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[Dragon Ball Z] Dragon Ball Isekai: Gohan Gamer
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Greetings everyone and welcome to my fic Dragon Ball Isekai: Gohan Gamer.
As the name makes clear, this fic is a period drama, set in Victorian England in 1875.
Not!
Jokes aside, our protagonist was reincarnated in Gohan's body shortly after the Saiyan saga.
If you are an old Dragon Ball fan like me and dreamed of Gohan taking the lead as in the original plans of the great and late Akira Toriyama.
This fic is for you.
"Dialogues"
'Thoughts'
A ripple of consciousness swept over his body as he blinked open his eyes, a bleached whiteness greeting him. No scent of sweat-soaked earth, no familiar pulse of life. Just an expansive nothingness, a blank canvas devoid of brushstrokes. His heart pounded in his chest, echoing in the hollow space.
Before him, an alien entity stood out against the void.
His tiny form swathed in vibrant hues, a stark contrast to the emptiness surrounding them. The sight of the deity stirred a faint recognition within him, a hazy mirage wavering at the edge of his memory.
"Lord Zeno?"
"Hi," Zeno's voice resounded in the empty expanse, a faint smile dancing on his lips.
"This is impossible, you are not real, you are a fictional character."
The god looked at him without expressing any emotion, but uttered a simple word.
"Silence."
The commando had no anger or hatred towards him, but a chill ran down his spine, as if he were being warned of the danger that the being in front of him represented.
"You're probably wondering why you're here," Zeno continued, his voice an echo against the silent backdrop.
He nodded, a tight knot forming in his stomach.
"An incident created a new timeline, Gohan's soul was... accidentally destroyed during his fight with Nappa and Vegeta," Zeno confessed, a hint of regret tinting his words.
Hi's eyes widened at the revelation.
"But how, he still had so much to do. Gohan is vital to Dragon Ball in all sagas up to -."
"Silence."
Once again the command silence with the primal fear of a predator facing its prey
"And so, you'll be taking on his role."
"His role?" He questioned, curiosity piercing through his shock.
Zeno nodded.
"You will serve as the new Gohan." He said, as if those words hadn't impacted him. "But don't worry, I created something to help you."
Zeno snaps his fingers as a strange blue holographic window appears in front of me.
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.000/1.000]
HP: 3.500
KP: 10.000
PL: 1.500
MIGHT: 700
AGILITY: 2.300
SPIRIT: 2.000
MENTAL: 1.000
Points: 100
"This looks like the status of a gamer fic."
"Mortals from your reality do not have access to ki and other forms of energy like the world you will reincarnate in, so create a system that you are familiar with to help you acclimatize and to keep an eye on you."
He swallows hard at the declaration of the small but infinitely powerful being.
"Will you keep an eye on me?"
"Yes." Zeno said smiling. "My original plan was to destroy this variant timeline, but I decided to use you to see what happens. Watching you will be fun, but if you die or it becomes boring to watch you... I'll destroy everything." He finishes speaking by raising his little arms into the air.
Confused and distressed, he tries to ask for more information, but his vision starts to darken and he becomes unconscious.
Gohan's eyelids fluttered open to the soft murmur of voices, a stark contrast to the deafening silence he'd faced moments ago. He found himself cradled in Chi-Chi's arms, her eyes brimming with relief and love. His body felt strangely light, devoid of the aches that should have been there, considering the battle he had just been through.
"What?" he whispered, his voice carrying an unfamiliar timbre.
Chi-Chi gasped, tears streaming down her cheeks as she clutched him tighter.
"Oh, Gohan! You're alright!"
Around them gathered his friends and family exchanged looks of disbelief.
"You were hurt pretty bad," Krillin piped up from the side. "But it seems like you're better than me"
Gohan touched his head, expecting to find wounds or bandages, but there was nothing. His skin was smooth, unmarred. He could feel their collective gaze upon him, mixtures of astonishment and unspoken questions at his miraculous recovery.
'Was this Zeno's work?' Gohan thought in silence. 'Does he or this system of his leave me completely healed when I wake up?'
As they traveled to the hospital where Goku and Krillin would be treated for their own injuries, Gohan remained silent in the aircraft's cabin. The hum of its engines was a distant drone as he tried to piece together the reality that he was no longer in his world. The very idea that he was now living in the body of his favorite character seemed like a fever dream.
He glanced out of the window, watching the landscape zoom past. He was here, yet part of him still grappled with disbelief. The sensation of flying in this advanced machine should have thrilled him, instead, it only deepened the surrealism of his situation.
They reached the hospital quickly. Goku and Krillin were whisked away by a team of medics while Chi-Chi stayed by Goku's side every step of the way. Gohan followed along mechanically as they navigated through sterile corridors and past concerned nurses.
He knew he should feel something, but all he could focus on was the odd detachment gnawing at him. Inside this familiar world yet so alien to his own experience, Gohan grappled with the reality that life as he knew it had been irreversibly altered.
In the stark white of the hospital room, voices buzzed around Gohan like bees circling a hive. Everyone was animated, gesturing wildly as they spoke of plans to journey to Namekusei. Yet, Gohan's mind wandered, ensnared in its own quandary.
Bulma was unfolding maps and charts onto a nearby table, her finger tracing potential routes through the cosmos.
"Even if we modify one of my father's spaceships, we still wouldn't be able to make the trip in less than a thousand years," she explained with an authority that made her the de facto leader of this impromptu meeting.
Goku, propped up in his hospital bed with bandages criss-crossing his torso, nodded along with Bulma's words.
"We need to find those Dragon Balls," he said with determination shining through his eyes despite his injuries.
But Gohan's attention strayed from their planning. He was there among them, physically present but mentally adrift.
Gohan's focus shifted from the animated group to the window where something had caught his attention. A weird figure, clad in flowing oriental garb and a large white turban, hovered outside the glass in a flying carpet. Its expression was impossible to read, but there was a faint glimmer of amusement in its eyes.
"Who is it?" Gohan muttered, rising from his seat.
Gohan stepped towards the window, his heart pounding with a mix of anticipation and dread. As he approached, the figure turned to face him, its movements graceful and deliberate. Gohan's eyes widened in recognition.
"Mr. Popo?" he breathed out.
The enigmatic attendant to Earth's Guardian hovered serenely outside the window, his inscrutable expression holding a hint of amusement.
"Yes, young Gohan," Popo replied, his voice as smooth as running water. "I have come to offer assistance."
Gohan's eyebrows knitted together in confusion.
"Assistance? With what?"
"With your journey to Namekusei," Popo answered simply. "I know of a spaceship that can take you there."
The revelation stunned Gohan. He had forgotten that Mr. Popo was going to take them to the ship that Kami used to get to Earth.
"I think we should take Mr. Popo up on his offer." Said Goku from the bed.
"We're all hurt, and it'll be faster if some of us go with Popo to get the spaceship." Added Kuririn
A satisfied gleam entered Popo's eyes.
"Who will come with me to the spaceship?" Asked Popo.
"Well, that easy, Bulma." Said Kuririn.
"What?Why me?"
"The others are injured and you are the only one who can find out if we can use the ship or not."
Bulma sighed, her shoulders slumping in resignation.
"Great. I get to sit in a spaceship with that weird guy."
Goku chuckled softly.
"At least we're one step closer to getting the Dragon Balls," he said, trying to remain optimistic.
Despite the lingering unease, Gohan couldn't help but feel a sense of excitement mingled with trepidation. The journey to Namekusei was about to begin, one of the most incredible and iconic arcs in Dragon Ball.
But his good mood takes a cold shower when he remembers the difficulties he will face in the future. Although he was strong enough to face some of Freeza's soldiers, his elite forces and the Galactic Emperor himself were far from his reach.
Overcome with dread of the future, Gohan decides to do what Dragon Ball characters do when they face a great challenge.
'I need to train.'
Perceiving the opportunity before his eyes, Gohan decided to go with them to.
"I'll go with you to, Mr. Popo," Gohan declared, his voice resolute.
Bulma blinked in surprise.
"You will?"
"Yes," Gohan nodded. "I'm not as injured as the others, and I can help protect you on the journey."
Bulma smiled, a genuine expression of gratitude crossing her face.
"Thank you, Gohan." She said hugging him. "It's so good to know that I can count on one of you."
However, Gohan kept his true intentions hidden, he planned to use this journey for another purpose.
As soon as Bulma and Gohan got on the carpet, they disappeared.
"You surprised me with your training idea, young Gohan." Mr. Popo said, guiding Gohan through the corridors of the celestial platform.
After investigating the ship that brought Kami-sama to planet Earth, Gohan did not stay with Bulma in the hospital but was taken to the Celeste platform, where until Piccolo's death at the hands of Vegeta, Earth's Kami resided.
After a few more minutes walking, Gohan stood in the doorway of the Time Chamber, his heart pounding with anticipation. Mr. Popo hovered beside him, his expression inscrutable as always.
"This is the Time Chamber," Popo explained. "Time flows differently within its walls. One day outside is equivalent to one year within."
Gohan nodded, his mind racing. Two years of training could make a world of difference. He could become strong enough to face even the mightiest of Frieza soldiers.
"I am ready," he said, his voice determined.
Popo nodded and opened the door, revealing a vast, empty chamber. Gohan stepped inside, and Popo followed, closing the door behind them.
The Time Chamber was a strange and wonderful place. It was filled with an ethereal glow, and the air was heavy with the scent of ozone. Gohan could feel the energy of the place coursing through his body, invigorating him.
"You will train here for two years," Popo said. "When you are finished, leave the room immediately, or you will be trapped in here forever."
Gohan nodded, his eyes gleaming with excitement. He couldn't wait to begin.
With a finger pointing to the ground, Popo creates 3 pairs of clothes similar to the Gi that Goku wears, but without symbols related to any master.
Gohan looked at the three pairs of clothes with a mixture of curiosity and trepidation.
"These are weighted clothing," Popo explained. "They will help you to increase your strength and endurance. The first pair weighs 50 kilos, the second 100 kilos, and the third 500 kilos. But be warned, the gravity in this room is 10 times greater than on Earth."
Gohan nodded, his eyes gleaming with excitement. He couldn't wait to try on the weights.
He picked up the first pair of clothes and slipped them on. The weight was immediately apparent, but he forced himself to stand up straight. He took a few steps forward, and the increased gravity made his legs feel like lead.
But Gohan was determined to push himself. He gritted his teeth and continued to walk.
"Now if you'll excuse me, I need to help Miss Bulma with the ship and teach her the Kami language."
Even as Popo leaves the room, Gohan is having difficulty adapting to the weight of the clothes.
Gohan struggled to move in the weighted clothing. Each step felt like he was wading through waist-deep mud. The 50 kilos that the clothes weighed on Earth felt like half a ton in the Time Chamber's gravity.
He took a few more steps, his muscles screaming in protest. He could feel the sweat dripping down his forehead.
But he refused to give up. He had come to the Time Chamber to train, and he wasn't going to let a little discomfort stop him.
He gritted his teeth and continued to push himself. He walked for half an hour, until his legs felt like they were going to give out. But he kept going, one step at a time.
Finally, he collapsed on the ground, exhausted. He lay there for a few minutes, catching his breath.
The window catches Gohan by surprise, but not as much as the voice that sounds in his head, startling him. It was the voice of Zeno, the king of all universes.
"Well done, Gohan," Zeno said. "You have used your knowledge of the future to your advantage. This is the most interesting turn of events."
Gohan's mind raced. He had never expected to hear from Zeno, let alone be praised by him.
"Thank you, Lord Zeno," Gohan said, his voice trembling slightly.
"You are most welcome," Zeno said. "I must say, I am quite intrigued by your plan. It is a clever way to avoid the boredom of a predictable story."
Gohan's heart skipped a beat.
"Boredom?" he asked.
"Yes, boredom," Zeno said. "If the story becomes too predictable, I may lose interest and destroy everything."
Gohan's eyes widened in horror. He had never considered that Zeno could be so capricious.
"I will do my best to keep the story interesting," Gohan said.
"I am sure you will," Zeno said. "Now, go and train. I look forward to seeing what you accomplish."
The voice faded away, leaving Gohan alone in the Time Chamber. He stood there for a moment, trying to process what had just happened.
He had been given a chance to change the future, and he was determined to make the most of it. He would train harder than ever before, and he would do everything in his power to keep Zeno entertained.
The fate of the universe depended on it.
"It looks like this Gohan will become the protagonist of Dragon Ball as Akira Toriyama had originally planned." He couldn't stop himself from smiling. "It's a shame that I don't have anyone to train with me, in Dragon Ball one of the best ways to train is by fighting."
"What?"
"WHAT?"
Overwhelmed by the amount of things that have happened to him in less than a day, Gohan decides to first learn how to best use the system Zeno gave him.
"This way I will make better use of my training."
"And I think the system agrees with me…"
Gohan spent a few minutes reading the status window, looking at each element that opened windows with explanations and speaking commands out loud trying to find more features.
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.000/1.000]
HP: 3.500
KP: 10.000
PL: 1.501,5
MIGHT: 705
AGILITY: 2.300
SPIRIT: 2.000
MENTAL: 1.001
Points: 100
Name, Race and Level are very simple to understand. HP is Hit Points as expected, KP is Ki Points, PL is Power Levels. MIGHT encompasses strength and physical resistance. AGILITY is for dexterity, movement and reaction. SPIRIT resist mental attacks and ki reserve. MENTAL memory and quick thinking.
One of the new windows that Gohan discovered was.
Acrobatics Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Athletics Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Perception Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Stealth Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Thievery Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Close Combat Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Ranged Combat Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Medicine Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Survival Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Deception Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Diplomacy Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Intimidation Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
"I think the Skills are at a minimum because I started this life with few memories." Said Gohan, finally noticing the holes in his memory. "I remember almost nothing about myself or the people I lived with."
Oozaru Lv. 1/100 [Novice] = X 10 Power Level, at this level, the gamer loses control when assuming the Oozaru form
"Nothing?" Questioned Gohan in surprise. "B-but what about Masenko? Or a simple ki blast? I should at least know how to fly by now."
Gohan wasn't desperate only because he had at least 2 years to train.
"Cool, I have the best of both worlds from my racial heritage." Commented Gohan, getting up. "I may not know how to train my Ki, but I will try to physically train the most powerful being of all."
Determined, Gohan began his training of 100 sit ups, pushups, and squats followed by a 10-km run.
Did you enjoy the first chapter of Dragon Ball Isekai: Gohan Gamer?
I know it's all a bit rushed right now, but the trip to Namekusei is coming up and Gohan will start interacting more with the other characters.
I will publish new chapters every month of this story.
Questions, criticisms, suggestions, compliments, or commissions? You can find me on my X (Old Twitter) @renanp1m or on my Linktree: linktr.ee/RenanPMoraes
Until next time, you beautiful ones.
As the name makes clear, this fic is a period drama, set in Victorian England in 1875.
Not!
Jokes aside, our protagonist was reincarnated in Gohan's body shortly after the Saiyan saga.
If you are an old Dragon Ball fan like me and dreamed of Gohan taking the lead as in the original plans of the great and late Akira Toriyama.
This fic is for you.
"Dialogues"
'Thoughts'
A ripple of consciousness swept over his body as he blinked open his eyes, a bleached whiteness greeting him. No scent of sweat-soaked earth, no familiar pulse of life. Just an expansive nothingness, a blank canvas devoid of brushstrokes. His heart pounded in his chest, echoing in the hollow space.
Before him, an alien entity stood out against the void.
His tiny form swathed in vibrant hues, a stark contrast to the emptiness surrounding them. The sight of the deity stirred a faint recognition within him, a hazy mirage wavering at the edge of his memory.
"Lord Zeno?"
"Hi," Zeno's voice resounded in the empty expanse, a faint smile dancing on his lips.
"This is impossible, you are not real, you are a fictional character."
The god looked at him without expressing any emotion, but uttered a simple word.
"Silence."
The commando had no anger or hatred towards him, but a chill ran down his spine, as if he were being warned of the danger that the being in front of him represented.
"You're probably wondering why you're here," Zeno continued, his voice an echo against the silent backdrop.
He nodded, a tight knot forming in his stomach.
"An incident created a new timeline, Gohan's soul was... accidentally destroyed during his fight with Nappa and Vegeta," Zeno confessed, a hint of regret tinting his words.
Hi's eyes widened at the revelation.
"But how, he still had so much to do. Gohan is vital to Dragon Ball in all sagas up to -."
"Silence."
Once again the command silence with the primal fear of a predator facing its prey
"And so, you'll be taking on his role."
"His role?" He questioned, curiosity piercing through his shock.
Zeno nodded.
"You will serve as the new Gohan." He said, as if those words hadn't impacted him. "But don't worry, I created something to help you."
Zeno snaps his fingers as a strange blue holographic window appears in front of me.
[Gamer System Installed]
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.000/1.000]
HP: 3.500
KP: 10.000
PL: 1.500
MIGHT: 700
AGILITY: 2.300
SPIRIT: 2.000
MENTAL: 1.000
Points: 100
[STATUS]
"This looks like the status of a gamer fic."
"Mortals from your reality do not have access to ki and other forms of energy like the world you will reincarnate in, so create a system that you are familiar with to help you acclimatize and to keep an eye on you."
He swallows hard at the declaration of the small but infinitely powerful being.
"Will you keep an eye on me?"
"Yes." Zeno said smiling. "My original plan was to destroy this variant timeline, but I decided to use you to see what happens. Watching you will be fun, but if you die or it becomes boring to watch you... I'll destroy everything." He finishes speaking by raising his little arms into the air.
Confused and distressed, he tries to ask for more information, but his vision starts to darken and he becomes unconscious.
[DBI:GG]
Gohan's eyelids fluttered open to the soft murmur of voices, a stark contrast to the deafening silence he'd faced moments ago. He found himself cradled in Chi-Chi's arms, her eyes brimming with relief and love. His body felt strangely light, devoid of the aches that should have been there, considering the battle he had just been through.
"What?" he whispered, his voice carrying an unfamiliar timbre.
Chi-Chi gasped, tears streaming down her cheeks as she clutched him tighter.
"Oh, Gohan! You're alright!"
Around them gathered his friends and family exchanged looks of disbelief.
"You were hurt pretty bad," Krillin piped up from the side. "But it seems like you're better than me"
Gohan touched his head, expecting to find wounds or bandages, but there was nothing. His skin was smooth, unmarred. He could feel their collective gaze upon him, mixtures of astonishment and unspoken questions at his miraculous recovery.
'Was this Zeno's work?' Gohan thought in silence. 'Does he or this system of his leave me completely healed when I wake up?'
As they traveled to the hospital where Goku and Krillin would be treated for their own injuries, Gohan remained silent in the aircraft's cabin. The hum of its engines was a distant drone as he tried to piece together the reality that he was no longer in his world. The very idea that he was now living in the body of his favorite character seemed like a fever dream.
He glanced out of the window, watching the landscape zoom past. He was here, yet part of him still grappled with disbelief. The sensation of flying in this advanced machine should have thrilled him, instead, it only deepened the surrealism of his situation.
They reached the hospital quickly. Goku and Krillin were whisked away by a team of medics while Chi-Chi stayed by Goku's side every step of the way. Gohan followed along mechanically as they navigated through sterile corridors and past concerned nurses.
He knew he should feel something, but all he could focus on was the odd detachment gnawing at him. Inside this familiar world yet so alien to his own experience, Gohan grappled with the reality that life as he knew it had been irreversibly altered.
In the stark white of the hospital room, voices buzzed around Gohan like bees circling a hive. Everyone was animated, gesturing wildly as they spoke of plans to journey to Namekusei. Yet, Gohan's mind wandered, ensnared in its own quandary.
Bulma was unfolding maps and charts onto a nearby table, her finger tracing potential routes through the cosmos.
"Even if we modify one of my father's spaceships, we still wouldn't be able to make the trip in less than a thousand years," she explained with an authority that made her the de facto leader of this impromptu meeting.
Goku, propped up in his hospital bed with bandages criss-crossing his torso, nodded along with Bulma's words.
"We need to find those Dragon Balls," he said with determination shining through his eyes despite his injuries.
But Gohan's attention strayed from their planning. He was there among them, physically present but mentally adrift.
Gohan's focus shifted from the animated group to the window where something had caught his attention. A weird figure, clad in flowing oriental garb and a large white turban, hovered outside the glass in a flying carpet. Its expression was impossible to read, but there was a faint glimmer of amusement in its eyes.
"Who is it?" Gohan muttered, rising from his seat.
Gohan stepped towards the window, his heart pounding with a mix of anticipation and dread. As he approached, the figure turned to face him, its movements graceful and deliberate. Gohan's eyes widened in recognition.
"Mr. Popo?" he breathed out.
The enigmatic attendant to Earth's Guardian hovered serenely outside the window, his inscrutable expression holding a hint of amusement.
"Yes, young Gohan," Popo replied, his voice as smooth as running water. "I have come to offer assistance."
Gohan's eyebrows knitted together in confusion.
"Assistance? With what?"
"With your journey to Namekusei," Popo answered simply. "I know of a spaceship that can take you there."
The revelation stunned Gohan. He had forgotten that Mr. Popo was going to take them to the ship that Kami used to get to Earth.
"I think we should take Mr. Popo up on his offer." Said Goku from the bed.
"We're all hurt, and it'll be faster if some of us go with Popo to get the spaceship." Added Kuririn
A satisfied gleam entered Popo's eyes.
"Who will come with me to the spaceship?" Asked Popo.
"Well, that easy, Bulma." Said Kuririn.
"What?Why me?"
"The others are injured and you are the only one who can find out if we can use the ship or not."
Bulma sighed, her shoulders slumping in resignation.
"Great. I get to sit in a spaceship with that weird guy."
Goku chuckled softly.
"At least we're one step closer to getting the Dragon Balls," he said, trying to remain optimistic.
Despite the lingering unease, Gohan couldn't help but feel a sense of excitement mingled with trepidation. The journey to Namekusei was about to begin, one of the most incredible and iconic arcs in Dragon Ball.
But his good mood takes a cold shower when he remembers the difficulties he will face in the future. Although he was strong enough to face some of Freeza's soldiers, his elite forces and the Galactic Emperor himself were far from his reach.
Overcome with dread of the future, Gohan decides to do what Dragon Ball characters do when they face a great challenge.
'I need to train.'
Perceiving the opportunity before his eyes, Gohan decided to go with them to.
"I'll go with you to, Mr. Popo," Gohan declared, his voice resolute.
Bulma blinked in surprise.
"You will?"
"Yes," Gohan nodded. "I'm not as injured as the others, and I can help protect you on the journey."
Bulma smiled, a genuine expression of gratitude crossing her face.
"Thank you, Gohan." She said hugging him. "It's so good to know that I can count on one of you."
However, Gohan kept his true intentions hidden, he planned to use this journey for another purpose.
As soon as Bulma and Gohan got on the carpet, they disappeared.
[DBI:GG]
"You surprised me with your training idea, young Gohan." Mr. Popo said, guiding Gohan through the corridors of the celestial platform.
After investigating the ship that brought Kami-sama to planet Earth, Gohan did not stay with Bulma in the hospital but was taken to the Celeste platform, where until Piccolo's death at the hands of Vegeta, Earth's Kami resided.
After a few more minutes walking, Gohan stood in the doorway of the Time Chamber, his heart pounding with anticipation. Mr. Popo hovered beside him, his expression inscrutable as always.
"This is the Time Chamber," Popo explained. "Time flows differently within its walls. One day outside is equivalent to one year within."
Gohan nodded, his mind racing. Two years of training could make a world of difference. He could become strong enough to face even the mightiest of Frieza soldiers.
"I am ready," he said, his voice determined.
Popo nodded and opened the door, revealing a vast, empty chamber. Gohan stepped inside, and Popo followed, closing the door behind them.
The Time Chamber was a strange and wonderful place. It was filled with an ethereal glow, and the air was heavy with the scent of ozone. Gohan could feel the energy of the place coursing through his body, invigorating him.
"You will train here for two years," Popo said. "When you are finished, leave the room immediately, or you will be trapped in here forever."
Gohan nodded, his eyes gleaming with excitement. He couldn't wait to begin.
With a finger pointing to the ground, Popo creates 3 pairs of clothes similar to the Gi that Goku wears, but without symbols related to any master.
Gohan looked at the three pairs of clothes with a mixture of curiosity and trepidation.
"These are weighted clothing," Popo explained. "They will help you to increase your strength and endurance. The first pair weighs 50 kilos, the second 100 kilos, and the third 500 kilos. But be warned, the gravity in this room is 10 times greater than on Earth."
Gohan nodded, his eyes gleaming with excitement. He couldn't wait to try on the weights.
He picked up the first pair of clothes and slipped them on. The weight was immediately apparent, but he forced himself to stand up straight. He took a few steps forward, and the increased gravity made his legs feel like lead.
But Gohan was determined to push himself. He gritted his teeth and continued to walk.
"Now if you'll excuse me, I need to help Miss Bulma with the ship and teach her the Kami language."
Even as Popo leaves the room, Gohan is having difficulty adapting to the weight of the clothes.
Gohan struggled to move in the weighted clothing. Each step felt like he was wading through waist-deep mud. The 50 kilos that the clothes weighed on Earth felt like half a ton in the Time Chamber's gravity.
He took a few more steps, his muscles screaming in protest. He could feel the sweat dripping down his forehead.
But he refused to give up. He had come to the Time Chamber to train, and he wasn't going to let a little discomfort stop him.
He gritted his teeth and continued to push himself. He walked for half an hour, until his legs felt like they were going to give out. But he kept going, one step at a time.
Finally, he collapsed on the ground, exhausted. He lay there for a few minutes, catching his breath.
[+5 MIGHT ]
The window catches Gohan by surprise, but not as much as the voice that sounds in his head, startling him. It was the voice of Zeno, the king of all universes.
"Well done, Gohan," Zeno said. "You have used your knowledge of the future to your advantage. This is the most interesting turn of events."
Gohan's mind raced. He had never expected to hear from Zeno, let alone be praised by him.
"Thank you, Lord Zeno," Gohan said, his voice trembling slightly.
"You are most welcome," Zeno said. "I must say, I am quite intrigued by your plan. It is a clever way to avoid the boredom of a predictable story."
Gohan's heart skipped a beat.
"Boredom?" he asked.
"Yes, boredom," Zeno said. "If the story becomes too predictable, I may lose interest and destroy everything."
Gohan's eyes widened in horror. He had never considered that Zeno could be so capricious.
"I will do my best to keep the story interesting," Gohan said.
"I am sure you will," Zeno said. "Now, go and train. I look forward to seeing what you accomplish."
The voice faded away, leaving Gohan alone in the Time Chamber. He stood there for a moment, trying to process what had just happened.
He had been given a chance to change the future, and he was determined to make the most of it. He would train harder than ever before, and he would do everything in his power to keep Zeno entertained.
The fate of the universe depended on it.
"It looks like this Gohan will become the protagonist of Dragon Ball as Akira Toriyama had originally planned." He couldn't stop himself from smiling. "It's a shame that I don't have anyone to train with me, in Dragon Ball one of the best ways to train is by fighting."
[TRAINING MODE]
"What?"
[ Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1.200
Saibamen = PL 1.200
Nappa = PL 4.000
Vegeta = PL 18.000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180.000
[ Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1.200
Saibamen = PL 1.200
Nappa = PL 4.000
Vegeta = PL 18.000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180.000
[ Choose your opponent]
"WHAT?"
Overwhelmed by the amount of things that have happened to him in less than a day, Gohan decides to first learn how to best use the system Zeno gave him.
"This way I will make better use of my training."
[+1 MENTAL]
"And I think the system agrees with me…"
Gohan spent a few minutes reading the status window, looking at each element that opened windows with explanations and speaking commands out loud trying to find more features.
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.000/1.000]
HP: 3.500
KP: 10.000
PL: 1.501,5
MIGHT: 705
AGILITY: 2.300
SPIRIT: 2.000
MENTAL: 1.001
Points: 100
[STATUS]
Name, Race and Level are very simple to understand. HP is Hit Points as expected, KP is Ki Points, PL is Power Levels. MIGHT encompasses strength and physical resistance. AGILITY is for dexterity, movement and reaction. SPIRIT resist mental attacks and ki reserve. MENTAL memory and quick thinking.
One of the new windows that Gohan discovered was.
[SKILLS]
- General Skills:
Acrobatics Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Athletics Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Perception Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Stealth Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Thievery Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
- Combat Skills:
Close Combat Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Ranged Combat Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
- Knowledge Skills:
Medicine Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Survival Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
- Social Skills:
Deception Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Diplomacy Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
Intimidation Lv. 1/100 [Novice]
[SKILLS]
"I think the Skills are at a minimum because I started this life with few memories." Said Gohan, finally noticing the holes in his memory. "I remember almost nothing about myself or the people I lived with."
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
- Passive:
- Active:
- Transformations:
Oozaru Lv. 1/100 [Novice] = X 10 Power Level, at this level, the gamer loses control when assuming the Oozaru form
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
"Nothing?" Questioned Gohan in surprise. "B-but what about Masenko? Or a simple ki blast? I should at least know how to fly by now."
Gohan wasn't desperate only because he had at least 2 years to train.
[PERKS]
- Hidden Potential: A great power lies dormant within you
- Human Adaptability: Greater capacity for learning new techniques and strategizing in combat.
- Zenkai Boost: Become significantly stronger after recovering from near-death experiences.
[PERKS]
"Cool, I have the best of both worlds from my racial heritage." Commented Gohan, getting up. "I may not know how to train my Ki, but I will try to physically train the most powerful being of all."
Determined, Gohan began his training of 100 sit ups, pushups, and squats followed by a 10-km run.
Did you enjoy the first chapter of Dragon Ball Isekai: Gohan Gamer?
I know it's all a bit rushed right now, but the trip to Namekusei is coming up and Gohan will start interacting more with the other characters.
I will publish new chapters every month of this story.
Questions, criticisms, suggestions, compliments, or commissions? You can find me on my X (Old Twitter) @renanp1m or on my Linktree: linktr.ee/RenanPMoraes
Until next time, you beautiful ones.
02) ZENKAI BOOST
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Bom dia pessoas,
Renan here, and before starting the chapter I would like to address some questions that several people asked.
1 - In this story will the protagonist have a Harem?
Short answer: No.
Long Answer: I hadn't thought of a romantic partner for the protagonist when I started writing this story, I saw some people suggesting Bulma from the future...
Comment which romantic pairing you would like for the protagonist. I promise to take everyone into consideration.
2 - Will you consider Dragon Ball's expanded universe? Things like movies, OVAs, Games or Super Dragon Ball Heroes?
Short answer: I haven't decided yet.
Long Answer: My main guide for writing this story is the manga. Films from the Z saga, Fillers, etc.
I haven't decided whether to add them or not.
3 - Will we see Zeno again?
Short answer: No.
Long Answer: Zeno was just a tool to start the story and encourage the protagonist not to try to maintain the original Canon.
#From here on it is only for the English version of the story.#
4 - Why do you get character and location names wrong so much?
Short answer: No I don't.
Long Answer: I'm Brazilian, so the names you're finding strange are the Brazilian version of the classic dubbing here.
I'm not going to get into the merits of discussing which is better, worse or whether we should all watch the original Japanese version without subtitles.
If you can help me as a Beta reader to replace the names from the BR dub with those from ENGLISH, send me a message, I will be eternally grateful.
5 - English is not your first language?
Short answer: No.
Long Answer: As I mentioned previously, I am Brazilian and English is not my first language.
That's why there are some phrases that may not make sense in English. Like the example below:
Pt-Br: "Segue reto toda vida."
Eng: "Stay straight all your life."
Real Meaning: When we want to give someone a direction, instead of telling them to go straight for a long time or until they pass through X number of squares, we prefer to tell the driver to go straight all their lives.
Well, how far does this path go? Nobody knows!
If I can get a Beta Reader for the English version maybe I can post the story twice a month.
His muscles burn, sweat pours down Gohan's face as he finishes the last few meters of the run. Your heart pounds in your chest, air rushes in and out of your lungs in heavy breaths. The determination in his eyes doesn't waver, he remembers why he's trying so hard.
Finally, Gohan finishes the race, panting and exhausted. He stops for a moment, hands resting on his knees, trying to normalize his breathing. The feeling of accomplishment washes over you, even if you know it's just the beginning of your training journey.
"That was harder than I thought." Gohan said, breathing tiredly on the floor. "Although this body is stronger than a normal human, I am carrying half a ton. which is awesome."
With a mental command, he opens the status window, contemplating his growth.
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.000/1.000]
HP: 5,100
KP: 10,000
PL: 1,592.5
MIGHT: 1,020
AGILITY: 2,349
SPIRIT: 2,000
MENTAL: 1,001
Points: 100
Gohan smiles proudly as he contemplates his progress.
"More than 300 in Power and almost 50 more in Agility. And it seems that the PL is the sum of the four attributes divided by four."
Gohan quickly removes the heavy clothing, now that his body has started to cool down after training his muscles are starting to hurt.
"Damn." He complains as he stands up, staggering and tired. "If only there was a way to speed up my recovery." The boy complains, thinking.
Gohan thought about other stories with gamer systems similar to his, trying to find a way to recover faster.
The first idea that came to his mind was potions and spells, but he didn't have access to any items or a store to buy them. The second idea was to sleep, but optimizing his training time and sleeping all the time would be a waste.
Meditation was the last thing he thought about.
The young man sits on the floor and with his mind focused, Gohan sits on the floor and begins to meditate.
With his eyes closed, he began to breathe deeply, trying to clear his mind and just focus on breathing. The feeling of peace and calm spread throughout his body as he gradually felt his energy returning.
Seconds turned into minutes, minutes turned into hours, but Gohan wasn't distracted. He continued to meditate, feeling that little by little, his strength was returning.
After the long time, he opened his eyes and felt a huge difference. In addition to the energy that had returned, the muscle pain was gone. He was ready to continue with the training.
"Thank you, meditation." Gohan muttered, smiling. "I needed this."
He stood up, satisfied with his recovery and the gain of Spirit. Turning to the clock at the entrance, Gohan realized that three hours had passed.
"Damn, less than an hour until I sleep… I better use training mode, since I'm going to sleep and heal any damage."
"Now… let's earn XP." Gohan says to himself proudly, ready to continue training.
Saibamen = PL 1,200
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
"I think it's better to go with Raditz or Saibamen…" Said the young man, choosing his first opponent. "I think I'll go with the mutant cabbage."
"Ish…" Gohan mutters, staring at the floating phrase. "Someone is going to get sued by Capcom."
Without understanding exactly what is happening, Gohan is surprised by frantic and peculiar music that echoes from all directions.
"Did I get fucked?"
The music was strangely familiar, it sounded like a military march, combining elements of electronic music and orchestra.
"I remembered, this is invader zim's opening."
Gohan was sure that the situation couldn't get any weirder until a powerful announcer's voice was present.
In front of Gohan, what appeared to be particles of Pixel, one of Dragon Ball's classic monsters, materialized.
"EEEEEEK!" Yelled the strange alien creature.
The music began to fade until it disappeared completely, Gohan's heart pounded in his chest as he stared at the Saibamen. Even though his power level was higher, he couldn't get rid of his nervousness. He had never fought a real opponent in this life or the next.
[READY?]
[FIGHT!]
"GYIAAAAAH!" The monster screeched, charging at Gohan.
Instinctively, Gohan raised his arms to receive the attack, which was defended with a sharp thump.
[- 25 HP]
It hurt less than Gohan expected, he had no idea of his capabilities, as the newly incarnated was still getting used to his new body.
The Saibamen, realizing the strength of their opponent, took their distance and continued to attack, launching an acid beam towards Gohan.
Distressed, Gohan reacted by jumping back, but it was too late.
[- 525 HP]
"Shit!" Gohan cursed.
He hadn't been fast enough, drops of acid splashed and hit his left foot.
"Gi Gi Gi Gi." The strange creature laughed, launching another acid ray.
Even with his leg hurting, Gohan forced himself to jump to the side, this time the distance was greater, and he managed to avoid the Acid completely.
'At long range he will be difficult without any Ki attacks.' Thought the young man.
"Come here and face me like a man-. Or whatever the fuck mutant thingy you are." Gohan exclaims trying to insult the creature.
To his surprise, Saibamen got angry with the comment and lunged at the young man.
[- 75 HP]
This time Gohan quickly defended himself using only one arm and returned a punch to the creature's face.
[300 DMG]
"SUCK THAT MANGO!" exclaimed Gohan celebrating his first hit.
The Saibamen recovered quickly, realizing that the young man was distracted, and attacked him with his claw closed like a fist.
[- 100 HP]
"Urgh." The boy groaned in pain after receiving the first blow to the stomach.
The green mutant didn't stop with just one blow, he took advantage of the open guard and continued to attack with punches and kicks hitting his opponent's face and torso.
[- 95 HP]
[- 75 HP]
[- 100 HP]
"Change! Change! Change! Change!" Shouted the green alien.
[- 65 HP]
[- 127 HP]
[- 87 HP]
Even though he was beaten, Gohan stood his ground receiving the attacks, refusing to fall.
'I won't lose to this mutant cabbage.' Swore Gohan mentally
Determined to win, the young man grabbed the monster's arms.
"Igi?" He questioned the creature without understanding what was happening.
"You won't win!" Shouted Gohan, as Saibamen struggled trying to free himself.
Holding the Saibamen, Gohan tries to gather the ki within him.
"GYIAAAAAH!" The monster shouted, kicking the young man to release him.
[- 35 HP]
[- 55 HP]
[- 62 HP]
Ignoring the pain, Gohan notices a strange sensation, as if energy begins to accumulate in his chest, then his body begins to vibrate slightly and a white aura completely covers him.
"GIIIIIIIIII!" The Saibamen shouts angrily, this time biting Gohan's left hand.
Still focused, Gohan tries to force the energy in his chest to circulate throughout his body.
Saibamen, realizing the flow of Ki, give up attacking and try everything to free themselves, such as jumping, flying and throwing their bodies back. But nothing proves effective against the young man's iron grip.
The energy intensifies within him, until he feels ready to open his eyes.
"DIE DEMON!" Gohan shouts, headbutting the creature.
[CRITICAL HIT X 4 DMG]
[OFF GUARD ENEMY X 2 DMG]
[1,200 DMG]
"ARGH!"
The monster shakes receiving the impact. Gohan lets go of the arms of the small creature who staggers back.
Taking advantage of the saberen being stunned, Gohan gathered his Ki again, this time focusing on his right arm. Without understanding why the process was faster than the previous attack, Gohan takes a step forward, aiming for the enemy's head.
"RECEIVE!" The Saiyan shouts, hitting his target squarely.
The wet impact sound is followed by a strange crack, but Gohan puts more force into the blow without noticing the peculiar noise coming from the Saibamen's skull.
"IAR-." The creature tried to scream in pain, but the impact of the fist cut off its exclamation.
[OFF GUARD ENEMY X 2 DMG]
[800 DMG]
Continuing the movement of the blow Gohan throws the small monster away, but before his opponent's body touches the ground he disappears in a cloud of pixels.
"What?" He questions in surprise.
"I don't believe."
Gohan was surprised by the gains from the fight.
"Jesus Cristo… look at how many points I got." Says Gohan, happy with the result of the fight. "I even won items, it can't get any better."
With his jaw dropped, the young man couldn't contain his smile.
"I need to fight again."
"Damn it! It's no wonder that people in the original series prefer to enter here in pairs."
After his slight disappointment, Gohan's attention turned to the items he just received.
"Attribute beans are for improving one attribute, Strength, Agility, Spirituality and Mental. Then the others must be to improve my proficiency in what is described." theorized Gohan out loud.
But I'll save them now, I'll use them when I'm on my way to Namek.
"I love it when the system agrees with me, but I will sleep now, I'm all screwed up from being beaten and burned with acid today."
Gohan wakes up slightly surprised to have recovered from all the injuries and pain from training the day before, but he soon remembers that it was due to the gamer powers that Zeno gave him.
"I was kind of expecting that, but it's still something-." Before Gohan could finish speaking, something touched his leg, taking him by surprise. "HAAAA!"
Scared, Gohan looked around looking for who was playing a trick on him, but he was alone.
"What-." Once again he is interrupted when something touches his arm this time. "I got."
Holding something long and furry, the young man finally realizes what was bothering him.
"A tail?" He questioned the young man in disbelief at the situation. "Do I have a tail?"
After a few minutes 'playing' with his new member, the young man decided to return to his training.
"I will leave the tail wrapped around my waist like other Saiyans don't. And now, let's see my progress."
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.750/1.000]
HP: 6,725
KP: 10,795
PL: 1,768.25
MIGHT: 1,345
AGILITY: 2,547
SPIRIT: 2,159
MENTAL: 1,022
Points: 100
"My power level rose by 175.75 points in one day… it's not little, but I expected more."
Not wanting to spend too much time complaining, Gohan proceeded to evaluate his skill gains.
Acrobatics Lv. 26/100 [ Inept ]
Athletics Lv. 83/100 [ Inept ]
Perception Lv. 25/100 [ Inept ]
Stealth Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Thievery Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
-Combat Skills:
Close Combat Lv. 76/100 [ Inept ]
Ranged Combat Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
-Knowledge Skills:
Medicine Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Survival Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
-Social Skills:
Deception Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Diplomacy Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Intimidation Lv. 16/100 [ Inept ]
"My close combat has gone up a lot. Was that why my nervousness disappeared in the middle of the fight? Am I learning as I fight?" Gohan murmurs, examining his progress. "Will anything happen if I achieve 100% in any skill?"
-Offensive Ki Techniques:
Ki Strike Lv. 22/100 [ Inept ]
Cost: 250 KP Effect: Adds 22% of your MIGHT on physical attack .
-Defensive Ki Techniques:
Gohan couldn't keep the smile off his face as he examined the first Ki ability he learned to use during combat.
"That must be for my human perk, Human Adaptability."
-Human Adaptability: Greater capacity for learning new techniques and strategizing in combat.
-Zenkai Boost: Become significantly stronger after recovering from near-death experiences.
"I need to take advantage of this, who knows, maybe I can teach myself to fly like Gohan did for Videl at the beginning of the Majin Buu saga."
Gohan lies on the ground, trying to recall how the original taught Videl how to use Ki.
'It's about controlling one's own Ki.' The voice of the original character echoed in his mind. 'You have to stay calm and breathe deeply…'
He closed his eyes and began to breathe deeply, focusing on feeling the energy within him.
'And little by little you will release the power that is within you.'
With the last sentence, he raised his hands as if he were holding a small ball in front of his torso.
