Tenten!" She took a step forward, but Tsunade stopped her.
"Who are you?" Gaara asked. All four wore headbands with a symbol he'd never seen before. Each held a strange weapon. Not normal shinobi gear.
A man stepped forward. "We're the Four Celestial Symbols."
That name didn't ring any bells. Still, Gaara needed more information.
"And what do you want?"
It was a woman at the back of the group who answered. "You'll pay for what the big villages did to us!"
The leader looked back, but soon faced Gaara again. "We have your student."
Inside Gaara's head, Shukaku laughed: "Crush them," he demanded.
For once, Gaara agreed. He couldn't understand what these people wanted by barging in with this many Suna Shinobi around. Why did they even take Konoha's people hostage when the slug princess was just by his side?
He cast a glance at the princess. Her face was hard.
"Where's Matsuri?" he asked, but that was just a distraction.
Maybe these people thought the battle had weakened him, or maybe they misjudged his strength. Sand erupted around the four, pulling them into a coffin while leaving the Konoha shinobi unhurt.
Then, he crushed.
Gaara turned to Kankuro, who'd been ready for a fight. "Find Matsuri."
Kankuro saluted and disappeared.
"I apologize for the display, Tsunade-sama."
The two girls, now splattered with blood and gore, approached. Their eyes were wide with more fear of him than their captors.
"It's no problem at all." Tsunade said.
Gaara nodded, thinking about how best to improve his relationships with Konoha.
"I'll accompany you back to Konoha," he said after deciding things. "It's the least I can do to repay the help."
Gaara would trust Kankuro to find Matsuri. He'd make up to her later for not being the one to rescue her. It was the least he could do as her teacher.
Ohhhhh if Suna intelligence manages to pick up those weapons then Suna will have gained quite a bit of special weapons. Konoha gets a young Slug Princess and Suna gets 4 powerful ninja tools, i guess even if nobody got the gelel stones both villages got something out of it.
Hidden in the tree's canopy, squirrel-Ino cracked the nut between her teeth and glared down at the camp.
Three tents, a fresh fire, and many traps set around the perimeter. Shinobi traps, not bandits. She'd been stalking them for hours, watching how they moved, how they didn't talk, unless they had to. She recognized many of her own training in their actions.
The accent gave them away: Iwagakure. A three-man shinobi cell dressed like common raiders, attacking caravans, travelers, and any convoy on the road. Good enough to fool civilians or the careless ninja.
This definitely wasn't a C-Rank mission.
Ino looked at the camp again. Or maybe that was the enemy plan all along: pretend to be bandits and kill any shinobi squad sent to investigate.
The last of the nut broke between her tiny jaws, and she released the jutsu. Ino blinked awake in her body, still sitting cross-legged by the fire.
Choji looked up from the half-eaten rice ball in his hand. Shikamaru didn't even pause his move on the go board.
"Well?" Shikamaru asked, lazily placing a stone.
"I found the bandits," Ino said, her voice flat. "Three of them. Small camp. North ridge." She didn't blink.
Choji frowned. "That fast?"
"They were loud and lazy. Barely tried to hide the fire."
She stood, brushing dust off her pants, hand instinctively finding the black kunai strapped at her waist: sleek, matte, almost weightless. It pulsed under her fingers, warm to her touch.
"We can take them."
"You sure?" Choji asked. "Our mission is just to investigate."
Ino shrugged. "Just bandits," she said, checking the pouches and her supplies. She didn't have many of the 'good' exploding kunai left, only about half a dozen. She'd need to grab a few more with Karin, even if Karin's seals weren't as good as Hinata's.
Shikamaru sighed. "Troublesome," but he got up, packed his go board. "Same strategy as usual. I'll tie them up. Choji, you go big if needed."
The chunin looked at Ino for a long while, like trying to decide what to say. "You," he scratched his head.
Ino didn't let him finish. Her hands flashed with seals, and out popped two other Inos.
"No," she said, looking at the shadow clones. "I'll send in the clones to subdue them."
"Ino, I don't think–" Choji started, but clamped up when three Inos glared his way.
"What? I can't use clones for what they're meant for? Is that it?"
Shikamaru raised both hands in surrender. "Calm down, Ino."
Ino just turned around and dashed away. Her clones followed.
It didn't take long before Shikamaru, Choji, and Ino waited some distance from the camp, while Ino's shadow clones dealt with the situation. In theory, it was a good use of the jutsu. What Ino hadn't told them was that her clone was the one that she left behind.
They were treating her like she might break. Boring missions. Constant supervision. Always kept from anything dangerous, like she'd forgotten how to bleed. Ino had trained for years to kill people, and now she wasn't fit to be a ninja anymore, Shisui even grouped her back with Shikamaru, for some inexplicable reason.
