Link to the original story one and two
Does Great Power Lead to Great Responsibility...
Does Great Power Lead to Great Responsibility...
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This comment is honey to my heart. Be honest, but this translation mostly Deepl work. So I worry a lot about idiom/slang/big letters and commas.This story continues to be amazing. My only criticism is that lack of overarching plot. Taler has no goal beyond gathering information and wooing a girl, I thus find the NPCs more amusing.
I'm quite not sure what do you want. The original story is written in Russian. I'm trying to translate it into English. That's it.@RiP there is a english translation of the story (part 1 and two) that you linked in the first post of this story? It is in Russian.
Ok thanks. I was wondering if you had an english version. But you told me this is the English version. Keep the good work.I'm quite not sure what do you want. The original story is written in Russian. I'm trying to translate it into English. That's it.
No. The author thinks that original Ainz it's total asshole/dickhead/moron/virgin Mary Sue who lives through the pure will of ASB only. So no Ainz here.Is Ainz the books/manga/anime protagonist/ dungeon also in this world with the story protagonist/city?
Link to the original story one and two
Does Great Power Lead to Great Responsibility?
The softly glowing square dial was ruthlessly counting down the last minutes and seconds. It will be interesting to see what happens in the end.
Beginning
23:12
"Now it's the last hour." The man in the discreet but elaborately embroidered robe looked sadly at the wrist.
With a stingy move of his hand, he invoked the holographic menu, checking the settings. Timers, priorities, and coordinates of the points from which shots and screenshots would be taken. Progress bars of scripts, timing charts, routes of groups of NPCs.
"With all the trouble I went through, it must have been a fairy tale. But where's the happiness, huh?"
The man stomped his foot annoyingly.
The view from the palace balcony on which he stood was breathtaking. The balcony itself, more like an open terrace, overlooked the town square. The city, carefully designed and then painstakingly traced, diverged from it in concentric circles, pierced by streets straight as an arrow. The two- and three-story houses, each with an original architecture, nevertheless maintained the same general style. Walls made of the finest bricks, perfectly right angles, narrow stained-glass windows, and tall, pointed tiled roofs with turrets. In the courtyards were manicured front gardens with lush flowers.
The quarters, at first glance built in a variety of ways, beckoned the eye with a strange harmony, and then they stuck to themselves with their subtle thoughtfulness. Markets, small temples, inns, parks, statues, baths, aqueducts, fountains, stairs, and mosaic sidewalks. The city seemed as real as it was fabulous.
Though, of course, it was all nothing. There was nothing under the textures. The administration of Yggdrasil allowed the project to go ahead, with the condition that they pay for a separate cluster for it. But they charged so much for the renderings that the project was almost abandoned. Then, grudgingly, Talik - the initiator of the idea - decided on half-measures. Externally, everything was just as he wanted. But there was no underside to these decorations. The "floor" defense scheme also required resources and not insignificant ones...
Now, however, the focus of the man on the balcony was not the city itself, but the traffic on its streets. Countless NPCs were busily and coherently decorating the city with garlands and setting up fireworks boxes.
23:39
The streets were lined with rows of gleaming armor and weapons of combat NPCs, who froze and waited for commands. The 'civilian' NPCs were in separate groups.
The man on the balcony glanced at his watch, checking the estimated time and charts from the interface. He had been planning this event for the past two weeks, and he wanted it to work perfectly. Even if no one else sees it with their own eyes. A pity, of course...
Talik invited former members to honor the guild on its last day. He called, wrote, and persuaded, but no one ever showed up. Makes sense, in general. Only four of the original cast played in Yggdrasil at the time. Two were already in another guild, a friendly guild, but a different one. And Katsuba... It was unlikely that he would have been able to enter Yggdrasil from the ICU. Even if he really wanted to.
Well, at least the recordings will remain.
Talik leaned against the railing of the balcony.
23:40
The thin sound of a silver horn sounded over the city, quickly picked up by dozens of others. Seconds later, it was an entire symphony.
The harmonic ranks of steel-clad NPCs, hoisting their flags above their heads, began to march. Legions of various guild NPCs began to march through the wide streets. The perfect formation, perfect turns of tens and hundreds of units. Everything is on time, everything is right on schedule. Happy 'civilians' sprinkle confetti, throw flowers and release pigeons to greet the troops.