Gohan felt warm, vivid Ki energy floating within him, as if it were traveling through the channels of his body until it reached his hands. He opened his eyes and saw a sphere of warm, translucent energy in the middle of his hands, illuminating the room with a faint glow. The feeling was incredible, as if I was touching pure energy.
He began to manipulate the Ki sphere between his hands as if it were an air balloon, making it move according to his wishes. He smiled, excited about the progress he had made.
"I think I can learn to fly now." Gohan comments, manipulating the Ki sphere. "Can I make it bigger?"
Focusing more energy into his hands, the Ki sphere expanded and its color became more solid.
"Interesting…" He says, pointing the sphere forward. "Can you shoot-."
At the same time, the sphere flew like an energy projectile.
In a few meters, the energy sphere falls to the ground without leaving a mark or making any noise.
"Ok…"
"Didn't expect that one."
"And this confirms that I train Spirit using Ki."
Cost: 500 KP Effect: Throws a Ki sphere dealing 0.1% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
"Weak and expensive, but I bet it will be powerful in the future." Said the young man taking a deep breath. "But for now, let's focus on flying."
Focusing again on his flight training, Gohan takes a deep breath, bringing his Ki to zero once again.
The energy circulated through his body again, and he slowly felt his body lifting off the ground, as if he were being pushed by an invisible force.
Even sitting down, Gohan felt free when his body was lifted off the ground.
[NEW KI SKILL]
[FLIGHT]
"UUUUUH!" exclaimed Gohan, opening his eyes. "This is amazing!" Celebrated the young man floating twenty centimeters off the ground.
The freedom of being in the air was incomparable, he felt like a bird flying freely in the sky without the pressure of the ground below. He walked around the temple getting used to the power until an idea appeared in his mind.
"How high can I go?"
Gohan began to fly upwards in a straight line, excited by the feeling of freedom and power beneath his body. The wind buzzed in his ears and the sensation of speed exhilarated him.
However, his enthusiasm was abruptly cut short when he felt his ki deplete.
"Hmm?" Questioned the young man who had been stuck in the air.
Quickly Gohan looked down, seeing the entrance as a small dot in the distance.
"I got fucked…"
His body began to free fall.
Panic took over him as he realized he was rapidly losing altitude. His heart beat wildly in his chest, and the fear of imminent death paralyzed him. The landscape below loomed dangerously close.
"I can't die, at least not like this. It will be the most pathetic death in Dragon Ball history."
Gohan closed his eyes, trying to avoid the fate that seemed inevitable.
But then, in a flash of desperation and determination, Gohan managed to access his power again, stopping 2 meters above the ground with his face facing the ground.
"Phew." Celebrated the young man.
Gohan's Ki had recovered enough to activate his power of flight once again, however the little Ki he had recovered did not last long.
"FUCK!"
Resulting in the young warrior falling face first onto the ground.
"Okay… there's no point in just having the power, I have to know how to use it."
Cost: 50 KP/Minute Effect: Fly at speed 7.5% of your running speed .
"50 KP per minute is a good amount, it's no wonder Goku used the cloud to move around for so long." Gohan comments, analyzing his flight power. "But without KP there's no point in me staring at this table, let's get the weight clothes on and train."
After working out, running and meditating to regain his strength, Gohan stares at his gains before activating training mode once again.
"Rank Up?" Curious, Gohan opened the windows to see the changes.
Acrobatics Lv. 26/100 [ Inept ]
Athletics Lv. 1/100 [ Adep ]
Perception Lv. 25/100 [ Inept ]
Stealth Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Thievery Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Combat Skills:
Close Combat Lv. 76/100 [ Inept ]
Ranged Combat Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Knowledge Skills:
Medicine Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Survival Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Social Skills:
Deception Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Diplomacy Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Intimidation Lv. 16/100 [ Inept ]
"Meditate had a clear change, but what did I gain from the Athletics Rank Up?" Questions Gohan without noticing the changes. "I think it's better to focus on what gives me a return"
[TRAINING MODE ON]
[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200
Saibamen = PL 1,200 [V]
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
[Choose your opponent]
"Raditz has the same power level as a Saibamen, so it shouldn't be difficult to defeat him now that I'm stronger."
An aggressive guitar riff started playing followed by drums.
"What song is that?" The young man complains. "It's too fast for me to understand with my English telecourse."
Although the song was familiar, the speed at which the vocalist sang made it impossible for him to recognize it until a specific phrase was sung.
"Slayer?"
Before receiving the answer, the announcer's voice was present.
"Finally, a chance to get revenge on Kakarot's spawn." Loudly shouted the figure of Raditz.
Raditz lifted his chin proudly, his cold, calculating eyes staring at Gohan with disdain. His stance is imposing, his muscles tense beneath his fighting armor. A smug smile adorned his lips, revealing his unwavering confidence. His piercing gaze conveyed the clear message of a veteran warrior ready to fight to the death.
Gohan felt a chill down his spine, a strange fear and trepidation took over him. His heart sped up and his breathing became heavy. Carefully observing the smiling warrior in front of him.
"I'm stronger than before, why is he scaring me more than Saibaman?"
To the young warrior's surprise, the saiyan in front of him smiled.
"You understand me?"
"Of course I understand you, you bastard son of a low-class warrior."
Caught by surprise, Gohan was stunned by the being's response.
"Wait-."
Without waiting, Raditz charged at Gohan, kicking the boy away.
Falling away, Gohan felt anger bubble up inside him as he stood up. Raditz's cold eyes analyzed Gohan with contempt as he teased him.
"You really are pathetic. A weak and useless hybrid, without the courage of pure-blood Saiyans."
Gohan clenched his fists, ignoring the venomous words echoing in his mind. With a ferocious roar, he charged at Raditz, delivering quick and precise blows.
Raditz laughed loudly, dodging the attacks with ease.
"It's pathetic to see how you try to pass yourself off as a warrior, when in reality you're just a mere brat." Says Raditz, punching his nephew in the face.
Gohan tried to defend himself from Raditz's sequence of blows, but something was different, Gohan was hesitating more than in the fight against Saibamen.
[- 189 HP]
[- 215 HP]
Each Saiyan's punch took advantage of the young man's hesitation, leaving Gohan on the defensive trying to stay on his feet.
Raditz, with a cocky smile on his face, spoke as he easily dodged a desperate kick from Gohan.
"You're stronger than before and more determined to win, boy. But you lack the fury and bloodlust I felt when you destroyed my ship."
Gohan stopped, amazed at the level of consciousness of the being in front of him.
"The original Gohan may have been a crybaby, but when cornered he was capable of fighting with the will to kill."
Every punch, every kick from Raditz seemed to drain the strength of the young hybrid, who still tried to resist as best he could.
"You can't even defend yourself. You are weak, a real waste of Saiyan blood." sneered Raditz.
[- 327 HP]
Raditz knocks Gohan to the ground, laughing at his incompetence.
"You're so deplorable it's hilarious." Mocks the veteran warrior. "Even though you have a powerful body with extraordinary gifts and a system with infinite potential, you are still just a pathetic worm."
"How do you know?" Questions the young man, once again surprised by the level of consciousness of the being in front of him.
Instead of answering the question, Raditz smiled evilly as he raised his hand to perform his ultimate technique.
"Saturday Crush!"
Gohan tries to get up, but his legs give out, in a desperate attempt he tries to throw his body to the side, but it's too late.
[- 3,000 HP]
Raditz's beam hit Gohan squarely, knocking the young man down once again with an explosion of pain that spread throughout his body. The ground felt hot beneath him and the pain seemed to spread in bursts through his back and legs. Gohan screamed in vain, trying to ease the agony that flooded him.
The colors began to fade around him, and Gohan's vision began to blur. He could hear Raditz's arrogant laugh, but the voice seemed distorted and resembled more of an echo than the voice of a living being.
Gohan's vision darkened even more, and the pain began to intensify. He could feel the blood rushing through his veins, and the sensation that he was falling apart from the inside out.
"No... I can't... Let me..." Murmured Gohan, fainting due to the intensity of the pain and the lack of oxygen.
The was still high on the horizon, even though it had been two days for Gohan, for his parents it had only been a few minutes since he left to train.
Chi-Chi was sitting next to Goku's bed, her eyes fixed on her husband's face. He was hurt, but his smile still radiated an infectious energy.
Goku, with his body bandaged and his eyes half-closed, tried to cheer Chi-Chi up. She looked worried, and her hands were shaking slightly. Gohan had disobeyed Chi-Chi's order and left to train.
When he left, she was furious, but now the anger had given way to sadness and apprehension.
"Chichi." Goku said in a soft voice. "Gohan is a good boy. He has a strong heart and is determined to become stronger to help bring back the people who died defending the land. You should be proud of him."
Chichi sighed tiredly.
"I know, Goku. But he's so young and he's already facing so many dangers out there. And you… you're also stuck here in this bed… I don't know how to deal with all this."
Goku made a significant effort, but managed to free his hand and place it on Chi-Chi's shoulder.
"We face challenges to protect those we love. Gohan will learn a lot from these experiences. And you, taking care of me here in the hospital, is also a form of protection. You're amazing, you know that?"
Chi-Chi looked at Goku fondly.
"I just want him to be safe, Goku. Our family is the most important thing to me."
Goku smiled.
"And we're going to be okay, Chichi." Replied the smiling warrior.
The two remained silent for a moment, sharing the love and concern they felt for each other and their family.
Gohan opened his eyes slowly, blinking against the bright light that hit him. His head throbbed like it was being hammered.
He tried to move, but a wave of pain shot through his body, pinning him to the ground.
"Damn it." Complained the young man. "I was beaten like a buggy dog in winter."
Getting used to the pain Gohan gets up and repairs the other windows in the system.
The gains were much smaller with the loss of Gohan, the XP was not enough for him to finally level up and now that Athletics was in Adept, his growth slowed precipitously.
"In addition to a few gains, I'm all broken and bruised." Complains Gohan irritated. "I wanted at least one good news today."
After venting his frustration, Gohan notices a window that he had unintentionally ignored.
"Huh?" Questions Gohan, still groggy from the pain. "Status!" Shouted the curious young man.
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.950/1.000]
HP: 9,225
KP: 13,230
PL: 2,214
MIGHT: 1,845
AGILITY: 3,132
SPIRIT: 2,646
MENTAL: 1,233
Points: 100
"JESUS BLOOD HAS POWER!" The surprised young man shouts. "I went over two thousand with Power Boost alone?"
With such growth, the young man thought about going into training mode and summoning Nappa or even Vegeta, but as soon as the table appeared he stopped to think.
"The growth of Zenkai is to multiply the stats I have, not add them… so I better try to gain as much as possible before going to face Nappa and Vegeta."
"Looks like someone agrees with me." Comment Gohan smiling. "Now enough nonsense and let's increase my training weight."
Boa noite pessoas,
Just to reiterate the request, if you are interested in being a Beta reader, leave a message. And don't forget to comment on which romantic pairing you would prefer for the protagonist.
And if you want to talk to me you can find me on X (Twitter), search for renanp1m.
I'm looking for more opinions about this system. I need help with the damage part, for now I'm thinking about abandoning showing damage and just describing the physical pain and results of blows like bleeding, broken bones and other things.
COMMENTS:
-WarMachine78(Webnovel):
Impressive looking forward to more of Gamer Gohan Si Adventures in DBZ verse world.
Super Bolic Time Chamber aka Hyperbolic Time Chamber.
Guessing we're going to see an unexpected Super Saiyan Gohan on Namek planet? Continue on Cheers!
-Renan:
Thank you for the compliment, but unfortunately I won't answer your question because I don't want to give spoilers.
-Akuma-Heika(Questionablequesting):
'Gohan's soul was destroyed at the end of the Saiyan saga' How?
-Renan:
Unfortunately, I won't answer this question either for spoiler reasons.
Renan here, and before starting the chapter I would like to address some questions that several people asked.
1 - In this story will the protagonist have a Harem?
Short answer: No.
Long Answer: I hadn't thought of a romantic partner for the protagonist when I started writing this story, I saw some people suggesting Bulma from the future...
Comment which romantic pairing you would like for the protagonist. I promise to take everyone into consideration.
2 - Will you consider Dragon Ball's expanded universe? Things like movies, OVAs, Games or Super Dragon Ball Heroes?
Short answer: I haven't decided yet.
Long Answer: My main guide for writing this story is the manga. Films from the Z saga, Fillers, etc.
I haven't decided whether to add them or not.
3 - Will we see Zeno again?
Short answer: No.
Long Answer: Zeno was just a tool to start the story and encourage the protagonist not to try to maintain the original Canon.
#From here on it is only for the English version of the story.#
4 - Why do you get character and location names wrong so much?
Short answer: No I don't.
Long Answer: I'm Brazilian, so the names you're finding strange are the Brazilian version of the classic dubbing here.
I'm not going to get into the merits of discussing which is better, worse or whether we should all watch the original Japanese version without subtitles.
If you can help me as a Beta reader to replace the names from the BR dub with those from ENGLISH, send me a message, I will be eternally grateful.
5 - English is not your first language?
Short answer: No.
Long Answer: As I mentioned previously, I am Brazilian and English is not my first language.
That's why there are some phrases that may not make sense in English. Like the example below:
Pt-Br: "Segue reto toda vida."
Eng: "Stay straight all your life."
Real Meaning: When we want to give someone a direction, instead of telling them to go straight for a long time or until they pass through X number of squares, we prefer to tell the driver to go straight all their lives.
Well, how far does this path go? Nobody knows!
If I can get a Beta Reader for the English version maybe I can post the story twice a month.
His muscles burn, sweat pours down Gohan's face as he finishes the last few meters of the run. Your heart pounds in your chest, air rushes in and out of your lungs in heavy breaths. The determination in his eyes doesn't waver, he remembers why he's trying so hard.
Finally, Gohan finishes the race, panting and exhausted. He stops for a moment, hands resting on his knees, trying to normalize his breathing. The feeling of accomplishment washes over you, even if you know it's just the beginning of your training journey.
[+300 MIGHTY]
[+49 AGILITY]
[+47 Athletics Levels]
[+49 AGILITY]
[+47 Athletics Levels]
"That was harder than I thought." Gohan said, breathing tiredly on the floor. "Although this body is stronger than a normal human, I am carrying half a ton. which is awesome."
With a mental command, he opens the status window, contemplating his growth.
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.000/1.000]
HP: 5,100
KP: 10,000
PL: 1,592.5
MIGHT: 1,020
AGILITY: 2,349
SPIRIT: 2,000
MENTAL: 1,001
Points: 100
[STATUS]
Gohan smiles proudly as he contemplates his progress.
"More than 300 in Power and almost 50 more in Agility. And it seems that the PL is the sum of the four attributes divided by four."
Gohan quickly removes the heavy clothing, now that his body has started to cool down after training his muscles are starting to hurt.
"Damn." He complains as he stands up, staggering and tired. "If only there was a way to speed up my recovery." The boy complains, thinking.
Gohan thought about other stories with gamer systems similar to his, trying to find a way to recover faster.
The first idea that came to his mind was potions and spells, but he didn't have access to any items or a store to buy them. The second idea was to sleep, but optimizing his training time and sleeping all the time would be a waste.
Meditation was the last thing he thought about.
The young man sits on the floor and with his mind focused, Gohan sits on the floor and begins to meditate.
With his eyes closed, he began to breathe deeply, trying to clear his mind and just focus on breathing. The feeling of peace and calm spread throughout his body as he gradually felt his energy returning.
Seconds turned into minutes, minutes turned into hours, but Gohan wasn't distracted. He continued to meditate, feeling that little by little, his strength was returning.
After the long time, he opened his eyes and felt a huge difference. In addition to the energy that had returned, the muscle pain was gone. He was ready to continue with the training.
[+67 SPIRIT]
[NEW ACTIVE SPECIAL ABILITY]
[NEW ACTIVE SPECIAL ABILITY]
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
Meditate Lv. 87/100 [Inept] = Extra Regen 8.7% of stamina per minute, Extra Regen 0.87% of KP and HP per minute.[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
"Thank you, meditation." Gohan muttered, smiling. "I needed this."
He stood up, satisfied with his recovery and the gain of Spirit. Turning to the clock at the entrance, Gohan realized that three hours had passed.
"Damn, less than an hour until I sleep… I better use training mode, since I'm going to sleep and heal any damage."
"Now… let's earn XP." Gohan says to himself proudly, ready to continue training.
[TRAINING MODE ON]
[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200[Choose your opponent]
Saibamen = PL 1,200
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
[Choose your opponent]
"I think it's better to go with Raditz or Saibamen…" Said the young man, choosing his first opponent. "I think I'll go with the mutant cabbage."
[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]
"Ish…" Gohan mutters, staring at the floating phrase. "Someone is going to get sued by Capcom."
Without understanding exactly what is happening, Gohan is surprised by frantic and peculiar music that echoes from all directions.
"Did I get fucked?"
The music was strangely familiar, it sounded like a military march, combining elements of electronic music and orchestra.
"I remembered, this is invader zim's opening."
Gohan was sure that the situation couldn't get any weirder until a powerful announcer's voice was present.
[Get ready for explosive action!
From the darkest depths of space,
it is small,
it is green,
and it just needs soil and water to annihilate its enemies!
Give it up for the SAI-BA-MEN!]
From the darkest depths of space,
it is small,
it is green,
and it just needs soil and water to annihilate its enemies!
Give it up for the SAI-BA-MEN!]
In front of Gohan, what appeared to be particles of Pixel, one of Dragon Ball's classic monsters, materialized.
"EEEEEEK!" Yelled the strange alien creature.
The music began to fade until it disappeared completely, Gohan's heart pounded in his chest as he stared at the Saibamen. Even though his power level was higher, he couldn't get rid of his nervousness. He had never fought a real opponent in this life or the next.
[READY?]
[FIGHT!]
"GYIAAAAAH!" The monster screeched, charging at Gohan.
Instinctively, Gohan raised his arms to receive the attack, which was defended with a sharp thump.
[- 25 HP]
It hurt less than Gohan expected, he had no idea of his capabilities, as the newly incarnated was still getting used to his new body.
The Saibamen, realizing the strength of their opponent, took their distance and continued to attack, launching an acid beam towards Gohan.
Distressed, Gohan reacted by jumping back, but it was too late.
[- 525 HP]
"Shit!" Gohan cursed.
He hadn't been fast enough, drops of acid splashed and hit his left foot.
"Gi Gi Gi Gi." The strange creature laughed, launching another acid ray.
Even with his leg hurting, Gohan forced himself to jump to the side, this time the distance was greater, and he managed to avoid the Acid completely.
'At long range he will be difficult without any Ki attacks.' Thought the young man.
"Come here and face me like a man-. Or whatever the fuck mutant thingy you are." Gohan exclaims trying to insult the creature.
To his surprise, Saibamen got angry with the comment and lunged at the young man.
[- 75 HP]
This time Gohan quickly defended himself using only one arm and returned a punch to the creature's face.
[300 DMG]
"SUCK THAT MANGO!" exclaimed Gohan celebrating his first hit.
The Saibamen recovered quickly, realizing that the young man was distracted, and attacked him with his claw closed like a fist.
[- 100 HP]
"Urgh." The boy groaned in pain after receiving the first blow to the stomach.
The green mutant didn't stop with just one blow, he took advantage of the open guard and continued to attack with punches and kicks hitting his opponent's face and torso.
[- 95 HP]
[- 75 HP]
[- 100 HP]
"Change! Change! Change! Change!" Shouted the green alien.
[- 65 HP]
[- 127 HP]
[- 87 HP]
Even though he was beaten, Gohan stood his ground receiving the attacks, refusing to fall.
'I won't lose to this mutant cabbage.' Swore Gohan mentally
Determined to win, the young man grabbed the monster's arms.
"Igi?" He questioned the creature without understanding what was happening.
"You won't win!" Shouted Gohan, as Saibamen struggled trying to free himself.
Holding the Saibamen, Gohan tries to gather the ki within him.
"GYIAAAAAH!" The monster shouted, kicking the young man to release him.
[- 35 HP]
[- 55 HP]
[- 62 HP]
Ignoring the pain, Gohan notices a strange sensation, as if energy begins to accumulate in his chest, then his body begins to vibrate slightly and a white aura completely covers him.
"GIIIIIIIIII!" The Saibamen shouts angrily, this time biting Gohan's left hand.
Still focused, Gohan tries to force the energy in his chest to circulate throughout his body.
Saibamen, realizing the flow of Ki, give up attacking and try everything to free themselves, such as jumping, flying and throwing their bodies back. But nothing proves effective against the young man's iron grip.
The energy intensifies within him, until he feels ready to open his eyes.
"DIE DEMON!" Gohan shouts, headbutting the creature.
[CRITICAL HIT X 4 DMG]
[OFF GUARD ENEMY X 2 DMG]
[1,200 DMG]
"ARGH!"
The monster shakes receiving the impact. Gohan lets go of the arms of the small creature who staggers back.
Taking advantage of the saberen being stunned, Gohan gathered his Ki again, this time focusing on his right arm. Without understanding why the process was faster than the previous attack, Gohan takes a step forward, aiming for the enemy's head.
"RECEIVE!" The Saiyan shouts, hitting his target squarely.
The wet impact sound is followed by a strange crack, but Gohan puts more force into the blow without noticing the peculiar noise coming from the Saibamen's skull.
"IAR-." The creature tried to scream in pain, but the impact of the fist cut off its exclamation.
[OFF GUARD ENEMY X 2 DMG]
[800 DMG]
Continuing the movement of the blow Gohan throws the small monster away, but before his opponent's body touches the ground he disappears in a cloud of pixels.
[K.O.]
"What?" He questions in surprise.
[YOU WIN!]
"I don't believe."
[TRAINING MODE OFF]
[+750 XP]
[+325 MIGHT]
[+198 AGILITY]
[+92 SPIRIT]
[+20 MENTAL]
[+25 Acrobatics Levels]
[+35 Athletics Levels]
[+24 Perception Levels]
[+75 Close Combat]
[+15 Intimidation]
[NEW ITEM]
COPPER ATTRIBUTE BEAN (+20%)
COPPER SKILL BEAN (+10)
COPPER SPECIAL ABILITIES (+10)
[NEW ITEM]
[+750 XP]
[+325 MIGHT]
[+198 AGILITY]
[+92 SPIRIT]
[+20 MENTAL]
[+25 Acrobatics Levels]
[+35 Athletics Levels]
[+24 Perception Levels]
[+75 Close Combat]
[+15 Intimidation]
[NEW ITEM]
COPPER ATTRIBUTE BEAN (+20%)
COPPER SKILL BEAN (+10)
COPPER SPECIAL ABILITIES (+10)
[NEW ITEM]
Gohan was surprised by the gains from the fight.
"Jesus Cristo… look at how many points I got." Says Gohan, happy with the result of the fight. "I even won items, it can't get any better."
[NEW KI SKILL]
[KI STRIKE]
[KI STRIKE]
With his jaw dropped, the young man couldn't contain his smile.
"I need to fight again."
[This feature is available once per day.]
"Damn it! It's no wonder that people in the original series prefer to enter here in pairs."
After his slight disappointment, Gohan's attention turned to the items he just received.
"Attribute beans are for improving one attribute, Strength, Agility, Spirituality and Mental. Then the others must be to improve my proficiency in what is described." theorized Gohan out loud.
But I'll save them now, I'll use them when I'm on my way to Namek.
[+1 MENTAL]
"I love it when the system agrees with me, but I will sleep now, I'm all screwed up from being beaten and burned with acid today."
[DBI:GG]
[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS IN A REGULAR BED]
[YOU'RE FULLY HEALED]
[YOU'RE FULLY HEALED]
Gohan wakes up slightly surprised to have recovered from all the injuries and pain from training the day before, but he soon remembers that it was due to the gamer powers that Zeno gave him.
"I was kind of expecting that, but it's still something-." Before Gohan could finish speaking, something touched his leg, taking him by surprise. "HAAAA!"
Scared, Gohan looked around looking for who was playing a trick on him, but he was alone.
"What-." Once again he is interrupted when something touches his arm this time. "I got."
Holding something long and furry, the young man finally realizes what was bothering him.
"A tail?" He questioned the young man in disbelief at the situation. "Do I have a tail?"
After a few minutes 'playing' with his new member, the young man decided to return to his training.
"I will leave the tail wrapped around my waist like other Saiyans don't. And now, let's see my progress."
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.750/1.000]
HP: 6,725
KP: 10,795
PL: 1,768.25
MIGHT: 1,345
AGILITY: 2,547
SPIRIT: 2,159
MENTAL: 1,022
Points: 100
[STATUS]
"My power level rose by 175.75 points in one day… it's not little, but I expected more."
Not wanting to spend too much time complaining, Gohan proceeded to evaluate his skill gains.
[SKILLS]
-General Skills:Acrobatics Lv. 26/100 [ Inept ]
Athletics Lv. 83/100 [ Inept ]
Perception Lv. 25/100 [ Inept ]
Stealth Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Thievery Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
-Combat Skills:
Close Combat Lv. 76/100 [ Inept ]
Ranged Combat Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
-Knowledge Skills:
Medicine Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Survival Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
-Social Skills:
Deception Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Diplomacy Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Intimidation Lv. 16/100 [ Inept ]
[SKILLS]
"My close combat has gone up a lot. Was that why my nervousness disappeared in the middle of the fight? Am I learning as I fight?" Gohan murmurs, examining his progress. "Will anything happen if I achieve 100% in any skill?"
[KI SKILLS]
-General Ki Techniques:-Offensive Ki Techniques:
Ki Strike Lv. 22/100 [ Inept ]
Cost: 250 KP Effect: Adds 22% of your MIGHT on physical attack .
-Defensive Ki Techniques:
[KI SKILLS]
Gohan couldn't keep the smile off his face as he examined the first Ki ability he learned to use during combat.
"That must be for my human perk, Human Adaptability."
[PERKS]
-Hidden Potential: A great power lies dormant within you-Human Adaptability: Greater capacity for learning new techniques and strategizing in combat.
-Zenkai Boost: Become significantly stronger after recovering from near-death experiences.
[PERKS]
"I need to take advantage of this, who knows, maybe I can teach myself to fly like Gohan did for Videl at the beginning of the Majin Buu saga."
Gohan lies on the ground, trying to recall how the original taught Videl how to use Ki.
'It's about controlling one's own Ki.' The voice of the original character echoed in his mind. 'You have to stay calm and breathe deeply…'
He closed his eyes and began to breathe deeply, focusing on feeling the energy within him.
'And little by little you will release the power that is within you.'
With the last sentence, he raised his hands as if he were holding a small ball in front of his torso.
Gohan felt warm, vivid Ki energy floating within him, as if it were traveling through the channels of his body until it reached his hands. He opened his eyes and saw a sphere of warm, translucent energy in the middle of his hands, illuminating the room with a faint glow. The feeling was incredible, as if I was touching pure energy.
He began to manipulate the Ki sphere between his hands as if it were an air balloon, making it move according to his wishes. He smiled, excited about the progress he had made.
"I think I can learn to fly now." Gohan comments, manipulating the Ki sphere. "Can I make it bigger?"
Focusing more energy into his hands, the Ki sphere expanded and its color became more solid.
"Interesting…" He says, pointing the sphere forward. "Can you shoot-."
At the same time, the sphere flew like an energy projectile.
In a few meters, the energy sphere falls to the ground without leaving a mark or making any noise.
"Ok…"
[NEW KI SKILL]
[KI BLAST]
[KI BLAST]
"Didn't expect that one."
[+12 SPIRIT]
"And this confirms that I train Spirit using Ki."
[KI SKILL]
Ki Blast Lv. 01/100 [ Novice ]Cost: 500 KP Effect: Throws a Ki sphere dealing 0.1% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
[KI SKILL]
"Weak and expensive, but I bet it will be powerful in the future." Said the young man taking a deep breath. "But for now, let's focus on flying."
Focusing again on his flight training, Gohan takes a deep breath, bringing his Ki to zero once again.
The energy circulated through his body again, and he slowly felt his body lifting off the ground, as if he were being pushed by an invisible force.
Even sitting down, Gohan felt free when his body was lifted off the ground.
[NEW KI SKILL]
[FLIGHT]
"UUUUUH!" exclaimed Gohan, opening his eyes. "This is amazing!" Celebrated the young man floating twenty centimeters off the ground.
The freedom of being in the air was incomparable, he felt like a bird flying freely in the sky without the pressure of the ground below. He walked around the temple getting used to the power until an idea appeared in his mind.
"How high can I go?"
Gohan began to fly upwards in a straight line, excited by the feeling of freedom and power beneath his body. The wind buzzed in his ears and the sensation of speed exhilarated him.
However, his enthusiasm was abruptly cut short when he felt his ki deplete.
"Hmm?" Questioned the young man who had been stuck in the air.
Quickly Gohan looked down, seeing the entrance as a small dot in the distance.
"I got fucked…"
His body began to free fall.
Panic took over him as he realized he was rapidly losing altitude. His heart beat wildly in his chest, and the fear of imminent death paralyzed him. The landscape below loomed dangerously close.
"I can't die, at least not like this. It will be the most pathetic death in Dragon Ball history."
Gohan closed his eyes, trying to avoid the fate that seemed inevitable.
But then, in a flash of desperation and determination, Gohan managed to access his power again, stopping 2 meters above the ground with his face facing the ground.
"Phew." Celebrated the young man.
Gohan's Ki had recovered enough to activate his power of flight once again, however the little Ki he had recovered did not last long.
"FUCK!"
[+5 SPIRIT]
Resulting in the young warrior falling face first onto the ground.
"Okay… there's no point in just having the power, I have to know how to use it."
[KI SKILLS]
Flight Lv. 15/100 [ Inept ]Cost: 50 KP/Minute Effect: Fly at speed 7.5% of your running speed .
[KI SKILLS]
"50 KP per minute is a good amount, it's no wonder Goku used the cloud to move around for so long." Gohan comments, analyzing his flight power. "But without KP there's no point in me staring at this table, let's get the weight clothes on and train."
[DBI:GG]
After working out, running and meditating to regain his strength, Gohan stares at his gains before activating training mode once again.
[+118 MIGHTY]
[+35 AGILITY]
[+15 SPIRIT]
[+17 Athletics Levels]
[ Athletics Reached Adep Rank ]
[+13 Meditate Levels]
[Meditate Reached Adep Rank]
[+35 AGILITY]
[+15 SPIRIT]
[+17 Athletics Levels]
[ Athletics Reached Adep Rank ]
[+13 Meditate Levels]
[Meditate Reached Adep Rank]
"Rank Up?" Curious, Gohan opened the windows to see the changes.
[SKILLS]
General Skills:Acrobatics Lv. 26/100 [ Inept ]
Athletics Lv. 1/100 [ Adep ]
Perception Lv. 25/100 [ Inept ]
Stealth Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Thievery Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Combat Skills:
Close Combat Lv. 76/100 [ Inept ]
Ranged Combat Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Knowledge Skills:
Medicine Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Survival Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Social Skills:
Deception Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Diplomacy Lv. 1/100 [ Inept ]
Intimidation Lv. 16/100 [ Inept ]
[SKILLS]
[SPECIAL ABILITIES ]
Meditate Lv. 1/100 [ Adep ] = Extra Regen 10% of stamina per minute, Extra Regen 1% of KP and HP per minute.[SPECIAL ABILITIES ]
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
"Meditate had a clear change, but what did I gain from the Athletics Rank Up?" Questions Gohan without noticing the changes. "I think it's better to focus on what gives me a return"
[TRAINING MODE ON]
[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200
Saibamen = PL 1,200 [V]
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
[Choose your opponent]
"Raditz has the same power level as a Saibamen, so it shouldn't be difficult to defeat him now that I'm stronger."
[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]
An aggressive guitar riff started playing followed by drums.
"What song is that?" The young man complains. "It's too fast for me to understand with my English telecourse."
Although the song was familiar, the speed at which the vocalist sang made it impossible for him to recognize it until a specific phrase was sung.
[Payback's a bitch motherfucker]
"Slayer?"
Before receiving the answer, the announcer's voice was present.
[Tonight, a true Saiyan warrior steps into the ring.
He's here to conquer, not compete.
Give it up for the ruthless,
the relentless…
RADITZ!]
He's here to conquer, not compete.
Give it up for the ruthless,
the relentless…
RADITZ!]
"Finally, a chance to get revenge on Kakarot's spawn." Loudly shouted the figure of Raditz.
Raditz lifted his chin proudly, his cold, calculating eyes staring at Gohan with disdain. His stance is imposing, his muscles tense beneath his fighting armor. A smug smile adorned his lips, revealing his unwavering confidence. His piercing gaze conveyed the clear message of a veteran warrior ready to fight to the death.
Gohan felt a chill down his spine, a strange fear and trepidation took over him. His heart sped up and his breathing became heavy. Carefully observing the smiling warrior in front of him.
"I'm stronger than before, why is he scaring me more than Saibaman?"
To the young warrior's surprise, the saiyan in front of him smiled.
"You understand me?"
"Of course I understand you, you bastard son of a low-class warrior."
Caught by surprise, Gohan was stunned by the being's response.
[READY?]
"Wait-."
[FIGHT!]
Without waiting, Raditz charged at Gohan, kicking the boy away.
[- 515 HP]
Falling away, Gohan felt anger bubble up inside him as he stood up. Raditz's cold eyes analyzed Gohan with contempt as he teased him.
"You really are pathetic. A weak and useless hybrid, without the courage of pure-blood Saiyans."
Gohan clenched his fists, ignoring the venomous words echoing in his mind. With a ferocious roar, he charged at Raditz, delivering quick and precise blows.
Raditz laughed loudly, dodging the attacks with ease.
"It's pathetic to see how you try to pass yourself off as a warrior, when in reality you're just a mere brat." Says Raditz, punching his nephew in the face.
[- 511 HP]
Gohan tried to defend himself from Raditz's sequence of blows, but something was different, Gohan was hesitating more than in the fight against Saibamen.
[- 175 HP]
[- 189 HP]
[- 215 HP]
Each Saiyan's punch took advantage of the young man's hesitation, leaving Gohan on the defensive trying to stay on his feet.
Raditz, with a cocky smile on his face, spoke as he easily dodged a desperate kick from Gohan.
"You're stronger than before and more determined to win, boy. But you lack the fury and bloodlust I felt when you destroyed my ship."
Gohan stopped, amazed at the level of consciousness of the being in front of him.
"The original Gohan may have been a crybaby, but when cornered he was capable of fighting with the will to kill."
Every punch, every kick from Raditz seemed to drain the strength of the young hybrid, who still tried to resist as best he could.
"You can't even defend yourself. You are weak, a real waste of Saiyan blood." sneered Raditz.
[- 327 HP]
Raditz knocks Gohan to the ground, laughing at his incompetence.
"You're so deplorable it's hilarious." Mocks the veteran warrior. "Even though you have a powerful body with extraordinary gifts and a system with infinite potential, you are still just a pathetic worm."
"How do you know?" Questions the young man, once again surprised by the level of consciousness of the being in front of him.
Instead of answering the question, Raditz smiled evilly as he raised his hand to perform his ultimate technique.
"Saturday Crush!"
Gohan tries to get up, but his legs give out, in a desperate attempt he tries to throw his body to the side, but it's too late.
[- 3,000 HP]
Raditz's beam hit Gohan squarely, knocking the young man down once again with an explosion of pain that spread throughout his body. The ground felt hot beneath him and the pain seemed to spread in bursts through his back and legs. Gohan screamed in vain, trying to ease the agony that flooded him.
The colors began to fade around him, and Gohan's vision began to blur. He could hear Raditz's arrogant laugh, but the voice seemed distorted and resembled more of an echo than the voice of a living being.
Gohan's vision darkened even more, and the pain began to intensify. He could feel the blood rushing through his veins, and the sensation that he was falling apart from the inside out.
"No... I can't... Let me..." Murmured Gohan, fainting due to the intensity of the pain and the lack of oxygen.
[YOU'RE OUT OF HP]
[YOU BLACKED OUT]
[DBI:GG]
[YOU BLACKED OUT]
[DBI:GG]
The was still high on the horizon, even though it had been two days for Gohan, for his parents it had only been a few minutes since he left to train.
Chi-Chi was sitting next to Goku's bed, her eyes fixed on her husband's face. He was hurt, but his smile still radiated an infectious energy.
Goku, with his body bandaged and his eyes half-closed, tried to cheer Chi-Chi up. She looked worried, and her hands were shaking slightly. Gohan had disobeyed Chi-Chi's order and left to train.
When he left, she was furious, but now the anger had given way to sadness and apprehension.
"Chichi." Goku said in a soft voice. "Gohan is a good boy. He has a strong heart and is determined to become stronger to help bring back the people who died defending the land. You should be proud of him."
Chichi sighed tiredly.
"I know, Goku. But he's so young and he's already facing so many dangers out there. And you… you're also stuck here in this bed… I don't know how to deal with all this."
Goku made a significant effort, but managed to free his hand and place it on Chi-Chi's shoulder.
"We face challenges to protect those we love. Gohan will learn a lot from these experiences. And you, taking care of me here in the hospital, is also a form of protection. You're amazing, you know that?"
Chi-Chi looked at Goku fondly.
"I just want him to be safe, Goku. Our family is the most important thing to me."
Goku smiled.
"And we're going to be okay, Chichi." Replied the smiling warrior.
The two remained silent for a moment, sharing the love and concern they felt for each other and their family.
[DBI:GG]
[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS ON THE FLOOR]
[YOU'RE PARTIALLY HEALED]
[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS ON THE FLOOR]
[YOU'RE PARTIALLY HEALED]
Gohan opened his eyes slowly, blinking against the bright light that hit him. His head throbbed like it was being hammered.
He tried to move, but a wave of pain shot through his body, pinning him to the ground.
"Damn it." Complained the young man. "I was beaten like a buggy dog in winter."
Getting used to the pain Gohan gets up and repairs the other windows in the system.
[+200 XP]
[+75 MIGHT]
[+28 AGILITY]
[+12 SPIRIT]
[+21 Acrobatics Levels]
[+4 Athletics Levels]
[+15 Perception Levels]
[+ 24 Close Combat]
[Close Combat Reached Adep Rank]
[+75 MIGHT]
[+28 AGILITY]
[+12 SPIRIT]
[+21 Acrobatics Levels]
[+4 Athletics Levels]
[+15 Perception Levels]
[+ 24 Close Combat]
[Close Combat Reached Adep Rank]
The gains were much smaller with the loss of Gohan, the XP was not enough for him to finally level up and now that Athletics was in Adept, his growth slowed precipitously.
"In addition to a few gains, I'm all broken and bruised." Complains Gohan irritated. "I wanted at least one good news today."
After venting his frustration, Gohan notices a window that he had unintentionally ignored.
[ZENKAI BOOST(20%)]
"Huh?" Questions Gohan, still groggy from the pain. "Status!" Shouted the curious young man.
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 1 [0.950/1.000]
HP: 9,225
KP: 13,230
PL: 2,214
MIGHT: 1,845
AGILITY: 3,132
SPIRIT: 2,646
MENTAL: 1,233
Points: 100
[STATUS]
"JESUS BLOOD HAS POWER!" The surprised young man shouts. "I went over two thousand with Power Boost alone?"
With such growth, the young man thought about going into training mode and summoning Nappa or even Vegeta, but as soon as the table appeared he stopped to think.
"The growth of Zenkai is to multiply the stats I have, not add them… so I better try to gain as much as possible before going to face Nappa and Vegeta."
[+ 5 MENTAL]
"Looks like someone agrees with me." Comment Gohan smiling. "Now enough nonsense and let's increase my training weight."
Boa noite pessoas,
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COMMENTS:
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Impressive looking forward to more of Gamer Gohan Si Adventures in DBZ verse world.
Super Bolic Time Chamber aka Hyperbolic Time Chamber.
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03) New Techniques and New Consequences
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Bom dia pessoas,
Look at that, more than seven thousand words in today's chapter huh... but it's better not to get used to it.
This chapter was very difficult to write because despite being an important part of the protagonist's training, I imagine it would be a bit boring and repetitive for you to read something like this.
Training-Training-Fight-LevelUp-Training-Training-Fight-LevelUp
That's why I tried to get rid of most of them in this chapter.
Ps: There is a reference to Anime and Tokusatsu in this chapter. Can you find out what they are?
"Today is the day!" Said Gohan feeling hopeful. "Today I will defeat Raditz."
After the defeat against his uncle and the Zenkai Boost he received, Gohan spent 7 days training in the suit that weighed 1 ton inside the Time room. He was so focused on increasing his power that he only registered the increase in Attribute.
Strength and Spirit rose a lot during the mornings.
He trained his physique by doing Saitama's routine several times each day, and now that he was stronger, he also was practicing flying and the few Ki techniques he had in between exercises. At the end of the day he fought the Saibamen.
It's a shame that for each victory against an enemy he had already defeated in Training Mode, he only gave 1% of XP. That's why it took him 7 days to reach level 2.
His Agility, Mental and skills increased due to an idea that Gohan put into practice. Extend his fights against Saibamen and practice while fighting. Things like dodge, ki techniques, and damage resistance.
The growth of skills and attributes during the fight is greater than when he was alone.
"I should have brought Krillin." The young man murmurs loudly. "My training gains would be better, he could have taught me the Kienzan and he would also get stronger."
With the new level Gohan also gained +100 attribute points that he could invest wherever he wanted, but he decided to save them, what he gained that really caught his attention were more items.
The young man chose Silver Special Abilities Bean, he was frustrated that the meditation was taking time to level up.
When the silver bean manifested in his hand, he didn't think twice and ate it thinking about increasing his meditation points.
"It tastes like mint… and metal."
"Do I recover all my HP and KP in 5 minutes?" Questions the surprised young man. "And do I regain a little life even without meditating? Nice!"
But the young man's joy is short-lived, Gohan remembers how he felt about losing against Raditz. Despite the bitter taste in his mouth, the defeat motivated him to train more fervently, he wanted to be as strong as possible to defeat his enemies and he worked hard to do so.
In addition to having become stronger with this 1 week of training, Gohan had also realized that he had not lost because he was weaker than his opponent.
He had lost for another reason.
"There's no point in marinating in sadness and misery, let's see what I have before the rematch against my uncle."
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 2 [1,052.5/2,000]
HP: 19,860
KP: 20,175
PL: 3,356
MIGHT: 3,972
AGILITY: 3,890
SPIRIT: 4,035
MENTAL: 1,527
Points: 300
With his morale boosted by his attributes in the Status window, Gohan didn't hesitate and started training mode by calling out Raditz.