Ino missed training with the girls. She missed Hinata. That made her even angrier.
Strength was the one thing Ino lacked, and everyone wanted to keep her from getting stronger. What uses were having a stronger body, unnaturally fast regeneration, and an almost inexhaustible fount of chakra when she couldn't use it?
Ino shook her head, then looked at the clone. The clone nodded back.
She passed out a few of the remaining explosives, the last set of barriers, and then it was time to put her training to use.
Bypassing the ninja traps wasn't difficult, since she'd seen them doing it. That was just the first step, of course. As soon as she was inside the camp perimeter, there was some sort of alarm, and the bandits scampered up, already ready for a fight.
Ino grinned, full of teeth and malice.
Outside the camp, 'Ino', Shikamaru, and Choji waited until the clones captured the bandits. It didn't go as planned, of course. First were the explosions, then the sounds of a battle.
Shikamaru's head snapped to the clone, who was grinning.
"Shit!" he cursed. "Let's go, Choji!"
Both dashed toward the battle to help, and the clone followed. She wouldn't need it, of course.
They arrived to find one Ino standing above two unconscious shinobi trapped inside one of Hinata's weight barriers. The trapped shinobi had trouble moving and seemed to be barely breathing. The Ino there looked a bit ruffled out, but unhurt.
Another 'Ino' was still in a fierce fight with the remaining Shinobi.
The man blasted lightning at her face. Ino raised her hands to defend, which gave the man a chance to flicker closer and stab her stomach. Ino grunted, but instead of retreating, she grabbed the man's head, whirled, and slammed him into the dirt.
She didn't give him time to recover. She was on top of him faster than anyone could react, slamming his face, all the while screaming through her teeth.
Shikamaru took in the situation, then dashed closer to Ino.
"Ino," he called out, but she didn't answer. "Ino!" He called again.
When it was clear she wouldn't stop, Shikamaru's hands flashed, and his shadow laced with hers. Shikamaru buckled, the jutsu nearly slipping from his grip. Ino wasn't just resisting, she was fighting it.
"Ino, stop!" Shikamaru croaked out.
Even trapped by his shadow, Ino turned around and glared at him.
"If you hit him more, you're going to kill him."
It took a while, but Ino finally nodded.
"I'll release you."
Ino nodded again.
When he did, Ino got up, kicked the downed shinobi, then pulled the kunai out of her stomach. Blood seeped out of the wound. With a quick flash of hands, Ino placed a glowing palm on the injury. Whatever Hinata had done in the mines had given her supernatural healing, but she was still trying to keep that a secret.
Ino dispersed the clones, then walked away, back toward Konoha. Shikamaru and Choji could deal with tying up the enemies and signaling a patrol to ferry them back to be interrogated.
When the team crossed the gates, it was almost evening. Ino immediately veered off.
Shikamaru called out. "Ino, wait!"
Ino stopped, turned toward him. They hadn't spoken since the battle a few hours ago. Choji looked on from afar, his face troubled.
"What is it?"
Shikamaru scratched his head. "Where are you going?"
Ino just looked on, saying nothing.
"We need to report the mission at the tower," he said, then added. "And after, meet at Yakiniku Q to celebrate. Asuma-sensei will be there too."
Ino turned around and dashed away. Shikamaru's invitation hadn't worked the first time, or the second. It was annoying that he hadn't stopped trying yet. And now he had even involved Asuma-sensei.
That only made Ino angrier.
She moved along the rooftops, the same path she always took. The one she'd named in her head 'Hinata highway'. Rooftops took her toward Konoha's hospital. She entered, moving through the now familiar corridors. A few nurses gave her a small nod. Others just smiled sadly at her passing.
Footsteps echoed the path until she stepped through a door on one of the upper floors.
Inside, Hinata slept peacefully on the bed. Ino walked around, made sure Hinata was comfortable, that the water was clean, and the fruits were fresh. Then she adjusted the bed sheets and Hinata's body, so she wouldn't have a crick in her neck when she woke up.
She sat in her chair, the one she'd smuggled in months ago.
"Today I got to fight a few Iwagakure shinobi, Hinata-chan," Ino said, then recounted the entire mission. The fight, lying to her team, almost losing control, and killing the enemy. She liked to think Hinata would also understand and not judge her for it.
When the tale was done, Ino slumped forward, face pressing against Hinata's sleeping form.
"Why won't you wake up, Hinata-chan?"
And we're back, sort of?
I apologize for going radio silent. Was dealing with bit of a breakdown and getting obsessed with stuff. I'll promise at least a chapter a week, more if I can. Sorry about the delay. <3