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Is there going to be descriptive gore, or should we request a mod to move this to the SFW forum?An important note before we begin, considering the venue: THIS IS NOT PORN. THERE IS NO PORN HERE. You can let go of your dicks. It's delicious grimderp all the way down
Now I know this will go down as well with you as it would with Taylor.
But yeah, Lisa is 1000000% correct that she should join the wards. It's not even funny.
I'm not even being hyperbolic when I say that if she asked for Sophia's head to mount on her wall, a rectangle would open up in space shortly after SS "accidentally" walked into a HV transformer.
So for the sake of story imma wait and see what happens and assume Contessa either went blind or also fell into a HV transformer.
But once Taylor gets a bit more grounded this will require revisiting if only to hear her justification of why she won't work with the "heroes" knowing her own value versus SS.
Is there going to be descriptive gore, or should we request a mod to move this to the SFW forum?
So far so good. I have seen a few WormExalted fics (maybe only 6 or so that were longer than 10K words [a couple that were over a 100K]), but they have all died. This definitely has a different twist though! Only other one with as massive a twist was the Lord of Heaven Taylor one.
You just rationally concluded that there would be no point in living any more
Of course Lisa couldn't pass by indifferently. Taylor is unknowingly pushing all her buttons right now.You blink as a steaming paper cup is shoved in front of your face.
"Tea? You look like someone who could use a cup of tea."
So she can't instantly copy someone else's power. Good. Otherwise it would be too easy and the story would be less interesting.Turns out that your estimate of twenty percent was a bit optimistic, and you weren't quite done by Friday. Just making an exact replica of her power didn't work - whenever you tried, things would just twist away from you and collapse. Different brains, or something. You had to start rebuilding things to fit you, which of course required a lot of pondering and experimentation.
So she doesn't get a perfect copy of someone else's powers. It's even better.
I couldn't have put it better myself.
Lisa may not be a hero to everyone, but she's definitely acting like a hero right now...well, or like a good friend. I guess the difference between a friend and a hero sometimes isn't that big, huh?"At least take this." She hands you a cellphone. "It's just a cheap burner with my number on it. In case anything comes up, or if you want to brag about your exploits, or whatever." When you inevitably get in trouble and need my help, she doesn't say, very loudly.
Yeah..On the one hand, it's not a bad idea to seek help from a government organization. On the other hand, seek help from a government organization when you live on Earth-Bet (in Brockton Bay, no less)...I'm not sure it's still a good idea...And you never know about the Wards. The PRT and/or Wards could manage to screw things up just as bad as other routes. Odds are probably better going the government route, but I sure wouldn't want to have to bet on it.
Then why it it in the NSFW section?An important note before we begin, considering the venue: THIS IS NOT PORN. THERE IS NO PORN HERE. You can let go of your dicks. It's delicious grimderp all the way down.
Those themes are perfectly acceptable in the sfw section. Hell, people bitch about SB and SV being sanitised but you have a lot of stories that have some dark shit there.The other kind of 'mature themes'. You know, the non-sexy ones?
Those themes are perfectly acceptable in the sfw section. Hell, people bitch about SB and SV being sanitised but you have a lot of stories that have some dark shit there.
You should be putting this in the Questing section not creative writing since it's pretty obvious this isn't going to be traditional fiction. And if there's no smut it doesn't deserve the NSFW tag or categorization because grimderp isn't NSFW, just for mature audiences. There is actually a difference there, just like there's a difference between a story and implausible instruction manuals (aka Quests). There are reasons there are conventions for writing a story. This has broken a ton of them, PoV and Tense in particular. You did follow the most important one which is that you use Sans Serif font for digital formats, but that might just be because you're lazy and ignorant instead of informed.
No, no, this is a slippery slope, Taylor..You don't worry about the tiny bit of mind control that's going to help said loyalty along. Gratitude is good!
But something tells me that you wouldn't want to be on the other end of the stick.Yes, you're going to discover people's deepest secrets and use your knowledge to control their behavior. That sounds bad. But you're going to do it by helping them get the thing they desperately want. It's like the opposite of blackmail.
Lisa! Lisa, where are you? Taylor is going to do something stupid, please stop her!No, you're going to have to catch them in their civilian identity.
Jesus Christ, Taylor...You step into the street. For a brief moment your world is full of car horn and screeching tires, then it's full of pain and you're flying through the air.
And why the hell didn't that thought occur to you before you decided to throw yourself in front of a car?You, uh, you should probably call up Lisa, apologize to her and ask her to hook you up with that friend she mentioned.
I'm starting to suspect that your shard really has a lot of influence on your decisions.No! You can't just let a single setback demoralize you like that.
Oh thank God! Seriously, I was already beginning to doubt whether she had any common sense. I mean, yes, Taylor canonically may not have been the perfect model of sanity, but still...Fine, you'll bloody well call Lisa and apologize and ask for her help like a goddamn adult.
I called it Lord of Heaven, because I cannot remember the proper name for it, and in it, Taylor triggers either with a different Shard entirely, or QA absorbed/subjugated another Shard created when Zion ate a Demense in Creation (as revealed by the author as to the origin of the power). Worked it into a Shard, but it was judged a failure/worthless since it pretty much only converted power on an equal basis (and thus might have delegated it to QA to see if it could be useful). He couldn't find any way of generating more power than used, thus unable to prevent Heat Death. Taylor gets said power, and it turns her into a god, and since Earth Bet/its universe doesn't have a Celestial Order, she is automatically made the head of her Universe's Celestial Order (but no where near as powerful as any of the Celestines, let alone Ignis Divine), but her powers include all default powers of gods, along with some Spirit Charms, and most importantly, she could create new gods (and collect a prayer tax just like Ignis Divine does).I don't think I've seen this "Lord of Heaven" fic. Unless it's the one where she's a spirit rather than an exalt?
Based on what Charms she had learned by this point )and the golden stars in her soul [plural was making me wonder if she was a fusion of Solar castes though...that could be various levels of BS ]), I assumed she was a Solar (or more specifically, her Shard was made after studying Solars/their Keter souls), especially since she wasn't recreating other powers as Charms. If not, Eclipse Anima power is split into two active effects and one passive, with one of said active effects being learning Charms of foreign beingsSince she's got the lethal soak and suchlike, she logically should have, right? I wonder what anima powers you would have, if your schtick is learning other people's charms...
Bold of you to assume this isn't a kink of someone in this site.An important note before we begin, considering the venue: THIS IS NOT PORN. THERE IS NO PORN HERE. You can let go of your dicks. It's delicious grimderp all the way down.
I thought only the OP could add tags too their threads (or alter them).Um, this seems to have acquired an "exalted 3e" tag all of its own. Can whoever did that undo it, please? This is exalted 2e, for the record.
Thank you. I had conflicted feelings about this one: On the one hand I too found it delightful, on the other I couldn't help but feel that it could have been more delightful in the hands of a better writer.
This isn't me backhandedly fishing for praise, I promise. I'm quite aware of where my strengths lie, and it's decidedly not in evocative emotional things - and this chapter is all about them juicy emotions. I'm glad it sufficed.