Slayer's music started playing, followed by the same introduction from the announcer as the saiyan materialized in front of him.
Raditz appears with his arms crossed, looking arrogantly at Gohan.
"You've come for another beating, you dirty-blooded mongrel."
Gohan is angered by Raditz's words, but manages to center himself and regain his calm.
Raditz charges at Gohan and attacks with punches and kicks, but Gohan defends himself and dodges all the attacks with ease.
"It seems even an insignificant worm can learn a few tricks." Raditz growls scornfully at the young man.
Realizing that Gohan had no problem keeping up with him in hand-to-hand combat, the veteran warrior moves away and fires a burst of Ki Blast.
Without fear or hesitation in his gaze, Gohan repelled all the energy spheres with his hands.
Raditz's eyes widen, surprised by the younger warrior's skills.
"You may be stronger than before, but that's still not enough to win."
Gohan smiles and answers his opponent.
"Yes you are right."
Raditz freezes at Gohan's response, but then laughs in celebration.
"Finally! You useless brat." He laughs mockingly. "Did you finally understand?"
"I didn't lose you because I was weak." Accept Gohan. "I lost because I was scared."
His opponent crosses his arms and nods in agreement.
"But it wasn't the fear of facing someone stronger who could kill me." Continues Gohan "But it was the fear of taking the life of a sentient being."
In Gohan's first fight, fear made him lose confidence and become distracted. This ended up giving openings for his opponent to exploit while he hesitated to attack and even defend himself.
"You're less of a fool than I thought." Praises Raditz in a sarcastic tone. "But knowing your weakness is one thing, eliminating it is another-."
"No!" Exclaims Gohan cutting his opponent. "I will not become a cold-blooded killer. Just like the original Gohan, I will live with this fear for the rest of my life."
Confused by the young man's response, Raditz stares at him with a raised eyebrow.
Gohan assumes a wide base with his legs and summons his Ki that covers him.
"But how do you intend to fight against those who do not hesitate to kill?" Raditz questions, his voice thick with disbelief. "Are you going to let fear take over your life?"
Gohan closes his eyes and takes a deep breath, focusing on his insides. When he opens them again, a new determination shines in his eyes.
"I will not allow fear to dominate me." Gohan declares, clasping his hands at his sides in a posture familiar to any Dragon Ball fan. "Instead, I will use this fear as a constant reminder of the value of life. Every blow I strike will be with the awareness that I am protecting the weak who cannot defend by themselves, not just destroying my enemy."
Raditz lets out a short, dismissive laugh.
"Foolish, naive and hypocritical to boot." He scoffs. "You are doomed to fail."
Despite the insults, Gohan remains impassive and responds by continuing his technique.
"Kame…" A sphere of light formed in the middle of Gohan's hands.
Surprised by the response Raditz assumed his stance raising both hands towards Gohan, bringing his Ki to the surface preparing his counter attack.
"Hame…" The glow of the sphere intensified as the sound of energy boomed through the air.
"Double Mondey!" The veteran warrior shouts, firing two rays of light, one from each hand, towards his enemy.
"HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Gohan shouts, finishing performing the most iconic technique in Dragon Ball and perhaps all anime.
The two beams of energy crossed the air colliding between the two combatants, creating an explosion of light and heat that raised a dense cloud of dust.
The scene transformed into a mix of light and shadows, with the white light from the explosion illuminating the battlefield for a brief moment.
But once the dust began to clear, it became clear that Raditz's technique was more powerful. His energy beams began to engulf Gohan's, absorbing it and increasing its intensity, swallowing the place where the young hybrid was completely.
When the dust finally cleared, Raditz was surprised. He looked at the spot where Gohan was, but there were no signs of life.
"This is impossible! No matter how powerful the enemy is, there is no way a system construct can kill the user." Raditz said in distress.
"Thanks for the info." Whispered a voice behind Raditz.
The veteran tries to turn around quickly, but halfway through something hits his side.
[OFF GUARD ENEMY X 2 DMG]
[1,700 DMG]
Gohan's fist hit Raditz's liver, causing the Saiyan to double over in pain.
"Arghh." The older warrior groaned.
The force of the blow sent him staggering backwards, his Ki decreasing as he struggled to regain his balance. Raditz looked at Gohan, his eyes filled with fury and disbelief.
"How…how did you do that?" he gasped, grabbing your waist.
Gohan was standing, his heart pounding in his chest, staring at his agonizing enemy in front of him. He had never felt so alive, so powerful.
"From the beginning I didn't intend to win in the Ki contest." He said simply, his voice firm and unwavering. "It was just a distraction to catch you off guard, something easy since you don't know how to detect Ki."
Raditz sneered, his anger turning into contempt.
"And what's the point if you're not going to finish me-."
"KI STRIKE!" Gohan shouts, invoking his technique and cutting Raditz with a punch to the face.
[CRITICAL HIT X 4 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[27,664 DMG]
Raditz's face received the full force of Gohan's devastating punch.
His features contort in agony as the force of the blow sent him stumbling backwards, his legs curled beneath him. The sound of bones breaking echoed through the air as Raditz's face was severely deformed by the force of the punch.
His nose was crushed, his cheekbones broken, and his jaw dislocated, leaving him with a grotesque, swollen face that bore little resemblance to the proud Saiyan warrior he had once been.
Gohan's body was drenched in sweat, despite not having been hurt he was exhausted and low on Ki. He fell to the ground, panting as he tried to process what had just happened.
With a deep sigh, he closed his eyes and allowed himself a moment of rest. The weight of the victory was overwhelming and he couldn't help but feel pride and accomplishment.
"I did it…" He whispered to himself, a smile spreading across his face. "I defeated that asshole."
[+1,200 XP]
[+ 1 Level]
[+127 MIGHT]
[+325 AGILITY]
[+87 SPIRIT]
[+27 MENTAL]
[+7 Ki Strike]
[+7 Acrobatics Levels]
[+5 Athletics Levels]
[+3 Perception Levels]
[+72 Stealth]
[+ 13 Close Combat]
[+7 Intimidation]
"Not bad, but I thought I would gain something more interesting by winning this fight."
"I think I spoke too soon."
Gohan looked at the reward options with interest.
Double Mondey was not a unique technique that caught his attention as it was similar to most continuous KI attacks, the points in Intimidation he had several ways to obtain, but now the points in Oozaru...
The boy was not sure if he would be able to master the super Saiyan form before he got to Namek, so he made sure he got a power boost just in case.
"Maybe if I reach a high level, will I be able to control myself like Vegeta?"
Motivated by the X10 bonus from the primate form, Gohan chooses the gorilla option.
As soon as he received the points, another window opened.
"Nice"
Excited, he opened the Status window and saw that it was true and took out a silver attribute bean and stored it.
"I think I can face Nappa tomorrow." The young man commented, getting up and walking towards his bed.
"KAME… HAME… HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
The beam flew in the opposite direction of the time room's entrance as the floor vibrated with the energy it released.
Smiling, Gohan could feel his Spirit increasing with each repetition. He was determined to master this attack as he knew it would be a powerful weapon against his enemies.
"KAME… HAME… HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Gohan shouted, launching a wave of powerful energy in the direction opposite the entrance to the time room.
The attack was devastating, and Gohan felt a great sense of satisfaction. He repeated the movement several times, each time with more precision and strength.
"Finally!" Exclaimed Gohan, falling to the floor.
The whole day of training finally paid off when the young man reached Expert Rank in his new attack.
After a few minutes of meditating, Gohan gets up, already choosing his new opponent.
Gohan was already ready for a bombastic song, which would match the great warrior's style, but he was surprised by the whisper of a voice.
At least until the music explodes throughout the room followed by the announcer's introduction.
Nappa materialized in a cloud of pixels, he was huge, with imposing musculature that seemed almost dazzling. His presence was intimidating, exuding a power that Gohan had never seen before.
"It seems that Kakoroto's spawn decided to face me." Nappa said, smiling mischievously. "You don't stand a chance brat."
Gohan was Unaffected by bravado thanks to his experience losing and then winning against Raditz. He knew he needed to act quickly before Nappa easily dismantled him.
Gohan and Nappa charged at each other, the two warriors clashed exchanging punches with intensity that reverberated through the ground around them.
"So you only needed to be beaten by your uncle to become a man, you brat." Nappa comments, taking a step forward and dodging a kick.
An icy fury takes over Gohan, who spins his body, punching Nappa in the stomach, throwing him away.
"Shut up and fight, you fucking The Rock clone with a mustache." Gohan grumbled, facing his opponent.
Nappa frowned and brought his Ki to the surface.
"Pathetic Earthling, I will break all your bones."
Furious, Nappa attacked the boy, starting a brutal and violent combo of punches and kicks, Gohan in turn retaliated in kind, each of the warriors was trying to dominate the other, establishing the rhythm of the battle.
What followed was a display of violence and brutality that looked more like two beasts trying to kill each other than two warriors fighting.
[125 DMG]
[- 375 HP]
[187 DMG]
[- 407 HP]
[215 DMG]
Gohan tried to avoid Nappa's blows while attacking, but Nappa was faster, and stronger than Raditz. Nappa's punches and kicks impacted Gohan's body, while the young man's caused less damage.
[157 DMG]
[- 389 HP]
[204 DMG]
[- 445 HP]
'If I continue like this I will lose.'
Changing strategy, Gohan crosses his arms in front of his body, receiving Nappa's next kick in the chest.
[- 78 HP]
Gohan received little damage thanks to his raised guard and took advantage of the impact of the blow to jump back, already falling into the posture of his most powerful attack.
"Kamehameha!" Shouted the young man.
The attack caught Nappa by surprise, the veteran warrior was unable to dodge but managed to raise his guard and receive the attack directly.
[574 DMG]
When the dust caused by the attack's explosion settled, Nappa's form was revealed with pieces of destroyed armor, but his body contained few injuries.
"Not bad brat, I almost felt that one." The older warrior laughed mockingly.
"Damn it."Gohan grumbles irritably.
'The attack was good, but this guy is just very resilient.'' Gohan thought to himself. 'And since he's also faster and more experienced than me… I'm fucked.'
"ROAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!" Nappa roared, firing a blast of ki from his mouth.
As he was lost in his thoughts, Gohan was taken by surprise.
[- 5,000 HP]
"Co-coward." Gohan complains, losing consciousness. "Cheater."
"WHO CARES?! I WON" shouted a bombastic voice. "HAHAHAHAHA!"
"Shit." Gohan groans in pain, standing up.
"This is the window of shame." Said the young man, getting up discouraged.
Despite losing the fight, Gohan quickly regained his focus to what he received from the fight yesterday.
"Damn! Adept Rank skills have risen a lot. Is it because I used them in a fight against someone stronger than me?"
"Even the zenkai boost was greater than with Raditz."
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 3 [3,052/4,000]
HP: 30,855
KP: 29,115
PL: 4,922
MIGHT: 6,171
AGILITY: 5,646
SPIRIT: 5,823
MENTAL: 2,048
Points: 400
"I'm stronger than Nappa, but if I mess around like I did yesterday, he'll win." Said Gohan analyzing his Status. "And if you take into account that Nappa is 'probably' dumber than me… his Might must be way bigger than mine."
Putting on his training clothes Gohan pondered what he could have done differently to have won the fight against Nappa. He knew that even though he was defeated, there were some things he could have done better. He remembered how Nappa had dominated him with his brute strength and his ability to resist damage.
"That guy was practically a wall of stones." Gohan complains, remembering the fight.
Even taking damage, Nappa received Gohan's blows without hesitation, making Gohan feel weak and desperate.
"Is there a technique to simulate all that resilience?" The young man theorized out loud.
Developing a defense technique wouldn't be a problem for the Saiyan hybrid thanks to his perks, but how would he train defense without someone to attack him?
"Hmm." Murmured Gohan, looking at the half-pound suit he had already abandoned. "I think I how…"
[DBI:GG]
With a sneer, Nappa faced Gohan head on, ready to fight the young man once again. But this time the young man smiled back full of confidence, as if he was sure he would win.
Annoyed by his confidence, Nappa did what came naturally to him, he began to insult his opponent.
"You're smiling too much for a worm who went to sleep with his ass beaten yesterday."
"And you talk too loud for a bald old limp dick asshole."
Nappa's eyes widened at the little warrior's statement.
"What did you just say?" He roared as his body was engulfed by his Ki.
"I mean there are only two reasons why someone so old and grumpy would go around the galaxy destroying everything without ever picking up some women." Said Gohan, taking a fighting stance and bringing his ki to the surface. "The first is that he is impotent."
"And what's the second one?" Nappa asks, about to explode with rage.
"He needs courage to declare himself to his charming prince who he lives with."
"I KILL YOU!" Shouted Nappa, flying towards Gohan.
Nappa throws a direct punch at Gohan, who defends himself by raising only one arm to intercept the punch.
[- 600]
Anticipating his victory, the bald warrior smiles, colliding his fist against the small opponent's forearm. But to his surprise, Gohan also smiles with his body engulfed by a strange and thin transparent bluish aura.
[Lord Camelot Resist 257]
"What?" Questions Nappa out loud.
"Did you notice?" Gohan asked with a mischievous smile. "It's my new technique."
[Real Damage is -343]
"It's not good for resisting more powerful attacks, but it's perfect for the course of the fight against 'normal' blows."
[KI SKILLS]
-Lord Camelot Lv. 82/100 [ Adept ]
Cost: 200 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 4.1% of your SPIRIT in damage.
[KI SKILLS]
Nappa's eyes widened in surprise, his face turning red with anger.
"YOU MISERABLE BRAT!" Nappa shouted in frustration.
Both throw punches at each other, only to have them collide in a muffled explosion sound.
[187 DMG]
[- 132 HP]
Gohan puffs out his chest with pride, the training hadn't been easy to improve Lord Camelot, he spent the whole day whipping his own back, using the half half ton clothes like a whip.
'I looked like an opus dei priest self-flagellating himself.' Thinks Gohan, remembering the previous day.
"Bastard-." Nappa tries to complain but is cut by a punch to the stomach that makes him bend over.
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[425 DMG]
"Talk less and fight more."
The fight continued with the warriors exchanging punches, kicks and even energy blasts from Nappa. During the exchange Gohan continued to use Lord Kamelot frequently to maintain the advantage.
"Fuck me." Gohan complains, deactivating his ability.
Nappa notices his opponent's frustration and notices the blue aura disappearing.
"Running out of Ki brat?" Questions Nappa mocking his opponent. "That's what happens when brats come to fight real warriors."
Gohan cursed himself for not paying attention to his KP and for having used his power without moderation, as if his Ki reserve was infinite. He was furious with himself for doing everything wrong, which led to an unfavorable situation.
Nappa approached Gohan brimming with pride.
"You think you can defeat me?"
Gohan replied, glaring at him.
"Yes."Said the young man, smirking.
"Then you are a greater fool than your father." Nappa replied, charging his Ki.
In response, Gohan also brought his Ki to the surface, preparing to attack.
"Bureiku Kyanon!" Nappa roared, firing a beam of energy from his mouth.
"Kamehameha!" Gohan shouted, firing at his opponent.
The rays collided, although at first glance they were equal, Nappa's attack began to dominate Gohan's. But despite the situation, the young man was smiling confidently.
'This kid is going to do something bizarre.' The warrior thought, firing a beam of energy from his mouth.
"Kamehameha X 4!" Gohan shouted.
Thanks to Gohan reaching an expert level, he can increase its kamehameha power.
Effect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend.
Gohan had gambled all his remaining Ki trying to overpower his opponent's attack.
"AAARGHH!" Nappa screamed in pain as he received the attack inside his mouth.
The monstrous damage was compounded by hitting Nappa inside his mouth, ignoring the formidable resistances the veteran warrior had.
"AAAAAAAARGH!!" Gohan roared, falling to the ground.
A burning, searing pain penetrated his hands and reverberated throughout the young man's body.
But instead of celebrating, Gohan falls to his knees.
"My hands." The young man groaned in agony.
It was a horrible sensation of intense burning in his hands, as if the skin was being touched by fire, along with sharp stabs, as if thousands of hot needles were being inserted into the area.
Gohan's hands were blackened and raw, as if they had been burned and flayed.
"What the hell?" Questioned the desperate young man.
Desperate to end his pain, the young man ignored the windows warning of his rewards for victory and sat down to meditate and heal.
After 5 minutes Gohan opened his eyes and noticed that the wounds had closed and the color had started to return to normal, but his hands still hurt and were covered in scabs.
"Hit points are full, but physically I'm still hurt?" Questions the helpless young man. "At least now I know that lost limbs will not be regenerated."
Standing up slowly, being careful not to touch anything with his hands, Gohan begins to mentally open the warning windows.
Without thinking twice, Gohan got the 85 points from Oozaru first.
"I think he had more points for this because he is a more veteran warrior and has used this skill more times."
Oozaru Lv. 10/100 [ Expert ] = X 10 Power Level. Able to maintain some control. User can maintain some semblance of control, enough to choose a target when in rage.
Looking at the transformation text, now at master level, Gohan notices the extra information.
"Some semblance of control is better than none…"
As for the silver bean reward, he chose 1 special Abilities.
"Speaking of which, where are these items?"
[3] Copper Skill Bean(+10)
[3] Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[1] Silver Attribute Bean(+100)
[1] Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
"I'm going to have a ton of supplies when we go to Namek. Now just check the status before going to sleep."
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 4 [7,052/7,500]
HP: 38,480
KP: 35,550
PL: 5,961
MIGHT: 7,696
AGILITY: 6,671
SPIRIT: 7,110
MENTAL: 2,368
Points: 500
"It doesn't seem like much, but with that level of power I could have prolonged the fight against the original Nappa. Giving Goku more time to arrive." Said Gohan analyzing his new power level. "But there's no point in theorizing about past events.
Said the Young Man walking towards his bed.
"I hope sleeping in my bed heals these wounds."
The next day Gohan woke up with his hands completely healed. Happy with the result of a good night's sleep, he called up the training table, already planning what his next fight would be at the end of the day.
But reality hit him harder than Raditz did in his first fight.
The difference of more than twelve thousand PL between Gohan and Vegeta left the young man apprehensive. So Gohan decided to focus on his training until the difference was less obvious and found out why his hands had hurt so much.
To do this, he spent the whole day firing Kamehamehas multiplied in different ways, x2,
and even x4 times that had hurt him so much.
The first two made his skin burn, but it didn't hurt or leave any marks. The x4 made his skin hurt and left small burns, only this time, less aggressive than yesterday.
"Why that?" Gohan asked, talking to himself. "Is it because it improved my MIGHT and SPIRIT? Maybe it was because it improved my attack skill level?" Questioned the Young Man.
…
"Maybe it was because of the 3? The two attributes increase and skill increases?"
"Good to know." Said the young man with the system's response. "At least now I know what happens when I overdo it."
Understanding a little more about the mechanics of his power, Gohan gets up, putting on his weighted clothes, ready to continue his training.
"I will continue my physical training mixed with my ki training." Said the young man thinking out loud. "Ki Strike, Ki Blast and Flight need to reach Expert… as for Kamehameha."
Effect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend.
"What will happen if I pass Expert rank?"
Curious about his own train of thought, Gohan gave a mental command to his system and 3 Copper Skill Beans from his inventory were transferred to his hand which the young man was not excited about eating.
"Argh! It tastes like metal and dirt."
Effect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend. User can slightly bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
"In addition to reducing consumption, now I can curve the radius of the attack and I can let the attack throw me back… according to Newton's third law!?" Gohan repeated in surprise. "I never thought I'd have a physics class in Dragon Ball, but I guess this means I can use Ki techniques to throw myself backwards to evade attacks or try to move faster?"
"I love it when I'm right." Gohan comments with a smile. "But I don't remember being so good at this kind of critical thinking in my other life… is that because my mental attribute is increasing?"
"It makes sense, the attribute is not exactly pure intelligence, mental must be a sum of intelligence, wisdom and memory."
"WAIT!" The young man shouts, realizing another mechanic of his system. "In addition to my Human Adaptability perk, is it Mental that affects me learning new skills?",
Finishing his complaints, Gohan looks towards the void opposite the entrance.
"I need to venture away from the entrance."
With the ambition to surpass his limits, Gohan ventured beyond the entrance to the Room of Time, seeking a more challenging environment to hone his skills. As he moved away from the known area, he came across a distinct atmosphere.
The thin air made breathing difficult, eliciting a smile of anticipation from the young warrior prepared for the challenge. Without hesitation, he began his training routine inspired by Saitama, which he already mastered masterfully.
The first set was completed with the same efficiency and speed as always, but Gohan noticed an accelerated drain on his stamina. The scorching heat intensified the challenge, but he recognized that this was part of the plan. Ignoring the discomfort, he placed himself on the floor to begin the second set.
But halfway through the push-ups, he felt a relief that would only last a short time.
The temperature plummeted drastically, replacing the heat with an icy cold. The sudden change punished Gohan's body, making him fall to the ground shaking.
Gohan fell to the ground as the cold reached its maximum, the young man let out a groan of pain and despair, but he stood up quickly, refusing to give in.
The new conditions turned family training into hell, but Gohan knew it was crucial for his evolution. With each movement, his muscles contracted and weakened, but he persevered, motivated by overcoming the test.
Hours passed as Gohan persisted in his arduous journey. His energy was gone, and his body showed small wounds caused by alternate contact with the ground, sometimes freezing and sometimes scorching.
Finally, after a day of exhausting training, he concluded the session with a smile and deep fatigue, limping back to the entrance.
"And I still have to fight Nappa." Gohan murmured, deciding to meditate to regain his strength before the battle.
Upon reaching the entrance area, he turned towards the white expanse, contemplating the challenges overcome by venturing beyond the known, the pains and agonies faced in a hostile environment.
"And today was just the first day." He concluded with determination in his voice.
For 40 days, Gohan underwent rigorous training away from the entrance to the Room of Time.
The weather conditions tortured him physically and mentally, but the rewards were worth the suffering.
In addition to his attributes, his Ki Skills increased exponentially.
[+ 67 Acrobatics Levels]
[Acrobatics Reached Master Rank]
[+ 66 Acrobatics Levels]
[+ 99 Athletics Levels]
[Athletics Reached Master Rank]
[+ 4 Athletics Levels]
[+68 Perception Levels]
[Perception Reached Expert Rank]
[+21 Perception Levels]
[+81 Close Combat]
[Close Combat Reached Master Rank]
[+ 56 Close Combat]
[+1 Ranged Combat]
[Perception Reached Expert Rank]
[+100 Ranged Combat]
[Perception Reached Master Rank]
[+25 Ranged Combat]
Although the last few days have been less productive with my growth, the total of 40 days are notable in their status.
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 5 [8,252/10,000]
HP: 113,375
KP: 101,425
PL: 17,158.5
MIGHT: 22,675
AGILITY: 17,261
SPIRIT: 20,285
MENTAL: 8,413
Points: 600
"Who knows, maybe in the future I'll be able to fight even farther away too, at least Might would go up a lot."
"Almost equal power level and one extra level." Commented Gohan choosing Vegeta.
This time the music plays loud and fast, reminiscent of classic heavy metal.
[I was born into a scene of angriness and greed
And dominance and persecution
My mother was a queen, my father I've never seen
I was never meant to be
And now I spend my time looking all around
For a man that's nowhere to be found
Until I find him I'm never gonna stop searching
I'm gonna find my man, gonna travel around]
"I don't know the song… but I'd bet the band is Iron Maiden."
"Wrathchild?" Questioned Gohan without remembering the song. "At least it has to do with Vegeta's childhood… I think."
At the end of the chorus, the pixel cloud manifests itself, materializing the prince of the Saiyans with his eyes closed.
[From the depths of space,
a warrior of unrivaled ruthlessness!
He is the fighter who scoffs at your applause!
The conqueror who rages in the face of your cheer!
He is the prince of a fallen kingdom, a sovereign of strength...
He is VEGETA!
Gohan looked at Vegeta with a mixture of respect and challenge.
The Saiyan prince was one of Dragon Ball's most iconic characters and one of his favorites in his past life along with the original Gohan, being able to fight him was an honor for the reincarnated Gohan.
"It took you a long time to challenge me, brat." Comments Vegeta, opening his eyes.
"Let's see if you can fight on equal terms against an elite warrior."
They both prepared themselves in their battle stances, summoning their ki.
The two charged at each other, flying over the white ground of the temple and colliding in an exchange of punches.
"RAAAAAAAAGH!" The warriors shouted, exchanging blows.
[1.378 DMG]
[- 2.109 HP]
[1.704 DMG]
[- 2.331 HP]
Gohan struggled at first to keep up with Vegeta in mid-flight, something that was previously impossible for him. But now, thanks to the hours of training dedicated to his Ki Skills, he was able to keep pace with his powerful opponent.
Vegeta looked at Gohan with a savage smile.
"Are you really ready to face the prince of all Saiyans?" He asked as he fired a ki blast.
Gohan focused on maintaining his balance and avoiding Vegeta's attacks.
"More than ready." Gohan replied, dodging and deflecting the attacks.
They continued to fight for some time, each trying to surpass the other in speed and strength.
Gohan was only able to match Vegeta thanks to the Lord Camelot technique, which reduced part of Vegeta's damage.
[1.781 DMG]
[- 1.847 HP]
[2.104 DMG]
[- 2.331 HP]
[2.554 DMG]
[- 2.531 HP]
"Humpf." Vegeta grumbled, moving away from Gohan. "An interesting technique you created, it proves that you are not a complete idiot like your father."
Surprised by the almost compliment, Gohan smiled, happy to have been recognized by the prince.
"A shame that you use your talents in cowardly tactics instead of fighting like an honorable Saiyan warrior."
Gohan's jaw dropped instantly, shocked by how fast he was back to insulting him.
"You know what? I'll give you a chance." He smiled arrogantly at Gohan, opening his arms. "Show me what you're capable of."
Quickly, Gohan recovered from his surprise and his blood began to boil at his opponent's comments.
"Ok…" Gohan said, closing his eyes. "Let's fucking go."
The young man concentrated on charging his Ki. This time, the energy aura manifested differently than usual.
"What is that?" Vegeta questioned, curious.
The Ki covering Gohan's body fluctuated at a frequency that made the young man look like a candle flickering in the wind. Feeling the energy flow through his body, his muscles began to vibrate in response, his skin took on a reddish tone and veins bulge across his body. His heart was already accelerating with the rhythm of his ki.
Then the energy aura stabilized, now oscillating at a speed that was difficult to follow, it seemed like just a thin layer of red light that surrounded the young man.
His body behaved differently, the muscles in Gohan's body were more compact and defined, and his heart beat at a faster pace than normal.
"I call it Clock-Up!" Exclaimed Gohan, disappearing from Vegeta's sight.
Vegeta's mouth is open, only for the screen to be closed with a punch to the chin.
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[4,730 DMG]
The prince staggered back.
"What cheap trick is this?" Vegeta grumbled, passing his hand over his mouth.
With a mischievous smile, Gohan explains to the prince.
"I tried to replicate Kaio-Ken, but I wasn't able to." Gohan commented in a technical tone. "I don't have enough information and my body couldn't handle the load. I suffered from torn muscles, heart overload and severe headaches."
A chill runs down Gohan's back, just remembering the pain. If it weren't for the system's ability to heal 100% after sleeping, it would need weeks, or even months, to recover from the damage to its body.
"Humph!" Vegeta grumbled, mocking Gohan. "Weak."
A vein popped out on the young man's forehead, and he maintained his composure.
"So, I created this technique that only increases my speed, Clock-Up. The problem is that it works in small bursts and consumes a lot of Ki."
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP Each Speed Burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X2.78 for 5 seconds.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.
In response, the Saiyan prince laughed loudly.
"It makes sense for a half breed to create something so-." Vegeta tried to insult him, but was cut off again with a punch to the middle of his face.
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[5,126 DMG]
"Damn!" Vegeta growled, furious.
"It's not a good technique for prolonged fights." Gohan said, giving a slutty smile. "But it's great for surprise attacks."
"Humph! Great for cowards-." Vegeta tried to insult him once again, only to be cut off this time with a kick to the ear.
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[4,854 DMG]
"STOP CUTTING ME!"
The prince charged, flying in a blind rage. Gohan clenched his fists, waiting for the right time.
"DIE!" Shouted Vegeta, kicking.
But before his blow connected, Gohan disappeared.
"How?" Questioned Vegeta, turning to face the boy twenty meters away.
"You can use it in strategic withdrawals too." Gohan replied smiling.
Fed up with his opponent's tricks, Vegeta roars angrily. His body is completely engulfed by intense Ki like the flames of hell, his power makes the ground around him shake as if an earthquake is happening.
"O boy..." Gohan murmured worriedly.
Suddenly Vegeta exploded in propulsive energy, charging at Gohan with maximum strength, without giving him time to activate the Clock-Up.
"RAAAAAR!" shouted Vegeta, throwing a powerful punch at Gohan's head.
[- 9,984 HP]
The impact sent Gohan's body flying, landing on the ground 20 meters away. But the prince of Saiyans didn't give up, he flew over the young man, landing with a knee in his stomach, only to then mount on top to beat him.
[- 79,984 HP]
"YOU - WILL - PAY - FOR - EVERY - COWARD - COWARD!" Shouted Vegeta, hammering each punch aimed at Gohan.
[- 2,783 HP]
[- 3,217 HP]
[- 2,899 HP]
[- 2,901 HP]
[- 3,004 HP]
With arms raised, Gohan managed to protect himself from the worst, but he was still grunting in pain. Desperate to get out of the situation, he stretched out his right leg and charged it with energy preparing for an attack.
"KI STRIKE!"
[37,751 DMG]
The kick energized by the technique hits the base of Vegeta's back.
Vegeta expelled the air from his lungs in reaction to the pain, his spine transmitting the intense pain after Gohan's kick throughout his body. He tried to get up, but his body refused to obey the command, throwing him to the ground to the side. The energy flowing through his body seemed to freeze, leaving him paralyzed on the ground.
In a stroke of luck, Gohan had hit the base of his opponent's spine, causing a lot of pain and a short paralysis.
The young man stands up and looks at the proud defenseless warrior on the ground. Gohan hesitated for a second to take advantage of the situation, but he quickly remembered the importance of this training.
"On Namek, the real Vegeta will be much more powerful than this…"
With a bitter taste in his mouth, Gohan stomped his opponent with several Ki Strike attacks.
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[73,754 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[69,987 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[73,725 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[71,574 DMG]
"That's no way to win a fight."
Gohan's sadness and anguish only lasts for a short time as he notices the reward windows for his victory.
"I'm feeling a little better already."
[+22 Clock-Up]
[Clock-Up Reached Expert Rank]
[+56 Clock-Up]
[+25 Flight]
[+15 Ki Strike]
[Clock-Up Reached Master Rank]
[+42 Ki Strike]
[+15 Lord Camelot]
[+16 Acrobatics Levels]
[+8 Athletics Levels]
[+11 Perception Levels]
[+8 Close Combat]
[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]
Despite his joy, his vision began to get blurry.
"Hmm?" Murmurs Gohan confused.
Gohan felt weak, falling to the ground, his chest hurting and the pain spreading throughout his body. He tried to get up, but his legs wouldn't obey the command. His vision started to get blurry and he felt his head hurt more.
Panic and fear invaded his mind.
'What is happening?' In addition to the pain, Gohan's body felt like it weighed over a thousand tons. 'Is this the consequence of using Overclocking for so long?'
Things began to spin around him and he fell backwards onto the ground, finally losing consciousness.
Boa noite pessoas,
Oozaru Vegeta is still missing, why didn't I keep writing until I put the fight in this chapter?
Real life stopped me.
…
And remembering that I'm still looking for a Beta Reader, if you're interested leave me a message.
If you want to talk to me you can find me on X(Twitter) , search for renanp1m .
COMMENTS:
-Kamui_Yurinagi(Webnovel):
Thanks for the chapter and keep up the amazing work and as for romantic pairing then keep it Canon and if you want a bit different then add Erasa to the romantic pairing.
-Renan:
Thanks for the compliment.
Keeping Videl is one of the options. But now Erasa… I hadn't considered her. I'll think about this a little.
-RamblingFool(Webnovel):
Dodge!
-Renan:
It warms my heart every time I see a reference to TFS's work in the comments.
-Fullmetalblazer(Questionablequesting):,
A free girl for Gohan's Harem is Zangya All he has to do is save her from Bojack and stick up for her when the other z fighters want to try to kill her after word.
-Renan:
I rewatched the film Zangya appears today at lunch.
If there is no other time when she appears, then I think she is very shallow as a character.
Which isn't bad, it gives me room to work with her however I want.
-Yume(Questionablequesting):
Seems fun so far, looking forward to what you come up with next, just a shame you went with the typical aggressive "entertain me or I kill you" ROB.
FeMC wise no one beats Bulma, she's smart, rich and supports the one she's with even if they are a worse genocidal mad man than Hitler. She can also make better tech than anyone else can (she made a shrink ray when she was 16 and fixed a space ship when she was 6), only one who comes close to her in utility and intellect is Android 21 and she doesn't exists outside of one very specific verse.
-Renan:
It was a really lazy strategy on my part to use this, but I was so excited to get started that I ended up going with it.
And I also agree that Bulma is the top 3 best girl in the entire Dragon Ball Canon, even taking into account the girls from the expanded universe.[/warning]
Look at that, more than seven thousand words in today's chapter huh... but it's better not to get used to it.
This chapter was very difficult to write because despite being an important part of the protagonist's training, I imagine it would be a bit boring and repetitive for you to read something like this.
Training-Training-Fight-LevelUp-Training-Training-Fight-LevelUp
That's why I tried to get rid of most of them in this chapter.
Ps: There is a reference to Anime and Tokusatsu in this chapter. Can you find out what they are?
"Today is the day!" Said Gohan feeling hopeful. "Today I will defeat Raditz."
After the defeat against his uncle and the Zenkai Boost he received, Gohan spent 7 days training in the suit that weighed 1 ton inside the Time room. He was so focused on increasing his power that he only registered the increase in Attribute.
[+2,127 MIGHT]
[+758 AGILITY]
[+1,389 SPIRIT]
[+289 MENTAL]
[+758 AGILITY]
[+1,389 SPIRIT]
[+289 MENTAL]
Strength and Spirit rose a lot during the mornings.
He trained his physique by doing Saitama's routine several times each day, and now that he was stronger, he also was practicing flying and the few Ki techniques he had in between exercises. At the end of the day he fought the Saibamen.
It's a shame that for each victory against an enemy he had already defeated in Training Mode, he only gave 1% of XP. That's why it took him 7 days to reach level 2.
[+ 1 Level]
His Agility, Mental and skills increased due to an idea that Gohan put into practice. Extend his fights against Saibamen and practice while fighting. Things like dodge, ki techniques, and damage resistance.
The growth of skills and attributes during the fight is greater than when he was alone.
"I should have brought Krillin." The young man murmurs loudly. "My training gains would be better, he could have taught me the Kienzan and he would also get stronger."
With the new level Gohan also gained +100 attribute points that he could invest wherever he wanted, but he decided to save them, what he gained that really caught his attention were more items.
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Silver Attribute Bean (+50%)
Silver Skill Bean (+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean (+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Silver Attribute Bean (+50%)
Silver Skill Bean (+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean (+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
The young man chose Silver Special Abilities Bean, he was frustrated that the meditation was taking time to level up.
[SPECIAL ABILITIES ]
Meditate Lv. 24/100 [ Adept ] = Extra Regen 100% of stamina per minute, Regen 4.8% of KP and HP per minute.[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
When the silver bean manifested in his hand, he didn't think twice and ate it thinking about increasing his meditation points.
"It tastes like mint… and metal."
[+76 Meditate Levels]
[Meditate Reached Expert Rank]
[+24 Meditate Levels]
[SPECIAL ABILITIES ]
Meditate Lv. 24/100 [ Expert ] = Regen 100% of stamina per minute, Regen 20% KP and HP per minute. Passive regen KP and HP 0.24% per minute.[Meditate Reached Expert Rank]
[+24 Meditate Levels]
[SPECIAL ABILITIES ]
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
"Do I recover all my HP and KP in 5 minutes?" Questions the surprised young man. "And do I regain a little life even without meditating? Nice!"
But the young man's joy is short-lived, Gohan remembers how he felt about losing against Raditz. Despite the bitter taste in his mouth, the defeat motivated him to train more fervently, he wanted to be as strong as possible to defeat his enemies and he worked hard to do so.
In addition to having become stronger with this 1 week of training, Gohan had also realized that he had not lost because he was weaker than his opponent.
He had lost for another reason.
"There's no point in marinating in sadness and misery, let's see what I have before the rematch against my uncle."
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 2 [1,052.5/2,000]
HP: 19,860
KP: 20,175
PL: 3,356
MIGHT: 3,972
AGILITY: 3,890
SPIRIT: 4,035
MENTAL: 1,527
Points: 300
[STATUS]
With his morale boosted by his attributes in the Status window, Gohan didn't hesitate and started training mode by calling out Raditz.
[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]
Slayer's music started playing, followed by the same introduction from the announcer as the saiyan materialized in front of him.
Raditz appears with his arms crossed, looking arrogantly at Gohan.
"You've come for another beating, you dirty-blooded mongrel."
[READY?]
Gohan is angered by Raditz's words, but manages to center himself and regain his calm.
[FIGHT!]
Raditz charges at Gohan and attacks with punches and kicks, but Gohan defends himself and dodges all the attacks with ease.
"It seems even an insignificant worm can learn a few tricks." Raditz growls scornfully at the young man.
Realizing that Gohan had no problem keeping up with him in hand-to-hand combat, the veteran warrior moves away and fires a burst of Ki Blast.
Without fear or hesitation in his gaze, Gohan repelled all the energy spheres with his hands.
Raditz's eyes widen, surprised by the younger warrior's skills.
"You may be stronger than before, but that's still not enough to win."
Gohan smiles and answers his opponent.
"Yes you are right."
Raditz freezes at Gohan's response, but then laughs in celebration.
"Finally! You useless brat." He laughs mockingly. "Did you finally understand?"
"I didn't lose you because I was weak." Accept Gohan. "I lost because I was scared."
His opponent crosses his arms and nods in agreement.
"But it wasn't the fear of facing someone stronger who could kill me." Continues Gohan "But it was the fear of taking the life of a sentient being."
In Gohan's first fight, fear made him lose confidence and become distracted. This ended up giving openings for his opponent to exploit while he hesitated to attack and even defend himself.
"You're less of a fool than I thought." Praises Raditz in a sarcastic tone. "But knowing your weakness is one thing, eliminating it is another-."
"No!" Exclaims Gohan cutting his opponent. "I will not become a cold-blooded killer. Just like the original Gohan, I will live with this fear for the rest of my life."
Confused by the young man's response, Raditz stares at him with a raised eyebrow.
Gohan assumes a wide base with his legs and summons his Ki that covers him.
"But how do you intend to fight against those who do not hesitate to kill?" Raditz questions, his voice thick with disbelief. "Are you going to let fear take over your life?"
Gohan closes his eyes and takes a deep breath, focusing on his insides. When he opens them again, a new determination shines in his eyes.
"I will not allow fear to dominate me." Gohan declares, clasping his hands at his sides in a posture familiar to any Dragon Ball fan. "Instead, I will use this fear as a constant reminder of the value of life. Every blow I strike will be with the awareness that I am protecting the weak who cannot defend by themselves, not just destroying my enemy."
Raditz lets out a short, dismissive laugh.
"Foolish, naive and hypocritical to boot." He scoffs. "You are doomed to fail."
Despite the insults, Gohan remains impassive and responds by continuing his technique.
"Kame…" A sphere of light formed in the middle of Gohan's hands.
Surprised by the response Raditz assumed his stance raising both hands towards Gohan, bringing his Ki to the surface preparing his counter attack.
"Hame…" The glow of the sphere intensified as the sound of energy boomed through the air.
"Double Mondey!" The veteran warrior shouts, firing two rays of light, one from each hand, towards his enemy.
"HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Gohan shouts, finishing performing the most iconic technique in Dragon Ball and perhaps all anime.
[NEW KI SKILL]
[Kamehameha]
[Kamehameha]
The two beams of energy crossed the air colliding between the two combatants, creating an explosion of light and heat that raised a dense cloud of dust.
The scene transformed into a mix of light and shadows, with the white light from the explosion illuminating the battlefield for a brief moment.
But once the dust began to clear, it became clear that Raditz's technique was more powerful. His energy beams began to engulf Gohan's, absorbing it and increasing its intensity, swallowing the place where the young hybrid was completely.
When the dust finally cleared, Raditz was surprised. He looked at the spot where Gohan was, but there were no signs of life.
"This is impossible! No matter how powerful the enemy is, there is no way a system construct can kill the user." Raditz said in distress.
"Thanks for the info." Whispered a voice behind Raditz.
The veteran tries to turn around quickly, but halfway through something hits his side.
[OFF GUARD ENEMY X 2 DMG]
[1,700 DMG]
Gohan's fist hit Raditz's liver, causing the Saiyan to double over in pain.
"Arghh." The older warrior groaned.
The force of the blow sent him staggering backwards, his Ki decreasing as he struggled to regain his balance. Raditz looked at Gohan, his eyes filled with fury and disbelief.
"How…how did you do that?" he gasped, grabbing your waist.
Gohan was standing, his heart pounding in his chest, staring at his agonizing enemy in front of him. He had never felt so alive, so powerful.
"From the beginning I didn't intend to win in the Ki contest." He said simply, his voice firm and unwavering. "It was just a distraction to catch you off guard, something easy since you don't know how to detect Ki."
Raditz sneered, his anger turning into contempt.
"And what's the point if you're not going to finish me-."
"KI STRIKE!" Gohan shouts, invoking his technique and cutting Raditz with a punch to the face.
[CRITICAL HIT X 4 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[27,664 DMG]
Raditz's face received the full force of Gohan's devastating punch.
His features contort in agony as the force of the blow sent him stumbling backwards, his legs curled beneath him. The sound of bones breaking echoed through the air as Raditz's face was severely deformed by the force of the punch.
His nose was crushed, his cheekbones broken, and his jaw dislocated, leaving him with a grotesque, swollen face that bore little resemblance to the proud Saiyan warrior he had once been.
[K.O.]
Gohan's body was drenched in sweat, despite not having been hurt he was exhausted and low on Ki. He fell to the ground, panting as he tried to process what had just happened.
[YOU WIN!]
