Catgirl Isekai Gone Wrong

[Vadelent]

Hmmm… Can't help but feel that the deceased twin sister is involved with Idir somehow. They're clearly a goddess, greater spirit or remnant. Something. Can probably only connect to Gwen because of their circumstances with their previous life. A loophole perhaps? I imagine that loophole might be the reason why they can only connect to Gwen. That or they're so weak at the moment that they can only support and or be supported by one follower/champion without shattering.

 

[Doomsought]

It might be tricky for the MC to source hearts at her age without telling anyone about the spirit. If I understood it right, Idir is too weak to sustain multiple connections right now and needs to regain strength with only a single person for now.

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Not really, she's hunted before. It will likely be mostly squirrel hearts and the like until she grows older, but that is better than nothing.

 

[vladspellbinder]

I'd tried doodling my just what I thought it was along with all my mixed-up thoughts and words.

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Looks like some word rearranging got forgotten and you have a stray "my" left over.

For some reason, if others besides me knew, the connection we had would break. But, if others knew, that thread would break.

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Is the double "if others know the thread breaks" intentional?

A lot of the conversation scene was somewhat painful to read because it's so obvious to me what's going on and why things are the way they are and the main character just not getting it is, ugh. Characters don't have to be perfect, they should be allowed to make mistake and to not know thing but comeon! This is basic Higher Power stuff!

Personal Update: Holidays freaking wrecked me and my New Years present for my long time teaching at my university was unemployment. Joy.

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Ooof, yeah, two-way loyalty is rare these days. Hope you can land on your feet.

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Kintsugi kitty.
Though if she's supposed to be two colors or is the result of two different deities fusing in to one to save something of themselves is unknown at the moment.

She came out lovely. The two kitites on either side of her are named, and technical minor spoilers, but I can't resist sharing their names: Hiss and Priss, respectively.

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The "respectively" is a bit ambiguous so just to be clear, Hiss is the black one on the left and Priss is the white on on the right?

I hope Gwen can get Idir what she needs to heal after healing herself.

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[HiddenMaster]

Looks like some word rearranging got forgotten and you have a stray "my" left over.


Is the double "if others know the thread breaks" intentional?

A lot of the conversation scene was somewhat painful to read because it's so obvious to me what's going on and why things are the way they are and the main character just not getting it is, ugh. Characters don't have to be perfect, they should be allowed to make mistake and to not know thing but comeon! This is basic Higher Power stuff!


Ooof, yeah, two-way loyalty is rare these days. Hope you can land on your feet.


Kintsugi kitty.
Though if she's supposed to be two colors or is the result of two different deities fusing in to one to save something of themselves is unknown at the moment.


The "respectively" is a bit ambiguous so just to be clear, Hiss is the black one on the left and Priss is the white on on the right?

I hope Gwen can get Idir what she needs to heal after healing herself.

Thanks for the chapter.

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Thanks for the comments! And yeah, I need to go back and issue a correction and update soon because I did overhaul the conversation a bit before release (needed, original wasn't quite right), but I think that overhaul led to the awkward bits you're seeing in this.

And yeah, Hiss is the black one, Priss is the right one.

 

[HiddenMaster]

Minor updates issued fixing some of the repetitive text I missed in Chapter 25.