Talik smiled sadly. Perhaps planning this parade was more interesting than watching it. Then he set himself a truly ambitious task. Each NPC participating in the parade had his own route and travel schedule. No NPC had to be at the same point in time and in the same place as another. At the same time, the parade had to be spectacular.
It was a real epic, and Talik even considered giving it up, but for some reason decided to finish the job. And here is the result - the military parade and festive demonstrations are very difficult to distinguish from the real ones. Maybe it was too flawless, but that's not a flaw.
Nevertheless, his soul was gnawed with yearning. He had devoted almost eight years to Yggdrasil. He met a lot of interesting people, took part in amazing, and sometimes unique, adventures. Countless battles, discoveries, marathon farming in the company of similarly passionate enthusiasts. Storming enemy guilds and defending allied ones. Auction ventures - lucrative and ruinous.
In almost all of his friends the fire of this hobby subsided. Many have gone to the real world or other projects more advanced than Yggdrasil. Talik, let's be honest, tried to play other VRMMO games himself, but it just wasn't the same. There was no soul in those games. There was a great balance calculation, there was lore put together by professional writers, there was even 18+ content in premium access. There was everything that Yggdrasil didn't have. But there was no soul. There were no mysteries and fatal accidents, no such powerful drama, no opportunity to create and execute an idea that would turn everything upside down.
It was the ability to implement crazy ideas that were the root of Talik's interest. For example, his tactics of territorial defense or extraction of consumables.
Most farmers tried to grind high-level resources, and it made sense. Stellar metals, monsters skins, alchemical reagents of divine origin - all of these cost a lot of money and were mined with great difficulty.
Talik occupied a different niche. He farmed mid- and low-level resources, cleaning out instances and locations that were significantly behind him in level. It was considered an extremely thankless task because when the level gap was too big, the drop was unrealistically low. When you come at level 100 to take out a level 30-50 instance, more often than not you leave with annoyance instead of loot. And this is where Talik found a weak spot in the game logic. He started using NPCs units as a strike force. Of course, a squad of 20-30 NPCs level 40 is not comparable to the striking power of the level 100 player. However, the 'top' will waste mana, health, and expensive consumables, while the NPCs squad is sufficiently supported by weak spells. As a result, the instance, cleaned out by a "top" in 15 minutes, a squad of NPCs cleaned out in half an hour. Where a "top" left without anything, the NPCs squad took out mountains of cheap loot, disassembled it into universal crystalline units. Which, though inexpensive in their own way, are needed in infinite quantities.
Same story with low-level randomly generated quests and events. And, of course, power leveling.
The tactic of using a crowd of low-level NPCs under high-level buffs has shown itself perfectly even in PvP. Of course, weak NPCs wouldn't withstand even one hit from a "top" warrior or mage, but they would take the hit, forcing the enemy to lose time and mana. To maneuver, the enemy would actually have to cut through a weak but constantly replenished formation, wasting time and energy. The NPCs themselves, though weak but heavily buffed, did a bit of damage. Even with a 3% chance of a spell interrupting, fifty NPC-shooters were driving mages and healers to hysteria.
In the PvP league, this tactic was not allowed, because it was not fair. And inefficient, in addition, one way or another, main DDs were required. The Talik class was not designed to deal heavy damage, and auxiliary DDs above level 50 could not be used in the arena, only summoned ones. And there were class requirements for summoning high-level creatures, which, again, Talik didn't qualify for.
In the streets, flash boxes began to fire in chains, launching colorful fireworks into the sky. The scattered, playful flames instantly turned the sky into a field of riotous, colorful flashes. For a brief moment, the enchanting pattern formed pictures of the most memorable events in which Talik had participated. Episodes of the past were inexplicably interspersed, one after the other, like the pages of an album.
The last couple of years, after the actual breakup of the guild, it was not so interesting to play. Yes, he was still one of the cluster's most in-demand supporters. There wasn't a moment when he didn't have tempting offers to take part in some adventure. There wasn't a day when he wasn't invited to another guild.
But Talik stuck with "The Dawn Mist" fellows, and after they left, he didn't have the energy to start all over again or to join the already established company. The romance of new acquaintances was gone, leaving a sweet and bitter memory. He even got caught up in the complicated role-casting, regretting that he'd found this part of the game so late.
