Against the Tide
[David Weber's Out of the Dark, Waifu Catalog Fic]
The Shongairi Invasion...
[David Weber's Out of the Dark, Waifu Catalog Fic]
The Shongairi Invasion...
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Was it?That book is one of those "Humanity fuck yeah" type books right? were super advanced aliens come to earth but apparently regular old modern earth has superior soldiers and war machines to them, somehow, and in the end Earth wins because while the aliens are an aggressive and war minded people, humans are supposedly better at it.
These books are embarrassing to read.
Was it?
I mean, I only remembered the book because there's vampires and aliens in it. That, and a quick Google shows that GRRM was involved in it somehow. Was it really that bad?
equivalent of about sixty to seventy five kilotons of dynamite.
Do this authors not have a closed relative or close friend that could read this and look them in the eye and with all seriousness just tell them its complete garbage? The plot is something a five year old would come up with.
David Weber needs a cousin or grandson to come up and tell him: "Gramps, this is garbage. You can do better than this crap. Come on!"
The Kane thing will be explaned in tomorrow's update. If you've read With this Ring, kind of a similar deal the MC is stuck using a mononym it was kind of present in the original draft of the prompt and I kept it. Reinforce Zwei is from Nanoha... but yeah Out of the Dark is the plucky human resistance tries to fight aliens with guns and stuff makes a good showing aliens get pissed, and then in turn piss off Vlad Dracula and he murder stomps them in canon, and then decides 'I am going to take much of my kind and we're going to go glass all the wolfmen's worlds using the SHongairi's own capital ships'.David Weber? Out of the Dark? Yeah, I think I read this before somewhere. Something about hidden vampires versus alien invasion? I dunno if I get that right or not. It's been a while.
Weird story for a WC fic to set up but it's interesting enough that I'm watching this. Ana Helstrom and Zwei (I'm assuming from Nanoha) was also an unusual combo pick.
Bit of a problem that I'm seeing. First of all, the POV is a bit of a mess. At the beginning, we get a narration, then shifted to the First Person from the MC, then we got Third Person from presumably Ana. Each perspectives was a bit too short on words that switching back and forth made for a very annoying reading.
Also, who in the world is Kane? Why is Nod suddenly a thing here? Is this the self insert MC? Is it a crossover or something? Explanations, please!
That book is one of those "Humanity fuck yeah" type books right? were super advanced aliens come to earth but apparently regular old modern earth has superior soldiers and war machines to them, somehow, and in the end Earth wins because while the aliens are an aggressive and war minded people, humans are supposedly better at it.
These books are embarrassing to read.
Another series I remember are the David Weber Safehold series were he goes into pages long explanations of weapon porn and the main character was a type of robot from a female character that changes shape to a male robot and it is never mentioned again that it was originaly a female personality.
Its not that bad but its pretty schlocky at times. its definitely a product of when it was written definitely.Was it?
I mean, I only remembered the book because there's vampires and aliens in it. That, and a quick Google shows that GRRM was involved in it somehow. Was it really that bad?
I almost am willing to bet that this book came around on a bet, ala, I bet you can't write a story with Romans and Pokemon (alera codex, which is actually a pretty stellar novel).Wikipedia spoiled the plot.
The 2010s: Alien scientists from an alliance of races known as the Galactic Hegemony review footage of the Battle of Agincourt, taken by a survey ship during the Hundred Years' War. They liken humans to the carnivorous, vulpine Shongairi, a species recently admitted to the Hegemony. Ultimately, a Shongairi fleet is sent to establish control of Earth in the name of the Hegemony. Upon arrival in the Solar System, the Shongairi are amazed to discover that in six centuries since the Agincourt survey, the technology base of Earth has advanced considerably, to the Hegemony's classification of "Level II."