With a deep sigh, he closed his eyes and allowed himself a moment of rest. The weight of the victory was overwhelming and he couldn't help but feel pride and accomplishment.
"I did it…" He whispered to himself, a smile spreading across his face. "I defeated that asshole."
[+1,200 XP]
[+ 1 Level]
[+127 MIGHT]
[+325 AGILITY]
[+87 SPIRIT]
[+27 MENTAL]
[+7 Ki Strike]
[+7 Acrobatics Levels]
[+5 Athletics Levels]
[+3 Perception Levels]
[+72 Stealth]
[+ 13 Close Combat]
[+7 Intimidation]
[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]
"Not bad, but I thought I would gain something more interesting by winning this fight."
[You have defeated a named character.]
"I think I spoke too soon."
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Double Mondey Ki Skill
+ 25 Intimidation
+ 50 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Double Mondey Ki Skill
+ 25 Intimidation
+ 50 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Gohan looked at the reward options with interest.
Double Mondey was not a unique technique that caught his attention as it was similar to most continuous KI attacks, the points in Intimidation he had several ways to obtain, but now the points in Oozaru...
The boy was not sure if he would be able to master the super Saiyan form before he got to Namek, so he made sure he got a power boost just in case.
"Maybe if I reach a high level, will I be able to control myself like Vegeta?"
Motivated by the X10 bonus from the primate form, Gohan chooses the gorilla option.
[+50 Oozaru]
As soon as he received the points, another window opened.
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
"Nice"
Excited, he opened the Status window and saw that it was true and took out a silver attribute bean and stored it.
"I think I can face Nappa tomorrow." The young man commented, getting up and walking towards his bed.
[DBI:GG]
The next day Gohan trains intensely in the time room, focusing on honing his most powerful ki attack.
"KAME… HAME… HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"
The beam flew in the opposite direction of the time room's entrance as the floor vibrated with the energy it released.
Smiling, Gohan could feel his Spirit increasing with each repetition. He was determined to master this attack as he knew it would be a powerful weapon against his enemies.
"KAME… HAME… HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Gohan shouted, launching a wave of powerful energy in the direction opposite the entrance to the time room.
The attack was devastating, and Gohan felt a great sense of satisfaction. He repeated the movement several times, each time with more precision and strength.
[+1 Kamehameha]
[Kamehameha Reached Expert Rank]
[Kamehameha Reached Expert Rank]
"Finally!" Exclaimed Gohan, falling to the floor.
The whole day of training finally paid off when the young man reached Expert Rank in his new attack.
After a few minutes of meditating, Gohan gets up, already choosing his new opponent.
[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]
Gohan was already ready for a bombastic song, which would match the great warrior's style, but he was surprised by the whisper of a voice.
[Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the... FLOOOOOR!]
Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the... FLOOOOOR!]
At least until the music explodes throughout the room followed by the announcer's introduction.
[The embodiment of pure, Saiyan brutality!
Behold the indomitable,
the unstoppable,
the bald and the brutal...
NAPPA!]
Behold the indomitable,
the unstoppable,
the bald and the brutal...
NAPPA!]
Nappa materialized in a cloud of pixels, he was huge, with imposing musculature that seemed almost dazzling. His presence was intimidating, exuding a power that Gohan had never seen before.
"It seems that Kakoroto's spawn decided to face me." Nappa said, smiling mischievously. "You don't stand a chance brat."
[READY?]
Gohan was Unaffected by bravado thanks to his experience losing and then winning against Raditz. He knew he needed to act quickly before Nappa easily dismantled him.
[FIGHT!]
Gohan and Nappa charged at each other, the two warriors clashed exchanging punches with intensity that reverberated through the ground around them.
"So you only needed to be beaten by your uncle to become a man, you brat." Nappa comments, taking a step forward and dodging a kick.
An icy fury takes over Gohan, who spins his body, punching Nappa in the stomach, throwing him away.
"Shut up and fight, you fucking The Rock clone with a mustache." Gohan grumbled, facing his opponent.
Nappa frowned and brought his Ki to the surface.
"Pathetic Earthling, I will break all your bones."
Furious, Nappa attacked the boy, starting a brutal and violent combo of punches and kicks, Gohan in turn retaliated in kind, each of the warriors was trying to dominate the other, establishing the rhythm of the battle.
What followed was a display of violence and brutality that looked more like two beasts trying to kill each other than two warriors fighting.
[125 DMG]
[- 375 HP]
[187 DMG]
[- 407 HP]
[215 DMG]
[- 431 HP]Gohan tried to avoid Nappa's blows while attacking, but Nappa was faster, and stronger than Raditz. Nappa's punches and kicks impacted Gohan's body, while the young man's caused less damage.
[157 DMG]
[- 389 HP]
[204 DMG]
[- 445 HP]
'If I continue like this I will lose.'
Changing strategy, Gohan crosses his arms in front of his body, receiving Nappa's next kick in the chest.
[- 78 HP]
Gohan received little damage thanks to his raised guard and took advantage of the impact of the blow to jump back, already falling into the posture of his most powerful attack.
"Kamehameha!" Shouted the young man.
The attack caught Nappa by surprise, the veteran warrior was unable to dodge but managed to raise his guard and receive the attack directly.
[574 DMG]
When the dust caused by the attack's explosion settled, Nappa's form was revealed with pieces of destroyed armor, but his body contained few injuries.
"Not bad brat, I almost felt that one." The older warrior laughed mockingly.
"Damn it."Gohan grumbles irritably.
'The attack was good, but this guy is just very resilient.'' Gohan thought to himself. 'And since he's also faster and more experienced than me… I'm fucked.'
"ROAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!" Nappa roared, firing a blast of ki from his mouth.
As he was lost in his thoughts, Gohan was taken by surprise.
[- 5,000 HP]
"Co-coward." Gohan complains, losing consciousness. "Cheater."
[YOU'RE OUT OF HP]
"WHO CARES?! I WON" shouted a bombastic voice. "HAHAHAHAHA!"
[YOU BLACKED OUT]
[DBI:GG]
[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS ON THE FLOOR]
[DBI:GG]
[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS ON THE FLOOR]
"Shit." Gohan groans in pain, standing up.
[YOU'RE PARTIALLY HEALED]
"This is the window of shame." Said the young man, getting up discouraged.
Despite losing the fight, Gohan quickly regained his focus to what he received from the fight yesterday.
[+800 XP]
[+375 MIGHT]
[+128 AGILITY]
[+212 SPIRIT]
[+21 MENTAL]
[+3 Kamehameha]
[+12 Acrobatics Levels]
[+24 Athletics Levels]
[+55 Perception Levels]
[Perception Reached Expert Rank]
[+35 Close Combat]
[+ 15 Ranged Combat]
[+375 MIGHT]
[+128 AGILITY]
[+212 SPIRIT]
[+21 MENTAL]
[+3 Kamehameha]
[+12 Acrobatics Levels]
[+24 Athletics Levels]
[+55 Perception Levels]
[Perception Reached Expert Rank]
[+35 Close Combat]
[+ 15 Ranged Combat]
"Damn! Adept Rank skills have risen a lot. Is it because I used them in a fight against someone stronger than me?"
[ZENKAI BOOST(30%)]
"Even the zenkai boost was greater than with Raditz."
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 3 [3,052/4,000]
HP: 30,855
KP: 29,115
PL: 4,922
MIGHT: 6,171
AGILITY: 5,646
SPIRIT: 5,823
MENTAL: 2,048
Points: 400
[STATUS]
"I'm stronger than Nappa, but if I mess around like I did yesterday, he'll win." Said Gohan analyzing his Status. "And if you take into account that Nappa is 'probably' dumber than me… his Might must be way bigger than mine."
Putting on his training clothes Gohan pondered what he could have done differently to have won the fight against Nappa. He knew that even though he was defeated, there were some things he could have done better. He remembered how Nappa had dominated him with his brute strength and his ability to resist damage.
"That guy was practically a wall of stones." Gohan complains, remembering the fight.
Even taking damage, Nappa received Gohan's blows without hesitation, making Gohan feel weak and desperate.
"Is there a technique to simulate all that resilience?" The young man theorized out loud.
Developing a defense technique wouldn't be a problem for the Saiyan hybrid thanks to his perks, but how would he train defense without someone to attack him?
"Hmm." Murmured Gohan, looking at the half-pound suit he had already abandoned. "I think I how…"
[DBI:GG]
Annoyed by his confidence, Nappa did what came naturally to him, he began to insult his opponent.
"You're smiling too much for a worm who went to sleep with his ass beaten yesterday."
"And you talk too loud for a bald old limp dick asshole."
Nappa's eyes widened at the little warrior's statement.
"What did you just say?" He roared as his body was engulfed by his Ki.
"I mean there are only two reasons why someone so old and grumpy would go around the galaxy destroying everything without ever picking up some women." Said Gohan, taking a fighting stance and bringing his ki to the surface. "The first is that he is impotent."
"And what's the second one?" Nappa asks, about to explode with rage.
"He needs courage to declare himself to his charming prince who he lives with."
"I KILL YOU!" Shouted Nappa, flying towards Gohan.
Nappa throws a direct punch at Gohan, who defends himself by raising only one arm to intercept the punch.
[- 600]
Anticipating his victory, the bald warrior smiles, colliding his fist against the small opponent's forearm. But to his surprise, Gohan also smiles with his body engulfed by a strange and thin transparent bluish aura.
[Lord Camelot Resist 257]
"What?" Questions Nappa out loud.
"Did you notice?" Gohan asked with a mischievous smile. "It's my new technique."
[Real Damage is -343]
"It's not good for resisting more powerful attacks, but it's perfect for the course of the fight against 'normal' blows."
[KI SKILLS]
-Lord Camelot Lv. 82/100 [ Adept ]
Cost: 200 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 4.1% of your SPIRIT in damage.
[KI SKILLS]
Nappa's eyes widened in surprise, his face turning red with anger.
"YOU MISERABLE BRAT!" Nappa shouted in frustration.
Both throw punches at each other, only to have them collide in a muffled explosion sound.
[187 DMG]
[- 132 HP]
Gohan puffs out his chest with pride, the training hadn't been easy to improve Lord Camelot, he spent the whole day whipping his own back, using the half half ton clothes like a whip.
'I looked like an opus dei priest self-flagellating himself.' Thinks Gohan, remembering the previous day.
"Bastard-." Nappa tries to complain but is cut by a punch to the stomach that makes him bend over.
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[425 DMG]
"Talk less and fight more."
The fight continued with the warriors exchanging punches, kicks and even energy blasts from Nappa. During the exchange Gohan continued to use Lord Kamelot frequently to maintain the advantage.
[WARNING][/WARNING][WARNING]
[KP less then 30%][/warning]
[WARNING][KP less then 30%][/warning]
"Fuck me." Gohan complains, deactivating his ability.
Nappa notices his opponent's frustration and notices the blue aura disappearing.
"Running out of Ki brat?" Questions Nappa mocking his opponent. "That's what happens when brats come to fight real warriors."
Gohan cursed himself for not paying attention to his KP and for having used his power without moderation, as if his Ki reserve was infinite. He was furious with himself for doing everything wrong, which led to an unfavorable situation.
Nappa approached Gohan brimming with pride.
"You think you can defeat me?"
Gohan replied, glaring at him.
"Yes."Said the young man, smirking.
"Then you are a greater fool than your father." Nappa replied, charging his Ki.
In response, Gohan also brought his Ki to the surface, preparing to attack.
"Bureiku Kyanon!" Nappa roared, firing a beam of energy from his mouth.
"Kamehameha!" Gohan shouted, firing at his opponent.
The rays collided, although at first glance they were equal, Nappa's attack began to dominate Gohan's. But despite the situation, the young man was smiling confidently.
'This kid is going to do something bizarre.' The warrior thought, firing a beam of energy from his mouth.
"Kamehameha X 4!" Gohan shouted.
Thanks to Gohan reaching an expert level, he can increase its kamehameha power.
[KI SKILLS]
-Kamehameha Lv. 4/100 [ Expert ]Cost: 2,000 KPEffect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend.
[KI SKILLS]
Gohan had gambled all his remaining Ki trying to overpower his opponent's attack.
"AAARGHH!" Nappa screamed in pain as he received the attack inside his mouth.
The monstrous damage was compounded by hitting Nappa inside his mouth, ignoring the formidable resistances the veteran warrior had.
[CRITICAL HIT X 4 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[WEAK SPOT X 5 DMG]
[720,000 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[WEAK SPOT X 5 DMG]
[720,000 DMG]
"AAAAAAAARGH!!" Gohan roared, falling to the ground.
A burning, searing pain penetrated his hands and reverberated throughout the young man's body.
[K.O.]
But instead of celebrating, Gohan falls to his knees.
"My hands." The young man groaned in agony.
It was a horrible sensation of intense burning in his hands, as if the skin was being touched by fire, along with sharp stabs, as if thousands of hot needles were being inserted into the area.
[YOU WIN!]
Gohan's hands were blackened and raw, as if they had been burned and flayed.
-I-
"What the hell?" Questioned the desperate young man.
Desperate to end his pain, the young man ignored the windows warning of his rewards for victory and sat down to meditate and heal.
After 5 minutes Gohan opened his eyes and noticed that the wounds had closed and the color had started to return to normal, but his hands still hurt and were covered in scabs.
"Hit points are full, but physically I'm still hurt?" Questions the helpless young man. "At least now I know that lost limbs will not be regenerated."
Standing up slowly, being careful not to touch anything with his hands, Gohan begins to mentally open the warning windows.
[+4,000 XP]
[+ 1 Level]
[+1,525 MIGHT]
[+1,025 AGILITY]
[+1,287 SPIRIT]
[+320 MENTAL]
[+46 Kamehameha]
[+18 Lord Camelot]
[Lord Camelot Reached Expert Rank]
[+15 Lord Camelot]
[+ 35 Acrobatics Levels]
[+ 44 Athletics Levels]
[Athletics Reached Expert Rank]
[+ 1 Athletics Levels]
[+17 Perception Levels]
[+ 17 Close Combat]
[+54 Ranged Combat]
[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]
[+ 1 Level]
[+1,525 MIGHT]
[+1,025 AGILITY]
[+1,287 SPIRIT]
[+320 MENTAL]
[+46 Kamehameha]
[+18 Lord Camelot]
[Lord Camelot Reached Expert Rank]
[+15 Lord Camelot]
[+ 35 Acrobatics Levels]
[+ 44 Athletics Levels]
[Athletics Reached Expert Rank]
[+ 1 Athletics Levels]
[+17 Perception Levels]
[+ 17 Close Combat]
[+54 Ranged Combat]
[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]
[You have defeated a named character.]
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Breaker Canon Ki Skill
+ 50 Athletics
+ 85 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Breaker Canon Ki Skill
+ 50 Athletics
+ 85 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Without thinking twice, Gohan got the 85 points from Oozaru first.
"I think he had more points for this because he is a more veteran warrior and has used this skill more times."
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
Transformations:Oozaru Lv. 10/100 [ Expert ] = X 10 Power Level. Able to maintain some control. User can maintain some semblance of control, enough to choose a target when in rage.
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
Looking at the transformation text, now at master level, Gohan notices the extra information.
"Some semblance of control is better than none…"
As for the silver bean reward, he chose 1 special Abilities.
"Speaking of which, where are these items?"
[INVENTORY]
[3] Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)[3] Copper Skill Bean(+10)
[3] Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[1] Silver Attribute Bean(+100)
[1] Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[INVENTORY]
"I'm going to have a ton of supplies when we go to Namek. Now just check the status before going to sleep."
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 4 [7,052/7,500]
HP: 38,480
KP: 35,550
PL: 5,961
MIGHT: 7,696
AGILITY: 6,671
SPIRIT: 7,110
MENTAL: 2,368
Points: 500
[STATUS]
"It doesn't seem like much, but with that level of power I could have prolonged the fight against the original Nappa. Giving Goku more time to arrive." Said Gohan analyzing his new power level. "But there's no point in theorizing about past events.
Said the Young Man walking towards his bed.
"I hope sleeping in my bed heals these wounds."
[DBI:GG]
The next day Gohan woke up with his hands completely healed. Happy with the result of a good night's sleep, he called up the training table, already planning what his next fight would be at the end of the day.
[TRAINING MODE ON]
[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200
Saibamen = PL 1,200
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
[Choose your opponent]
[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200
Saibamen = PL 1,200
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
[Choose your opponent]
But reality hit him harder than Raditz did in his first fight.
The difference of more than twelve thousand PL between Gohan and Vegeta left the young man apprehensive. So Gohan decided to focus on his training until the difference was less obvious and found out why his hands had hurt so much.
To do this, he spent the whole day firing Kamehamehas multiplied in different ways, x2,
and even x4 times that had hurt him so much.The first two made his skin burn, but it didn't hurt or leave any marks. The x4 made his skin hurt and left small burns, only this time, less aggressive than yesterday.
"Why that?" Gohan asked, talking to himself. "Is it because it improved my MIGHT and SPIRIT? Maybe it was because it improved my attack skill level?" Questioned the Young Man.
…
"Maybe it was because of the 3? The two attributes increase and skill increases?"
[+5 MENTAL]
"Good to know." Said the young man with the system's response. "At least now I know what happens when I overdo it."
Understanding a little more about the mechanics of his power, Gohan gets up, putting on his weighted clothes, ready to continue his training.
"I will continue my physical training mixed with my ki training." Said the young man thinking out loud. "Ki Strike, Ki Blast and Flight need to reach Expert… as for Kamehameha."
[KI SKILLS]
-Kamehameha Lv. 75/100 [ Expert ]Cost: 1,750 KPEffect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend.
[KI SKILLS]
"What will happen if I pass Expert rank?"
Curious about his own train of thought, Gohan gave a mental command to his system and 3 Copper Skill Beans from his inventory were transferred to his hand which the young man was not excited about eating.
"Argh! It tastes like metal and dirt."
[+25 Kamehameha]
[Kamehameha Reached Master Rank]
[+5 Kamehameha]
[KI SKILLS]
-Kamehameha Lv. 5/100 [ Expert ]Cost: 1,500 KP[Kamehameha Reached Master Rank]
[+5 Kamehameha]
[KI SKILLS]
Effect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend. User can slightly bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
[KI SKILLS]
"In addition to reducing consumption, now I can curve the radius of the attack and I can let the attack throw me back… according to Newton's third law!?" Gohan repeated in surprise. "I never thought I'd have a physics class in Dragon Ball, but I guess this means I can use Ki techniques to throw myself backwards to evade attacks or try to move faster?"
[+15 MENTAL]
"I love it when I'm right." Gohan comments with a smile. "But I don't remember being so good at this kind of critical thinking in my other life… is that because my mental attribute is increasing?"
[+25 MENTAL]
"It makes sense, the attribute is not exactly pure intelligence, mental must be a sum of intelligence, wisdom and memory."
[+50 MENTAL]
"WAIT!" The young man shouts, realizing another mechanic of his system. "In addition to my Human Adaptability perk, is it Mental that affects me learning new skills?",
[+200 MENTAL]
"Damn... now I'm going to have to find a way to train Mental too."
Finishing his complaints, Gohan looks towards the void opposite the entrance.
"I need to venture away from the entrance."
[DBI:GG]
With the ambition to surpass his limits, Gohan ventured beyond the entrance to the Room of Time, seeking a more challenging environment to hone his skills. As he moved away from the known area, he came across a distinct atmosphere.
The thin air made breathing difficult, eliciting a smile of anticipation from the young warrior prepared for the challenge. Without hesitation, he began his training routine inspired by Saitama, which he already mastered masterfully.
The first set was completed with the same efficiency and speed as always, but Gohan noticed an accelerated drain on his stamina. The scorching heat intensified the challenge, but he recognized that this was part of the plan. Ignoring the discomfort, he placed himself on the floor to begin the second set.
But halfway through the push-ups, he felt a relief that would only last a short time.
The temperature plummeted drastically, replacing the heat with an icy cold. The sudden change punished Gohan's body, making him fall to the ground shaking.
Gohan fell to the ground as the cold reached its maximum, the young man let out a groan of pain and despair, but he stood up quickly, refusing to give in.
The new conditions turned family training into hell, but Gohan knew it was crucial for his evolution. With each movement, his muscles contracted and weakened, but he persevered, motivated by overcoming the test.
Hours passed as Gohan persisted in his arduous journey. His energy was gone, and his body showed small wounds caused by alternate contact with the ground, sometimes freezing and sometimes scorching.
Finally, after a day of exhausting training, he concluded the session with a smile and deep fatigue, limping back to the entrance.
"And I still have to fight Nappa." Gohan murmured, deciding to meditate to regain his strength before the battle.
Upon reaching the entrance area, he turned towards the white expanse, contemplating the challenges overcome by venturing beyond the known, the pains and agonies faced in a hostile environment.
"And today was just the first day." He concluded with determination in his voice.
[DBI:GG]
For 40 days, Gohan underwent rigorous training away from the entrance to the Room of Time.
The weather conditions tortured him physically and mentally, but the rewards were worth the suffering.
[+13,635 MIGHT]
[+9,790 AGILITY]
[+11,945 SPIRIT]
[+4,750 MENTAL]
[+9,790 AGILITY]
[+11,945 SPIRIT]
[+4,750 MENTAL]
In addition to his attributes, his Ki Skills increased exponentially.
[+53 Flight]
[Flight Reached Expert Rank]
[+75 Flight]
[+12 Kamehameha]
[+63 Ki Strike]
[Ki Strike Reached Expert Rank]
[+85 Ki Strike]
[+87 Ki Blast]
[Ki Blast Reached Expert Rank]
[+38 Ki Blast]
[+75 LORD CAMELOT]
[Lord Kamelot Master Rank]
[+2 LORD CAMELOT]
His normal Skills also increased.[Flight Reached Expert Rank]
[+75 Flight]
[+12 Kamehameha]
[+63 Ki Strike]
[Ki Strike Reached Expert Rank]
[+85 Ki Strike]
[+87 Ki Blast]
[Ki Blast Reached Expert Rank]
[+38 Ki Blast]
[+75 LORD CAMELOT]
[Lord Kamelot Master Rank]
[+2 LORD CAMELOT]
[+ 67 Acrobatics Levels]
[Acrobatics Reached Master Rank]
[+ 66 Acrobatics Levels]
[+ 99 Athletics Levels]
[Athletics Reached Master Rank]
[+ 4 Athletics Levels]
[+68 Perception Levels]
[Perception Reached Expert Rank]
[+21 Perception Levels]
[+81 Close Combat]
[Close Combat Reached Master Rank]
[+ 56 Close Combat]
[+1 Ranged Combat]
[Perception Reached Expert Rank]
[+100 Ranged Combat]
[Perception Reached Master Rank]
[+25 Ranged Combat]
Although the last few days have been less productive with my growth, the total of 40 days are notable in their status.
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 5 [8,252/10,000]
HP: 113,375
KP: 101,425
PL: 17,158.5
MIGHT: 22,675
AGILITY: 17,261
SPIRIT: 20,285
MENTAL: 8,413
Points: 600
[STATUS]
Gohan looks proudly at his status, finally confident in challenging his next opponent.
"Who knows, maybe in the future I'll be able to fight even farther away too, at least Might would go up a lot."
[TRAINING MODE ON]
[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200
Saibamen = PL 1,200
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
[Choose your opponent]
[Choose your opponent]
Raditz = PL 1,200
Saibamen = PL 1,200
Nappa = PL 4,000
Vegeta = PL 18,000
Vegeta(Ozaru) = PL 180,000
[Choose your opponent]
"Almost equal power level and one extra level." Commented Gohan choosing Vegeta.
[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]
This time the music plays loud and fast, reminiscent of classic heavy metal.
[I was born into a scene of angriness and greed
And dominance and persecution
My mother was a queen, my father I've never seen
I was never meant to be
And now I spend my time looking all around
For a man that's nowhere to be found
Until I find him I'm never gonna stop searching
I'm gonna find my man, gonna travel around]
[Cause I'm a wrathchild
Yeah, I'm a wrathchild
Yeah, I'm a wrathchild
I'm coming to get you, ooh, yeah, yeah]
Yeah, I'm a wrathchild
Yeah, I'm a wrathchild
I'm coming to get you, ooh, yeah, yeah]
"Wrathchild?" Questioned Gohan without remembering the song. "At least it has to do with Vegeta's childhood… I think."
At the end of the chorus, the pixel cloud manifests itself, materializing the prince of the Saiyans with his eyes closed.
[From the depths of space,
a warrior of unrivaled ruthlessness!
He is the fighter who scoffs at your applause!
The conqueror who rages in the face of your cheer!
He is the prince of a fallen kingdom, a sovereign of strength...
He is VEGETA!
The Saiyan prince was one of Dragon Ball's most iconic characters and one of his favorites in his past life along with the original Gohan, being able to fight him was an honor for the reincarnated Gohan.
"It took you a long time to challenge me, brat." Comments Vegeta, opening his eyes.
[READY?]
"Let's see if you can fight on equal terms against an elite warrior."
They both prepared themselves in their battle stances, summoning their ki.
[FIGHT!]
The two charged at each other, flying over the white ground of the temple and colliding in an exchange of punches.
"RAAAAAAAAGH!" The warriors shouted, exchanging blows.
[1.378 DMG]
[- 2.109 HP]
[1.704 DMG]
[- 2.331 HP]
Gohan struggled at first to keep up with Vegeta in mid-flight, something that was previously impossible for him. But now, thanks to the hours of training dedicated to his Ki Skills, he was able to keep pace with his powerful opponent.
Vegeta looked at Gohan with a savage smile.
"Are you really ready to face the prince of all Saiyans?" He asked as he fired a ki blast.
Gohan focused on maintaining his balance and avoiding Vegeta's attacks.
"More than ready." Gohan replied, dodging and deflecting the attacks.
They continued to fight for some time, each trying to surpass the other in speed and strength.
Gohan was only able to match Vegeta thanks to the Lord Camelot technique, which reduced part of Vegeta's damage.
[1.781 DMG]
[- 1.847 HP]
[2.104 DMG]
[- 2.331 HP]
[2.554 DMG]
[- 2.531 HP]
"Humpf." Vegeta grumbled, moving away from Gohan. "An interesting technique you created, it proves that you are not a complete idiot like your father."
Surprised by the almost compliment, Gohan smiled, happy to have been recognized by the prince.
"A shame that you use your talents in cowardly tactics instead of fighting like an honorable Saiyan warrior."
Gohan's jaw dropped instantly, shocked by how fast he was back to insulting him.
"You know what? I'll give you a chance." He smiled arrogantly at Gohan, opening his arms. "Show me what you're capable of."
Quickly, Gohan recovered from his surprise and his blood began to boil at his opponent's comments.
"Ok…" Gohan said, closing his eyes. "Let's fucking go."
The young man concentrated on charging his Ki. This time, the energy aura manifested differently than usual.
"What is that?" Vegeta questioned, curious.
The Ki covering Gohan's body fluctuated at a frequency that made the young man look like a candle flickering in the wind. Feeling the energy flow through his body, his muscles began to vibrate in response, his skin took on a reddish tone and veins bulge across his body. His heart was already accelerating with the rhythm of his ki.
-I-
Then the energy aura stabilized, now oscillating at a speed that was difficult to follow, it seemed like just a thin layer of red light that surrounded the young man.
His body behaved differently, the muscles in Gohan's body were more compact and defined, and his heart beat at a faster pace than normal.
"I call it Clock-Up!" Exclaimed Gohan, disappearing from Vegeta's sight.
Vegeta's mouth is open, only for the screen to be closed with a punch to the chin.
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[4,730 DMG]
The prince staggered back.
"What cheap trick is this?" Vegeta grumbled, passing his hand over his mouth.
With a mischievous smile, Gohan explains to the prince.
"I tried to replicate Kaio-Ken, but I wasn't able to." Gohan commented in a technical tone. "I don't have enough information and my body couldn't handle the load. I suffered from torn muscles, heart overload and severe headaches."
A chill runs down Gohan's back, just remembering the pain. If it weren't for the system's ability to heal 100% after sleeping, it would need weeks, or even months, to recover from the damage to its body.
"Humph!" Vegeta grumbled, mocking Gohan. "Weak."
A vein popped out on the young man's forehead, and he maintained his composure.
"So, I created this technique that only increases my speed, Clock-Up. The problem is that it works in small bursts and consumes a lot of Ki."
[KI SKILLS]
-Clock-Up Lv. 78/100 [ Adept ]Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP Each Speed Burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X2.78 for 5 seconds.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.
[KI SKILLS]
In response, the Saiyan prince laughed loudly.
"It makes sense for a half breed to create something so-." Vegeta tried to insult him, but was cut off again with a punch to the middle of his face.
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[5,126 DMG]
"Damn!" Vegeta growled, furious.
"It's not a good technique for prolonged fights." Gohan said, giving a slutty smile. "But it's great for surprise attacks."
"Humph! Great for cowards-." Vegeta tried to insult him once again, only to be cut off this time with a kick to the ear.
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[4,854 DMG]
"STOP CUTTING ME!"
The prince charged, flying in a blind rage. Gohan clenched his fists, waiting for the right time.
"DIE!" Shouted Vegeta, kicking.
But before his blow connected, Gohan disappeared.
"How?" Questioned Vegeta, turning to face the boy twenty meters away.
"You can use it in strategic withdrawals too." Gohan replied smiling.
Fed up with his opponent's tricks, Vegeta roars angrily. His body is completely engulfed by intense Ki like the flames of hell, his power makes the ground around him shake as if an earthquake is happening.
"O boy..." Gohan murmured worriedly.
Suddenly Vegeta exploded in propulsive energy, charging at Gohan with maximum strength, without giving him time to activate the Clock-Up.
"RAAAAAR!" shouted Vegeta, throwing a powerful punch at Gohan's head.
[- 9,984 HP]
The impact sent Gohan's body flying, landing on the ground 20 meters away. But the prince of Saiyans didn't give up, he flew over the young man, landing with a knee in his stomach, only to then mount on top to beat him.
[- 79,984 HP]
"YOU - WILL - PAY - FOR - EVERY - COWARD - COWARD!" Shouted Vegeta, hammering each punch aimed at Gohan.
[- 2,783 HP]
[- 3,217 HP]
[- 2,899 HP]
[- 2,901 HP]
[- 3,004 HP]
With arms raised, Gohan managed to protect himself from the worst, but he was still grunting in pain. Desperate to get out of the situation, he stretched out his right leg and charged it with energy preparing for an attack.
"KI STRIKE!"
[37,751 DMG]
The kick energized by the technique hits the base of Vegeta's back.
Vegeta expelled the air from his lungs in reaction to the pain, his spine transmitting the intense pain after Gohan's kick throughout his body. He tried to get up, but his body refused to obey the command, throwing him to the ground to the side. The energy flowing through his body seemed to freeze, leaving him paralyzed on the ground.
In a stroke of luck, Gohan had hit the base of his opponent's spine, causing a lot of pain and a short paralysis.
The young man stands up and looks at the proud defenseless warrior on the ground. Gohan hesitated for a second to take advantage of the situation, but he quickly remembered the importance of this training.
"On Namek, the real Vegeta will be much more powerful than this…"
With a bitter taste in his mouth, Gohan stomped his opponent with several Ki Strike attacks.
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[73,754 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[69,987 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[73,725 DMG]
[OFF GUARD X 2 DMG]
[71,574 DMG]
[K.O.]
"That's no way to win a fight."
[YOU WIN!]
Gohan's sadness and anguish only lasts for a short time as he notices the reward windows for his victory.
[+18,000 XP]
[+2 Level]
[+2 Level]
"I'm feeling a little better already."
[+7,325 MIGHT]
[+9,239 AGILITY]
[+4,715 SPIRIT]
[+1,787 MENTAL]
"To tell the truth, I'm great."[+9,239 AGILITY]
[+4,715 SPIRIT]
[+1,787 MENTAL]
[+22 Clock-Up]
[Clock-Up Reached Expert Rank]
[+56 Clock-Up]
[+25 Flight]
[+15 Ki Strike]
[Clock-Up Reached Master Rank]
[+42 Ki Strike]
[+15 Lord Camelot]
[+16 Acrobatics Levels]
[+8 Athletics Levels]
[+11 Perception Levels]
[+8 Close Combat]
[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]
[You have defeated a named character.]
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Galick Gun Ki Skill
+ 75 Athletics
+ 100 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Galick Gun Ki Skill
+ 75 Athletics
+ 100 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARDS(X2)]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARDS(X2)]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARDS(X2)]
Despite his joy, his vision began to get blurry.
"Hmm?" Murmurs Gohan confused.
Gohan felt weak, falling to the ground, his chest hurting and the pain spreading throughout his body. He tried to get up, but his legs wouldn't obey the command. His vision started to get blurry and he felt his head hurt more.
Panic and fear invaded his mind.
'What is happening?' In addition to the pain, Gohan's body felt like it weighed over a thousand tons. 'Is this the consequence of using Overclocking for so long?'
Things began to spin around him and he fell backwards onto the ground, finally losing consciousness.
Boa noite pessoas,
Oozaru Vegeta is still missing, why didn't I keep writing until I put the fight in this chapter?
Real life stopped me.
…
And remembering that I'm still looking for a Beta Reader, if you're interested leave me a message.
If you want to talk to me you can find me on X(Twitter) , search for renanp1m .
COMMENTS:
-Kamui_Yurinagi(Webnovel):
Thanks for the chapter and keep up the amazing work and as for romantic pairing then keep it Canon and if you want a bit different then add Erasa to the romantic pairing.
-Renan:
Thanks for the compliment.
Keeping Videl is one of the options. But now Erasa… I hadn't considered her. I'll think about this a little.
-RamblingFool(Webnovel):
Dodge!
-Renan:
It warms my heart every time I see a reference to TFS's work in the comments.
-Fullmetalblazer(Questionablequesting):,
A free girl for Gohan's Harem is Zangya All he has to do is save her from Bojack and stick up for her when the other z fighters want to try to kill her after word.
-Renan:
I rewatched the film Zangya appears today at lunch.
If there is no other time when she appears, then I think she is very shallow as a character.
Which isn't bad, it gives me room to work with her however I want.
-Yume(Questionablequesting):
Seems fun so far, looking forward to what you come up with next, just a shame you went with the typical aggressive "entertain me or I kill you" ROB.
FeMC wise no one beats Bulma, she's smart, rich and supports the one she's with even if they are a worse genocidal mad man than Hitler. She can also make better tech than anyone else can (she made a shrink ray when she was 16 and fixed a space ship when she was 6), only one who comes close to her in utility and intellect is Android 21 and she doesn't exists outside of one very specific verse.
-Renan:
It was a really lazy strategy on my part to use this, but I was so excited to get started that I ended up going with it.
And I also agree that Bulma is the top 3 best girl in the entire Dragon Ball Canon, even taking into account the girls from the expanded universe.[/warning]
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Bom dia pessoas,
I would like to thank Sleepy for his help with the English text.
I saw some comments talking about using the Hyperbolic Time Chamber and I would like to comment on them.
Before Dende rebuilds the chamber, it the following limit:
"The Chamber can only be used for two days (or two years) by any given person, meaning a person can only enter the chamber twice in their lifetime, assuming they stay for the full year both times. Staying in the chamber for two days straight counts as two uses. If anybody attempts to use the chamber past their 48-hour limit, they will not be able to exit, leaving them trapped in the nothingness and not allowing anyone else to use the outside door."
And as the title makes clear, we will end the first year in this chapter.
Ps: Have you seen the trailer for the new Doom? They gave Doomguy a giant robot.
First thing I thought: "Why?"
Second thing I thought: "Why not?"
"Shiiiiiiiiiiiit." Gohan groaned as he slowly opened his eyes.
His body felt heavy and weak, every muscle aches as if he had been put through a meat grinder. His head pounds in pain, making it difficult for him to focus on anything other than the throbbing on his temples.
He tried to sit up, but his legs buckled and then gave out under his weight, causing him to fall back onto the cold floor with a thud.
"Ouch! My back."
Panic set in when he realized how weak he was.
"Is all this because I overused Clock-Up?" Gohan whimpered on the floor.
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X3.56 for 10 seconds.
WARNING: Prolonged use can have a very heavy toll on the user's body.
"I really am a dumbass." Complains the young man lying down. "It's the only Skill with a warning attached and I still ended up ignoring it."
Gohan closes his eyes and takes a deep breath to calm down and regain his strength, as soon he recovered a bit of his strength, he pushed himself to a sittig positiont..
"This is worse than a hangover." He complains once again, his head hurting even more due to the movement of his body.
Swallowing hard, Gohan made a tremendous effort to get up, but the pain that wracked his body was intolerable. The muscles in his back, legs, abdomen and arms ached intensely. His head seemed to be about to explode with pain.
He placed his hands on his upper legs and pressed hard to stand up, but the weight of his body was too much for him to bear. He felt as if all the discs in his spine were ruptured.
Lifting his head Gohan felt a bout of nausea as he tried to keep his balance. Trembling to fall, the young man paused and took a deep breath, trying to control the wave of nausea that washed over him.
When he finally managed to stabilize his balance, he made another effort to stand up completely. His head hurts once again and his stomach feels sick from the strength needed to perform this simple task.
"All the misfortune in the world for stupid people is too little." He muttered the saying from his old life under his breath as he tried to endure the pain throughout his body. "If I had paid more attention to the warning I wouldn't be experiencing this miserable torture."
Slowly Gohan shuffles to his bed.
"I think I'll spend the rest of the day meditating in my bed."
"These system mental bonuses are starting to look like indirect verbal assault."
Without the strength to question, Gohan focused on reaching his bed and throwing himself onto it.
"Finally." He mumbles as he falls onto the comfortable bed.
Gohan closed his eyes and felt the pain being eased through his body. Wanting to speed up the process he began to meditate, focusing on his breathing. Soon his mind began to relax, and his body began to feel a sense of peace and comfort that he had not experienced in a long time.
His muscles began a regeneration process, a slow process compared to his HP recovery. It was as if a magical force was rebuilding every damaged fiber. The pain that wracked his body began to slowly subside.
His back stopped hurting, and his legs felt stronger and more flexible. His head was being relieved of the pain, and the sickness in his stomach began to dissipate as well.
Gohan continued meditating for longer, unconsciously feeling the regeneration energy as it that passes through his body, Gohan slowly opened his eyes and stood up from the bed with ease he hadn't shown since before the battle against Vegeta.
"Ah… That's what I call recovery and gains." Gohan says with a satisfied smile on his mouth. "Now I'm ready to train again."
But turning to the clock in the entrance, he notices that it was already time for dinner, after all he spent the whole day meditating.
"Damn it! I think I'll just tally up yesterday's gains, eat and go to sleep."
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyan]
Level: 7 [26,250/35,000]
HP: 195,000
KP: 162,500
PL: 29,806
MIGHT: 39,000
AGILITY: 34,450
SPIRIT: 32,500
MENTAL: 13,280
Points: 800
Sitting in silence staring at his Status screen, Gohan thinks of strategies to shorten the time to face the giant gorilla.
"Trying to create buff techniques is out of the question, I don't know if my body or mind could handle an even greater toll." The young warrior grumbles. "This system doesn't have a store or dungeon creation that I can abuse… but there must be some mechanics that I can take advantage of."
With his eyes closed, the young man begins to review in his head everything he remembers about Dragon Ball lore, over power techniques, training methods, KI, weapons, physiognomy of the main races until something connects with what he knows about the system.
'This is impossible!' Raditz's voice echoes in the back of his mind. 'No matter how powerful the enemy is, there is no way a system construct can kill the user.'}
"Oh man...." Gohan complains, giving a sarcastic laugh. "I already know how to quickly increase my power… and it will hurt my body and ego a lot."
"I don't believe it!" Exclaims Gohan smiling. "It's Beast in Black."
Excitedly, Gohan sang the song that was one of his favorites in his past life.
Upon catching a glimpse of the creature, his stomach twisted nervously with traumatic memories from his childhood in the late 90s.
"I think I still have PTSD from facing Oozaru baby from Dragon Ball GT: Final Bout on Ps1!"
Gohan trembled in fear as he looked at the colossal monster that was approaching. Oozaru Vegeta's giant gorilla form was intimidating, covered in black fur, his blood red eyes glowed with an unearthly intensity, expressing an overwhelming fury. Its large mouth was open, revealing sharp, pointy teeth. His arms were huge and muscular, with large, powerful hands. His presence was oppressive, as if the earth itself was vibrating in response to his strength.
The monster became even angrier when he noticed Gohan in front of him, roaring once again with all the strength in his throat. His gaze is fixed on his opponent, as if he wants to devour him with his own eyes. The negative energy he emitted was palpable, haunting the air around him.
But instead of attacking, the monster began to laugh with its powerful and deep voice.
"You are brave to want to face me with your ridiculous power." The monster growled towards the little hybrid.
"If regrets could kill someone…" Gohan mutters, swallowing his nervousness and fear.
"Insect." Roars the monster as he slaps his opponent, throwing him to the ground.
[- 97,524 HP]
Gohan fell to the ground out of breath, completely stunned by the speed and force of the attack.
"I-I thought he was slower in this form." Gohan snorted
He was horrified when the Oozaru Vegeta lifted his foot and hovered over him, his massive frame casting a shadow over him. The monster's eyes glittered with malice as it prepared to deliver the final blow.
"DIE!" Shouted the monster, trampling Gohan.
[MASSIVE DAMAGE]
[-278,524 HP]
Injured and defeated, Gohan's body is stretched out on the white floor, without consciousness he remains in the same position until the next day.
"Everything hurts." Gohan speaks, getting up from the ground. "At least it hurts less than a Clock-up overuse."
Slowly the young man gets up and with a smug smile faces the windows he was waiting for.
"It looks like it will work." The young man grumbled, looking at the zenkai boost window."
Gohan collects his 2 silver skill bean rewards as he prepares for another day of training.
Although the Zenkai Boost Bonus has accelerated his gains, Gohan is not excited about the next few days of fighting and losing against Oozaru Vegeta.
"And I still have at least 6 more days of being mauled by a giant gorilla before I have a chance to defeat him." The Young Man mutters, putting on his 5 Ton outfit. "But I can't just depend on Zenkai Boost, I'm going to train my attributes and skills to guarantee my victory."
A total of 7 days, Gohan spent training intensely with his clothes now weighing five tons inside the room and being defeated in fights against Oozaru Vegeta. All of this was done with the aim of reaching his power level as quickly as possible.
On the morning of the eighth day, Gohan was under the impression that at his current level of power he had a real chance of defeating him. But before facing his opponent he wanted to be sure, so he opened his status window before starting to train.
