Ace Dreamer
Questioning The Nature of our Realities
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The Matrix is not a film known in this setting. That Viagra is 'the blue pill' is more likely to occur. I've added an Author Note to that effect.Probably a good thing you used a blue pill, considering what the phrase "red pill" has come to mean since The Matrix. The red and blue pill imagery might not be the best thing to use at all, though, if you're not trying to invoke memories of certain rather hateful parts of the internet.
The reason for 'blue' was the pale-blue aura effects associated with Geo. There was no reference to 'red pill', and that isn't part of the logic of the scene. There was no intended reference to politics in any form, because Rule 8.
Thanks, fixed.
Yes, I'm quite familiar with that bit of punctuation logic. It's one of the bits of English that really annoy me. In consequence, this is one of the rules I tend to break, without thinking about it. On a good day, I work around the issue, but I don't always manage it.The correct way to punctuate a single speaker talking for multiple paragraphs is, counter-intuitively, to put an opening quotation mark at the beginning of each paragraph but no closing quotation mark until the point where they actually stop speaking.
It's weird, it looks wrong, and nobody would ever think that it's correct, but that's the way it's supposed to be done.
Your feedback is appreciated, I've made a few edits.
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