The Hegemony constitution prohibits conquest of any Level II or higher society. Fleet Commander Thikair, head of the Shongairi expedition, resolves to ignore this law in service of Shongairi plans to advance beyond their Hegemony rivals and ultimately conquer the galaxy; a human client state could provide scientists and soldiers to this end. Furthermore, the Hegemony's leaders have quietly authorized the Shongairi to attack the "bloodthirsty" humans. Hegemony leaders, mostly pacifist herbivores, view humans as dangerous and morally beyond redemption; they are to be subjugated, or if necessary, exterminated.
The Shongairi kill more than half of Earth's population with orbital strikes, falsely assuming the survivors will surrender. As the Hegemony has to date prohibited war on advanced societies, the Shongairi are completely unprepared for the conflict that ensues. U.S. Air Force remnants using stealth F-22 Raptor aircraft shoot down a flight of Shongairi transport shuttles. U.S. and Russian tanks prove far superior against poorly armored and armed Shongairi vehicles. The Shongairi use further kinetic strikes to destroy the attackers and then remaining human cities as a reprisal, but the survivors continue the struggle as loosely organized guerillas. Superior infantry tactics and weapons cause irreplaceable Shongairi casualties to mount.
In Romania, U.S. Marine Stephen Buchevsky, whose family died in the initial strikes, joins a band of fighters led by one Mircea Basarab, who are more than meets the eye. In space, Fleet Commander Thikair ruefully concludes that human nature compels survivors of Shongairi atrocities to avenge their loved ones at all costs. Unlike other known species, humans have no natural "submission" instinct to superior powers; altruism and sacrifice of self to safeguard the innocent are, to the aliens, marks of "insanity."
Thikair plots to develop a bioweapon that will "accidentally" be released in the U.S. to fulfill the original contingency plan. This requires the kidnapping of humans as test subjects, to ensure the bioweapon will serve its purpose of killing every remaining human on Earth. When guerillas in the U.S. and Romania become aware of the Shongairi plot, they manage to save some victims, but the Shongairi use their air supremacy to continue their genocidal mission.
Basarab arises at last under his true name: Vlad the Impaler, aka Count Dracula. After centuries of isolation in the mountains of Wallachia, where he had sought redemption for his murderous past, Dracula resolves to sire a new army of vampires, among whom is Buchevsky, who otherwise would have died in battle. The Shongairi are no match for the immortal vampires, and flee to space as Thikair plots to destroy Earth itself. The vampires board and seize control of the Shongairi fleet. Dracula reveals to the despondent Thikair that he has learned everything about the Shongairi and the Hegemony, and the vampires will take Thikair's ships back to Shongairi space to exact vengeance. Invoking the name of his murdered children, vampire Buchevsky kills Thikair.
On Earth, salvaged Shongairi technology sets humanity up to recover and advance beyond the tragedy, united under the banner of the Terran Empire.
Do this authors not have a closed relative or close friend that could read this and look them in the eye and with all seriousness just tell them its complete garbage? The plot is something a five year old would come up with.
David Weber needs a cousin or grandson to come up and tell him: "Gramps, this is garbage. You can do better than this crap. Come on!"
The unit of measurement for nuclear yield is a ton of TNT, not a ton of dynamite. Dynamite's active ingredient is C3H5N3O9. The active ingredient in TNT is C6H2(NO2)3CH3. TNT yields 4.6 megajoules per kilogram, dynamite is 7.5 - which means your kinetic strike yield estimate is higher than the book says.
Reminds me of The Simpsons episode where the kids are trying, by committee, to figure out why the adults are all absent, and the collectively agreed-upon theory includes things like the RAND corporation and reverse vampires.
Wikipedia spoiled the plot.
The 2010s: Alien scientists from an alliance of races known as the Galactic Hegemony review footage of the Battle of Agincourt, taken by a survey ship during the Hundred Years' War. They liken humans to the carnivorous, vulpine Shongairi, a species recently admitted to the Hegemony. Ultimately, a Shongairi fleet is sent to establish control of Earth in the name of the Hegemony. Upon arrival in the Solar System, the Shongairi are amazed to discover that in six centuries since the Agincourt survey, the technology base of Earth has advanced considerably, to the Hegemony's classification of "Level II."