"Nice!" Exclaims the young man smiling while looking at his status window. "It was really worth getting beaten by the Harambe Berserker."
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 12 [278,000/300,000]
HP: 976,250
KP: 827,500
PL: 148,893
MIGHT: 195,250
AGILITY: 170,300
SPIRIT: 165,500
MENTAL: 64,522
Points: 1,300
-Clock-Up Lv. 56/100 [ Expert ]
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X3.56 for 10 seconds.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.
-Flight Lv. 3/100 [ Master ] Cost: 10 KP/Minute
Effect: Fly at speed 100% of your SPIRIT.
ATTACK:
-Kamehameha Lv. 57/100 [ Master ]Cost: 1,500 KP
Effect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend. User can bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
-Ki Strike Lv. 75/100 [ Master ] Cost: 200 K.P.
Effect: Adds 200% of your MIGHT on physical attack. Ignores 20% of enemy damage reduction.
-Ki Blast Lv. 5/100 [ Master ] Cost: 50 KP
Effect: Throws a Ki sphere dealing 2% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
DEFENSE:
-Lord Camelot Lv. 55/100 [ Master ]
Cost: 100 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 12.5% of your SPIRIT in damage.
"I didn't train Clock-up for fear of getting screwed again and losing a whole day of training, now Ki Blast and Flight have reached Master." Said Gohan going over what changed in his Skills. "The flight speed has doubled and the cost of Ki Blast drops by half... Now the master level skills have increased little since training alone doesn't help as much and Oozaru Vegeta always defeats me quickly, not giving me time to practice them."
If Gohan is defeated today, he would probably be able to defeat Oozaru Vegeta with the next zenkai boost.
But he didn't want that.
Without realizing it, a sense of honor and pride had been awakened within Gohan. He wanted to defeat his opponent without another Zenkai Boost, even though it would be better for his training in the long run.
Gohan pondered where this pride could have come from, whether it was from training so hard or whether perhaps it was something linked to his half-Saiyan genetic heritage.
"Whatever." Gohan said to himself. "I will defeat him today, I owe it to my Saiyan side."
[1] Copper Skill Bean(+10)
[4] Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[2] Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
[6] Silver Skill Bean(+100)
[2] Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
"Good thing I'm half human and have a Brazilian soul, so I'm going to cheat just a little."
"Thank you Brazilian way."
By the end of the day Gohan had become familiar with the changes in his techniques and now he was in the middle of the white expanse ready to fight, facing the giant gorilla he had already summoned.
Although Gohan was still weaker than Oozaru, he was confident in his new abilities.
Without wasting time, Gohan quickly summons his ki, opening his legs in the posture of his most powerful attack.
"Kamehame-…"
Oozaru Vegeta laughs in disdain at the young man trying to hit him with the ki attack.
"Insignificant insect." Growls Vegeta at Gohan. "Even though you have become a little stronger since our last fight, your attack will at most feel like an insect bite."
"-…Haaaa-..."
The beam of energy flew towards the titanic ape's chest, confident that nothing was going to happen, the monster just raised its left hand to block the attack.
Unfortunately for Vegeta, he hadn't noticed that Gohan hadn't finished shouting his attack yet.
"-…Frag!" Shouted the young warrior.
The tip of the energy beam about to collide with the Oozaru's palm opened, fragmenting into several smaller beams colliding against the monster's body.
[95,725 DMG]
"What is that?" Questions Vegeta furiously. "Kakarot has never used this technique in this way."
Laughing confidently, Gohan begins to explain.
"I discovered that when Ki Skills reach Grand Master level I can add effects to my techniques."
Effects: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. User can bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
+Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Frag: The attack splits into several beams before impact, hitting multiple opponents but dividing the damage among the fragments.
"There are some really cool things I can do-." Said Gohan until he was stepped on by his opponent.
[- 87,397 HP]
The giant gorilla smiles looking as his boot crushed his little opponent.
"Then I just need to kill you before you can use them." Vegeta added in a sovereign tone. "Squashed like the bug you are."
To emphasize his point, Vegeta swung his foot trying to scrape his opponent's body against the floor of the temple room.
[- 74,435 HP]
But the prince encountered unexpected resistance.
[Lord Camelot Resist 41,345]
"What?" Questioned Vegeta, feeling his foot being lifted off the ground. "IMPOSSIBLE!"
Underneath the monster's foot, Gohan stood firm with the blue aura of his defense technique activated.
"DIE!" Shouted the Oozaru, putting more pressure on his steps.
"Lord Camelot Counter!"
A strange pressure coming from Gohan's hands hits Vegeta's foot through the sole of his boot.
[8,874 DMG]
Caught by surprise, he removes his limb from Gohan, who takes advantage of the gap to leave the ground, flying up to his head.
Cost: 100 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 25% of your SPIRIT in damage.
+ Counter: Returns 10% of damage taken to the attacker for an extra 1,000 KP/Minute.
+ Kinetic Healing: Absorb 20% of damage taken to be used to heal your body for 5,000KP/Minute.
+ Kinetic Charge: Absorb damage taken to be used in your next attack for 5,000 KP per absorbed attack.
Vegeta tries to grab him with one of his hands, but before he reaches him, Gohan's image dissolves into thin air.
Furious, Vegeta roars, hitting his chest.
"Fight like a real warrior, you cheating coward."
"Stop complaining you shitty King Kong." Said Gohan behind Vegeta. "If it's in the game, it's meant to be used."
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X5 for 30 seconds.
+ Blur: Adds 2,000 KP per short speed burst. While moving at high speed you are difficult to see clearly (This is not invisibility).
+ Blitz: Each physical attack landed during the short speed burst can be multiplied by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+ Intangibility: Adds 5,000 KP per short speed burst. Becomes intangible for the duration of the short speed burst doubling the total cost of the burst.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.
Gohan's heart raced in his chest as he evaded Vegeta's attacks. He knew he couldn't afford to make a mistake, not against someone as powerful as the Saiyan prince in his Oozaru form.
As Vegeta charged forward, Gohan activated Lord Camelot once again. The blue aura surrounds him as he braces himself for impact.
"Disappear!" Vegeta shouted, punching the boy.
[- 39,435 HP]
Vegeta's fist collided with his opponent's raised arms defending his chest, at another point Gohan would have his arms broken, but the strength of the attack was significantly reduced thanks to the defensive technique. Gohan gritted his teeth and countered with a powerful kick to his opponent's fist, making Vegeta's arm recoil.
[- 54,387 DMG]
"It won't end like this." He growled. "You're no better than me, Kakarot's spawn!"
Gohan didn't respond. Instead, he disabled Clock-up and kept Lord Camelot with the extra ability activated.
Vegeta, closing his red eyes, began to hit Gohan with his guard up. The young man received the prince's blows without dodging or even blinking. This angered Vegeta even more, as it made him look weak.
[- 42,872 HP]
[- 35,743 HP]
[- 39,125 HP]
Despite Gohan's exterior showing no emotions, he was tired and had pain in his muscles and bones as Vegeta continued to punch and kick his body.
[- 45,183 HP]
[- 40,991 HP]
[- 35,766 HP]
[- 37,172 HP]
[- 41,891 HP]
"Fight back, you weakling!" The gorilla shouts, bringing both hands down like a hammer on Gohan. "Be the man your father wasn't."
[- 127,872 HP]
Even with his defense technique activated, the last blow drastically drained Gohan's HP and further increased his pain and agony, but the young man's only reaction to the blow was to smile.
"All according to Keikaku." Gohan said with blood dripping from the corner of his mouth.
Lord Camelot's blue aura pulsed and expanded until it began to flicker in blue flames across the young hybrid's body.
"What are you doing?" Questions Vegeta, taking a step back.
In an ironic tone, Gohan responds.
"A combo."
As if waiting for his statement, the flames exploded like fire in a blue inferno, covering Gohan to the point of almost hiding him.
"Lord Camelot Kinetic Charge."
"I WILL NOT ALLOW IT!" Shouted Vegeta, firing a beam of energy from his mouth.
"Clock-up-…!" Gohan starts to speak only to disappear mid-sentence.
The Oozaru's energy beam hits the ground creating a blinding ki blast. The light from the explosion casts a shadow over Vegeta as Gohan reappears near his torso.
"-…Blitz X 5." It ends with the young man appearing to punch Vegeta in the stomach.
[215,000 DMG]
Gohan's fist connects with Vegeta's stomach with a sickening thud. The impact was violent to the point of making the monster bend over while particles of blood and sweat spread in all directions from the gorilla's body.
As if one blow wasn't enough, four more distorted images of Gohan's fist appeared in Vegeta's swollen belly, each pulsing with a ferocious energy that seemed to defy the laws of physics.
[215,000 DMG]
[215,000 DMG]
[215,000 DMG]
[215,000 DMG]
This feat was only possible because Gohan stored energy from Vegeta's attacks with Lord Camelot Kinetic Charge and then used Clock-Up Blitz X5 to multiply his punch.
"Gurgk!" Vegeta moans in a guttural tone as if he was going to vomit.
The Saiyan prince doubled over in pain, clutching his stomach as he struggled to catch his breath. Gohan watched him with a cold, calculating gaze, knowing that he had just dealt a blow that would leave the real Vegeta incapacitated for days.
Taking his chance, Gohan quickly brought his ki to the surface, gathering whatever was left of his Ki reserve. He could feel the raw power coursing through his veins, ready to be used against his enemy.
"Kamehameha!" Shouted Gohan firing a beam of energy.
"If-your -." Vegeta groaned breathlessly.
The prince raised one of his hands, stopping a beam of energy that seemed tiny when compared to his titanic size.
[87,542 DMG]
"Empower X10, Widen X10!" Shouted Gohan, feeling his Ki being drained in large quantities by the technique.
Gohan's Kamehameha began to grow, expanding rapidly as he put every last ounce of his energy into it. The beam of light intensified, its power increasing along with its size. It was as if the very air around him was being compressed, the energy so intense that it surpassed even Oozaru Vegeta's resistance.
[875,420 DMG]
"NOOOOOO…" The monster screamed, being consumed by the attack.
The final explosion was a true spectacle, a deafening boom that echoed through the infinite void of the time room.
Gohan falls to his knees on the ground, with Ki exhausted and his hands once again burned, only this time the injuries were less intense than the first.
"I won…" Said the young man in disbelief.
"He he." Gohan laughs awkwardly, staring at the Zenkai Boost window. "I got beaten up so much using Lord Camelot that I even got a zenkai boost."
Despite being slightly embarrassed, the feeling of triumph and joy flooded him.
Pride at having defeated a powerful enemy fills Gohan's chest, to the point where he ignores the windows with his rewards obscuring his field of vision. Tears of happiness began to flow from her eyes. He felt so happy and fulfilled that it was difficult to describe, as if everything he had suffered so far had been compensated with this single moment of glory.
Despite the cathartic moment, he slowly rose from the ground, and even with his arms burned, bones throbbing in pain, burning muscles and an overloaded heart, he smiled as the pain was also proof that he had achieved his goal.
"And I still have 10 months to focus on perfecting my techniques and increasing my power as much as possible." Said Gohan, choosing the attribute beans and Power Ball as a reward.
Although Gohan didn't know what the Power Ball did, he was curious about what this technique was capable of doing.
"Huh?" Asks the young man, surprised by the new window.
"Achievements?"
As if answering his question, a new window opens.
Effect = When training, player have his physical and mental resistance doubled. The user also has something similar to a sixth sense when it comes to training. Instinctively he knows when a form of training is viable or not when he is focused on a goal.
"This will be very useful… WAIT!" Exclaims Gohan loudly reading the Achievement window. "Isn't Hard Work Genius something related to Rock Lee?"
For 334 days straight Gohan trained.
When his power grew to the point that Oozaru Vegeta was no longer a challenge, he needed to find alternatives. To bypass this problem, he fought the gorilla using his 5 Ton suit, but this only prolonged the opponent's utility lifespan for a short time to gain attribute points.
His training would have completely stagnated if it weren't for the idea of focusing on gaining more points in his techniques that had reached the master level. Getting them to Grand Master level took a long time, but time was what Gohan had in spades.
Today, on the last day of first year training, Gohan woke up with his muscles sore. The pain in his body didn't even bother him anymore, as he was so used to intense training. He stretched his limbs, feeling the familiar pain of muscles straining to the limit.
As he stood up, he felt power coursing through his veins, a testament to the tireless effort he had put into his plan to get stronger.
"It's a shame that my stats stopped rising." The young warrior grumbled. "Not even when I move as far away as possible without risking getting lost and wearing the three heavy clothes at the same time do I feel challenged in here."
This was something that bothered Gohan.
"When Vegeta, Trunks, Goku and Vegeta came to train in the room, they were much more powerful than me. And even so, they had difficulty training here at first." Gohan thinks out loud. "This lack of progression in the last few weeks must be due to the lack of someone to train with me combined with some other factors that I still don't understand… at least my Ki Skills have reached the Grand Master rank."
[KI SKILLS]KI MANIPULATION:
-Clock-Up Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X5 for 30 seconds.
+Blur: Adds 2,000 KP per short speed burst. While moving at high speed you are difficult to see clearly (This is not invisibility).
+Extra attack: Each physical attack landed during the short speed burst can be multiplied by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+ Intangibility: Adds 5,000 KP per short speed burst. Becomes intangible for the duration of the short speed burst doubling the total cost of the burst.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.
-Flight Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 5 KP/Minute Effect: Fly at speed 100% of your SPIRIT.
+Stealth Mode: Adds 100 KP/Minute to cost. The user Aura is suppressed during flight and it doesn't make any noise while flying.
+Mach Surge: Adds 100 KP/Minute to cost. Doubling the flight speed ignoring air resistance.
+Skyquake: Adds X,000 KP to cost. Increases air resistance against your body decreasing speed while dragging a vapor cone caused by temperature and pressure behind the user. User can release the vapor cone in a sonic boom causing damage equivalent to X in an area of X meters in radius.
-Power Ball Lv. 01/100 [ Grand Master ] Cost: 5,000 KP
Effect: Shots an Energy Sphere capable of emitting Blutz Waves, mimicking the presence of a full moon. Duration is 120 minutes, and the size is 6 meters radius.
+Empower: Multiplied the Blutz Waves emitted by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+Extend: Multiplied the duration by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
ATTACK:
-Kamehameha Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 1,500 KP Effects: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. User can bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
+Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Frag: The attack splits into several beams before impact, hitting multiple opponents but dividing the damage among the fragments.
-Ki Strike Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 1,000 KP Effect: Adds 300% of your MIGHT on physical attack. Ignores 50% of enemy damage reduction.
+Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Extra attack: The physical attack landed can be multiplied by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter of your strike by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
-Ki Blast Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 100 KP Effect: Throws a Ki sphere dealing 2% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
+Rapid Shot: Multiplied the speed of each shot by the number of times you spend 100 KP.
+Many shot: Shots multiplied by the number of times you spend 100 KP.
DEFENSE:
-Lord Camelot Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 100 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 25% of your SPIRIT in damage.
+Counter: Returns 10% of damage taken to the attacker for an extra 1,000 KP/Minute.
+ Kinetic Healing: Absorb 20% of damage taken to be used to heal your body for 5,000KP/Minute.
+Kinetic Charge: Absorb damage taken to be used in your next attack for 5,000 KP per absorbed attack.
"The day I ate the Silver Skill Bean I was confused because I gained less than 100 in Kamehameha, Lord Camelot and Clock Up. But when the other Skills reached the Grand Master rank they also didn't advance any further. So it becomes obvious that I reach some kind of cap, that I need some different training or perhaps divine Ki."
In his rationalization about his powers, another realization dawns on Gohan's mind.
"Since when have I been talking to myself?" Question the worried young man. "I'm going crazy in this isolation."
The young man turns to the entrance and sighs tiredly.
"I don't remember exactly how many days I have out there until we leave for Namek, but I'm pretty sure it was more like 10 days." Said the young man trying to pull knowledge over 20 years old from the depths of his memories. "I think I'm going to spend a few days out there, instead of continuing my training for another year, maybe talk to some masters to train some techniques and then I'll perfect them when I get back here again."
Satisfied with his decision, Gohan slowly walked towards the exit, as soon as he opened the door he came face to face with a large and familiar figure staring at him intensely.
"It's good to see you again, Mr. Popo." Gohan said, giving a small bow to the iconic character.
Instead of answering the boy, Popo ignored him and continued to stare at him. Gohan, not knowing how to react, waited in silence for a few minutes until Mr. Popo approached him, placing a hand on his shoulder and speaking in a stern tone.
"Little Gohan." Popo said, looking into the young warrior's eyes. "If you keep going like this, you'll end up killing yourself."
"B-but I'm feeling great." Gohan said worriedly. "My power has grown a lot in this year of training."
Popo shakes his head negatively, silencing the boy before continuing to speak.
"It's true that you have greatly increased your power." Popo comments, maintaining a severe tone. "But the problem is that if you are becoming a Ki bomb capable of destroying the planet."
"WHAT?"
Gohan Character Sheet:
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 29 [60 M / 79 M]
HP: 4 M
KP: 4 M
PL: 662 K
MIGHT: 850 K
AGILITY: 700 K
SPIRIT: 820 K
MENTAL: 280 K
Points: 3.000
What do you think of this new form format?
The difference is using "K" to abbreviate a thousand, "M" for a million, "B" for a billion etc…
Boa noite pessoas,
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, we'll have more interactions with various characters before Gohan returns for his second year of training.
If you want to talk to me you can find me on X(Twitter) , search for renanp1m .
COMMENTS:
-davvasconcelos(questionablequesting):
Man, this is an interesting story.
You improved your writing from one chapter to the next, the transition between scenes in the first chapter was a bit abrupt and now it's more fluid.
Regarding the novel, I'm in favor of Harem, this is a world that you can die at the whim of a planet-destroying villain, better make the most of it.
Pairing suggestion: Videl, Erasa, Zangya and Android 21.
-Renan:
Thanks for the compliment.
I'm still deciding on the romantic pairing, but as I said before, it won't be a Harem.
I would like to thank Sleepy for his help with the English text.
I saw some comments talking about using the Hyperbolic Time Chamber and I would like to comment on them.
Before Dende rebuilds the chamber, it the following limit:
"The Chamber can only be used for two days (or two years) by any given person, meaning a person can only enter the chamber twice in their lifetime, assuming they stay for the full year both times. Staying in the chamber for two days straight counts as two uses. If anybody attempts to use the chamber past their 48-hour limit, they will not be able to exit, leaving them trapped in the nothingness and not allowing anyone else to use the outside door."
And as the title makes clear, we will end the first year in this chapter.
Ps: Have you seen the trailer for the new Doom? They gave Doomguy a giant robot.
First thing I thought: "Why?"
Second thing I thought: "Why not?"
[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS ON THE FLOOR]
"Shiiiiiiiiiiiit." Gohan groaned as he slowly opened his eyes.
[YOU'RE PARTIALLY HEALED]
His body felt heavy and weak, every muscle aches as if he had been put through a meat grinder. His head pounds in pain, making it difficult for him to focus on anything other than the throbbing on his temples.
He tried to sit up, but his legs buckled and then gave out under his weight, causing him to fall back onto the cold floor with a thud.
"Ouch! My back."
Panic set in when he realized how weak he was.
"Is all this because I overused Clock-Up?" Gohan whimpered on the floor.
[KI SKILLS]
-Clock-Up Lv. 56/100 [ Expert ]Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X3.56 for 10 seconds.
WARNING: Prolonged use can have a very heavy toll on the user's body.
[KI SKILLS]
"I really am a dumbass." Complains the young man lying down. "It's the only Skill with a warning attached and I still ended up ignoring it."
Gohan closes his eyes and takes a deep breath to calm down and regain his strength, as soon he recovered a bit of his strength, he pushed himself to a sittig positiont..
"This is worse than a hangover." He complains once again, his head hurting even more due to the movement of his body.
Swallowing hard, Gohan made a tremendous effort to get up, but the pain that wracked his body was intolerable. The muscles in his back, legs, abdomen and arms ached intensely. His head seemed to be about to explode with pain.
He placed his hands on his upper legs and pressed hard to stand up, but the weight of his body was too much for him to bear. He felt as if all the discs in his spine were ruptured.
Lifting his head Gohan felt a bout of nausea as he tried to keep his balance. Trembling to fall, the young man paused and took a deep breath, trying to control the wave of nausea that washed over him.
When he finally managed to stabilize his balance, he made another effort to stand up completely. His head hurts once again and his stomach feels sick from the strength needed to perform this simple task.
"All the misfortune in the world for stupid people is too little." He muttered the saying from his old life under his breath as he tried to endure the pain throughout his body. "If I had paid more attention to the warning I wouldn't be experiencing this miserable torture."
Slowly Gohan shuffles to his bed.
"I think I'll spend the rest of the day meditating in my bed."
[+5 MENTAL]
"These system mental bonuses are starting to look like indirect verbal assault."
[+10 MENTAL]
Without the strength to question, Gohan focused on reaching his bed and throwing himself onto it.
"Finally." He mumbles as he falls onto the comfortable bed.
Gohan closed his eyes and felt the pain being eased through his body. Wanting to speed up the process he began to meditate, focusing on his breathing. Soon his mind began to relax, and his body began to feel a sense of peace and comfort that he had not experienced in a long time.
His muscles began a regeneration process, a slow process compared to his HP recovery. It was as if a magical force was rebuilding every damaged fiber. The pain that wracked his body began to slowly subside.
His back stopped hurting, and his legs felt stronger and more flexible. His head was being relieved of the pain, and the sickness in his stomach began to dissipate as well.
Gohan continued meditating for longer, unconsciously feeling the regeneration energy as it that passes through his body, Gohan slowly opened his eyes and stood up from the bed with ease he hadn't shown since before the battle against Vegeta.
[+ 36 Meditate Levels]
"Ah… That's what I call recovery and gains." Gohan says with a satisfied smile on his mouth. "Now I'm ready to train again."
But turning to the clock in the entrance, he notices that it was already time for dinner, after all he spent the whole day meditating.
"Damn it! I think I'll just tally up yesterday's gains, eat and go to sleep."
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyan]
Level: 7 [26,250/35,000]
HP: 195,000
KP: 162,500
PL: 29,806
MIGHT: 39,000
AGILITY: 34,450
SPIRIT: 32,500
MENTAL: 13,280
Points: 800
[STATUS]
"Oozaru Vegeta is 7 times my power level and I will need at least 48 fights against normal Vegeta to level up again... which won't be nearly enough to face Oozaru Vegeta on equal terms."
Sitting in silence staring at his Status screen, Gohan thinks of strategies to shorten the time to face the giant gorilla.
"Trying to create buff techniques is out of the question, I don't know if my body or mind could handle an even greater toll." The young warrior grumbles. "This system doesn't have a store or dungeon creation that I can abuse… but there must be some mechanics that I can take advantage of."
With his eyes closed, the young man begins to review in his head everything he remembers about Dragon Ball lore, over power techniques, training methods, KI, weapons, physiognomy of the main races until something connects with what he knows about the system.
'This is impossible!' Raditz's voice echoes in the back of his mind. 'No matter how powerful the enemy is, there is no way a system construct can kill the user.'}
"Oh man...." Gohan complains, giving a sarcastic laugh. "I already know how to quickly increase my power… and it will hurt my body and ego a lot."
[DBI:GG]
[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]
Despite being determined to put his plan to get strong quickly into practice, Gohan was terrified of facing an enemy so much more powerful than him.[HERE COMES A NEW CHALLENGER!]
[BEEEEERSEEEEERKEEEER]
"I don't believe it!" Exclaims Gohan smiling. "It's Beast in Black."
Excitedly, Gohan sang the song that was one of his favorites in his past life.
[Like a hellraiser
Monster of rage
Unleash the fury
Through your sword of hate
Destroy and murder
Retaliate
Harness the power
Of the beast in black
BEEEEEERSEEEEERKEEEER]
A gigantic green pixel pillar explodes in front of Gohan, catching the young warrior by surprise, when he looks ahead he notices the materialization of a monster over 30 meters tall(100 f).Monster of rage
Unleash the fury
Through your sword of hate
Destroy and murder
Retaliate
Harness the power
Of the beast in black
BEEEEEERSEEEEERKEEEER]
Upon catching a glimpse of the creature, his stomach twisted nervously with traumatic memories from his childhood in the late 90s.
"I think I still have PTSD from facing Oozaru baby from Dragon Ball GT: Final Bout on Ps1!"
[Ladies and gentlemen, brace yourselves for a spectacle of raw, untamed power!
This isn't the Vegeta you know!
He is a primal beast, a hurricane of rage fueled by a power that could shatter planets!
THE RAMPAGING MONSTER...
THE DEATH OF A THOUSAND PLANETS...
OOOOZARU VEGETA!]
"GUOOOOOH!" Roared the giant gorilla monster looking up at the sky.This isn't the Vegeta you know!
He is a primal beast, a hurricane of rage fueled by a power that could shatter planets!
THE RAMPAGING MONSTER...
THE DEATH OF A THOUSAND PLANETS...
OOOOZARU VEGETA!]
Gohan trembled in fear as he looked at the colossal monster that was approaching. Oozaru Vegeta's giant gorilla form was intimidating, covered in black fur, his blood red eyes glowed with an unearthly intensity, expressing an overwhelming fury. Its large mouth was open, revealing sharp, pointy teeth. His arms were huge and muscular, with large, powerful hands. His presence was oppressive, as if the earth itself was vibrating in response to his strength.
The monster became even angrier when he noticed Gohan in front of him, roaring once again with all the strength in his throat. His gaze is fixed on his opponent, as if he wants to devour him with his own eyes. The negative energy he emitted was palpable, haunting the air around him.
But instead of attacking, the monster began to laugh with its powerful and deep voice.
"You are brave to want to face me with your ridiculous power." The monster growled towards the little hybrid.
[READY?]
"If regrets could kill someone…" Gohan mutters, swallowing his nervousness and fear.
[FIGHT!]
Taking a deep breath, Gohan flies towards the Vegeta. His ki coursed through his body as he launched himself at the giant gorilla's figure, his fists glowing with energy. But the beast was faster than him.
"Insect." Roars the monster as he slaps his opponent, throwing him to the ground.
[- 97,524 HP]
Gohan fell to the ground out of breath, completely stunned by the speed and force of the attack.
"I-I thought he was slower in this form." Gohan snorted
He was horrified when the Oozaru Vegeta lifted his foot and hovered over him, his massive frame casting a shadow over him. The monster's eyes glittered with malice as it prepared to deliver the final blow.
"DIE!" Shouted the monster, trampling Gohan.
[MASSIVE DAMAGE]
[-278,524 HP]
[YOU'RE OUT OF HP]
[YOU BLACKED OUT]
[YOU BLACKED OUT]
Injured and defeated, Gohan's body is stretched out on the white floor, without consciousness he remains in the same position until the next day.
[YOU SLEPT SIX HOURS ON THE FLOOR]
"Everything hurts." Gohan speaks, getting up from the ground. "At least it hurts less than a Clock-up overuse."
[YOU'RE PARTIALLY HEALED]
Slowly the young man gets up and with a smug smile faces the windows he was waiting for.
[ZENKAI BOOST (30%)]
"It looks like it will work." The young man grumbled, looking at the zenkai boost window."
[+36,000 XP]
[+2 Levels]
"I forgot that I also get 20% XP." Celebrated the young man with the new levels.[+2 Levels]
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]
Silver Attribute Bean (+50%)
Silver Skill Bean (+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean (+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]
Silver Attribute Bean (+50%)
Silver Skill Bean (+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean (+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]
Gohan collects his 2 silver skill bean rewards as he prepares for another day of training.
Although the Zenkai Boost Bonus has accelerated his gains, Gohan is not excited about the next few days of fighting and losing against Oozaru Vegeta.
"And I still have at least 6 more days of being mauled by a giant gorilla before I have a chance to defeat him." The Young Man mutters, putting on his 5 Ton outfit. "But I can't just depend on Zenkai Boost, I'm going to train my attributes and skills to guarantee my victory."
[DBI:GG]
A total of 7 days, Gohan spent training intensely with his clothes now weighing five tons inside the room and being defeated in fights against Oozaru Vegeta. All of this was done with the aim of reaching his power level as quickly as possible.
On the morning of the eighth day, Gohan was under the impression that at his current level of power he had a real chance of defeating him. But before facing his opponent he wanted to be sure, so he opened his status window before starting to train.
"Nice!" Exclaims the young man smiling while looking at his status window. "It was really worth getting beaten by the Harambe Berserker."
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 12 [278,000/300,000]
HP: 976,250
KP: 827,500
PL: 148,893
MIGHT: 195,250
AGILITY: 170,300
SPIRIT: 165,500
MENTAL: 64,522
Points: 1,300
[STATUS]
"Oozaru Vegeta has a Power level of 180,000, making him 31.107 more powerful than me." Gohan grumbles, pondering whether or not he should face the giant gorilla. "Let's look at Ki Skills."
[KI SKILLS]
KI MANIPULATION:-Clock-Up Lv. 56/100 [ Expert ]
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X3.56 for 10 seconds.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.
-Flight Lv. 3/100 [ Master ] Cost: 10 KP/Minute
Effect: Fly at speed 100% of your SPIRIT.
ATTACK:
-Kamehameha Lv. 57/100 [ Master ]Cost: 1,500 KP
Effect: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. Extra 1% damage for every 20 KP you expend. User can bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
-Ki Strike Lv. 75/100 [ Master ] Cost: 200 K.P.
Effect: Adds 200% of your MIGHT on physical attack. Ignores 20% of enemy damage reduction.
-Ki Blast Lv. 5/100 [ Master ] Cost: 50 KP
Effect: Throws a Ki sphere dealing 2% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
DEFENSE:
-Lord Camelot Lv. 55/100 [ Master ]
Cost: 100 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 12.5% of your SPIRIT in damage.
[KI SKILLS]
"I didn't train Clock-up for fear of getting screwed again and losing a whole day of training, now Ki Blast and Flight have reached Master." Said Gohan going over what changed in his Skills. "The flight speed has doubled and the cost of Ki Blast drops by half... Now the master level skills have increased little since training alone doesn't help as much and Oozaru Vegeta always defeats me quickly, not giving me time to practice them."
If Gohan is defeated today, he would probably be able to defeat Oozaru Vegeta with the next zenkai boost.
But he didn't want that.
Without realizing it, a sense of honor and pride had been awakened within Gohan. He wanted to defeat his opponent without another Zenkai Boost, even though it would be better for his training in the long run.
Gohan pondered where this pride could have come from, whether it was from training so hard or whether perhaps it was something linked to his half-Saiyan genetic heritage.
"Whatever." Gohan said to himself. "I will defeat him today, I owe it to my Saiyan side."
[INVENTORY]
[4] Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)[1] Copper Skill Bean(+10)
[4] Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[2] Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
[6] Silver Skill Bean(+100)
[2] Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[INVENTORY]
Giving a shit-eating grin, the young man takes 4 of his Silver Skill Beans.
"Good thing I'm half human and have a Brazilian soul, so I'm going to cheat just a little."
[+44 Clock-Up]
[Clock-Up Reached Master Rank]
[+100 Clock-Up]
[Clock-Up Reached Grand Master Rank]
[+1 Clock-Up]
[+43 Kamehameha]
[Kamehameha Reached Grand Master Rank]
[+1 Kamehameha]
[+45 Lord Camelot]
[Lord Camelot Reached Grand Master Rank]
[+1 Lord Camelot]
Gohan's eyes widened in surprise as he noticed the new numbers and text displayed next to his techniques. He had expected some sort of power increase, but what he was seeing would completely alter the way he fought.[Clock-Up Reached Master Rank]
[+100 Clock-Up]
[Clock-Up Reached Grand Master Rank]
[+1 Clock-Up]
[+43 Kamehameha]
[Kamehameha Reached Grand Master Rank]
[+1 Kamehameha]
[+45 Lord Camelot]
[Lord Camelot Reached Grand Master Rank]
[+1 Lord Camelot]
"Thank you Brazilian way."
[DBI:GG]
By the end of the day Gohan had become familiar with the changes in his techniques and now he was in the middle of the white expanse ready to fight, facing the giant gorilla he had already summoned.
[READY?]
Although Gohan was still weaker than Oozaru, he was confident in his new abilities.
[FIGHT!]
Without wasting time, Gohan quickly summons his ki, opening his legs in the posture of his most powerful attack.
"Kamehame-…"
Oozaru Vegeta laughs in disdain at the young man trying to hit him with the ki attack.
"Insignificant insect." Growls Vegeta at Gohan. "Even though you have become a little stronger since our last fight, your attack will at most feel like an insect bite."
"-…Haaaa-..."
The beam of energy flew towards the titanic ape's chest, confident that nothing was going to happen, the monster just raised its left hand to block the attack.
Unfortunately for Vegeta, he hadn't noticed that Gohan hadn't finished shouting his attack yet.
"-…Frag!" Shouted the young warrior.
The tip of the energy beam about to collide with the Oozaru's palm opened, fragmenting into several smaller beams colliding against the monster's body.
[95,725 DMG]
"What is that?" Questions Vegeta furiously. "Kakarot has never used this technique in this way."
Laughing confidently, Gohan begins to explain.
"I discovered that when Ki Skills reach Grand Master level I can add effects to my techniques."
[KI SKILLS]
-Kamehameha Lv. 01/100 [ Grand Master ]Cost: 1,500 KPEffects: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. User can bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
+Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Frag: The attack splits into several beams before impact, hitting multiple opponents but dividing the damage among the fragments.
[KI SKILLS]
"There are some really cool things I can do-." Said Gohan until he was stepped on by his opponent.
[- 87,397 HP]
The giant gorilla smiles looking as his boot crushed his little opponent.
"Then I just need to kill you before you can use them." Vegeta added in a sovereign tone. "Squashed like the bug you are."
To emphasize his point, Vegeta swung his foot trying to scrape his opponent's body against the floor of the temple room.
[- 74,435 HP]
But the prince encountered unexpected resistance.
[Lord Camelot Resist 41,345]
"What?" Questioned Vegeta, feeling his foot being lifted off the ground. "IMPOSSIBLE!"
Underneath the monster's foot, Gohan stood firm with the blue aura of his defense technique activated.
"DIE!" Shouted the Oozaru, putting more pressure on his steps.
"Lord Camelot Counter!"
A strange pressure coming from Gohan's hands hits Vegeta's foot through the sole of his boot.
[8,874 DMG]
Caught by surprise, he removes his limb from Gohan, who takes advantage of the gap to leave the ground, flying up to his head.
[KI SKILLS]
-Lord Camelot Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]Cost: 100 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 25% of your SPIRIT in damage.
+ Counter: Returns 10% of damage taken to the attacker for an extra 1,000 KP/Minute.
+ Kinetic Healing: Absorb 20% of damage taken to be used to heal your body for 5,000KP/Minute.
+ Kinetic Charge: Absorb damage taken to be used in your next attack for 5,000 KP per absorbed attack.
[KI SKILLS]
Vegeta tries to grab him with one of his hands, but before he reaches him, Gohan's image dissolves into thin air.
Furious, Vegeta roars, hitting his chest.
"Fight like a real warrior, you cheating coward."
"Stop complaining you shitty King Kong." Said Gohan behind Vegeta. "If it's in the game, it's meant to be used."
[KI SKILLS]
-Clock-Up Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X5 for 30 seconds.
+ Blur: Adds 2,000 KP per short speed burst. While moving at high speed you are difficult to see clearly (This is not invisibility).
+ Blitz: Each physical attack landed during the short speed burst can be multiplied by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+ Intangibility: Adds 5,000 KP per short speed burst. Becomes intangible for the duration of the short speed burst doubling the total cost of the burst.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.
[KI SKILLS]
Vegeta attacks Gohan with the savagery of a hungry beast. Gohan, sensing imminent danger, activated the clock-up to escape. His body glowed red as he moved at incredible speed, avoiding Vegeta's savage punches.
Gohan's heart raced in his chest as he evaded Vegeta's attacks. He knew he couldn't afford to make a mistake, not against someone as powerful as the Saiyan prince in his Oozaru form.
As Vegeta charged forward, Gohan activated Lord Camelot once again. The blue aura surrounds him as he braces himself for impact.
"Disappear!" Vegeta shouted, punching the boy.
[- 39,435 HP]
Vegeta's fist collided with his opponent's raised arms defending his chest, at another point Gohan would have his arms broken, but the strength of the attack was significantly reduced thanks to the defensive technique. Gohan gritted his teeth and countered with a powerful kick to his opponent's fist, making Vegeta's arm recoil.
[- 54,387 DMG]
"It won't end like this." He growled. "You're no better than me, Kakarot's spawn!"
Gohan didn't respond. Instead, he disabled Clock-up and kept Lord Camelot with the extra ability activated.
Vegeta, closing his red eyes, began to hit Gohan with his guard up. The young man received the prince's blows without dodging or even blinking. This angered Vegeta even more, as it made him look weak.
[- 42,872 HP]
[- 35,743 HP]
[- 39,125 HP]
Despite Gohan's exterior showing no emotions, he was tired and had pain in his muscles and bones as Vegeta continued to punch and kick his body.
[- 45,183 HP]
[- 40,991 HP]
[- 35,766 HP]
[- 37,172 HP]
[- 41,891 HP]
"Fight back, you weakling!" The gorilla shouts, bringing both hands down like a hammer on Gohan. "Be the man your father wasn't."
[- 127,872 HP]
Even with his defense technique activated, the last blow drastically drained Gohan's HP and further increased his pain and agony, but the young man's only reaction to the blow was to smile.
"All according to Keikaku." Gohan said with blood dripping from the corner of his mouth.
Lord Camelot's blue aura pulsed and expanded until it began to flicker in blue flames across the young hybrid's body.
"What are you doing?" Questions Vegeta, taking a step back.
In an ironic tone, Gohan responds.
"A combo."
As if waiting for his statement, the flames exploded like fire in a blue inferno, covering Gohan to the point of almost hiding him.
<Reference image>
"Lord Camelot Kinetic Charge."
"I WILL NOT ALLOW IT!" Shouted Vegeta, firing a beam of energy from his mouth.
"Clock-up-…!" Gohan starts to speak only to disappear mid-sentence.
The Oozaru's energy beam hits the ground creating a blinding ki blast. The light from the explosion casts a shadow over Vegeta as Gohan reappears near his torso.
"-…Blitz X 5." It ends with the young man appearing to punch Vegeta in the stomach.
[215,000 DMG]
Gohan's fist connects with Vegeta's stomach with a sickening thud. The impact was violent to the point of making the monster bend over while particles of blood and sweat spread in all directions from the gorilla's body.
As if one blow wasn't enough, four more distorted images of Gohan's fist appeared in Vegeta's swollen belly, each pulsing with a ferocious energy that seemed to defy the laws of physics.
[215,000 DMG]
[215,000 DMG]
[215,000 DMG]
[215,000 DMG]
This feat was only possible because Gohan stored energy from Vegeta's attacks with Lord Camelot Kinetic Charge and then used Clock-Up Blitz X5 to multiply his punch.
"Gurgk!" Vegeta moans in a guttural tone as if he was going to vomit.
The Saiyan prince doubled over in pain, clutching his stomach as he struggled to catch his breath. Gohan watched him with a cold, calculating gaze, knowing that he had just dealt a blow that would leave the real Vegeta incapacitated for days.
Taking his chance, Gohan quickly brought his ki to the surface, gathering whatever was left of his Ki reserve. He could feel the raw power coursing through his veins, ready to be used against his enemy.
"Kamehameha!" Shouted Gohan firing a beam of energy.
"If-your -." Vegeta groaned breathlessly.
The prince raised one of his hands, stopping a beam of energy that seemed tiny when compared to his titanic size.
[87,542 DMG]
"Empower X10, Widen X10!" Shouted Gohan, feeling his Ki being drained in large quantities by the technique.
Gohan's Kamehameha began to grow, expanding rapidly as he put every last ounce of his energy into it. The beam of light intensified, its power increasing along with its size. It was as if the very air around him was being compressed, the energy so intense that it surpassed even Oozaru Vegeta's resistance.
[875,420 DMG]
"NOOOOOO…" The monster screamed, being consumed by the attack.
The final explosion was a true spectacle, a deafening boom that echoed through the infinite void of the time room.
[KO]
Gohan falls to his knees on the ground, with Ki exhausted and his hands once again burned, only this time the injuries were less intense than the first.
[YOU WIN!]
"I won…" Said the young man in disbelief.
[+180,000 XP]
[+2 Level]
[+34,750 MIGHT]
[+24,700 AGILITY]
[+24,500 SPIRIT]
[+27,478 MENTAL]
[ZENKAI BOOST(30%)]
[+2 Level]
[+34,750 MIGHT]
[+24,700 AGILITY]
[+24,500 SPIRIT]
[+27,478 MENTAL]
[ZENKAI BOOST(30%)]
"He he." Gohan laughs awkwardly, staring at the Zenkai Boost window. "I got beaten up so much using Lord Camelot that I even got a zenkai boost."
Despite being slightly embarrassed, the feeling of triumph and joy flooded him.
Pride at having defeated a powerful enemy fills Gohan's chest, to the point where he ignores the windows with his rewards obscuring his field of vision. Tears of happiness began to flow from her eyes. He felt so happy and fulfilled that it was difficult to describe, as if everything he had suffered so far had been compensated with this single moment of glory.
[NEW ITEM]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]
Silver Attribute Bean (+50%)
Silver Skill Bean (+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean (+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM]
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]
Silver Attribute Bean (+50%)
Silver Skill Bean (+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean (+100)
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD(x2)]
Despite the cathartic moment, he slowly rose from the ground, and even with his arms burned, bones throbbing in pain, burning muscles and an overloaded heart, he smiled as the pain was also proof that he had achieved his goal.
[You have defeated a named character.]
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Power Ball Ki Skill
+ 100 Athletics
+ 100 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
Power Ball Ki Skill
+ 100 Athletics
+ 100 Oozaru
[CHOOSE YOUR REWARD]
"And I still have 10 months to focus on perfecting my techniques and increasing my power as much as possible." Said Gohan, choosing the attribute beans and Power Ball as a reward.
Although Gohan didn't know what the Power Ball did, he was curious about what this technique was capable of doing.
[New System Feature is now available.]
[Achievements Unlocked]
[Achievements Unlocked]
"Huh?" Asks the young man, surprised by the new window.
[For having reached one hundred thousand in all attributes in less than a year alone, the user received the "Hard Work Genius" achievement.]