Talik could not find the will to leave Yggdrasil, because he was too used to it, but he no longer felt the joy of the game that once attracted him. So the news of the imminent closure of the project he took with ambivalent feelings. Of course, he was sorrowful that it was really coming to an end. On the other hand, it was probably the only opportunity for him to quit Yggdrasil. The game had long been causing him problems in real life, and it wasn't giving him the feelings he was trying so hard to get from it.
And now, having withdrawn all the funds he had managed, Talik paid his last respects to this world. A magnificent parade with an artistic salute.
23:55
Thousands of voices merged into a single cry that swept through the city.
"Glory to the passing world! Farewell, Yggdrasil!"
The small firecrackers and firecrackers rumbled, the fireworks no longer painted a picture in the sky, but glittered with growing chaos, heralding the climax. The NPCs cheered and danced around the square and the streets.
Talik turned around, glancing around the hall behind him.
Thin columns with white and gold ornaments. Tapestries with allied guild symbols and "The Dawn Mist Achievements". Yes, they never were in the top list, not even in the first thousand, but they had many rare and unique achievements.
The mosaic floor, the stained-glass windows, the frescoes on the ceiling. Everything reeked of a genuine, deceptively fragile elegance.
"Yes, 4eJl, you really are a professional... I've always been amazed at your talent. Why didn't you even respond, huh? You could have at least... Yeah"
Talik took a deep breath and braced himself. The show must go on.He glanced around at the four figures, frozen, kneeling. Four of the guild's top six NPCs. Draga, Illadria, Warboss, and Wilhelm. Marius and Titan were left out. They still needed insurance in case some assholes decided to attack the Dawning City towards the end. Marius guarded the first 'floor' against such intrusions. Sure, it wouldn't hold up a full-fledged assault, but it would keep any group busy for at least fifteen minutes. And Titan... Talik didn't like him, albeit for a silly reason. And it didn't fit into the planned action.
"Wilhelm." Talik made an inviting gesture. "It's time for your speech."
Of course, he didn't have to go that deep into the role. But, damn it, he couldn't afford to unfit into a role in a show he created himself.
Wilhelm stood up smoothly and strode to the balcony with his head held high. Like all the NPCs present, Talik created him personally, though he did so based on the ideas of his friends.
A powerful figure, clad in black and blue plated armor, with a discreet crown on top of a chainmail hood. At his belt was a simple hilted sword in a black, silver-encrusted scabbard.
The archetype is a tank, a support warrior. Armored like a fortress, he could live for a very, very long time, even under heavy focus. But his value as a combat unit was not in good survivability, or rather, not only in it. The main feature was his skills aimed at buffing allies, limited only by area, not quantity. These buffs could be summed up with Talik's own buffs. In this NPC's area of responsibility, even a measly level 25 was equal in power to a level 40, if you watched the timers carefully.
Higher levels became even more dangerous. The short action time was compensated by the high cooldown rate, which helped a lot when the enemy was showering him with dispels. And what about his 'invocations', removing negative effects and giving short-term resistances... His relatively weak own damage was an almost imperceptible disadvantage.
According to his lore, he was the son of a baron in a kingdom plagued by a tyrannical dynasty of warlock kings. When the last king of his country brought the nation to the brink of destruction by making a deal with demons, William's father rebelled. The rebellion failed, and the rebels were executed. And before William himself was executed, Talik came to him in prison in the guise of a ghost and offered salvation and the power to change everything, in exchange for eternal service in the aftermath. Talik created a long and eventful story, at the end of which William overthrew the tyrants and had a more or less happy ending, after which he fulfilled his oath and went into the service of Talik, eventually becoming king. Proud, arrogant, reliable as a rock, and an infinitely loyal vassal.
23:57
William, raising his hands patronizingly, proclaimed. "Listen to your King!"
The noise of the festivities subsided moments later, and all the 'residents' respectfully turned to the figures on the balcony.
