Aluvartyo
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I gotta say while I'm enjoying the story I fucking can't stand the cultural arrogance of the celestials. Like while its spot on from a story perspective, and I'm not asking you to change anything cause it's a perfectly logical thing to happen to a society that develops like that....its just incredibly aggravating to read without wanting to just punch jenesha and her whole society in the face lol. At this point, for personal satisfaction I'm hoping for like an epilogue when this is over where jenesha gets her faced rubbed in the fact that she's not top of the food chain by whatever power is above the celestials. Like you know, just a proper humbling experience to properly establish the phrase "there is always a bigger fish"
Anyway thanks for the excellent chapter, though I was a touch disappointed coil did not suffer longer Thus I'm holding out hope for a suitable ...permanent..punishment once janesha learns he tried to kidnap Taylor.
Anyway thanks for the excellent chapter, though I was a touch disappointed coil did not suffer longer Thus I'm holding out hope for a suitable ...permanent..punishment once janesha learns he tried to kidnap Taylor.