"Achievements?"
As if answering his question, a new window opens.
[ACHIEVEMENTS]
# Hard Work Genius:Effect = When training, player have his physical and mental resistance doubled. The user also has something similar to a sixth sense when it comes to training. Instinctively he knows when a form of training is viable or not when he is focused on a goal.
[ACHIEVEMENTS]
"This will be very useful… WAIT!" Exclaims Gohan loudly reading the Achievement window. "Isn't Hard Work Genius something related to Rock Lee?"
[DBI:GG]
For 334 days straight Gohan trained.
When his power grew to the point that Oozaru Vegeta was no longer a challenge, he needed to find alternatives. To bypass this problem, he fought the gorilla using his 5 Ton suit, but this only prolonged the opponent's utility lifespan for a short time to gain attribute points.
His training would have completely stagnated if it weren't for the idea of focusing on gaining more points in his techniques that had reached the master level. Getting them to Grand Master level took a long time, but time was what Gohan had in spades.
Today, on the last day of first year training, Gohan woke up with his muscles sore. The pain in his body didn't even bother him anymore, as he was so used to intense training. He stretched his limbs, feeling the familiar pain of muscles straining to the limit.
As he stood up, he felt power coursing through his veins, a testament to the tireless effort he had put into his plan to get stronger.
"It's a shame that my stats stopped rising." The young warrior grumbled. "Not even when I move as far away as possible without risking getting lost and wearing the three heavy clothes at the same time do I feel challenged in here."
This was something that bothered Gohan.
"When Vegeta, Trunks, Goku and Vegeta came to train in the room, they were much more powerful than me. And even so, they had difficulty training here at first." Gohan thinks out loud. "This lack of progression in the last few weeks must be due to the lack of someone to train with me combined with some other factors that I still don't understand… at least my Ki Skills have reached the Grand Master rank."
[KI SKILLS]
-Clock-Up Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 5,000 KP To change body / 1,000 KP For short speed burst Effect: Prepares the body to move in short bursts of speed. Speed Burst X5 for 30 seconds.
+Blur: Adds 2,000 KP per short speed burst. While moving at high speed you are difficult to see clearly (This is not invisibility).
+Extra attack: Each physical attack landed during the short speed burst can be multiplied by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+ Intangibility: Adds 5,000 KP per short speed burst. Becomes intangible for the duration of the short speed burst doubling the total cost of the burst.
WARNING: Prolonged use can overload the user's body.
-Flight Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 5 KP/Minute Effect: Fly at speed 100% of your SPIRIT.
+Stealth Mode: Adds 100 KP/Minute to cost. The user Aura is suppressed during flight and it doesn't make any noise while flying.
+Mach Surge: Adds 100 KP/Minute to cost. Doubling the flight speed ignoring air resistance.
+Skyquake: Adds X,000 KP to cost. Increases air resistance against your body decreasing speed while dragging a vapor cone caused by temperature and pressure behind the user. User can release the vapor cone in a sonic boom causing damage equivalent to X in an area of X meters in radius.
-Power Ball Lv. 01/100 [ Grand Master ] Cost: 5,000 KP
Effect: Shots an Energy Sphere capable of emitting Blutz Waves, mimicking the presence of a full moon. Duration is 120 minutes, and the size is 6 meters radius.
+Empower: Multiplied the Blutz Waves emitted by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+Extend: Multiplied the duration by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
ATTACK:
-Kamehameha Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 1,500 KP Effects: Continuous Beam Ki attack, 100% SPIRIT damage. User can bend the energy beam in the middle of the attack. If desired, the user can be pushed by the force of their attack according to Newton's third law.
+Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Frag: The attack splits into several beams before impact, hitting multiple opponents but dividing the damage among the fragments.
-Ki Strike Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 1,000 KP Effect: Adds 300% of your MIGHT on physical attack. Ignores 50% of enemy damage reduction.
+Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
+Extra attack: The physical attack landed can be multiplied by the number of times you spend 5,000 KP.
+Widen: Multiplied the diameter of your strike by the number of times you spend 2,000 KP.
-Ki Blast Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 100 KP Effect: Throws a Ki sphere dealing 2% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
+Rapid Shot: Multiplied the speed of each shot by the number of times you spend 100 KP.
+Many shot: Shots multiplied by the number of times you spend 100 KP.
DEFENSE:
-Lord Camelot Lv. 01/100 [ Grandmaster ]
Cost: 100 KP/Minute Effect: Resist 25% of your SPIRIT in damage.
+Counter: Returns 10% of damage taken to the attacker for an extra 1,000 KP/Minute.
+ Kinetic Healing: Absorb 20% of damage taken to be used to heal your body for 5,000KP/Minute.
+Kinetic Charge: Absorb damage taken to be used in your next attack for 5,000 KP per absorbed attack.
[KI SKILLS]
"The day I ate the Silver Skill Bean I was confused because I gained less than 100 in Kamehameha, Lord Camelot and Clock Up. But when the other Skills reached the Grand Master rank they also didn't advance any further. So it becomes obvious that I reach some kind of cap, that I need some different training or perhaps divine Ki."
In his rationalization about his powers, another realization dawns on Gohan's mind.
"Since when have I been talking to myself?" Question the worried young man. "I'm going crazy in this isolation."
The young man turns to the entrance and sighs tiredly.
"I don't remember exactly how many days I have out there until we leave for Namek, but I'm pretty sure it was more like 10 days." Said the young man trying to pull knowledge over 20 years old from the depths of his memories. "I think I'm going to spend a few days out there, instead of continuing my training for another year, maybe talk to some masters to train some techniques and then I'll perfect them when I get back here again."
Satisfied with his decision, Gohan slowly walked towards the exit, as soon as he opened the door he came face to face with a large and familiar figure staring at him intensely.
"It's good to see you again, Mr. Popo." Gohan said, giving a small bow to the iconic character.
Instead of answering the boy, Popo ignored him and continued to stare at him. Gohan, not knowing how to react, waited in silence for a few minutes until Mr. Popo approached him, placing a hand on his shoulder and speaking in a stern tone.
"Little Gohan." Popo said, looking into the young warrior's eyes. "If you keep going like this, you'll end up killing yourself."
"B-but I'm feeling great." Gohan said worriedly. "My power has grown a lot in this year of training."
Popo shakes his head negatively, silencing the boy before continuing to speak.
"It's true that you have greatly increased your power." Popo comments, maintaining a severe tone. "But the problem is that if you are becoming a Ki bomb capable of destroying the planet."
"WHAT?"
Gohan Character Sheet:
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 29 [60 M / 79 M]
HP: 4 M
KP: 4 M
PL: 662 K
MIGHT: 850 K
AGILITY: 700 K
SPIRIT: 820 K
MENTAL: 280 K
Points: 3.000
[STATUS]
What do you think of this new form format?
The difference is using "K" to abbreviate a thousand, "M" for a million, "B" for a billion etc…
Boa noite pessoas,
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, we'll have more interactions with various characters before Gohan returns for his second year of training.
If you want to talk to me you can find me on X(Twitter) , search for renanp1m .
COMMENTS:
-davvasconcelos(questionablequesting):
Man, this is an interesting story.
You improved your writing from one chapter to the next, the transition between scenes in the first chapter was a bit abrupt and now it's more fluid.
Regarding the novel, I'm in favor of Harem, this is a world that you can die at the whim of a planet-destroying villain, better make the most of it.
Pairing suggestion: Videl, Erasa, Zangya and Android 21.
-Renan:
Thanks for the compliment.
I'm still deciding on the romantic pairing, but as I said before, it won't be a Harem.
05) I need a guide
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Bom dia pessoas,
I've been noticing in the comments that some of you think that the current Gohan is already "too powerful" and that Frieza won't pose any challenge.
It's true that this Gohan is already stronger than the original in the Frieza saga, but he's still not at the same level as the two most powerful at the end of the saga.
Gohan end of chapter 4 = 662,000 PL
Normal Goku vs Frieza = 3,000,000 PL
Frieza final form, 100% = 120,000,000 PL
Super Goku against Frieza = 150,000,000 PL
On the other hand, no member of Frieza's army would give Gohan any trouble, Captain Ginyu being the strongest of them with a PL of 120,000.
Ps: I still need a beta reader for the English version. Anyone interested send me a message.
Krillin landed on the celestial platform with a soft thud, his eyes scanning the area for any signs of life. A familiar figure approached, smiling at him. It was Popo, who had come to welcome him.
"Greetings, Krillin." Said Popo, his voice echoing in the silence. "I see you came to visit young Gohan."
Krillin nodded, his eyes still searching for any sign of movement within the platform.
"Yes sir. His parents are worried, especially Chichi who-" He cuts himself, swallowing hard as he remembered the conversation with his best friend's wife. Continuing, he said "She told me to check on him as soon as I woke up."
With a nod and with an outstretched hand, Popo pointed to the entrance to Kami's abode, leading Krillin deeper onto the platform.
As they walked, Krillin couldn't help but feel a sense of unease wash over him. The platform seemed strangely silent and there was no sign of Gohan or even his ki.
"Is Gohan sleeping by any chance? I can't feel his Ki."
The smile disappeared from Popo's face and the look on his face became more serious, Krillin noticing the change in the atmosphere began to suspect that something bad might have happened to Gohan.
"Did something happen? Is Gohan okay?"
"Nothing happened to him." Popo said, breathing tiredly. "It's what could happen that worries me."
Without understanding what he was saying, Krillin was guided by Popo to the room inside the platform where Gohan was training.
After a few minutes, Popo and Krillin arrived in front of large double doors.
"This room is made of materials stronger than steel." Mentions Popo approaching the great black stone doors. "We would have made the entire Lookout out of this material if it weren't so rare."
The black rock material is opened without difficulty by the gods' assistant, but the monumental weight of the material dragging on the ground was still evident.
With the door open, Krillin comes across a large room with an intimidating atmosphere. Its walls and floor were made of a strange black stone, unlike anything in the Kami's abode.
When the door is completely open, the image of Gohan sitting in the center of the room is revealed, meditating with waves of energy oscillating throughout his body while his eyes appear white.
<Meditation Gohan>
"Now, young Gohan is training to control his own Ki, at the moment he is focused on learning how to hide his power." Explained Popo in a deep and dark voice.
Surprised by the explanation, Krillin turns to Popo.
"But he already mastered controlling his Ki with Piccolo, hasn't he?" Krillin asked in confusion"
Popo shook his head before continuing to explain.
"Two days ago Gohan didn't know how to hide his Ki." Mr. Popo says, looking at Krillin. "Furthermore, he also does not know how to adjust his power level to face weaker people, he does not know how to transfer ki to other people and he also cannot sense the Ki of other individuals."
Amazed, Krillin widens his eyes in shock at the young warrior's lack of skill. The surprise was due to the fact that during the fight against Vegeta and Nappa he had demonstrated all these skills.
"In addition to his lack of Ki control abilities, his strength has grown so much that young Gohan's body is having difficulty containing his vast power. If he doesn't learn more Ki manipulation techniques, Gohan could overload his body using his power causing a massive explosion."
"But I've never seen anyone have this kind of problem before, not even Goku after a special training or when he drank the Ultra Divine Water."
"In none of these examples was there such astonishing growth as that of young Gohan."
Krillin's jaw drops at the answer.
"But I feel almost none of his Ki." Krillin comments. "Now with the door open I should be able to clearly feel if he doesn't know how to hide Ki."
The human warrior's last comment brings a smile back to Popo's lips.
"It's because he's close to mastering Ki concealment."
"WHAT?" Krillin shouted in surprise. "But he's only been training for three days."
"It's been three days since young Gohan left the hospital to train on the celestial platform, but it was only yesterday that he started training in concealing his Ki."
Before Krillin could ask how the young warrior was so close to mastering the technique with less than two days of training, his attention was pulled to the center of the room because in that moment, Gohan's Ki spiked.
His energy began to emanate from him in waves, lighting up the black stone room with his Ki aura.
In order to observe him better, Krillin approached the young warrior, noticing that his appearance was different from what he remembered. His hair was longer and besides being taller he also looked older for some reason.
The ground began to shake as Gohan's power increased, a shiver ran through Krillin's body as fear took over him. Gohan's power grew exponentially, making his ki reserve feel like an ocean of energy that threatened to swallow him whole.
As the room started to shake, Gohan's energy reached new heights, his Ki aura pulsed around him like a living entity. Krillin felt the weight of Gohan's power bearing down on him as the air around them crackled with energy.
"This is impossible." Murmurs the veteran warrior. "Is he stronger than Vegeta?"
"I wasn't present at the fight with you, but from my observations young Gohan must be three times stronger than him in his giant ape form." Said Mr. Popo, who didn't seem affected by the pressure of Gohan's Ki.
When the Ki intensity seemed to reach its peak, Gohan opened his eyes.
Slowly, his energy began to stabilize and the room stopped shaking.
Krillin stumbled backwards, falling on his butt, overwhelmed by the intensity of Gohan's power. Feeling in his own skin what Popo had declared about the boy's power.
'He really is stronger than that monster in his Oozaru form.' Krillin confirms to himself, sweating cold.
Standing up, Gohan notices Krillin sitting in front of him. Walking slowly he approaches the veteran warrior and with a smile on his face extends a hand to him.
"It's a pleasure to see you again, Mr. Krillin." Said the young man smiling friendly.
At the same time, all fear and fear of the human warrior evaporated from his mind.
'He smiles just like Goku.' Thinks Krillin as he accepts the help.
"Actually…" Gohan says, hesitating for a second before continuing. "I would like to ask you a favor."
"What do you need?" Krillin questions, curious.
The young warrior puffs out his chest and responds with a smile.
"I need a guide."
Gohan and Krillin flew to Paozu Mountain, a place rich in history and meaning for Goku, who was raised there by his grandfather Gohan.
Despite their importance to Goku and perhaps even to the original Gohan, the two warriors are not in Goku's old house but in the heart of the mountain forest, looking for something that will help them in the near future.
The dense foliage around them rustled softly in the gentle breeze, casting dappled shadows on the ground. The air was thick with the smell of pine and damp earth, a stark contrast to the sterile environment of the Time Chamber. Gohan felt a calmness wash over him as he breathed deeply, taking in his surroundings.
Krillin, on the other hand, looked uneasy. He fidgeted nervously with his sleeve, looking around cautiously, as if expecting an attack at any moment. Gohan noticed his friend's discomfort and placed a reassuring hand on his shoulder.
"You don't have to worry about anything, Mr. Krillin." He said calmly. "We're here to find the capsule that brought my father to planet Earth, not to fight."
Krillin nodded hesitantly, but still looked uncomfortable. They continued their search in silence for a while longer until they found something.
A large crater in a clearing and at the bottom of it was the object of their search.
Gohan slid to the bottom and lifted the spaceship off the ground with just one hand.
"Lighter than I thought- OH SHIT!" Gohan cuts himself off mid-statement when the ship trembles in his hand. "Spoke too soon."
Luckily Krillin was nearby and helped him balance her on his side and didn't let itfall.
"Thank you, Mr Krillin. I may have the strength, but I don't have good balance."
"Don't worry Gohan." Krillin comments, trying to calm the young man. "This kind of thing comes with training and time, you don't need to keep diminishing yourself."
Sighing, Gohan gives a wry smile.
"I understand, it's just that this kind of situation proves that strength alone is not enough to overcome all challenges." Gohan murmurs, loading the ship. "But in addition to training and experience, we must also use intelligence and creativity."
"Damn." Krillin comments, surprised by the young behavior. "I had no idea you were so mature."
"Thank you, Mr. Krillin." He thanks Gohan with a sincere compliment.
"You look like a completely different person from three days ago." Krillin adds in a casual tone.
Luckily for Gohan, Krillin wasn't looking directly into his face. Because his wide eyes, pale face and open mouth clearly revealed, to anyone who could see them, that the young warrior had his greatest secret exposed.
The young man laughs embarrassedly and tries to change the subject.
"It's like Mr. Popo said, my power has increased, but I still need to train the basics."
"Hmmm," The young bald man mutters, chewing on the young man's words. "I think he's right."
Gohan sighs in relief, as Krillin keeps talking.
"Sometimes I have to use telekinesis myself when trying to carry big things that are difficult to balance with only my hands."
The young man stops when he arrives outside the crater and lets the ship fall to the ground with a loud thud. He quickly turns to the bald veteran and grabs him by the shoulders.
"DO YOU KNOW TELEKINESIS?" Gohan shouts, shaking Krillin.
The veteran warrior nods.
"How?"
"When I trained with Kami-sama, Chiaotzu and Tien taught me the basics of telekinesis with Ki." Krillin comments as if it wasn't a big deal. "I'm not as good as them, much less Chiaotzu who is a true master at this, but I can still do some tricks like helping me carry large objects, protect fragile items, unwrinkling clothes, remove dust from objects and opening or closing windows."
Jaw dropped by the applications of such a versatile skill, Gohan does the obvious.
"Would you teach me?"
"Of course." The veteran responds as if it were no big deal. "But I doubt I could teach you well enough to use in a fight."
Giddy, Gohan didn't even try to contain the smile of a child who got what he wanted for Christmas. After all, the applications of telekinesis were broad and had the potential to give him access to more Ki Skills that he wouldn't have access to on his own.
"As soon as we leave this ship, I intend to talk to Master Karin, after that you could train with me in the time chamber."
"No problem." Krillin responds quickly, without even thinking about questioning his best friend's son's reasons."But what is the time room?"
"I'll explain it on the way." Gohan comments, taking off carrying the ship. "Good thing we have a few hours to kill until we get to Capsule Corporation."
The blue-haired genius was currently installing the ship's engine that she had repaired.
She was exhausted from not sleeping for almost two days, but Bulma refused to even take a break. The fate of her dead friends hung in the balance and since she couldn't fight she was determined to do everything to get them to Namek, even if it cost her own health.
"Now let's get to the hard part." Bulma mumbles to herself getting ready for a very delicate part of the job, connecting the power supply to the ship's engine.
With a steady hand, Bulma began to slowly connect the cables. She knew that any mistake could result in a catastrophic explosion.
"Slow and easy."
"BULMA!" Shouted a shrill voice from outside. "ARE YOU HOME?"
The tip of the last cable touched an uneven metal surface, generating a spark in front of Bulma.
"Oh no…" The blue-haired woman lamented.
A flash of light took over her field of vision, followed by an explosion that shook the entire block.
Outside, Krillin and Gohan stare wide-eyed at the light that leaked through the windows and by the garage door that was blown off by the impact of an explosion.
"We should have called before coming." Gohan comments worriedly.
"I hope she didn't realize I was the one who screamed."
Within seconds both warriors have their answer, when the garage door falls forward revealing a charred woman.
"KRILLIINNNNN!"
Frightened, the warrior tries to run away, but Bulma, without wasting time, throws a heavy wrench towards him. Hitting him in the back of the head as soon as he turns around, but before he takes a step.
"FU-!" He screams in pain, only to then fall to the ground unconscious.
The young half-Saiyan, giving an embarrassed smile, turned to the furious woman and greeted her with a small bow.
"Good afternoon, Miss Bulma."
The young man's polite tone catches the woman's attention, and upon noticing Gohan's presence she calms down a little.
"Ah… Gohan? Why are you here?"
Looking up, Gohan points to the large spherical object placed in his garden.
Bulma widened her eyes in surprise and approached slowly, not believing what was there. Confused, she turns to Gohan and questions him.
"What is that? I thought all the Saiyan ships had been destroyed."
Gohan agreed with her and informed her.
"Except this one, this is the ship that brought my father to Earth."
Intrigued, Bulma looked out the window and saw the space that once housed Goku as a baby.
"This is amazing!" Exclaimed Bulma, taking a remote control from the pocket of her grease-stained overalls.
As soon as she presses the button, the ship responds by opening its airlock.
"It's in better condition than Kami's ship, maybe it still works." Bulma concluded.
"So you can use it?"
"For sure! I already managed to translate their language into ours using the scouter. It will be a breeze to use her data to speed up my work on Kami-sama's ship."
The young man smiles with relief at being able to facilitate the work of one of the most iconic characters in the series, and for him, second only to the protagonist in importance.
Now that Gohan was closer to her, he noticed the scientist's dark bags under her eyes. As if she didn't sleep since the encounter at the hospital.
"Miss Bulma." Gohan comments worriedly. "Are you okay?"
"Yes." Bulma responds, trying to calm the young man down. "I'm just a little tired, nothing you need to worry your pretty little head with."
She gave a forced laugh at the end of the sentence, but it wasn't enough to convince the boy in front of her.
The original Gohan may have believed this statement, but what was in front of her was someone much older than he looked. And coincidentally, he also had experience with colleagues who had injured themselves working to the point of exhaustion.
In a calm and gentle tone the young man begins to speak.
"Bulma, you need to rest. You're working too hard."
The concern in his voice was so genuine that it caught Bulma off guard, after all, what kind of child understands stress and burnout? That made her pay attention to everything he had to say.
"You're going to get hurt that way. You need to take a break."
As much as the young man's statement came from his concern for her well-being, the scientist did not receive his request well. Bulma swallowed hard and clenching her shaking fists, she faced the hybrid.
"I can't stop! I'm not like you and Krillin. I'm just weak and useless." Her voice was filled with emotion as tears flowed from his eyes. "My friends were injured or died as heroes defending the planet. And what did I do?" She asked, crying. "NOTHING!"
Bulma's voice was shaky as she screamed, her anguish, frustration and sadness were taking over her.
Gohan felt a pang of guilt as he remembered those who died.
'It was so easy when they were just characters in a series.' Gohan thinks to himself.
But in front of the young warrior was not a fictional character but a real person. Her feelings, dreams and pain were as real as his.
Bulma falls to her knees with her hand over her face, trying to stifle her own crying.
The young man knew that she was far from weak, she had saved others countless times with her inventions and at the risk of her own life. But Gohan also understood that she was going through great emotional turmoil at that moment and that he needed to help her.
"Bulma." Gohan said in a firm tone, placing a hand on his shoulder. "You are much stronger than you think." He looked into her teary eyes, trying to convey his sincerity through the gaze. "The only thing I'm good at is destroying our enemies, but you have the knowledge and talent to take us beyond the stars."
Bulma sniffled and wiped her tears with the back of her hand. She looked at Gohan with a mixture of gratitude and curiosity in her eyes.
"You are working on alien technology that is more advanced than anything on our planet." Comments the young man, helping her to get up. "Technology you translated yourself."
Bulma blinks her eyes in surprise at the eloquence of the young man who until recently was only four years old.
"To tell you the truth, I can't wait until we get back from this to see what you do with all this knowledge." Gohan comments, trying to emulate the typical smile of a shonen protagonist. "You are amazing and I consider myself lucky to have met you."
"Thank you... Gohan." She whispered in a slightly hoarse voice.
Gohan's eyes lit up with happiness.
"You can count on me whenever you need me." The young man's voice was full of warmth and sincerity.
It is because of his warm and kind tone that Bulma is caught off guard when he gives her an ultimatum.
"Now if you don't eat something, take a shower and sleep at least eight hours, I'm going to stay here disturbing you instead of training." He threatened the young man while maintaining his friendly smile. "Putting our journey and our lives at risk."
"Haha" Bulma laughed awkwardly. "So funny."
"That wasn't a joke, not even a threat." Gohan then furrowed his eyebrows, staring intensely. "It's a promise."
Bulma's blood ran cold and in a panic she grabbed Gohan's hand tightly and pulled him running into the building.
"Wait!" Exclaims Gohan worried. "What about Krillin?"
Despite being stronger, Gohan was still much smaller than the blue-haired scientist, so he was ignored as he was dragged into the kitchen. Leaving Krillin unconscious on the Capsule Corporation lawn.
In a few minutes Gohan enters the Briefs family kitchen accompanied by Krillin who was awake and nursing a big bump on his head.
"What was that wrench made of?" Questions Krillin, suffering from a slight headache.
"Katchin?" Suggested Gohan without being sure.
"Bless you." Krillin replies, unaware that the young man had suggested the strongest metal in the universe.
Despite shaking his head in disappointment at the veteran warrior's response, Gohan didn't correct him and turned his attention to the kitchen where Bulma and her parents were gathering. Doctor Brief was smoking a cigarette and reading his newspaper, Mrs Brief was washing the dishes and Bulma was devouring a stack of pancakes, with a few plates piled up next to her.
It wasn't a Goku level pile, but it was still impressive to see that she had eaten so much.
"May I know which one of you two is threatening my daughter!" Said a female voice.
Both fighters turned to Bulma's mother, Bikini Brief, who was staring at them intently with her arms crossed as she tapped her left foot impatiently waiting for a response.
Krillin's eyes widened in surprise that someone had threatened Bulma in her own home, but before he could speak Gohan stepped forward to take the blame.
"It was me." The young man said without hesitation, but without looking at the blonde mother in the eyes. "And I don't regret it, she needs-."
Before he could explain further, the young one was pulled into a tight hug.
"Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!" Mrs. Brief said, suffocating Gohan in her cleavage while her husband gave a serene smile at the seemingly innocent scene. "I know Bulma's work is important, but I was getting worried about her health."
The matriarch of the Brief family pulls Gohan away from her chest, holding Gohan by his armpits as she lifts him up to look him in the eyes.
"I was so relieved when she said you made her take a break and eat."
"It's not just a break to eat." Said Gohan, despite remaining serious, his face was completely red with embarrassment. "She's also going to take a shower and sleep for at least eight hours if she doesn't I will come back here and bother her until she does."
In response, Bulma stopped eating only to glare at Gohan, as if she hoped he had forgotten the rest of his own threat. Her mother was even happier and smothered the young warrior in her cleavage again.
Krillin sat at the table smiling, although his head still hurt, he was in a better mood since his attacker was the target of the tease.
When Bikini finally released Gohan he was sat on the table a little dizzy and marked with the smell of Mrs. Brief's expensive perfume.
"I know my wife has already thanked you, but I would also like to express my gratitude to you, young man." Mr Brief said. "I'm very proud of my daughter's talent and dedication, but as you informed her, she was going to end up hurting herself at this rate."
Gohan shakes his head, recovering from the dizziness and turns towards the patriarch before answering him.
"It was nothing sir, I know she would do the same for any of her friends. And it is also important to stop for a rest when working on such complex projects, after all, with a tired brain they make more mistakes, have more difficulty with reasoning or finding solutions to difficult problems."
The Doctor's eyes widen in surprise at the young man's words, but then he lets out a hearty laugh.
"You are absolutely correct." The gentleman comments with good humor. "In fact, if you need anything just let me know, it would be a pleasure to help such an intelligent and polite young man."
Surprised by the proposal, Gohan thinks about dismissing the offer, but he remembers something.
"Did Bulma explain to you about my father's ship?"
"Yes." The doctor responds in a surprised tone. "While she's sleeping I'll give it a look over."
"I understand." Murmurs Gohan to the doctor. "Could you make another ship for my father to go to Namekusei later?"
"Hmm." The curious doctor mumbles. "Yes, I can, but it will take a few weeks, even using Goku's original ship."
"Neat." Gohan comments with a relieved smile. "But tell me, how long would it take you to build a gravity machine?"
The trip took a few hours of flight, making the pair arrive at the tower at dusk.
"I didn't expect to see you two here so soon." Said an old voice from inside the surly tower. "From what Yajirobe told me, I thought they were preparing for the trip."
Gohan's eyes widened as he saw the ancient and peculiar figure approaching them. It was Master Karin, a strange bipedal cat, known for his wisdom and being 700 years old.
"If you came for senzu beans, I regret to inform you that they need a few more weeks."
Before speaking, Gohan hesitated for a moment, but swallowed his fears and went ahead with his plan.
"Master Karin, I came to ask for something." The young man declares, bowing. "Please let me drink the Ultra Divine Water."
Master Karin analyzed Gohan with suspicion. The young man's request was strange and the old master felt something was wrong.
"Why do you want to drink Ultra Divine Water?" Karin asked, arching an eyebrow. "Do you know the risks?"
Gohan pursed his lips and looked at his master with a determined look and nodded.
Karin looked at Gohan with a mixture of admiration and concern.
"And why do you want to take that risk now? Why do you want so much power?"
Without hesitation, Gohan talks about his biggest concern about the trip.
"Because the master Vegeta serves is a thousand times stronger than him."
Master Karin and Krillin reacted shocked by Gohan's statement. The old master opened his eyes widely and Krillin's mouth fell open.
"It c-can't be t-true." Krillin stutters.
Master Karin, despite being apprehensive, manages to control his reaction better than Krillin and stares at Gohan in disbelief.
"It's hard to believe that someone so powerful exists." Says Karin in her old, hoarse voice.
"And just to be clear, I'm comparing him to Vegeta's Oozaru form."
…
"WHAAT?!" Karin and Krillin shout together.
If before they were shocked, now they are completely terrified.
"Im-po-possible," Karin babbled. "How can someone be so powerful?!"
Laughing awkwardly, Gohan thinks that they are lucky Frieza never bothered to train, as the frost demon had the potential and talent to rival Super Saiyan Gods in a short time period.
Karin breathed tiredly, still surprised by the declaration of the young warrior in front of her.
"Now I understand your urgency to gain more power." Karin said thoughtfully. "I'm going to get water."
While Gohan was waiting, Krillin tried to convince the young man not to take the risk and not drink water.
"Have you lost your mind?" Krillin said, lowering his voice so the feline master couldn't hear. "You'll end up killing yourself."
Gohan looked at Krillin with a determined look. He knew the veteran warrior was worried about him, but he couldn't stop now. He needed power to face Frieza and the future enemies to come.
"I know the risks." Gohan replied, turning to his colleague. "And to be honest, I would like you to drink it too."
The veteran warrior was speechless and watched Gohan with a mixture of concern and confusion.
"You are crazy!" Exclaims Krillin raising both his hands. "Why would I do that?"
Gohan takes a deep breath and responds without looking directly at him.
"Because I know you don't consider yourself strong. I also know that lately you feel inferior to everyone, that you are afraid, I know that you think you are always surrounded by friends and enemies much more powerful than you."
Krillin is amazed at the young warrior's statement. It's been a few years since his first doubts arose, but since the arrival of the Saiyans they have intensified.
"And even with these thoughts haunting you, you always fought with courage and determination. To protect the weak and to defend what is right."
"But it's Goku who always defeats powerful enemies." Krillin argues with a trembling voice.
"My father is always willing to fight for what is right." Says Gohan, turning to him. "A genius when it comes to fighting and dedicated when it comes to training."
Breathing a sigh of relief, Krillin nods in agreement.
"But it is you who always challenges the enemy, regardless of whether he is stronger or how afraid you are. And that's why, at least for me, you're the greatest hero on this planet."
Krillin's throat dried up at Gohan's words, he had interacted so little with the young warrior and yet he thought so highly of him.
"Wow Gohan, I didn't know that-."
"I'm back." Said the feline master, returning with a large white teapot and a glass, cutting Krillin off in the middle of his sentence.
Without wasting time on ceremonies, the cat poured the water into the glass and handed it to Gohan.
For a second Gohan hesitated, his eyes fixed on the swirling liquid in the cup. The risk was high, but he also knew that he needed this power. Taking a deep breath, he raised the cup to his lips and drank it all in one gulp.
As soon as the last drop touched his tongue, Gohan felt a searing pain course through his body. It was as if he had swallowed molten lava and every fiber of his being screamed in agony. He fell to the ground, writhing in pain as sweat ran down his face.
In horror Krillin watched Gohan convulsing on the ground, his body twisting and contorting in painful ways. Krillin quickly knelt down next to Gohan, sweating coldly with concern for the young man.
"Gohan…" He whispered desperately.
For hours, Gohan lay on the ground, wracked with pain and unable to move or speak. His body convulsed violently several times before suddenly becoming still, only to then relax.
When the moon was already high on the horizon, the pain suddenly dissipated from Gohan's body.
Slowly Gohan began to regain consciousness. His vision was blurry at first, but gradually it cleared until he could see everything around him with perfect clarity as the system's warning windows opened in front of him.
Gohan's eyes widened in awe when he saw his winnings. A massive mental attribute bonus, a new Perk and the biggest Zenkai Boost he's ever had.
'In the original Goku also had gained the ability to sense Ki, why didn't I gain it? And what exactly is this Omnimind?'
But since he didn't want to waste time, Gohan put his questions aside and got up to hand the cup to Krillin.
"I'm not going to make you do this against your will, but I still think you should drink."
Sweating profusely and shaking with anticipation, Krillin took the offered cup and carefully drank it after the master filled it with water without understanding the full context of what was happening.
As soon as the water touched his lips, Krillin felt a wave of pain pass through him and just as Gohan fell to the ground writhing in pain.
"I hope all this effort from you two is worth it."
"It will be worth it, master." Said Gohan, proud of the decision Krillin made. "While he's 'busy', could we talk?"
The ancient cat stares at Gohan with suspicion of what he might want.
"What would you like to talk about?"
"God Ki." The young man says, giving a friendly smile.
…
"I think I don't like you." The old cat complains in an irritated tone.
Gohan Character Sheet:
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 29 [ 60M / 79M ]
HP : 6,37M
KP : 6,15M
PL : 1.076,25K
MIGHT : 1.275K
AGILITY : 1.050K
SPIRIT : 1.230K
MENTAL : 750K
Points: 3,000
Boa noite pessoas,
Even though I don't respond to all the comments, I read them all. And my goodness, so many people want the love interest to be Android 21.
COMMENTS:
-DJONGO(spiritfanfiction):
Tá tri. I wonder why there are so few stories about Gohan when he's such a great character.
-Renan: I haven't read many Dragon Ball fics, but if what you say is true, I'm sad to know that Gohan isn't popular.
-Datdude58(archiveofourown):
Videl, but don't do her dirty like they did in super where she's just a housewife. At least make her a cop when she's older lol.
-Renan: In Super it looks like she runs fighting tournaments or is some kind of martial arts teacher. Which seems strange considering that she helped the police when she was a teenager.
To me it would make more sense for her to be from a special forces or something like that.
I've been noticing in the comments that some of you think that the current Gohan is already "too powerful" and that Frieza won't pose any challenge.
It's true that this Gohan is already stronger than the original in the Frieza saga, but he's still not at the same level as the two most powerful at the end of the saga.
Gohan end of chapter 4 = 662,000 PL
Normal Goku vs Frieza = 3,000,000 PL
Frieza final form, 100% = 120,000,000 PL
Super Goku against Frieza = 150,000,000 PL
On the other hand, no member of Frieza's army would give Gohan any trouble, Captain Ginyu being the strongest of them with a PL of 120,000.
Ps: I still need a beta reader for the English version. Anyone interested send me a message.
Krillin landed on the celestial platform with a soft thud, his eyes scanning the area for any signs of life. A familiar figure approached, smiling at him. It was Popo, who had come to welcome him.
"Greetings, Krillin." Said Popo, his voice echoing in the silence. "I see you came to visit young Gohan."
Krillin nodded, his eyes still searching for any sign of movement within the platform.
"Yes sir. His parents are worried, especially Chichi who-" He cuts himself, swallowing hard as he remembered the conversation with his best friend's wife. Continuing, he said "She told me to check on him as soon as I woke up."
With a nod and with an outstretched hand, Popo pointed to the entrance to Kami's abode, leading Krillin deeper onto the platform.
As they walked, Krillin couldn't help but feel a sense of unease wash over him. The platform seemed strangely silent and there was no sign of Gohan or even his ki.
"Is Gohan sleeping by any chance? I can't feel his Ki."
The smile disappeared from Popo's face and the look on his face became more serious, Krillin noticing the change in the atmosphere began to suspect that something bad might have happened to Gohan.
"Did something happen? Is Gohan okay?"
"Nothing happened to him." Popo said, breathing tiredly. "It's what could happen that worries me."
Without understanding what he was saying, Krillin was guided by Popo to the room inside the platform where Gohan was training.
After a few minutes, Popo and Krillin arrived in front of large double doors.
"This room is made of materials stronger than steel." Mentions Popo approaching the great black stone doors. "We would have made the entire Lookout out of this material if it weren't so rare."
The black rock material is opened without difficulty by the gods' assistant, but the monumental weight of the material dragging on the ground was still evident.
With the door open, Krillin comes across a large room with an intimidating atmosphere. Its walls and floor were made of a strange black stone, unlike anything in the Kami's abode.
When the door is completely open, the image of Gohan sitting in the center of the room is revealed, meditating with waves of energy oscillating throughout his body while his eyes appear white.
<Meditation Gohan>
"Now, young Gohan is training to control his own Ki, at the moment he is focused on learning how to hide his power." Explained Popo in a deep and dark voice.
Surprised by the explanation, Krillin turns to Popo.
"But he already mastered controlling his Ki with Piccolo, hasn't he?" Krillin asked in confusion"
Popo shook his head before continuing to explain.
"Two days ago Gohan didn't know how to hide his Ki." Mr. Popo says, looking at Krillin. "Furthermore, he also does not know how to adjust his power level to face weaker people, he does not know how to transfer ki to other people and he also cannot sense the Ki of other individuals."
Amazed, Krillin widens his eyes in shock at the young warrior's lack of skill. The surprise was due to the fact that during the fight against Vegeta and Nappa he had demonstrated all these skills.
"In addition to his lack of Ki control abilities, his strength has grown so much that young Gohan's body is having difficulty containing his vast power. If he doesn't learn more Ki manipulation techniques, Gohan could overload his body using his power causing a massive explosion."
"But I've never seen anyone have this kind of problem before, not even Goku after a special training or when he drank the Ultra Divine Water."
"In none of these examples was there such astonishing growth as that of young Gohan."
Krillin's jaw drops at the answer.
"But I feel almost none of his Ki." Krillin comments. "Now with the door open I should be able to clearly feel if he doesn't know how to hide Ki."
The human warrior's last comment brings a smile back to Popo's lips.
"It's because he's close to mastering Ki concealment."
"WHAT?" Krillin shouted in surprise. "But he's only been training for three days."
"It's been three days since young Gohan left the hospital to train on the celestial platform, but it was only yesterday that he started training in concealing his Ki."
Before Krillin could ask how the young warrior was so close to mastering the technique with less than two days of training, his attention was pulled to the center of the room because in that moment, Gohan's Ki spiked.
His energy began to emanate from him in waves, lighting up the black stone room with his Ki aura.
In order to observe him better, Krillin approached the young warrior, noticing that his appearance was different from what he remembered. His hair was longer and besides being taller he also looked older for some reason.
The ground began to shake as Gohan's power increased, a shiver ran through Krillin's body as fear took over him. Gohan's power grew exponentially, making his ki reserve feel like an ocean of energy that threatened to swallow him whole.
As the room started to shake, Gohan's energy reached new heights, his Ki aura pulsed around him like a living entity. Krillin felt the weight of Gohan's power bearing down on him as the air around them crackled with energy.
"This is impossible." Murmurs the veteran warrior. "Is he stronger than Vegeta?"
"I wasn't present at the fight with you, but from my observations young Gohan must be three times stronger than him in his giant ape form." Said Mr. Popo, who didn't seem affected by the pressure of Gohan's Ki.
When the Ki intensity seemed to reach its peak, Gohan opened his eyes.
Slowly, his energy began to stabilize and the room stopped shaking.
Krillin stumbled backwards, falling on his butt, overwhelmed by the intensity of Gohan's power. Feeling in his own skin what Popo had declared about the boy's power.
'He really is stronger than that monster in his Oozaru form.' Krillin confirms to himself, sweating cold.
Standing up, Gohan notices Krillin sitting in front of him. Walking slowly he approaches the veteran warrior and with a smile on his face extends a hand to him.
"It's a pleasure to see you again, Mr. Krillin." Said the young man smiling friendly.
At the same time, all fear and fear of the human warrior evaporated from his mind.
'He smiles just like Goku.' Thinks Krillin as he accepts the help.
"Actually…" Gohan says, hesitating for a second before continuing. "I would like to ask you a favor."
"What do you need?" Krillin questions, curious.
The young warrior puffs out his chest and responds with a smile.
"I need a guide."
[DBI:GG]
Gohan and Krillin flew to Paozu Mountain, a place rich in history and meaning for Goku, who was raised there by his grandfather Gohan.
Despite their importance to Goku and perhaps even to the original Gohan, the two warriors are not in Goku's old house but in the heart of the mountain forest, looking for something that will help them in the near future.
The dense foliage around them rustled softly in the gentle breeze, casting dappled shadows on the ground. The air was thick with the smell of pine and damp earth, a stark contrast to the sterile environment of the Time Chamber. Gohan felt a calmness wash over him as he breathed deeply, taking in his surroundings.
Krillin, on the other hand, looked uneasy. He fidgeted nervously with his sleeve, looking around cautiously, as if expecting an attack at any moment. Gohan noticed his friend's discomfort and placed a reassuring hand on his shoulder.
"You don't have to worry about anything, Mr. Krillin." He said calmly. "We're here to find the capsule that brought my father to planet Earth, not to fight."
Krillin nodded hesitantly, but still looked uncomfortable. They continued their search in silence for a while longer until they found something.
A large crater in a clearing and at the bottom of it was the object of their search.
Gohan slid to the bottom and lifted the spaceship off the ground with just one hand.
"Lighter than I thought- OH SHIT!" Gohan cuts himself off mid-statement when the ship trembles in his hand. "Spoke too soon."
Luckily Krillin was nearby and helped him balance her on his side and didn't let itfall.
"Thank you, Mr Krillin. I may have the strength, but I don't have good balance."
"Don't worry Gohan." Krillin comments, trying to calm the young man. "This kind of thing comes with training and time, you don't need to keep diminishing yourself."
Sighing, Gohan gives a wry smile.
"I understand, it's just that this kind of situation proves that strength alone is not enough to overcome all challenges." Gohan murmurs, loading the ship. "But in addition to training and experience, we must also use intelligence and creativity."
"Damn." Krillin comments, surprised by the young behavior. "I had no idea you were so mature."
"Thank you, Mr. Krillin." He thanks Gohan with a sincere compliment.
"You look like a completely different person from three days ago." Krillin adds in a casual tone.
Luckily for Gohan, Krillin wasn't looking directly into his face. Because his wide eyes, pale face and open mouth clearly revealed, to anyone who could see them, that the young warrior had his greatest secret exposed.
The young man laughs embarrassedly and tries to change the subject.
"It's like Mr. Popo said, my power has increased, but I still need to train the basics."
"Hmmm," The young bald man mutters, chewing on the young man's words. "I think he's right."
Gohan sighs in relief, as Krillin keeps talking.