"It was a wonderful time, full of glorious victories and great accomplishments! The word of the Prophet Tallarius led us through all adversity, from the dark past to the dazzling present. And I, King William, am proud that I was destined to rule over such a people. Yggdrasil's end was foregone with his birth, and we were ready for it. We went all the way to the end, and in the last moments of this world, we will not grieve. We will rejoice that we happened to catch this moment in health and prosperity. Let us lead Yggdrasil into oblivion without fear or sorrow, and let us praise it for the beautiful times it has given us!"
The rest of the elite came out onto the balcony, greeting the crowd. Wilhelm continued.
"Greet the elder vassals of the Dawn Mist!"
The crowd on the plaza erupted into a standing ovation, chanting random praises for Yggdrasil. And Talik, clenched his teeth, watched the timer.
It was not what he had expected. To be more precise, the ceremony, which up to this point had only been a line of code, was far more heartbreaking than he thought it would be. He hadn't imagined it would hurt so much to say goodbye to the game for real. He understood why he had clung so tenaciously to the outdated, unbalanced Yggdrasil.
What is reality? Gray skies, concrete forests, and synthetic food. Slavery at the keyboard and dreams on the display. Yesterday, today, and forever. No time and nothing to dream for. Nothing to discover. No reason to discover. A gray, bland emptiness for the next 70 years and an imperceptible death. And all the good things that gave you the strength to live are now gone. Gone in a beautiful show he directed as a requiem for his dreams. The timer began to count down the last seconds, and there was silence in the square, broken by the symbolic ticking of a mechanical chronometer.
23:59:50
23:59:51
23:59:52
23:59:53
23:59:54
23:59:55
"Yes, Yggdrassil is leaving... We'll have to continue without him." Quiet, bitter words echoed through the silent plaza.
23:59:57
23:59:58
A powerful explosion shook the sky, blossoming into the last, brightest flash of fireworks.
Talik gripped the balcony railing tightly and squeezed his eyes shut. Reality would have to be accepted, one way or another. It was stupid to close his eyes - he'd missed the last salute. But I didn't have the mental strength to see the virtuality fade, crumble into pixels. He didn't want to spoil his last moments. Now there would be slight dizziness, then emptiness, and an anatomical couch in a concrete anthill.
"Goodbye, Yggdrasil. I really loved you…"
The last second stretched on and on. Talik was even happy about it, but at some point, he realized that something was wrong.
It was noisy. The sound of water in the fountains, laughter, hubbub, fragments of songs. A cool breeze stroked the face.
Without opening his eyes, Talik took a deep breath of fresh air.
"What the fuck?"
He didn't want to open his eyes. The hallucination was beautiful. He inhaled and exhaled the air in a measured and deep way. It was clean, cool, and slightly moist. Without the bitter, slightly suffocating aftertaste that should have been present. And without the chemical-medicinal one, which also had a right to be. Fresh evening air. A very, very expensive treat.
I wonder if I'm in a coma. That wouldn't be very good... He thought.
Talik felt himself standing up. His sense of touch was working as hard as it could, reporting about the fit of his clothes and shoes. The pressure on his feet. The cool railing on which his hands rested. There was no such thing in Yggdrasil, for a number of reasons, not just technical. There was, of course, tactile and vestibular emulation, just to maintain orientation in space, but this sensation was not even in the project. Not even in the more advanced games.
It was scary to ruin such a beautiful experience. He wanted to just stand there, breathe and listen.
From below came congratulations, shouts of joy, and easy, natural laughter.
That's how you get mad, isn't it? Well, I don't even mind. He thought.
Talik hesitated for a long time to change his pose. What if everything disappeared? On the other hand, it would be foolish to freeze like this forever. He shifted his weight carefully from one foot to the other, then straightened, hooked his arms behind his back, took another full breath, and dared to open his eyes.
The night sky, with clouds and stars. City streets illuminated by twinkling lights. People. A lot of people. And not just people, yes. It's hard to see the details of the clothes, but by all accounts, it appears to be a universal design, developed by Kazuchi. A good cut that fits all proportions. It's enough to change the coloring to make identical suits completely different. A great way to save system resources, by the way.
Some little girl was dancing playfully on the edge of the central fountain, with a small crowd clapping its hands around her. Here she stepped on the hem of her dress and, unable to keep her balance, flew into the water with a cheerful screech. There are cheers and laughter, and several people reach out their hands to help her out. She splashes into them.