The Hegemony constitution prohibits conquest of any Level II or higher society. Fleet Commander Thikair, head of the Shongairi expedition, resolves to ignore this law in service of Shongairi plans to advance beyond their Hegemony rivals and ultimately conquer the galaxy; a human client state could provide scientists and soldiers to this end. Furthermore, the Hegemony's leaders have quietly authorized the Shongairi to attack the "bloodthirsty" humans. Hegemony leaders, mostly pacifist herbivores, view humans as dangerous and morally beyond redemption; they are to be subjugated, or if necessary, exterminated.
The Shongairi kill more than half of Earth's population with orbital strikes, falsely assuming the survivors will surrender. As the Hegemony has to date prohibited war on advanced societies, the Shongairi are completely unprepared for the conflict that ensues. U.S. Air Force remnants using stealth F-22 Raptor aircraft shoot down a flight of Shongairi transport shuttles. U.S. and Russian tanks prove far superior against poorly armored and armed Shongairi vehicles. The Shongairi use further kinetic strikes to destroy the attackers and then remaining human cities as a reprisal, but the survivors continue the struggle as loosely organized guerillas. Superior infantry tactics and weapons cause irreplaceable Shongairi casualties to mount.
In Romania, U.S. Marine Stephen Buchevsky, whose family died in the initial strikes, joins a band of fighters led by one Mircea Basarab, who are more than meets the eye. In space, Fleet Commander Thikair ruefully concludes that human nature compels survivors of Shongairi atrocities to avenge their loved ones at all costs. Unlike other known species, humans have no natural "submission" instinct to superior powers; altruism and sacrifice of self to safeguard the innocent are, to the aliens, marks of "insanity."
Thikair plots to develop a bioweapon that will "accidentally" be released in the U.S. to fulfill the original contingency plan. This requires the kidnapping of humans as test subjects, to ensure the bioweapon will serve its purpose of killing every remaining human on Earth. When guerillas in the U.S. and Romania become aware of the Shongairi plot, they manage to save some victims, but the Shongairi use their air supremacy to continue their genocidal mission.
Basarab arises at last under his true name: Vlad the Impaler, aka Count Dracula. After centuries of isolation in the mountains of Wallachia, where he had sought redemption for his murderous past, Dracula resolves to sire a new army of vampires, among whom is Buchevsky, who otherwise would have died in battle. The Shongairi are no match for the immortal vampires, and flee to space as Thikair plots to destroy Earth itself. The vampires board and seize control of the Shongairi fleet. Dracula reveals to the despondent Thikair that he has learned everything about the Shongairi and the Hegemony, and the vampires will take Thikair's ships back to Shongairi space to exact vengeance. Invoking the name of his murdered children, vampire Buchevsky kills Thikair.
On Earth, salvaged Shongairi technology sets humanity up to recover and advance beyond the tragedy, united under the banner of the Terran Empire.
Do this authors not have a closed relative or close friend that could read this and look them in the eye and with all seriousness just tell them its complete garbage? The plot is something a five year old would come up with.
David Weber needs a cousin or grandson to come up and tell him: "Gramps, this is garbage. You can do better than this crap. Come on!"
Was it?
I mean, I only remembered the book because there's vampires and aliens in it. That, and a quick Google shows that GRRM was involved in it somehow. Was it really that bad?
As someone who spend my time reading and writing shitty fanfictions, this hurts me immensely.
Yeah, this is going to be quite a bit more expansive than the original posted material. Part of that is that the original prompt was just going to be more or less a one shot, and it was kind of expanded from there. Here I will probably still work by the canon timeframe for the invasion, (which is somewhere like eight months to a year in length) but we're going to spend a lot more time with scenes dealing with the human resistance to the Shongairi and the occupation than in the misc threadI like the idea but the version on your other thread was very bare bones. I hope the reason its getting its own thread is to expand the story in in length and depth.