"Sometimes I have to use telekinesis myself when trying to carry big things that are difficult to balance with only my hands."
The young man stops when he arrives outside the crater and lets the ship fall to the ground with a loud thud. He quickly turns to the bald veteran and grabs him by the shoulders.
"DO YOU KNOW TELEKINESIS?" Gohan shouts, shaking Krillin.
The veteran warrior nods.
"How?"
"When I trained with Kami-sama, Chiaotzu and Tien taught me the basics of telekinesis with Ki." Krillin comments as if it wasn't a big deal. "I'm not as good as them, much less Chiaotzu who is a true master at this, but I can still do some tricks like helping me carry large objects, protect fragile items, unwrinkling clothes, remove dust from objects and opening or closing windows."
Jaw dropped by the applications of such a versatile skill, Gohan does the obvious.
"Would you teach me?"
"Of course." The veteran responds as if it were no big deal. "But I doubt I could teach you well enough to use in a fight."
Giddy, Gohan didn't even try to contain the smile of a child who got what he wanted for Christmas. After all, the applications of telekinesis were broad and had the potential to give him access to more Ki Skills that he wouldn't have access to on his own.
"As soon as we leave this ship, I intend to talk to Master Karin, after that you could train with me in the time chamber."
"No problem." Krillin responds quickly, without even thinking about questioning his best friend's son's reasons."But what is the time room?"
"I'll explain it on the way." Gohan comments, taking off carrying the ship. "Good thing we have a few hours to kill until we get to Capsule Corporation."
[DBI:GG]
Bulma was working tirelessly on Kami's spaceship inside a large laboratory garage. The blue-haired scientist's clothes were covered in grease and grime, her hair was tied back, and her forehead was drenched in sweat.
The blue-haired genius was currently installing the ship's engine that she had repaired.
She was exhausted from not sleeping for almost two days, but Bulma refused to even take a break. The fate of her dead friends hung in the balance and since she couldn't fight she was determined to do everything to get them to Namek, even if it cost her own health.
"Now let's get to the hard part." Bulma mumbles to herself getting ready for a very delicate part of the job, connecting the power supply to the ship's engine.
<Mechanic Bulma>
With a steady hand, Bulma began to slowly connect the cables. She knew that any mistake could result in a catastrophic explosion.
"Slow and easy."
"BULMA!" Shouted a shrill voice from outside. "ARE YOU HOME?"
The tip of the last cable touched an uneven metal surface, generating a spark in front of Bulma.
"Oh no…" The blue-haired woman lamented.
A flash of light took over her field of vision, followed by an explosion that shook the entire block.
Outside, Krillin and Gohan stare wide-eyed at the light that leaked through the windows and by the garage door that was blown off by the impact of an explosion.
"We should have called before coming." Gohan comments worriedly.
"I hope she didn't realize I was the one who screamed."
Within seconds both warriors have their answer, when the garage door falls forward revealing a charred woman.
"KRILLIINNNNN!"
Frightened, the warrior tries to run away, but Bulma, without wasting time, throws a heavy wrench towards him. Hitting him in the back of the head as soon as he turns around, but before he takes a step.
"FU-!" He screams in pain, only to then fall to the ground unconscious.
The young half-Saiyan, giving an embarrassed smile, turned to the furious woman and greeted her with a small bow.
"Good afternoon, Miss Bulma."
The young man's polite tone catches the woman's attention, and upon noticing Gohan's presence she calms down a little.
"Ah… Gohan? Why are you here?"
Looking up, Gohan points to the large spherical object placed in his garden.
Bulma widened her eyes in surprise and approached slowly, not believing what was there. Confused, she turns to Gohan and questions him.
"What is that? I thought all the Saiyan ships had been destroyed."
Gohan agreed with her and informed her.
"Except this one, this is the ship that brought my father to Earth."
Intrigued, Bulma looked out the window and saw the space that once housed Goku as a baby.
"This is amazing!" Exclaimed Bulma, taking a remote control from the pocket of her grease-stained overalls.
As soon as she presses the button, the ship responds by opening its airlock.
"It's in better condition than Kami's ship, maybe it still works." Bulma concluded.
"So you can use it?"
"For sure! I already managed to translate their language into ours using the scouter. It will be a breeze to use her data to speed up my work on Kami-sama's ship."
The young man smiles with relief at being able to facilitate the work of one of the most iconic characters in the series, and for him, second only to the protagonist in importance.
Now that Gohan was closer to her, he noticed the scientist's dark bags under her eyes. As if she didn't sleep since the encounter at the hospital.
"Miss Bulma." Gohan comments worriedly. "Are you okay?"
"Yes." Bulma responds, trying to calm the young man down. "I'm just a little tired, nothing you need to worry your pretty little head with."
She gave a forced laugh at the end of the sentence, but it wasn't enough to convince the boy in front of her.
The original Gohan may have believed this statement, but what was in front of her was someone much older than he looked. And coincidentally, he also had experience with colleagues who had injured themselves working to the point of exhaustion.
In a calm and gentle tone the young man begins to speak.
"Bulma, you need to rest. You're working too hard."
The concern in his voice was so genuine that it caught Bulma off guard, after all, what kind of child understands stress and burnout? That made her pay attention to everything he had to say.
"You're going to get hurt that way. You need to take a break."
As much as the young man's statement came from his concern for her well-being, the scientist did not receive his request well. Bulma swallowed hard and clenching her shaking fists, she faced the hybrid.
"I can't stop! I'm not like you and Krillin. I'm just weak and useless." Her voice was filled with emotion as tears flowed from his eyes. "My friends were injured or died as heroes defending the planet. And what did I do?" She asked, crying. "NOTHING!"
Bulma's voice was shaky as she screamed, her anguish, frustration and sadness were taking over her.
Gohan felt a pang of guilt as he remembered those who died.
'It was so easy when they were just characters in a series.' Gohan thinks to himself.
But in front of the young warrior was not a fictional character but a real person. Her feelings, dreams and pain were as real as his.
Bulma falls to her knees with her hand over her face, trying to stifle her own crying.
The young man knew that she was far from weak, she had saved others countless times with her inventions and at the risk of her own life. But Gohan also understood that she was going through great emotional turmoil at that moment and that he needed to help her.
"Bulma." Gohan said in a firm tone, placing a hand on his shoulder. "You are much stronger than you think." He looked into her teary eyes, trying to convey his sincerity through the gaze. "The only thing I'm good at is destroying our enemies, but you have the knowledge and talent to take us beyond the stars."
Bulma sniffled and wiped her tears with the back of her hand. She looked at Gohan with a mixture of gratitude and curiosity in her eyes.
"You are working on alien technology that is more advanced than anything on our planet." Comments the young man, helping her to get up. "Technology you translated yourself."
Bulma blinks her eyes in surprise at the eloquence of the young man who until recently was only four years old.
"To tell you the truth, I can't wait until we get back from this to see what you do with all this knowledge." Gohan comments, trying to emulate the typical smile of a shonen protagonist. "You are amazing and I consider myself lucky to have met you."
"Thank you... Gohan." She whispered in a slightly hoarse voice.
Gohan's eyes lit up with happiness.
"You can count on me whenever you need me." The young man's voice was full of warmth and sincerity.
It is because of his warm and kind tone that Bulma is caught off guard when he gives her an ultimatum.
"Now if you don't eat something, take a shower and sleep at least eight hours, I'm going to stay here disturbing you instead of training." He threatened the young man while maintaining his friendly smile. "Putting our journey and our lives at risk."
"Haha" Bulma laughed awkwardly. "So funny."
"That wasn't a joke, not even a threat." Gohan then furrowed his eyebrows, staring intensely. "It's a promise."
Bulma's blood ran cold and in a panic she grabbed Gohan's hand tightly and pulled him running into the building.
"Wait!" Exclaims Gohan worried. "What about Krillin?"
Despite being stronger, Gohan was still much smaller than the blue-haired scientist, so he was ignored as he was dragged into the kitchen. Leaving Krillin unconscious on the Capsule Corporation lawn.
[DBI:GG]
After the initial shock, Bulma calmed down and let Gohan go get Krillin while she went to get them something to eat.
In a few minutes Gohan enters the Briefs family kitchen accompanied by Krillin who was awake and nursing a big bump on his head.
"What was that wrench made of?" Questions Krillin, suffering from a slight headache.
"Katchin?" Suggested Gohan without being sure.
"Bless you." Krillin replies, unaware that the young man had suggested the strongest metal in the universe.
Despite shaking his head in disappointment at the veteran warrior's response, Gohan didn't correct him and turned his attention to the kitchen where Bulma and her parents were gathering. Doctor Brief was smoking a cigarette and reading his newspaper, Mrs Brief was washing the dishes and Bulma was devouring a stack of pancakes, with a few plates piled up next to her.
It wasn't a Goku level pile, but it was still impressive to see that she had eaten so much.
"May I know which one of you two is threatening my daughter!" Said a female voice.
Both fighters turned to Bulma's mother, Bikini Brief, who was staring at them intently with her arms crossed as she tapped her left foot impatiently waiting for a response.
Krillin's eyes widened in surprise that someone had threatened Bulma in her own home, but before he could speak Gohan stepped forward to take the blame.
"It was me." The young man said without hesitation, but without looking at the blonde mother in the eyes. "And I don't regret it, she needs-."
Before he could explain further, the young one was pulled into a tight hug.
"Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!" Mrs. Brief said, suffocating Gohan in her cleavage while her husband gave a serene smile at the seemingly innocent scene. "I know Bulma's work is important, but I was getting worried about her health."
The matriarch of the Brief family pulls Gohan away from her chest, holding Gohan by his armpits as she lifts him up to look him in the eyes.
"I was so relieved when she said you made her take a break and eat."
"It's not just a break to eat." Said Gohan, despite remaining serious, his face was completely red with embarrassment. "She's also going to take a shower and sleep for at least eight hours if she doesn't I will come back here and bother her until she does."
In response, Bulma stopped eating only to glare at Gohan, as if she hoped he had forgotten the rest of his own threat. Her mother was even happier and smothered the young warrior in her cleavage again.
Krillin sat at the table smiling, although his head still hurt, he was in a better mood since his attacker was the target of the tease.
When Bikini finally released Gohan he was sat on the table a little dizzy and marked with the smell of Mrs. Brief's expensive perfume.
"I know my wife has already thanked you, but I would also like to express my gratitude to you, young man." Mr Brief said. "I'm very proud of my daughter's talent and dedication, but as you informed her, she was going to end up hurting herself at this rate."
Gohan shakes his head, recovering from the dizziness and turns towards the patriarch before answering him.
"It was nothing sir, I know she would do the same for any of her friends. And it is also important to stop for a rest when working on such complex projects, after all, with a tired brain they make more mistakes, have more difficulty with reasoning or finding solutions to difficult problems."
The Doctor's eyes widen in surprise at the young man's words, but then he lets out a hearty laugh.
"You are absolutely correct." The gentleman comments with good humor. "In fact, if you need anything just let me know, it would be a pleasure to help such an intelligent and polite young man."
Surprised by the proposal, Gohan thinks about dismissing the offer, but he remembers something.
"Did Bulma explain to you about my father's ship?"
"Yes." The doctor responds in a surprised tone. "While she's sleeping I'll give it a look over."
"I understand." Murmurs Gohan to the doctor. "Could you make another ship for my father to go to Namekusei later?"
"Hmm." The curious doctor mumbles. "Yes, I can, but it will take a few weeks, even using Goku's original ship."
"Neat." Gohan comments with a relieved smile. "But tell me, how long would it take you to build a gravity machine?"
[DBI:GG]
After finishing eating, Bulma went to rest while Gohan and Krillin left towards their next destination, the Karin Tower.
The trip took a few hours of flight, making the pair arrive at the tower at dusk.
"I didn't expect to see you two here so soon." Said an old voice from inside the surly tower. "From what Yajirobe told me, I thought they were preparing for the trip."
Gohan's eyes widened as he saw the ancient and peculiar figure approaching them. It was Master Karin, a strange bipedal cat, known for his wisdom and being 700 years old.
"If you came for senzu beans, I regret to inform you that they need a few more weeks."
Before speaking, Gohan hesitated for a moment, but swallowed his fears and went ahead with his plan.
"Master Karin, I came to ask for something." The young man declares, bowing. "Please let me drink the Ultra Divine Water."
Master Karin analyzed Gohan with suspicion. The young man's request was strange and the old master felt something was wrong.
"Why do you want to drink Ultra Divine Water?" Karin asked, arching an eyebrow. "Do you know the risks?"
Gohan pursed his lips and looked at his master with a determined look and nodded.
Karin looked at Gohan with a mixture of admiration and concern.
"And why do you want to take that risk now? Why do you want so much power?"
Without hesitation, Gohan talks about his biggest concern about the trip.
"Because the master Vegeta serves is a thousand times stronger than him."
Master Karin and Krillin reacted shocked by Gohan's statement. The old master opened his eyes widely and Krillin's mouth fell open.
"It c-can't be t-true." Krillin stutters.
Master Karin, despite being apprehensive, manages to control his reaction better than Krillin and stares at Gohan in disbelief.
"It's hard to believe that someone so powerful exists." Says Karin in her old, hoarse voice.
"And just to be clear, I'm comparing him to Vegeta's Oozaru form."
…
"WHAAT?!" Karin and Krillin shout together.
If before they were shocked, now they are completely terrified.
"Im-po-possible," Karin babbled. "How can someone be so powerful?!"
Laughing awkwardly, Gohan thinks that they are lucky Frieza never bothered to train, as the frost demon had the potential and talent to rival Super Saiyan Gods in a short time period.
Karin breathed tiredly, still surprised by the declaration of the young warrior in front of her.
"Now I understand your urgency to gain more power." Karin said thoughtfully. "I'm going to get water."
While Gohan was waiting, Krillin tried to convince the young man not to take the risk and not drink water.
"Have you lost your mind?" Krillin said, lowering his voice so the feline master couldn't hear. "You'll end up killing yourself."
Gohan looked at Krillin with a determined look. He knew the veteran warrior was worried about him, but he couldn't stop now. He needed power to face Frieza and the future enemies to come.
"I know the risks." Gohan replied, turning to his colleague. "And to be honest, I would like you to drink it too."
The veteran warrior was speechless and watched Gohan with a mixture of concern and confusion.
"You are crazy!" Exclaims Krillin raising both his hands. "Why would I do that?"
Gohan takes a deep breath and responds without looking directly at him.
"Because I know you don't consider yourself strong. I also know that lately you feel inferior to everyone, that you are afraid, I know that you think you are always surrounded by friends and enemies much more powerful than you."
Krillin is amazed at the young warrior's statement. It's been a few years since his first doubts arose, but since the arrival of the Saiyans they have intensified.
"And even with these thoughts haunting you, you always fought with courage and determination. To protect the weak and to defend what is right."
"But it's Goku who always defeats powerful enemies." Krillin argues with a trembling voice.
"My father is always willing to fight for what is right." Says Gohan, turning to him. "A genius when it comes to fighting and dedicated when it comes to training."
Breathing a sigh of relief, Krillin nods in agreement.
"But it is you who always challenges the enemy, regardless of whether he is stronger or how afraid you are. And that's why, at least for me, you're the greatest hero on this planet."
Krillin's throat dried up at Gohan's words, he had interacted so little with the young warrior and yet he thought so highly of him.
"Wow Gohan, I didn't know that-."
"I'm back." Said the feline master, returning with a large white teapot and a glass, cutting Krillin off in the middle of his sentence.
Without wasting time on ceremonies, the cat poured the water into the glass and handed it to Gohan.
For a second Gohan hesitated, his eyes fixed on the swirling liquid in the cup. The risk was high, but he also knew that he needed this power. Taking a deep breath, he raised the cup to his lips and drank it all in one gulp.
As soon as the last drop touched his tongue, Gohan felt a searing pain course through his body. It was as if he had swallowed molten lava and every fiber of his being screamed in agony. He fell to the ground, writhing in pain as sweat ran down his face.
In horror Krillin watched Gohan convulsing on the ground, his body twisting and contorting in painful ways. Krillin quickly knelt down next to Gohan, sweating coldly with concern for the young man.
"Gohan…" He whispered desperately.
For hours, Gohan lay on the ground, wracked with pain and unable to move or speak. His body convulsed violently several times before suddenly becoming still, only to then relax.
When the moon was already high on the horizon, the pain suddenly dissipated from Gohan's body.
Slowly Gohan began to regain consciousness. His vision was blurry at first, but gradually it cleared until he could see everything around him with perfect clarity as the system's warning windows opened in front of him.
[+220K MENTAL]
[New Perk: Omnimind]
[Zenkai Boost(50%)]
[New Perk: Omnimind]
[Zenkai Boost(50%)]
Gohan's eyes widened in awe when he saw his winnings. A massive mental attribute bonus, a new Perk and the biggest Zenkai Boost he's ever had.
'In the original Goku also had gained the ability to sense Ki, why didn't I gain it? And what exactly is this Omnimind?'
But since he didn't want to waste time, Gohan put his questions aside and got up to hand the cup to Krillin.
"I'm not going to make you do this against your will, but I still think you should drink."
Sweating profusely and shaking with anticipation, Krillin took the offered cup and carefully drank it after the master filled it with water without understanding the full context of what was happening.
As soon as the water touched his lips, Krillin felt a wave of pain pass through him and just as Gohan fell to the ground writhing in pain.
"I hope all this effort from you two is worth it."
"It will be worth it, master." Said Gohan, proud of the decision Krillin made. "While he's 'busy', could we talk?"
The ancient cat stares at Gohan with suspicion of what he might want.
"What would you like to talk about?"
"God Ki." The young man says, giving a friendly smile.
…
"I think I don't like you." The old cat complains in an irritated tone.
Gohan Character Sheet:
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 29 [ 60M / 79M ]
HP : 6,37M
KP : 6,15M
PL : 1.076,25K
MIGHT : 1.275K
AGILITY : 1.050K
SPIRIT : 1.230K
MENTAL : 750K
Points: 3,000
[STATUS]
Boa noite pessoas,
Even though I don't respond to all the comments, I read them all. And my goodness, so many people want the love interest to be Android 21.
COMMENTS:
-DJONGO(spiritfanfiction):
Tá tri. I wonder why there are so few stories about Gohan when he's such a great character.
-Renan: I haven't read many Dragon Ball fics, but if what you say is true, I'm sad to know that Gohan isn't popular.
-Datdude58(archiveofourown):
Videl, but don't do her dirty like they did in super where she's just a housewife. At least make her a cop when she's older lol.
-Renan: In Super it looks like she runs fighting tournaments or is some kind of martial arts teacher. Which seems strange considering that she helped the police when she was a teenager.
To me it would make more sense for her to be from a special forces or something like that.
06) Road Trip
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Bom dia pessoas,
A few messages before starting the story.
[-]In addition to the reincarnated Gohan, there is another element that differs from the original story. This element was what triggered all the differences unrelated to the protagonist.
[-]Once again I would like to remind you that the manga is the main guide for this story. That's why Goku's ship hadn't been destroyed as some commented that it had happened in the anime's filler.
[-]I'm looking for a Beta Reader, anyone interested just send me a message.
In a vast and gloomy hall of a spaceship, a soldier presents himself kneeling in a sign of respect for the great emperor of the universe.
"Lord Frieza... the Ginyu Special Forces... will be here soon." The soldier finishes speaking, panting as if he had run a marathon.
A cruel smile spread across Frieza's face, revealing sharp, pale teeth. His voice, cold as the vacuum of space, echoed through the hall.
"Excellent."
With just one word, the soldier shivered all over, seized by a chill that had nothing to do with the space cold. But despite his fear and apprehension, he couldn't contain his curiosity and dared to ask something.
"My Lord... with so many soldiers and you already on your way to Namek, is the presence of the Ginyu Special Forces really necessary?"
A deadly silence fell over the hall. The temperature in the room plummeted, as if space itself froze in the face of the tyrant's wrath.
"Necessary?" Frieza snarled, each word an ice projectile piercing the soldier. "Do you dare question my decisions?"
The soldier, seized with terror, cowered in on himself, pleading for mercy in his eyes. But Frieza was not a merciful being. Quickly, he lifted the soldier off the ground using his telekinesis, suspending him in the air like a defenseless insect.
"Your insolence will be punished in the most painful way possible," Frieza hissed, his voice laden with sadism. "But I assure you that you will have enough time to reflect on your audacity while you agonize."
The soldier, paralyzed with fear, was unable to make a sound. He suffered, powerless, as Frieza spun him in the air, like a toy in the hands of a cruel child.
"Die." The emperor spoke, clenching his hand, concentrating energy on a single point on the soldier's body.
A shrill, piercing scream cut through the silence of the hall. The soldier's body writhed in agony, his bones breaking like dry twigs, his organs crushing under Frieza's telekinetic pressure.
In a few seconds, the soldier was nothing more than a pile of bloody flesh, floating in the air like a macabre trophy. Frieza released him, letting the body fall to the ground with a thud.
"Let this be a warning to all," Frieza proclaimed, his voice echoing through the hall. "I will spare no resources, efforts and especially will not spare your insignificant lives to obtain the dragon balls." He said the last part looking at the other soldiers present.
The other soldiers present in the room nodded in silence, horrified by the scene they had just witnessed.
Still furious, Frieza turns and looks towards one of the ship's windows.
"Nothing will stand in my way to get what I want most," Frieza says, looking out the window.
But instead of contemplating the vastness of space, Frieza was staring at his appearance with scorn and disgust etched on his face.
Back in the white immensity of the time room, Gohan examines his new perk, trying to understand it.
[-]Omnimind: Your mind's true power has been unlocked giving you enhanced cognitive processing, hyper-concentration, mental resilience and multitasking mastery.
"Enhanced cognitive processing and mental resilience are easy to understand, but hyper-concentration and multitasking mastery have to do with different parts of the brain. So much so that when a normal person who is good with one of these abilities is not good with the other," Gohan grumbles, reflecting on his power. "Perhaps the ability to use both at the same time is what makes the power so incredible that it required ultra-holy water to awaken."
"And that confirms my suspicion." The young man says, all smiles with the confirmation of his theory.
Despite his satisfaction in his moment of achievement, Gohan had forgotten a small detail.
"What are you talking about?" Questions the other voice next to the young warrior.
Kuririn had joined Gohan to train for a year in the time chamber, and the fact that the young man was talking to himself while analyzing his powers was becoming apparent.
"N-nothing, you know." Gohan said, laughing nervously, trying to change the subject. "Just thinking out loud."
Considering that the young man spent a whole year alone in that desolate white expanse, Kuririn didn't find it strange that he had acquired the habit of talking to himself.
"It's very difficult to move around in here in this room where the gravity is 10 times greater than normal." Kuririn commented, looking at Gohan with a suit that Mr. Popo had just made for him. "I don't know how you can do it wearing those weight clothes that Mr. Popo made for you."
Smiling, Gohan replies.
"It takes a while to get used to, but the gains are worth it. You who did Master Kame's training, you know how the extra weight helps."
Taken by a nostalgic feeling, Kuririn smiled back at the boy.
"I remember it like it was yesterday, the heavy turtle shell on my back, the initial despair of moving, and the feeling of getting stronger with each day of training," Kuririn nodded, smiling. "I think it was around that time that I met your father… was it him who told that story?"
"Well…" Gohan replies, laughing nervously.
"By the way, how did you know Vegeta's boss was so strong?"
"I saw it through the Scouter when you passed out at Bulma's house, now let's stop the small talk and start training!" Gohan exclaims, sweating profusely trying to distract his training partner. "We still have to test this out."
As soon as he finishes speaking, Gohan pulls out a white capsule with a black stripe. Pressing the button, Gohan throws the capsule in front of them revealing a machine that in the original series was in the center of the ship that took Goku to Namek.
"Is this the gravity machine you talked to Bulma's father about?"
"Yes." Gohan replies, approaching the control panel. "I knew the doctor was an amazing guy, but having completed it in less than eight hours was surreal."
"Bulma must have inherited his work ethic from him." Kuririn added, examining the machine with curious eyes. "But the gravity here is already ten times greater than normal to increase it even more?"
As soon as Gohan finishes entering the commands, he turns on the machine. In response, the atmosphere around the machine trembles and Gohan's body is pulled down with the new weight.
"I increased the gravity by two times, but since the room was already ten times more, now it's twenty times more."
"Wait!" Kuririn exclaims. "How much do your clothes weigh now?"
"Ten tons." Gohan replies, smiling proudly.
"T-t-ten tons?" Kuririn stammers, scared. "How are you going to train like that?"
"To answer that, I would like to talk about our training schedule." The young warrior begins to speak. "In the mornings we do light exercises and sparring with little contact under the effect of amplified gravity. After lunch in the afternoon, I divide into two parts, the first part we train ki techniques, mainly control that I need so much now at the beginning and then we do sparring with more contact to close the day."
"A bit too much of a plaster cast training for my taste, but since there are only the two of us I guess it's ideal." Kuririn adds, reflecting on Gohan's proposed schedule. "But when you're training your techniques, I'll be doing nothing?"
To answer the veteran warrior, Gohan took one of the notebooks he brought with him to the time chamber.
"You can venture into the more remote area, the harsh climate and hostile atmosphere make it an interesting place to train, or you could take a look at these ideas of mine." Gohan says, handing the notebook to Kuririn. "I've been writing some training and technique ideas here."
Curious, Kuririn begins to leaf through the notebook and glances at the titles of the topics covered in his texts.
"There are some interesting things here." Kuririn murmurs, his eyes glued to the notebook. "But are you sure these theories will be applicable?"
Effect = When training, players have their physical and mental resistance doubled. The user also has something similar to a sixth sense when it comes to training. Instinctively he knows when a form of training is viable or not when he is focused on a goal.
"Let's say I have a good instinct for these things." Gohan replies, laughing nervously with the achievements window floating next to him.
"Riiiiight…" Kuririn mutters, unsure of the boy's tone. "How do you plan to do those end-of-the-day sparring sessions?"
The bald monk's question makes Gohan sigh wearily, as he wasn't sure how to explain the powers granted by Zen-Oh.
"I have a… 'special technique', developed for training." Gohan says, lying blatantly.
"Interesting." Kuririn says in a curious tone.
"Promise you won't be scared?" Gohan asks worriedly. "And don't ask questions?"
As soon as the veteran nods, a bombastic song echoes through the time chamber, a military march, combining elements of electronic music and orchestra that Gohan was already familiar with.
"Where is that music coming from?" Kuririn questions before the announcer's voice makes itself present.
In an explosion of green pixels, the alien creature manifests.
"EEEEEEK!" The strange little green man bellowed.
"OH MY GOD!"
"You promised you wouldn't be scared." Gohan grumbles, crossing his arms.
Stunned, Kuririn stares at the green monster, but then turns his gaze to question Gohan eye to eye.
"How?"
"You also promised not to ask questions."
The passage of time became evident as the days turned into weeks and the weeks into months.
During the first days of training, Kuririn noticed that the water had not only increased his power but also improved his Ki control, which helped him develop new techniques proposed by Gohan.
Gohan, on the other hand, had the bonus of his mental attribute along with his 50% zenkai boost and the Omnimind perk that he abused during training.
Before, a Skill that would take Gohan months to reach the rank of Grand-Master, was now achieved in less than two weeks and now he was able to execute several techniques at once, without having to prepare or plan in advance like when he used the combo to defeat Oozaru Vegeta, showing the usefulness of hyperfocus combined with Omnimind's multitasking mastery.
At the end of the 365 days of training, Kuririn noticed in himself a power 50 times greater than when he faced Vegeta and Nappa. Gohan, who was sitting examining his status windows, noticed that he did not have nearly as explosive a growth as the first year.
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 31 [95 M / 120 M]
HP: 6,75 M
KP: 7 M
PL: 1,04 M
MIGHT: 1,35 M
AGILITY: 1,17 M
SPIRIT: 1,40 M
MENTAL: 1,29 M
Points: 3.200
His power went from 662 K to 1.04 M, in addition to not even doubling his total, it was the mental attribute that increased the most due to testing his Ki hypotheses and techniques to be developed.
'If I compare myself to other warriors with a million power levels, I am significantly weaker, since my power was the sum of the four attributes divided by four.' Gohan thought silently.
What made this year worth it was his arsenal of techniques that increased significantly.
[-]Ki Concealment Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ki Restrainment Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ki Sense Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ki Transfer Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Flight Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
SUPPORT:
[-]Clock-Up Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ionioi Hetairoi Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Spider-Sense Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Kaioken Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Light Smith Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Power Ball Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Shield Breaker Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Solar Flare Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Telekinesis Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
ATTACK:
[-]Athena Exclamation Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Galaxian Explosion Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Kamehameha Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ki Strike Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ki Blast Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Kienzan Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Warhead Forge Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Makankosappo Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Plasma lightning Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Rankyaku Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Scarlet Needle Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
DEFENSE:
[-]Busoshoku Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Crystal Wall Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Lord Camelot Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Safe Haven Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
The reincarnated man achieved so many new techniques that he had to rearrange his Ki Skills window to make it less confusing to read. Now divided into four categories and you would need to call a specific technique to read all your information.
Now his special abilities haven't changed much.
-ACTIVE:
[-]Meditate Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] = Regen 100% of stamina per minute, Regen 20% KP and HP per minute. Regen 1% of your mass every hour. Passive regen KP and HP 2% per minute.
-TRANSFORMATIONS:
[-]Oozaru Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] = X 10 Power Level. Able to maintain some control. User retains the majority of control. Able to BLOCK into BLOCK BLOCK.
'What is this blocked information in the Oozaru?' Gohan thinks curiously.
"You're doing it again," said a concerned voice, pulling Gohan's attention.
The young man looked at the one who was calling his attention.
"You're staring into the air, as if you have something floating in your face," Kuririn said, arms crossed, examining the boy.
"Sorry," Gohan replies, standing up. "I was thinking about my gains."
Kuririn smiles and shakes his head.
"You're as focused on training as your father is, the only difference is that you have a more... systematic approach than Goku."
Standing up quickly, Gohan faces the door of the temple room and sighs deeply.
"It's been a year in here and even with your help I feel like I won't be able to break through the power ceiling I've just reached."
"And what's your plan now?" Kuririn asked curiously. "Is there any way you can get stronger?"
Gohan's mind races as he stands before the door, his thoughts consumed by memories of the transformations he could achieve. Super Saiyan 1 through 4 and the Beast form Gohan has great raw power, but accessing them required overwhelming fury. Something he couldn't simulate in this year of training.
'Maybe I'm still too weak to activate the transformation,' Gohan thought to himself. 'But I doubt the original Goku was much stronger than me when he first transformed against Frieza.'
His thoughts then turned to godly ki. Master Karin didn't have much information on this subject, and informed Gohan that divine ki was just a purer and more concentrated form of ki.
'And without access to divine ki, there's no way I can achieve Ultra Instinct or Ultra Ego,' Gohan thinks, worried about his future. 'Could the original Gohan's Beast form be an alternative?'
"GOHAN!" Kuririn shouted, drawing the young man's attention. "You're doing it again."
"Sorry," the young man says, embarrassed. "I guess there's no point in standing around now, let's get out of here and prepare the supplies for our trip."
"Don't worry," Kuririn adds. "You're already much stronger than anyone I know, don't feel bad for not being able to do more."
"There's still the Saiyajin's infallible way to get stronger," Gohan says, smiling confidently.
"What's that?" Kuririn asks, concerned.
"Fighting strong opponents."
"Damn it!" Kuririn complains, grumbling. "You're really Goku's son."
On his last day of training, five days had passed since Gohan had woken up in his new body.
On the first day, he trained for a year in the Time Chamber. On the second and third days, he trained with Popo, delivered Goku's ship to Bulma, and drank the ultra divine water. On the fourth day, he returned to train in the Time Chamber, and on the fifth day, he returned to the hospital, where he had to explain to his new mother why he looked so different and promise his father that they would fight to test his new power.
From the sixth to the eighth day, he stayed at the Brief family's house. Chi-Chi was relieved that such intelligent and responsible people were taking care of her son while she was in the hospital with Goku.
Gohan decided it was best not to tell Chi-Chi that he had helped Bulma and Dr. Brief repair the ship. As much as Gohan was excited to learn the basics of mechanics and engineering from two of the greatest minds in the DragonBall universe, he thought Chi-Chi would be worried to know that her little son was learning to use power tools and an industrial cutting torch.
With the arrival of the ninth day after Goku's hospitalization, the ship was ready for the trip.
As in the original story, the vehicle landed on Master Roshi's island. And today, Gohan, Bulma, and Krillin were standing in front of the ship, ready to depart. Everyone was apprehensive about the great journey that was about to begin, a tense silence hung in the air as the heroes admired the repaired ship.
And in the middle of this charged moment, it was Chi-Chi who broke the silence by throwing herself into a hug with Gohan.
"Gohan, my son," Chi-Chi sobbed as tears streamed down her face. "Why have you changed so much in these last few days?"
Feeling bad for the woman who didn't even know she had lost her real son, Gohan hugged her back, trying to calm her down.
"It's an extreme situation m-." Gohan cuts himself off before calling the woman Mom, feeling dirty for almost having done so. "When I get back, I promise I'll sit down and talk to you calmly."
With a heavy heart, the mother releases her son, who, despite having argued with her about not wanting to wear his best clothes, still loves her very much. Even though he looked like a dwarf glam metal singer.
In the original text, Gohan is about to embark on a great journey with Bulma and Krillin, but he is still reeling from the recent changes in his life. He feels guilty for not telling Chi-Chi the truth about his identity, and he is also worried about the dangers that lie ahead. Chi-Chi's unexpected hug brings these emotions to the surface, and Gohan is forced to confront his mixed feelings.
Bulma swallows hard and approaches the ship and speaks.
"Piccolo."
In response, the ship descends to its platform, allowing the three Earthlings to climb onto it and load their luggage and supplies for the trip in a few minutes.
As soon as they finished loading everything and saying goodbye, Bulma gave the command to close the floodgate.
"Piccolo."
Slowly the Earthlings are lifted into the ship.
Krillin, marveling at the interior of the ship, looks at Gohan and Chi-Chi.
"Damn Bulma, you outdid yourself this time!" Krillin exclaims, eyes wide.
"I didn't build it, I just fixed it with the help of my father and Gohan." The blue-haired scientist says in a serious tone. "Now sit down and we're leaving."
Both warriors sat down and fastened their belts while Bulma approached the ship's pilot's seat.
"Five seconds until takeoff, destination: Planet Namek."
The panel beeped in response and within five seconds the ship took off with incredible speed towards its destination.
As the journey began, Gohan relaxed in the ship's seat and turned to admire the cosmos. The speed was so high that it seemed like they were traveling through time, not just space.
'If it's the same as the original story. When we arrive, Frieza will already be looking for the dragon balls and terrorizing the Namekians.' Thinks Gohan internally.
With a new worry taking over his head, Gohan ends up forgetting that his interference affected the travel schedule.
The Earthlings were going to arrive on the planet Namek, earlier than in the original anime.
After a 15-day journey, Gohan, Krillin, and Bulma arrive on the planet Namek.
As they disembarked from the ship's platform, the humans expected to be greeted by the alien planet's nature while the hybrid expected Frieza's soldiers.
All three were wrong.
"Halt, invaders!" A harsh voice boomed in their direction. "From whom did you steal this Namekian ship?"
They were greeted by a group of Namekian warriors.
"My God, how many Piccolos." Krillin whispered, scared.
Even though both Earthlings were surprised by the way they were greeted, it was Gohan who was the most shocked of the group.
'What's going on?' He wonders internally. 'Frieza and his soldiers were supposed to be terrorizing the planet.'
In front of them stood four green men with appearances similar to Piccolo's, with the difference that some were fatter or shorter. Leading the group was a serious Namekian speaking in an authoritative manner.
Wanting to attract attention to himself, Gohan begins to raise his ki slowly. Which works, making their leader look at him with a suspicious air.
"You, with the most powerful Ki, are the leader of this group?" The green warrior asked.
Taking a step forward, Gohan puffs out his chest and replies.
"I'm not the leader, but I will answer any question you have with the truth."
"GOHAN!" Bulma and Krillin shout at the same time, surprised by the young man's action.
The Namekian leader relaxes a little when he hears the young man's statement, but he still doesn't let his guard down.
"So your name is Gohan." Said the leader of the group, puffing out his chest. "My name is Nail."
'NAIL?!' Gohan shouted internally, remembering the Abridged version of Dragon Ball Z. 'But what is he doing here? He should be with Guru.'
Quickly recovering, Gohan assumes a more formal stance to answer the green man.
"It's a pleasure to meet you, these are Bulma and Krillin." Gohan said, acting as the leader of the Earthlings. "And to answer your previous question, this ship belonged to the Namekian of the Dragon Clan who acted as Kami on our planet called Earth. We are on a mission to help him, so we used this ship."
"Kami?" Nail asks, confused.
The other green men whisper curiously among themselves, they expected these invaders to be just thieves or pirates, not friends of a member of their species who lives beyond the stars.
"An unlikely story, 'earther'." Nail said, trying to guess the word for natives of the planet Earth. "Why should we believe it?'
Despite the green warrior's disdain for his explanation, Gohan smiles, pleased with the honorable behavior of the most powerful warrior on the planet.
"How about you let some of your warriors guard the ship and those two?" Gohan said, pointing to Bulma and Krillin. "And you take me as a prisoner to be questioned by your leader."
Everyone present, Namekians and humans, widened their eyes in astonishment at Gohan's offer.
"Have you gone crazy?" Krillin asks, worried about the young boy. "Why would you do that?"
"Because we don't have time to waste." Gohan says in a serious tone. "I don't feel Vegeta's Ki on the planet or anyone else stronger than this guy around, we have to take advantage of the fact that we got here first and get more information."
"B-but how do you-."
Before Krillin could question him, Gohan puts his hands on his shoulder, cutting him off.
"I need you to take care of Bulma and the ship." Gohan whispers in a confident tone. "And don't worry, I'll be back before nightfall."
The veteran warrior gulps and nods in agreement with the young man's decision.
Behind them, Nail materializes a pair of handcuffs and hands them to Gohan to put on.
'Piccolo can also create items out of thin air.' Gohan thinks, reaching for the handcuffs. 'I wonder if they'll teach me this-.'
"HEAVY!" Gohan shouts, surprised to find the handcuffs weighing over 500 kilos (1.000 pounds).
If it weren't for his training in increased gravity, Gohan would have dropped the weight on the ground. Nail frowns, concerned that the young man had supported the weight so easily.
"Can you fly in your condition?' Nail asks the young man.
"I can fly faster than you with twice that weight."
The other Namekians laugh at the boy's arrogant attitude while Bulma and Krillin sweat profusely.
"Let's see if you speak the truth." Nail says, taking off abruptly.
Gohan just smiles and flies after him.
With the two most powerful members of both groups now gone, Bulma relaxes to the point of becoming furious and directs her anger at the nearest victim, Krillin.
"I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LET HIM GO ALONE WITH THAT GREEN GUY!" Bulma shouted, shaking Krillin.
"Calm down Bulma, he said he'd be back before nightfall, no need to worry."
Informed of Gohan's promise to return quickly, Bulma calms down, but her and Krillin's attention is drawn to the group of Namekians laughing loudly at the last sentence.
"Can I know what you find so funny?" Bulma asks in an irritated tone.
The shortest and fattest of them steps forward and explains, smiling.
"Your friend promised to never come back."
"What?" Krillin asks.
"There is no night on Namek." The short and fat Namekian replies.
The four Namekians laugh again loudly at the humans' desperate reactions.
As they reached the entrance of a large white building, Nail gestured for Gohan to wait for a moment.
Inside, the light was soft and welcoming, reflected off the white stone walls creating an atmosphere of deep peace. In the center of the room, on a large throne, was the figure of Guru, the Elder of Namek. His figure was imposing and rotund, his face was covered in wrinkles showing how old the being was. His eyes are closed, his breathing slow and measured, each movement seemed to carry the weight of past ages.
Nail motioned for Gohan to step forward. The young man, his heart pounding, walked until he stood before the Elder Guru.
'He was bigger on TV.' The Earthling thought to himself silently. 'Or maybe I'm bigger than I was on TV.'
Looking up, Gohan contemplates Guru's serene and wrinkled face.
"Elder Guru." Nail began, with a tone of absolute respect. "This is Gohan, a young warrior from a distant planet. He claims to have come in peace, but has no concrete proof."
Guru opened his eyes slowly, revealing a deep and mysterious glow. He looked at Gohan with a fatherly kindness, which immediately calmed the young hybrid's anxious heart.
"Come closer, little Gohan." Guru said, his deep voice resonating through the room, carrying an ancient wisdom. "I feel no ill intentions coming from you, but I notice that your heart is very troubled."
Gohan took a step forward, feeling enveloped in a sense of security and understanding.
"With your permission, I will look into your mind."
"Wait!" Gohan exclaims, concerned. "How much of my mind will you see?"
"Afraid of having your true intentions exposed?" Nail asks in an aggressive tone.
"NAAAAAIIIIL!" Guru shouts, silencing his bodyguard.
'Just like TFS.' Gohan thought in shock.
"I will see as much as you allow me to." Guru said in a caring tone, turning to the young man. "Nothing more and nothing less."
Reaching out his voluminous hand, he gently touched Gohan's head. The little warrior closed his eyes, allowing the Elder to examine him.
Elder Guru's touch on Gohan's head sent a wave of warmth and peace through the young Saiyan. With his eyes closed again, the elder delves deep into Gohan's mind, feeling the currents of his being like a river of emotions and memories.
After a few moments of silence, Guru opened his eyes, his soft but penetrating gaze resting on Gohan.
"Young man." He began, his voice resonating with an almost hypnotic calm, "I can feel the turmoil in your heart. There is a storm within you, a mixture of fear and unease about the future."
Gohan looked at Guru, his eyes wide with surprise at being understood so deeply. He didn't say anything, but Guru continued, his voice full of compassion and understanding.
"You fear for the future, but not just for yourself. And that fear, that uncertainty, is like shadows that obscure the light of your spirit."
Guru paused, allowing the young man to absorb his words before continuing.
"This fear, this unease, feeds a despair within you. And it is this despair that pushes you to seek power, at any cost. But this path, my young man, is dangerous. Power sought through despair can lead to destruction, both of yourself and those you wish to protect."
Gohan felt a lump form in his throat, Guru's words echoing in his mind. He instinctively knew the Elder was right.
Guru looked at him with an expression of wisdom and tenderness.
"Remember that in addition to your strength, agility and spirit, you also have your mind as an attribute. It is the key that will open the way for you to challenge the Gods."