At the other end of the square, the door of a restaurant is opened, and several people, led by some stout little man, carry out the bulky bottles. The bottles are unsealed and go out into the crowd. The fact that the restaurant door cannot be opened because it is a textural shell is simply ignored.
A musician with a lute walks down the street. Talik was not sure that this object of the entourage was a lute, but there was no way to check when designing. And here comes a man, playing an amusing melody and with a pleasant baritone humming something with a double meaning. Women accompanied confused glances, men sang along. A group of people burst out of the alley, grabbed the musician, handed him a bottle, and carried him away.
Talik didn't immediately have the words to comment on all this.
"Holy crap.".
He didn't immediately remember that he wasn't supposed to be alone on this balcony.
He turned around and saw four familiar figures kneeling before him. He looked at them for a few minutes, but they didn't even move.
"Wilhelm."
"Yes, Prophet?" The big man in the armor murmured, raising his head. Talik studied his face with interest.
Mimics. That's what separates the current situation from common sense. Well, among other things. There shouldn't be any facial expressions, Yggdrasil's engine didn't allow any realistic developers wanted to introduce a facial expressions patch, but on the test servers it led to a large increase in system requirements, and the patch was not approved. And here you can quite see the change in facial expressions.
Talik leaned back against the railing.
"Wilhelm, what do you think about the situation?"
"I admire your decision to prolong our existence."
"So... What makes you think it's my decision?"
"It's obvious. In the last moments of the world, you proclaimed that life would continue even after the death of our world. And here we are, and we exist."
Talik had once heard of the Turing test but had no idea how to do it. But so far his hallucination was quite confident in answering questions that simply could not be in the game. He wonders what's going on with his body right now. Is it blowing bubbles in his helmet, convulsing, or just lying there as a log? They'll find him by morning at most. He wonders how fast they'll bring him back to consciousness.
Please, guys, don't rush this.
"Draga."
"I am listening to you, Prophet."
Such a deep voice. It says she has a deep and strong voice in the settings, but of course, she actually had a standard voiceover. Even the speech for Wilhelm had to be edited apart.
"Draga, what do you think about what's going on?"
"I am in accord with the King. I only dare to hope that you will not leave us on this path."
"Why?"
"Without your will, existence is meaningless."
"Are you sure?"
"Absolutely."
As she spoke, she looked at Talik. Oh, that face was beautiful, mesmerizing. Its author was 4eJl, the best artist Talik knew. Talik's standard customizer was, well, unsatisfactory, and he was able to get an old friend who'd long since given up on the game to draw some faces.
Thin, black eyebrows, high forehead, big, bottomless eyes. The graceful, fragile bridge of the nose, the sensuous lips... Trying to create a verbal portrait in his head, Talik realized that he could not find the right words to describe Draga's predatory beauty.
Such a look... Looking into his eyes, with barely perceptible adoration, from the bottom up, she knocked Talik out of his mind. It was hard to hold his breath, and his heart was literally on fire. It was the kind of look you'd only see in the movies, and it would surely be addressed to the first of the macho men.
Subconscious, subconscious, what are you doing to me, huh? Hey, ambulance guys, I don't want to wake up, you'd better kill me now. I'll give you all my organs for it. Please.
"Is there anything else the Prophet would like to ask his servant?"
The magical voice of Draga continued to destroy Talik's self-control.
"Maybe later."
She stared gracefully at the floor.
"Warboss."
"I crave your words, Prophet."
"What do you think about what's going on?"
"I don't know, Prophet. I don't think. We are, and that is good. I crave your orders and hope for glorious new battles."
When a suitable set-up for a quick sweep of temporary locations was chosen, Talik took a long time to select an image for the 'troops'. The prototype was the classic Western fantasy orcs. Dark green fanged tough boyz with axes and no brakes. Intelligence on minimum, strength, and speed on maximum, health on average. It wasn't very easy to fit such an image into Yggdrasil's customization. The Japanese 'orcs' were a mixture of a human and a pig, after all. Talik always thought it was stupid. He argued a lot with Katsuba about it. They couldn't come to an agreement, and in the end, Talik used a sneaky trick after all. The status of the guild leader. Katsuba took offense for about three weeks, screaming that it was despicable and resenting Rodas for giving his status to such an unprincipled asshole, but then, of course, he cooled down.