Oh certainly the SHongairi have a clear chain of command, are organized reasonably well, its not that humans are better soldiers, the shongairi have better technology. Its just more ground fighting favors whoever is doing the attacking, with the shongairi having orbital and air dominance of the battlespace, and the puppies have no complaints about dropping ortillery into populated civilian centers.Do You remember if the aliens from a book even had proper military discipline if not they probably were used to coasting on their success so to speak but yeah that's a ridiculous plot armor.
Yeah the sequel has some ideas I won't be using, there is a reason I haven't finished it because ... well I think the radiation change was a response to all the butthurt over surprise vampires. As for Vlad's arrival, that would at least per the first book mean that Earth is only like two hundred something light years from the Shongairi homeworld? I will eventually force myself to finish the second book but there is a lot in that I'm not going to use.Initially, it was a short story in a collection from several authors and, as far as I remember, Martin either wrote one of the stories or was the editor of the collection.
And this is one of the cases when the extra volume did not benefit the book, because in the form of a short story of several tens of pages, this idea with aliens and Vlad was implemented much better.
The sequel introduces the concept of radiation-feeding vampires, which approaches the twilight delirium.
And also humanity understands the technology of aliens better than these aliens themselves who have been using these technologies for millennia.
And fuses for the wimps! After all, what can happen if you ignore safety precautions?
90% of the book is a dull listing of the "achievements of mankind" and no less dull politics. Even in the extended version of the first book, neither one nor the other came to such a degree of dullness.
And like the icing on the cake, the epilogue:
After forty years, Vlad's dreadnought arrives at the Shongairi system and is already going to bomb everyone as a 25-kilometer, five times larger than that of Vlad's, dreadnought of Humanity arrives.
There is no point in reading. The level of shitty fanfiction.
As someone who spend my time reading and writing shitty fanfictions, this hurts me immensely.
Anyway, I finally remembered where I read it when I found a copy of Out of the Dark in the attic. First impression: it's not that bad. Not that good either. It's the sort of the trashy story I can use to mindlessly waste an afternoon.
Well, at least it's not Victoria. Now that was truly top tier trash.
As for Vlad's arrival, that would at least per the first book mean that Earth is only like two hundred something light years from the Shongairi homeworld?
As someone who spend my time reading and writing shitty fanfictions, this hurts me immensely.
Anyway, I finally remembered where I read it when I found a copy of Out of the Dark in the attic. First impression: it's not that bad. Not that good either. It's the sort of the trashy story I can use to mindlessly waste an afternoon.
Well, at least it's not Victoria. Now that was truly top tier trash.
In canon chemical weapons [and then bio weapons, forgot about that.]AT 4 are good for M113 or BMP1,but anything more modern could be problem.They really never faced real opposition,which explain kinetic strikes.What else they could do against enemy who could fight back ?
Yeah, we do get some hint in canon that Shongairi are sort of kind of using collaborators in book 1 thats how North Carolina's government survives for a while but they have plot shields, and in the sequel we're told similarly that ... I can't remember which cartel it is, buddies up to the shongairi and basically uses them as muscle to take out their rivals in northern mexico so like they collaborate (I have no idea why the shongairi would go along with this given Thikair's response to la eme should be oh yeah, nerve gas or air strike) but yeah we're told that in book 2Shongairi in canon were idiots.Every occupant rule using collaborators and minorities,if they did so in canon they would win,and vampires would not reacted.They do not reacted when Romania was occupied before,after all.An that is something what Vlad from book said - wait to see what is capitulation price.
Well,if they were not idiots,they would win.Book about Earth controlled by puppies collaborators would be boring and too realistic.
Interestingly the Shongairi month appears to be about seventy five, seventy seven, days ish. Its supposed to be 2.5 months Earth time. I don't know how well Weber kept to that bit of detail.
Red Alert Tech base manufacturing uses ore extraction, which is supported by one of the Tiberium manuals (IIRC thats Firestorm's manual, or C&C 2) that says that refining Tiberium while hazardous is much faster than just ore processing alone, which Tiberium-verse MCVs are still capable of doing.How is he acquiring materials for the MCV if he is not using Tiberium?