Taylor's encounter against Lung doesn't go very well at all. She wakes up in hospital, and...
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Ack | 9 |
Thank you, so do I.
Oh, I'll be continuing it.Interesting. Looking forward to seeing where this goes, presuming it's continued.
Thank you for the chapter, Ack.
And is this a bad ambition?A question that's been rattling around in my head the last couple days: is it your intention to have most of the stories in QQ's Creative Writing forum?
Because that's what it looks like you're trying to do.
........ANOTHER FIC?????
*facepalm*
Damnit Ack, do you have a random plot generator that you click a half dozen times and then suddenly a lightbulb "OH! I have an awesome idea for a really fucking fantastic fic!" ?
And is this a bad ambition?
Well, to be honest, it's the other way around. I have stories to tell, and QQ is the place where I can put both the SFW and NSFW ones.
>click< >click< >click< >click< .>click< >click< "OH! I have an awesome idea for a really fucking fantastic fic!"
Strongly considering it. Some of my stories are only getting a few votes here and there.I like it so far, quite interested in seeing where it goes. I like the slightly paranoid and worried vibe Taylor is giving off, while sill trying to be polite.
Panacea seemed fairly normal, not many fics have her pre bank heist, so we only see her after the real meltdown has started. Eagerly awaiting more of this one. Is this likely to be added to your update vote index?
Strongly considering it. Some of my stories are only getting a few votes here and there.
D'awwww... I love you too.Oh, man, a worm fic that's for want of nail but Taylor has her normal powers. These are so rare. I love you for making this, I really do.
This is great. Rare to see Armsmaster seems a bit confrontational given what Taylor has been through.
He doesn't do 'nice' very well.This is great. Rare to see Armsmaster seems a bit confrontational given what Taylor has been through.
Up till now, she's been reacting - she's literally just woken up from what she thought was death. Also, she has a habit of withdrawing when around others.Feels like we should be seeing more of Taylor's inner feelings here. I mean, this is a rather huge setback for her, being a hero was the only thing getting her through her shitty life and she's beaten so badly on her first night out that she was facing a brutally painful death. Given how low her self-esteem already is at this point it seems like she would be a bit more emotional.
Feels like we should be seeing more of Taylor's inner feelings here. I mean, this is a rather huge setback for her, being a hero was the only thing getting her through her shitty life and she's beaten so badly on her first night out that she was facing a brutally painful death. Given how low her self-esteem already is at this point it seems like she would be a bit more emotional.
This. The only people who get to be embarrassed by losing to Lung are Endbringers, Zion, the Triumvirate, Dragon, Narwhal, and Glastig Uaine.Well there is also the fact that she lost against Lung, someone who has solo'd the entire ENE Protectorate at the same time and fought Leviathan to a standstill for hours by himself. She already assumed a complete victory was out of the question, she wanted to delay or distract them from their targets and in that she succeeded. Hell it's even better because in this she doesn't even know the targets in question were other villains so in her mind her sacrifice and near death has saved innocent lives so she would probably have an ego boost from it. Not a huge one, but not feeling all that bad about it either.
Well there is also the fact that she lost against Lung, someone who has solo'd the entire ENE Protectorate at the same time and fought Leviathan to a standstill for hours by himself
Plenty, but it's not just people that are stronger than him. Armsmaster would be plenty embarrassed, even before he developed his nanothorns or sedatives designed with Lung in mind. Cherish could defeat him easily, many masters and strangers could. He's only really strong if someone lets him be strong or is too weak to stop him before he ramps up, in which case he wouldn't really need to turn into a dragon anyway.
Second day: Shadow Stalker is sent to juvie (I hope) or ostracized by the rest of the Wards - because even if Taylor doesn't tell them immediately, Gallant is totally going to notice how they feel about each other, and I can't see the Wards not finding out what happened after that, even with Dean's difficulty in understanding what his power is telling him (Amy having a crush on her sister isn't something that would occur to most people who don't know what's really going on with her - so how much difficulty he has is debatable).
Note that she didn't really push much for control over the first few days with the Undersiders. Well, there was the fight with Rachel, but that was started by Rachel.This is an interesting story, but I'm not sure that it feels IC for Taylor or not, especially as the Queen Administrator. Her determination, her need for control, and the way she tended to offload her emotions into the swarm even from the start don't really jive well with the hospital scene. You tend to go very light on your parahuman derangements though, so it makes sense that you would see things playing out this way.