How is he doing, by the way? Hey, narrow-eyed pervert, you missed your chance to die happy, lol.
The green, square, fanged face with a reverse bite was adoringly drilling Talik with the look of tiny, deep-set eyes.
"So... Do you realize that a battle is always someone's death, don't you?"
"Death on the battlefield is a prayer to you, Prophet. Honor to those who die and kill.".
"What will you do if I disappoint you?"
"That's impossible." The orc growled confidently.
"What if there are no battles? If I told you to just do nothing?" Talik got into this little game.
"So that's how it should be."
"And all the orcs will accept it?"
"All who live will accept your will, Prophet. All."
Hmm, about living. I wonder what Marius would say. Archilich, commander of the undead army. It might be possible to ask.
Talik glanced at the watch on his wrist. 0:27.
Well, there's still time. Hey, guys with the defibrillator, seriously, don't wake me up.
"Illadria."
"I am listening to you, Prophet."
Oh, even more pathos than the others. Subconscious, what are you doing? I'm going to be embarrassed!
Talik looked at Illadria's face with an appraising glance.
Eh, 4eJl, did I tell you that you are the greatest artist in the world? How did you manage to combine subtle nobility and this kind of naive mischief into one image? Draga burns through the dark side of the soul, and Illadria is a balsam for the light side.
"I asked everyone the same thing. You answer it too. What do you think about what's going on?"
"I share the opinion of all your other vassals, Prophet. I am proud and happy that we have all been given the right to continue to serve you. I and my people will do our best not to disappoint you in your decision."
Illadria is an elf, and there's no way without them. Elves are a must-have fantasy attribute. A tight dress, gold sandals. Small breasts. Oh yes, Katsuba, I remember your tantrums on that subject. Of course, a Japanese elf girl should have elbow-length ears and a bust the size of a fire extinguisher. But you lost this time, too, and old Tolkien won. And once I heard you rustling your clothes rhythmically in the voice chat when you thought I was AFK. And I know for a fact that at that time you were holding Illadria as a fire support unit. And in her logs, I later found dance commands. You lost twice. The second one was when you went into ICU two days before closing time. I wonder what you would have seen?
The voice is like silver bells, like a forest stream, delicate, tinkling, engaging. A perfect match for what the charlist described. Eh. I guess I won't speak to Marius, it would spoil the whole impression.
"I heard you. Well, it looks like the celebration was a success in every way." Talik turned back toward the square.
"Yggdrasil is dead, which means we're somewhere else, and I want to know where. Illadria, send scouts to explore the area outside the city. Not the elite, but ordinary 20-30 level scouts who specialize in stealth. Have the elite follow them from afar. If you find any signs of intelligent life - stay in stealth and report immediately. Avoid any direct contact without orders. Scouting area... one day's march from the outer walls."
"I will, Prophet. Dare I ask why not send the best at once?"
"It's obvious. This is more of a provocation than a full-fledged exploration. The loss of the ordinary scouts will make no difference if it happens. But it will immediately give us the nature and minimum capabilities of the potential enemy."
"I admire your wisdom. May I begin?"
"Go."
Talik wondered if it was worth the trouble. Maybe it wasn't worth it. But it was interesting! He glanced around, everyone was in the same pose except for Illyadria, who had disappeared. Well, let's continue the game!
"Wilhelm. I want to know the supply situation. Namely, how much food we have and how many mouths need it. The same goes for water. Take care of that, I expect a report in the morning. If there's an emergency or disturbance, report immediately. Off you go."
"I obey, Prophet!" Wilhelm pressed his palm to his chest and walked quickly out of the hall.
"Warboss. Prepare the orcs for the fast mobilization. If the scouts encounter the enemy, I need you to be able to bind them by combat as quickly as possible. And calculate roughly how many warriors you have now, whether you have enough weapons available."
"Yes!" Inspired roared the big man and quickly rushed away.
"As for you, Draga..." Talik hesitantly stroked his chin.
"I am all attention, Prophet."
There is no salvation for the one caught in the abyss of those eyes. Not a chance to resist. Hey, hallucination, be as convincing as you are, okay?
"Arrange in this room two comfortable chairs, a table, wine, and some snacks."
T. N. Just a song for fun.