Startled, Gohan stares at Guru with wide eyes.
'Did he read all my memories? Does he know I'm not from this world and what's to come?' Gohan thought worriedly. 'From what he described, it seems like he also knows about my system.'
"I also see that you have begun to awaken the power that lies dormant within you, let me see if I can help you."
A strange energy runs through Gohan's body as Guru's gaze intensifies. As Guru increases his energy around Gohan, something extraordinary awakens within him.
With a sudden burst of energy, the young Saiyan felt a surge of power coursing through his veins.
"Another one?" Questions Gohan in surprise.
"I wasn't able to unlock its full potential." Guru said softly, his voice filled with pride and admiration for the young warrior before him. "But I have the impression that you already know what can be done to do it." Guru said pointing to Gohan's pants.
Reaching into his pocket Gohan holds the gravity machine capsule and nods solemnly.
'I have to explore Vegeta's strategy.' Gohan thought to himself. 'Training in extreme gravity, almost killing myself to get the power.'
With a gentle gesture, Guru removed his hand from Gohan's head.
"NAAAAAIIIIL!" Exclaimed the Guru calling for his bodyguard. "Go release the other travelers who are in the custody of our warriors, they are our guests now."
"Yes Lord Guru." Says Nail, surprised by the complacency directed towards humans.
"One more thing." Says Guru before Nail leaves. "Look for a young man named Dende, he lives in the southernmost village on the planet."
"For what reason Lord Guru?" Questions Nail, confused.
"He is a very talented young man with restorative powers." Says the Guru smiling gently. "Dende will help this visitor achieve the necessary Saiyan power and I will help him with his divine Ki project."
"You know everything about me, right?"
The Guru laughs serenely at the young man.
"In my defense, part of you wanted to reveal this information to me." Said the Guru in a solemn tone. "The part that knew this was the most efficient way for you to achieve your goals."
"Omnimind?" Gohan asks curiously.
The Guru nods his head.
Frustrated at having his secrets revealed by himself, Gohan decides to focus on what was most important at the moment.
"You know what I want to do now, right?"
"Search for the dragon balls?" Asks the Guru, for the first time, without knowing the boy's intentions. "After all, you came to resurrect your allies."
"Yes, but also something else." Says Gohan with a slutty smile.
"Um…" Guru mutters thinking until he remembers something from the boy's mind. "I believe you call it… 'earnings'?"
"Lets fucking go!"
Boa noite pessoas,
I would like to thank those who left a comment, that always makes me happy.
And once again I would like to reinforce the request that I am looking for Beta Readers. Anyone interested just send me a message.
If some of you want to know why Guru had 'Pascoal Ramos' on his tunic, just ask in the comments.
COMMENTS:
[-]Stads(questionablequesting):
nice chapter thx for writing it
huh wonder what the cat knows about god ki
nice seeing bulma being talked down still dont get the whole polite ness the mc is putting in all the time.
[-]Renan:
Karin didn't know much, but at least she knew about the existence of such a thing. And regarding the protagonist's polite way of speaking, I would like to quote LuckyRobert(questionablequesting):
'Speak softly and carry a big stick; you will go far.'
[-]Yume(questionablequesting):
Fun chapter, thanks for writing it.
My only real gripe so far though is the spelling error that's seemingly attached itself to Korin for some reason.
[-]Renan:
Like Kazumaa23(questionablequesting) said:
'That's his actual name (カリン, Karin) in Japan and most countries.'
That's why I need Beta Readers for the English version of the fic. This type of error is easy to pass for those who didn't grow up watching the English dubbed version.
[-]Apollodorus13(fanfiction)
Why wouldnt he train his Oozaru? The better trained it is, the easier it will be to get SS4 in the long run if he does.
[-]Renan:
An excellent question, but I won't answer it to avoid spoilers.
[-]Funmaxwell(webnovel):
The ultra Divine water only gave Goku at most a 13% increase to his power level not a 50% and it nearly killed him so it's not really worth it considering pretty much everyone else that supposedly drink it before him died.
[-]Renan:
The 50% boost is due to the Zenkai Boost from the near-death experience of drinking the water. According to Karin in the manga "She is able to reveal the secret power hidden within yourself"... and that could be anything.
After drinking the water Goku said he was feeling as powerful as he was serene and then Goku was able to feel Piccolo's power who was nearby. In other words, she didn't have the ability to sense Ki before or it was also significantly expanded.
Goku lost to Piccolo Daimao who had a power of 260 before wishing his youth back. After asking for his youth back, Piccolo had 500 and Goku beat him in the rematch. Showing that the water boost was more significant than many think. (This part has no consensus and fans are always arguing about it.)
[-]Xcell(questionablequesting):
1- All the karens in the world
come to Karen Tower to train under master Karen. ( Karen is a slang term typically used to refer to a middle-class white American woman who is perceived as entitled or excessively demanding. The term is often portrayed in memes depicting middle-class white women who "use their white and class privilege) just in case you didn't know what that means 
.
2- "We're here to find the capsule that brought my father to planet Earth, not to fight." you mean the one that got completely destroyed during the Saiyan Arc when Gohan was training with piccolo.
3- The ultra Divine water didn't really boost Goku's power all that much like by 13% if I recall. Which is weird because the show made it seem like he got a much bigger power boost than that but in reality he didn't. It's also the most dangerous way in the dragon Ball series to get a power up and the least beneficial so it's not really worth it in the end considering it's high mortality rate.
[-]Renan:
Divide your comment into two parts to make it easier to respond.
1- I know about Karens, is there a male version or do you call them Karen too?
2- As I mentioned earlier, I use the manga as my main reference. During his training with Piccolo, Gohan only turns Oozaru once in chapter 208, Piccolo destroys the moon to reverse the transformation and then cuts off Gohan's tail and gives him the clothes and sword while Gohan sleeps unconscious.
3- I think what I said to Funmaxwell(webnovel) answers this part.
A few messages before starting the story.
[-]In addition to the reincarnated Gohan, there is another element that differs from the original story. This element was what triggered all the differences unrelated to the protagonist.
[-]Once again I would like to remind you that the manga is the main guide for this story. That's why Goku's ship hadn't been destroyed as some commented that it had happened in the anime's filler.
[-]I'm looking for a Beta Reader, anyone interested just send me a message.
In a vast and gloomy hall of a spaceship, a soldier presents himself kneeling in a sign of respect for the great emperor of the universe.
"Lord Frieza... the Ginyu Special Forces... will be here soon." The soldier finishes speaking, panting as if he had run a marathon.
A cruel smile spread across Frieza's face, revealing sharp, pale teeth. His voice, cold as the vacuum of space, echoed through the hall.
"Excellent."
With just one word, the soldier shivered all over, seized by a chill that had nothing to do with the space cold. But despite his fear and apprehension, he couldn't contain his curiosity and dared to ask something.
"My Lord... with so many soldiers and you already on your way to Namek, is the presence of the Ginyu Special Forces really necessary?"
A deadly silence fell over the hall. The temperature in the room plummeted, as if space itself froze in the face of the tyrant's wrath.
"Necessary?" Frieza snarled, each word an ice projectile piercing the soldier. "Do you dare question my decisions?"
The soldier, seized with terror, cowered in on himself, pleading for mercy in his eyes. But Frieza was not a merciful being. Quickly, he lifted the soldier off the ground using his telekinesis, suspending him in the air like a defenseless insect.
"Your insolence will be punished in the most painful way possible," Frieza hissed, his voice laden with sadism. "But I assure you that you will have enough time to reflect on your audacity while you agonize."
The soldier, paralyzed with fear, was unable to make a sound. He suffered, powerless, as Frieza spun him in the air, like a toy in the hands of a cruel child.
"Die." The emperor spoke, clenching his hand, concentrating energy on a single point on the soldier's body.
A shrill, piercing scream cut through the silence of the hall. The soldier's body writhed in agony, his bones breaking like dry twigs, his organs crushing under Frieza's telekinetic pressure.
In a few seconds, the soldier was nothing more than a pile of bloody flesh, floating in the air like a macabre trophy. Frieza released him, letting the body fall to the ground with a thud.
"Let this be a warning to all," Frieza proclaimed, his voice echoing through the hall. "I will spare no resources, efforts and especially will not spare your insignificant lives to obtain the dragon balls." He said the last part looking at the other soldiers present.
The other soldiers present in the room nodded in silence, horrified by the scene they had just witnessed.
Still furious, Frieza turns and looks towards one of the ship's windows.
"Nothing will stand in my way to get what I want most," Frieza says, looking out the window.
But instead of contemplating the vastness of space, Frieza was staring at his appearance with scorn and disgust etched on his face.
[DBI:GG]
Back in the white immensity of the time room, Gohan examines his new perk, trying to understand it.
[PERKS]
[-]Omnimind: Your mind's true power has been unlocked giving you enhanced cognitive processing, hyper-concentration, mental resilience and multitasking mastery.
[PERKS]
"Enhanced cognitive processing and mental resilience are easy to understand, but hyper-concentration and multitasking mastery have to do with different parts of the brain. So much so that when a normal person who is good with one of these abilities is not good with the other," Gohan grumbles, reflecting on his power. "Perhaps the ability to use both at the same time is what makes the power so incredible that it required ultra-holy water to awaken."
[+ 1 K mental]
"And that confirms my suspicion." The young man says, all smiles with the confirmation of his theory.
Despite his satisfaction in his moment of achievement, Gohan had forgotten a small detail.
"What are you talking about?" Questions the other voice next to the young warrior.
Kuririn had joined Gohan to train for a year in the time chamber, and the fact that the young man was talking to himself while analyzing his powers was becoming apparent.
"N-nothing, you know." Gohan said, laughing nervously, trying to change the subject. "Just thinking out loud."
Considering that the young man spent a whole year alone in that desolate white expanse, Kuririn didn't find it strange that he had acquired the habit of talking to himself.
"It's very difficult to move around in here in this room where the gravity is 10 times greater than normal." Kuririn commented, looking at Gohan with a suit that Mr. Popo had just made for him. "I don't know how you can do it wearing those weight clothes that Mr. Popo made for you."
Smiling, Gohan replies.
"It takes a while to get used to, but the gains are worth it. You who did Master Kame's training, you know how the extra weight helps."
Taken by a nostalgic feeling, Kuririn smiled back at the boy.
"I remember it like it was yesterday, the heavy turtle shell on my back, the initial despair of moving, and the feeling of getting stronger with each day of training," Kuririn nodded, smiling. "I think it was around that time that I met your father… was it him who told that story?"
"Well…" Gohan replies, laughing nervously.
"By the way, how did you know Vegeta's boss was so strong?"
"I saw it through the Scouter when you passed out at Bulma's house, now let's stop the small talk and start training!" Gohan exclaims, sweating profusely trying to distract his training partner. "We still have to test this out."
As soon as he finishes speaking, Gohan pulls out a white capsule with a black stripe. Pressing the button, Gohan throws the capsule in front of them revealing a machine that in the original series was in the center of the ship that took Goku to Namek.
"Is this the gravity machine you talked to Bulma's father about?"
"Yes." Gohan replies, approaching the control panel. "I knew the doctor was an amazing guy, but having completed it in less than eight hours was surreal."
"Bulma must have inherited his work ethic from him." Kuririn added, examining the machine with curious eyes. "But the gravity here is already ten times greater than normal to increase it even more?"
As soon as Gohan finishes entering the commands, he turns on the machine. In response, the atmosphere around the machine trembles and Gohan's body is pulled down with the new weight.
"I increased the gravity by two times, but since the room was already ten times more, now it's twenty times more."
"Wait!" Kuririn exclaims. "How much do your clothes weigh now?"
"Ten tons." Gohan replies, smiling proudly.
"T-t-ten tons?" Kuririn stammers, scared. "How are you going to train like that?"
"To answer that, I would like to talk about our training schedule." The young warrior begins to speak. "In the mornings we do light exercises and sparring with little contact under the effect of amplified gravity. After lunch in the afternoon, I divide into two parts, the first part we train ki techniques, mainly control that I need so much now at the beginning and then we do sparring with more contact to close the day."
"A bit too much of a plaster cast training for my taste, but since there are only the two of us I guess it's ideal." Kuririn adds, reflecting on Gohan's proposed schedule. "But when you're training your techniques, I'll be doing nothing?"
To answer the veteran warrior, Gohan took one of the notebooks he brought with him to the time chamber.
"You can venture into the more remote area, the harsh climate and hostile atmosphere make it an interesting place to train, or you could take a look at these ideas of mine." Gohan says, handing the notebook to Kuririn. "I've been writing some training and technique ideas here."
Curious, Kuririn begins to leaf through the notebook and glances at the titles of the topics covered in his texts.
"There are some interesting things here." Kuririn murmurs, his eyes glued to the notebook. "But are you sure these theories will be applicable?"
[ACHIEVEMENTS]
[-]Hard Work Genius:Effect = When training, players have their physical and mental resistance doubled. The user also has something similar to a sixth sense when it comes to training. Instinctively he knows when a form of training is viable or not when he is focused on a goal.
[ACHIEVEMENTS]
"Let's say I have a good instinct for these things." Gohan replies, laughing nervously with the achievements window floating next to him.
"Riiiiight…" Kuririn mutters, unsure of the boy's tone. "How do you plan to do those end-of-the-day sparring sessions?"
The bald monk's question makes Gohan sigh wearily, as he wasn't sure how to explain the powers granted by Zen-Oh.
"I have a… 'special technique', developed for training." Gohan says, lying blatantly.
"Interesting." Kuririn says in a curious tone.
"Promise you won't be scared?" Gohan asks worriedly. "And don't ask questions?"
As soon as the veteran nods, a bombastic song echoes through the time chamber, a military march, combining elements of electronic music and orchestra that Gohan was already familiar with.
"Where is that music coming from?" Kuririn questions before the announcer's voice makes itself present.
[Get ready for explosive action!
From the darkest depths of space,
it is small,
it is green,
and it just needs soil and water to annihilate its enemies!
Give it up for the SAI-BA-MEN!]
From the darkest depths of space,
it is small,
it is green,
and it just needs soil and water to annihilate its enemies!
Give it up for the SAI-BA-MEN!]
In an explosion of green pixels, the alien creature manifests.
"EEEEEEK!" The strange little green man bellowed.
"OH MY GOD!"
"You promised you wouldn't be scared." Gohan grumbles, crossing his arms.
Stunned, Kuririn stares at the green monster, but then turns his gaze to question Gohan eye to eye.
"How?"
"You also promised not to ask questions."
[DBI:GG]
The passage of time became evident as the days turned into weeks and the weeks into months.
During the first days of training, Kuririn noticed that the water had not only increased his power but also improved his Ki control, which helped him develop new techniques proposed by Gohan.
Gohan, on the other hand, had the bonus of his mental attribute along with his 50% zenkai boost and the Omnimind perk that he abused during training.
Before, a Skill that would take Gohan months to reach the rank of Grand-Master, was now achieved in less than two weeks and now he was able to execute several techniques at once, without having to prepare or plan in advance like when he used the combo to defeat Oozaru Vegeta, showing the usefulness of hyperfocus combined with Omnimind's multitasking mastery.
At the end of the 365 days of training, Kuririn noticed in himself a power 50 times greater than when he faced Vegeta and Nappa. Gohan, who was sitting examining his status windows, noticed that he did not have nearly as explosive a growth as the first year.
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 31 [95 M / 120 M]
HP: 6,75 M
KP: 7 M
PL: 1,04 M
MIGHT: 1,35 M
AGILITY: 1,17 M
SPIRIT: 1,40 M
MENTAL: 1,29 M
Points: 3.200
[STATUS]
His power went from 662 K to 1.04 M, in addition to not even doubling his total, it was the mental attribute that increased the most due to testing his Ki hypotheses and techniques to be developed.
'If I compare myself to other warriors with a million power levels, I am significantly weaker, since my power was the sum of the four attributes divided by four.' Gohan thought silently.
What made this year worth it was his arsenal of techniques that increased significantly.
[KI SKILLS]
CONTROL:[-]Ki Concealment Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ki Restrainment Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ki Sense Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ki Transfer Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Flight Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
SUPPORT:
[-]Clock-Up Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ionioi Hetairoi Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Spider-Sense Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Kaioken Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Light Smith Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Power Ball Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Shield Breaker Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Solar Flare Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Telekinesis Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
ATTACK:
[-]Athena Exclamation Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Galaxian Explosion Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Kamehameha Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ki Strike Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Ki Blast Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Kienzan Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Warhead Forge Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Makankosappo Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Plasma lightning Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Rankyaku Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Scarlet Needle Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
DEFENSE:
[-]Busoshoku Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Crystal Wall Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Lord Camelot Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[-]Safe Haven Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master]
[KI SKILLS]
The reincarnated man achieved so many new techniques that he had to rearrange his Ki Skills window to make it less confusing to read. Now divided into four categories and you would need to call a specific technique to read all your information.
Now his special abilities haven't changed much.
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
-PASSIVE:-ACTIVE:
[-]Meditate Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] = Regen 100% of stamina per minute, Regen 20% KP and HP per minute. Regen 1% of your mass every hour. Passive regen KP and HP 2% per minute.
-TRANSFORMATIONS:
[-]Oozaru Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] = X 10 Power Level. Able to maintain some control. User retains the majority of control. Able to BLOCK into BLOCK BLOCK.
[SPECIAL ABILITIES]
'What is this blocked information in the Oozaru?' Gohan thinks curiously.
"You're doing it again," said a concerned voice, pulling Gohan's attention.
The young man looked at the one who was calling his attention.
"You're staring into the air, as if you have something floating in your face," Kuririn said, arms crossed, examining the boy.
"Sorry," Gohan replies, standing up. "I was thinking about my gains."
Kuririn smiles and shakes his head.
"You're as focused on training as your father is, the only difference is that you have a more... systematic approach than Goku."
Standing up quickly, Gohan faces the door of the temple room and sighs deeply.
"It's been a year in here and even with your help I feel like I won't be able to break through the power ceiling I've just reached."
"And what's your plan now?" Kuririn asked curiously. "Is there any way you can get stronger?"
Gohan's mind races as he stands before the door, his thoughts consumed by memories of the transformations he could achieve. Super Saiyan 1 through 4 and the Beast form Gohan has great raw power, but accessing them required overwhelming fury. Something he couldn't simulate in this year of training.
'Maybe I'm still too weak to activate the transformation,' Gohan thought to himself. 'But I doubt the original Goku was much stronger than me when he first transformed against Frieza.'
His thoughts then turned to godly ki. Master Karin didn't have much information on this subject, and informed Gohan that divine ki was just a purer and more concentrated form of ki.
'And without access to divine ki, there's no way I can achieve Ultra Instinct or Ultra Ego,' Gohan thinks, worried about his future. 'Could the original Gohan's Beast form be an alternative?'
"GOHAN!" Kuririn shouted, drawing the young man's attention. "You're doing it again."
"Sorry," the young man says, embarrassed. "I guess there's no point in standing around now, let's get out of here and prepare the supplies for our trip."
"Don't worry," Kuririn adds. "You're already much stronger than anyone I know, don't feel bad for not being able to do more."
"There's still the Saiyajin's infallible way to get stronger," Gohan says, smiling confidently.
"What's that?" Kuririn asks, concerned.
"Fighting strong opponents."
"Damn it!" Kuririn complains, grumbling. "You're really Goku's son."
[DBI:GG]
On his last day of training, five days had passed since Gohan had woken up in his new body.
On the first day, he trained for a year in the Time Chamber. On the second and third days, he trained with Popo, delivered Goku's ship to Bulma, and drank the ultra divine water. On the fourth day, he returned to train in the Time Chamber, and on the fifth day, he returned to the hospital, where he had to explain to his new mother why he looked so different and promise his father that they would fight to test his new power.
From the sixth to the eighth day, he stayed at the Brief family's house. Chi-Chi was relieved that such intelligent and responsible people were taking care of her son while she was in the hospital with Goku.
Gohan decided it was best not to tell Chi-Chi that he had helped Bulma and Dr. Brief repair the ship. As much as Gohan was excited to learn the basics of mechanics and engineering from two of the greatest minds in the DragonBall universe, he thought Chi-Chi would be worried to know that her little son was learning to use power tools and an industrial cutting torch.
With the arrival of the ninth day after Goku's hospitalization, the ship was ready for the trip.
As in the original story, the vehicle landed on Master Roshi's island. And today, Gohan, Bulma, and Krillin were standing in front of the ship, ready to depart. Everyone was apprehensive about the great journey that was about to begin, a tense silence hung in the air as the heroes admired the repaired ship.
And in the middle of this charged moment, it was Chi-Chi who broke the silence by throwing herself into a hug with Gohan.
"Gohan, my son," Chi-Chi sobbed as tears streamed down her face. "Why have you changed so much in these last few days?"
Feeling bad for the woman who didn't even know she had lost her real son, Gohan hugged her back, trying to calm her down.
"It's an extreme situation m-." Gohan cuts himself off before calling the woman Mom, feeling dirty for almost having done so. "When I get back, I promise I'll sit down and talk to you calmly."
With a heavy heart, the mother releases her son, who, despite having argued with her about not wanting to wear his best clothes, still loves her very much. Even though he looked like a dwarf glam metal singer.
In the original text, Gohan is about to embark on a great journey with Bulma and Krillin, but he is still reeling from the recent changes in his life. He feels guilty for not telling Chi-Chi the truth about his identity, and he is also worried about the dangers that lie ahead. Chi-Chi's unexpected hug brings these emotions to the surface, and Gohan is forced to confront his mixed feelings.
<Glam Metal Gohan>
Bulma swallows hard and approaches the ship and speaks.
"Piccolo."
In response, the ship descends to its platform, allowing the three Earthlings to climb onto it and load their luggage and supplies for the trip in a few minutes.
As soon as they finished loading everything and saying goodbye, Bulma gave the command to close the floodgate.
"Piccolo."
Slowly the Earthlings are lifted into the ship.
Krillin, marveling at the interior of the ship, looks at Gohan and Chi-Chi.
"Damn Bulma, you outdid yourself this time!" Krillin exclaims, eyes wide.
"I didn't build it, I just fixed it with the help of my father and Gohan." The blue-haired scientist says in a serious tone. "Now sit down and we're leaving."
Both warriors sat down and fastened their belts while Bulma approached the ship's pilot's seat.
"Five seconds until takeoff, destination: Planet Namek."
The panel beeped in response and within five seconds the ship took off with incredible speed towards its destination.
As the journey began, Gohan relaxed in the ship's seat and turned to admire the cosmos. The speed was so high that it seemed like they were traveling through time, not just space.
'If it's the same as the original story. When we arrive, Frieza will already be looking for the dragon balls and terrorizing the Namekians.' Thinks Gohan internally.
With a new worry taking over his head, Gohan ends up forgetting that his interference affected the travel schedule.
The Earthlings were going to arrive on the planet Namek, earlier than in the original anime.
[DBI:GG]
After a 15-day journey, Gohan, Krillin, and Bulma arrive on the planet Namek.
As they disembarked from the ship's platform, the humans expected to be greeted by the alien planet's nature while the hybrid expected Frieza's soldiers.
All three were wrong.
"Halt, invaders!" A harsh voice boomed in their direction. "From whom did you steal this Namekian ship?"
They were greeted by a group of Namekian warriors.
"My God, how many Piccolos." Krillin whispered, scared.
Even though both Earthlings were surprised by the way they were greeted, it was Gohan who was the most shocked of the group.
'What's going on?' He wonders internally. 'Frieza and his soldiers were supposed to be terrorizing the planet.'
In front of them stood four green men with appearances similar to Piccolo's, with the difference that some were fatter or shorter. Leading the group was a serious Namekian speaking in an authoritative manner.
Wanting to attract attention to himself, Gohan begins to raise his ki slowly. Which works, making their leader look at him with a suspicious air.
"You, with the most powerful Ki, are the leader of this group?" The green warrior asked.
Taking a step forward, Gohan puffs out his chest and replies.
"I'm not the leader, but I will answer any question you have with the truth."
"GOHAN!" Bulma and Krillin shout at the same time, surprised by the young man's action.
The Namekian leader relaxes a little when he hears the young man's statement, but he still doesn't let his guard down.
"So your name is Gohan." Said the leader of the group, puffing out his chest. "My name is Nail."
<Nail - Image not mine>
'NAIL?!' Gohan shouted internally, remembering the Abridged version of Dragon Ball Z. 'But what is he doing here? He should be with Guru.'
Quickly recovering, Gohan assumes a more formal stance to answer the green man.
"It's a pleasure to meet you, these are Bulma and Krillin." Gohan said, acting as the leader of the Earthlings. "And to answer your previous question, this ship belonged to the Namekian of the Dragon Clan who acted as Kami on our planet called Earth. We are on a mission to help him, so we used this ship."
"Kami?" Nail asks, confused.
The other green men whisper curiously among themselves, they expected these invaders to be just thieves or pirates, not friends of a member of their species who lives beyond the stars.
"An unlikely story, 'earther'." Nail said, trying to guess the word for natives of the planet Earth. "Why should we believe it?'
Despite the green warrior's disdain for his explanation, Gohan smiles, pleased with the honorable behavior of the most powerful warrior on the planet.
"How about you let some of your warriors guard the ship and those two?" Gohan said, pointing to Bulma and Krillin. "And you take me as a prisoner to be questioned by your leader."
Everyone present, Namekians and humans, widened their eyes in astonishment at Gohan's offer.
"Have you gone crazy?" Krillin asks, worried about the young boy. "Why would you do that?"
"Because we don't have time to waste." Gohan says in a serious tone. "I don't feel Vegeta's Ki on the planet or anyone else stronger than this guy around, we have to take advantage of the fact that we got here first and get more information."
"B-but how do you-."
Before Krillin could question him, Gohan puts his hands on his shoulder, cutting him off.
"I need you to take care of Bulma and the ship." Gohan whispers in a confident tone. "And don't worry, I'll be back before nightfall."
The veteran warrior gulps and nods in agreement with the young man's decision.
Behind them, Nail materializes a pair of handcuffs and hands them to Gohan to put on.
'Piccolo can also create items out of thin air.' Gohan thinks, reaching for the handcuffs. 'I wonder if they'll teach me this-.'
"HEAVY!" Gohan shouts, surprised to find the handcuffs weighing over 500 kilos (1.000 pounds).
If it weren't for his training in increased gravity, Gohan would have dropped the weight on the ground. Nail frowns, concerned that the young man had supported the weight so easily.
"Can you fly in your condition?' Nail asks the young man.
"I can fly faster than you with twice that weight."
The other Namekians laugh at the boy's arrogant attitude while Bulma and Krillin sweat profusely.
"Let's see if you speak the truth." Nail says, taking off abruptly.
Gohan just smiles and flies after him.
With the two most powerful members of both groups now gone, Bulma relaxes to the point of becoming furious and directs her anger at the nearest victim, Krillin.
"I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LET HIM GO ALONE WITH THAT GREEN GUY!" Bulma shouted, shaking Krillin.
"Calm down Bulma, he said he'd be back before nightfall, no need to worry."
Informed of Gohan's promise to return quickly, Bulma calms down, but her and Krillin's attention is drawn to the group of Namekians laughing loudly at the last sentence.
"Can I know what you find so funny?" Bulma asks in an irritated tone.
The shortest and fattest of them steps forward and explains, smiling.
"Your friend promised to never come back."
"What?" Krillin asks.
"There is no night on Namek." The short and fat Namekian replies.
The four Namekians laugh again loudly at the humans' desperate reactions.
[DBI:GG]
As they reached the entrance of a large white building, Nail gestured for Gohan to wait for a moment.
Inside, the light was soft and welcoming, reflected off the white stone walls creating an atmosphere of deep peace. In the center of the room, on a large throne, was the figure of Guru, the Elder of Namek. His figure was imposing and rotund, his face was covered in wrinkles showing how old the being was. His eyes are closed, his breathing slow and measured, each movement seemed to carry the weight of past ages.
Nail motioned for Gohan to step forward. The young man, his heart pounding, walked until he stood before the Elder Guru.
<Guru - Image not mine>
'He was bigger on TV.' The Earthling thought to himself silently. 'Or maybe I'm bigger than I was on TV.'
Looking up, Gohan contemplates Guru's serene and wrinkled face.
"Elder Guru." Nail began, with a tone of absolute respect. "This is Gohan, a young warrior from a distant planet. He claims to have come in peace, but has no concrete proof."
Guru opened his eyes slowly, revealing a deep and mysterious glow. He looked at Gohan with a fatherly kindness, which immediately calmed the young hybrid's anxious heart.
"Come closer, little Gohan." Guru said, his deep voice resonating through the room, carrying an ancient wisdom. "I feel no ill intentions coming from you, but I notice that your heart is very troubled."
Gohan took a step forward, feeling enveloped in a sense of security and understanding.
"With your permission, I will look into your mind."
"Wait!" Gohan exclaims, concerned. "How much of my mind will you see?"
"Afraid of having your true intentions exposed?" Nail asks in an aggressive tone.
"NAAAAAIIIIL!" Guru shouts, silencing his bodyguard.
'Just like TFS.' Gohan thought in shock.
"I will see as much as you allow me to." Guru said in a caring tone, turning to the young man. "Nothing more and nothing less."
Reaching out his voluminous hand, he gently touched Gohan's head. The little warrior closed his eyes, allowing the Elder to examine him.
Elder Guru's touch on Gohan's head sent a wave of warmth and peace through the young Saiyan. With his eyes closed again, the elder delves deep into Gohan's mind, feeling the currents of his being like a river of emotions and memories.
After a few moments of silence, Guru opened his eyes, his soft but penetrating gaze resting on Gohan.
"Young man." He began, his voice resonating with an almost hypnotic calm, "I can feel the turmoil in your heart. There is a storm within you, a mixture of fear and unease about the future."
Gohan looked at Guru, his eyes wide with surprise at being understood so deeply. He didn't say anything, but Guru continued, his voice full of compassion and understanding.
"You fear for the future, but not just for yourself. And that fear, that uncertainty, is like shadows that obscure the light of your spirit."
Guru paused, allowing the young man to absorb his words before continuing.
"This fear, this unease, feeds a despair within you. And it is this despair that pushes you to seek power, at any cost. But this path, my young man, is dangerous. Power sought through despair can lead to destruction, both of yourself and those you wish to protect."
Gohan felt a lump form in his throat, Guru's words echoing in his mind. He instinctively knew the Elder was right.
Guru looked at him with an expression of wisdom and tenderness.
"Remember that in addition to your strength, agility and spirit, you also have your mind as an attribute. It is the key that will open the way for you to challenge the Gods."
Startled, Gohan stares at Guru with wide eyes.
'Did he read all my memories? Does he know I'm not from this world and what's to come?' Gohan thought worriedly. 'From what he described, it seems like he also knows about my system.'
"I also see that you have begun to awaken the power that lies dormant within you, let me see if I can help you."
A strange energy runs through Gohan's body as Guru's gaze intensifies. As Guru increases his energy around Gohan, something extraordinary awakens within him.
With a sudden burst of energy, the young Saiyan felt a surge of power coursing through his veins.
[New Perk: Mental Nexus]
"Another one?" Questions Gohan in surprise.
[PERKS]
[-]Mental Nexus:Gain 25% mental attribute points for every point you gain in the other three attributes.[PERKS]
"I wasn't able to unlock its full potential." Guru said softly, his voice filled with pride and admiration for the young warrior before him. "But I have the impression that you already know what can be done to do it." Guru said pointing to Gohan's pants.
Reaching into his pocket Gohan holds the gravity machine capsule and nods solemnly.
'I have to explore Vegeta's strategy.' Gohan thought to himself. 'Training in extreme gravity, almost killing myself to get the power.'
With a gentle gesture, Guru removed his hand from Gohan's head.
"NAAAAAIIIIL!" Exclaimed the Guru calling for his bodyguard. "Go release the other travelers who are in the custody of our warriors, they are our guests now."
"Yes Lord Guru." Says Nail, surprised by the complacency directed towards humans.
"One more thing." Says Guru before Nail leaves. "Look for a young man named Dende, he lives in the southernmost village on the planet."
"For what reason Lord Guru?" Questions Nail, confused.
"He is a very talented young man with restorative powers." Says the Guru smiling gently. "Dende will help this visitor achieve the necessary Saiyan power and I will help him with his divine Ki project."
"You know everything about me, right?"
The Guru laughs serenely at the young man.
"In my defense, part of you wanted to reveal this information to me." Said the Guru in a solemn tone. "The part that knew this was the most efficient way for you to achieve your goals."
"Omnimind?" Gohan asks curiously.
The Guru nods his head.
Frustrated at having his secrets revealed by himself, Gohan decides to focus on what was most important at the moment.
"You know what I want to do now, right?"
"Search for the dragon balls?" Asks the Guru, for the first time, without knowing the boy's intentions. "After all, you came to resurrect your allies."
"Yes, but also something else." Says Gohan with a slutty smile.
"Um…" Guru mutters thinking until he remembers something from the boy's mind. "I believe you call it… 'earnings'?"
"Lets fucking go!"
Boa noite pessoas,
I would like to thank those who left a comment, that always makes me happy.
And once again I would like to reinforce the request that I am looking for Beta Readers. Anyone interested just send me a message.
If some of you want to know why Guru had 'Pascoal Ramos' on his tunic, just ask in the comments.
COMMENTS:
[-]Stads(questionablequesting):
nice chapter thx for writing it
huh wonder what the cat knows about god ki
nice seeing bulma being talked down still dont get the whole polite ness the mc is putting in all the time.
[-]Renan:
Karin didn't know much, but at least she knew about the existence of such a thing. And regarding the protagonist's polite way of speaking, I would like to quote LuckyRobert(questionablequesting):
'Speak softly and carry a big stick; you will go far.'
[-]Yume(questionablequesting):
Fun chapter, thanks for writing it.
My only real gripe so far though is the spelling error that's seemingly attached itself to Korin for some reason.
[-]Renan:
Like Kazumaa23(questionablequesting) said:
'That's his actual name (カリン, Karin) in Japan and most countries.'
That's why I need Beta Readers for the English version of the fic. This type of error is easy to pass for those who didn't grow up watching the English dubbed version.
[-]Apollodorus13(fanfiction)
Why wouldnt he train his Oozaru? The better trained it is, the easier it will be to get SS4 in the long run if he does.
[-]Renan:
An excellent question, but I won't answer it to avoid spoilers.
[-]Funmaxwell(webnovel):
The ultra Divine water only gave Goku at most a 13% increase to his power level not a 50% and it nearly killed him so it's not really worth it considering pretty much everyone else that supposedly drink it before him died.
[-]Renan:
The 50% boost is due to the Zenkai Boost from the near-death experience of drinking the water. According to Karin in the manga "She is able to reveal the secret power hidden within yourself"... and that could be anything.
After drinking the water Goku said he was feeling as powerful as he was serene and then Goku was able to feel Piccolo's power who was nearby. In other words, she didn't have the ability to sense Ki before or it was also significantly expanded.
Goku lost to Piccolo Daimao who had a power of 260 before wishing his youth back. After asking for his youth back, Piccolo had 500 and Goku beat him in the rematch. Showing that the water boost was more significant than many think. (This part has no consensus and fans are always arguing about it.)
[-]Xcell(questionablequesting):
1- All the karens in the world
come to Karen Tower to train under master Karen. ( Karen is a slang term typically used to refer to a middle-class white American woman who is perceived as entitled or excessively demanding. The term is often portrayed in memes depicting middle-class white women who "use their white and class privilege) just in case you didn't know what that means .2- "We're here to find the capsule that brought my father to planet Earth, not to fight." you mean the one that got completely destroyed during the Saiyan Arc when Gohan was training with piccolo.
3- The ultra Divine water didn't really boost Goku's power all that much like by 13% if I recall. Which is weird because the show made it seem like he got a much bigger power boost than that but in reality he didn't. It's also the most dangerous way in the dragon Ball series to get a power up and the least beneficial so it's not really worth it in the end considering it's high mortality rate.
[-]Renan:
Divide your comment into two parts to make it easier to respond.
1- I know about Karens, is there a male version or do you call them Karen too?
2- As I mentioned earlier, I use the manga as my main reference. During his training with Piccolo, Gohan only turns Oozaru once in chapter 208, Piccolo destroys the moon to reverse the transformation and then cuts off Gohan's tail and gives him the clothes and sword while Gohan sleeps unconscious.
3- I think what I said to Funmaxwell(webnovel) answers this part.
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The young hybrid wore the new clothes that the Namekians had made for him, although they were comfortable, they weighed 1 ton. With the gravity machine turned on 5 times the earth's gravity, that was a total of 5 tons that Gohan was handling at the moment.
This wouldn't be a problem for the young man who has already trained with more weight in more intense gravity.
"Surround him and attack from all sides!" Shouted Nail.
"Yes sir." The three Namekians from the warrior clan responded, bypassing Gohan.
But he has never had to handle so much weight fighting four opponents at the same time.
As soon as he was surrounded by the Namekians, they began firing ki blasts at him. Gohan managed to dodge one, block two with his hands, but Nail's blast hit him right in the back, causing intense pain to course through his body.
[- 15 K HP]
"Damn it!" Gohan grumbles through clenched teeth.
Despite the agony, Gohan refused to let his guard down.
Nail and the other two Namekians quickly advanced to attack Gohan on melee.
While the three adult warriors delivered fierce blows, Gohan remained on the defensive, dodging, blocking and parrying blows without using any ki techniques.
"He's not giving in." Nail complained, attacking. "Oboe, Guytar NOW!" Shouted Nail at the two warriors attacking with him.
In response to the command, the warriors jumped, grabbing the young hybrid's legs.
"Huh?" Questioned Gohan.
Taking advantage of Gohan's distraction, Nail went behind him and immobilized him by passing his arms under his armpit. Immobilizing the young man, in the same way Goku did with Raditz.
"It's your chance Cello!" Nail exclaims, holding the young man.
Worried, Gohan looked in the direction Nail had shouted and there he saw Cello with his fists glowing with concentrated energy.
"Oh shit!" Gohan cursed for being trapped in the same way as his uncle was before he was killed.
"ROAAAAR!" Cello shouted, firing the double energy beam towards Gohan.
Despite the few moments that pass between the launch of the attack and it reaching the target, Gohan was able to reason at great speed thanks to the great value of his mental attribute added to his Omnimind perk.
'If I use all my strength I can get out of the way of the attack, but not without hurting the warriors holding me.' Thought Gohan as the Ki blast traveled towards him. 'A Ki attack is also out of the question, as the explosion from the collision could hurt these three.'
With no more time to think, Gohan made his decision.
"Crystal Wall!" shouted the young man, summoning a translucent wall of silver Ki in front of him.
[-]Crystal Wall Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: Equal to attack Dmg.
Effect: Creates a wall of Ki five meters long and three meters high.
+Widen: Increases by half a meter by the number of times you spend 500 KP.
+Reflect: Reflects the hard back to the opponent spending double the KP.
+Permanence: User is able to move, leaving the Crystal Wall in the same place, for double the KP cost.
The Ki blast hits the wall only to have its energy dissipate in a flash of light without causing any damage to the silver light construct or the people behind it.
[- 21 K KP]
"Did the barrier block the attack completely?" Cello questioned, mouth open.
"A powerful technique, not even a scratch left of it." Oboe commented.
"So that means…" Guytar murmured without completing
"I lost." Gohan grumbles in a despondent tone.
The green-skinned warriors let go of the boy and hugged each other, celebrating their victory while Nail stayed next to Gohan to talk to him.
"Why did you propose such an unfavorable fight against you?" Curious Nail asks. "Everyone was under the influence of your machine, but you, in addition to wearing heavy clothing and being outnumbered, also placed the condition that if you used a Ki technique you would lose."
Breathing heavily, Gohan smiles at Nail, although he was actually looking out of the corner of his eye at his gains in the floating window.
"No pain no gain."
Nail looks at him for a second with a raised eyebrow, but then nods in agreement with the statement.
'But the XP still it's not much.' Thought Gohan.
While the two talked, Dende healed the other three warriors. None of them had been hurt by Gohan, but the enhanced gravity training was straining them, their muscles were extremely fatigued.
"These earthlings are monsters." Cello complained from afar. "Fighting in this gravity is already draining me, but this kid in this heavy outfit can hold his own against the four of us."
"Don't be a fool Cello, he must be an exception, something like a genius." Comments Oboe.
Gohan smiles at the praise from one of the warriors.
"Or maybe a mutant freak." Guytar adds.
Only to have his smile ripped away by the last comment.
Trying to forget the Namekians' conversation, Gohan picks up the dragon's radar, and as soon as he presses the button, 7 luminous dots appear flying towards him.
"Kuririn already got the dragon balls, he'll be here in about an hour."
Nail sighs, frustrated at the young man's statement.
"I was happy when your friend submitted to our ancient ritual of visiting our villages for the dragon balls, rather than asking us to fetch the dragon balls for him." Said Nail Frustrated. "It demonstrated respect for our culture despite your urgent situation."
"But…" Gohan says awkwardly.
"But this 'radar' of yours turns what should be a journey of discovery between the 7 villages into a simple task."
"Ha! Krillin is an intern." Gohan laughs mockingly.
Nail, on the other hand, became more irritated and frowned at the young man.
"Sorry." Says the young man looking down.
"You don't need to say sorry." Nail speaks in a tired tone. "Regardless of whether or not I like how you got the dragon balls, there is nothing in the ritual that prohibits the use of radar."
Despite Guru reading Gohan's soul in front of him, Nail still behaves coldly and indifferent towards the earthlings.
"Let us meet your friend in front of Lord Guru's dwelling."
In silence they both took off.
"It's about time you arrived." Bulma complained. "Why did you take so long?"
"Even with the radar and my power increased by the Guru, it still took me a while to go to each of the villages with the dragon balls." Explains Krillin.
He brought with him the namekian dragon balls that were much larger than those on earth, so he carried them tied to ropes.
"I bet Gohan would have been faster." Bulma mutters with her arms crossed.
Not wanting to get involved in an argument, Krillin decided to ignore the last comment.
"Now we just wish that everyone killed by Saiyans on Earth comes back?" Krillin said, placing the last sphere on the ground.
Gohan pondered Krillin's question, looking at the orbs he had placed on the ground. He knew it was a rare opportunity and one that needed to be taken advantage of correctly.
"The dragon balls here don't work like those on earth." Explains Gohan. "They only resurrect 1 person at a time."
"Wow, that's a bummer." Comments Bulma Surprise. "And how do you know that?"
"Oh!" Gohan exclaims, caught off guard. "I was training with the warriors here and ended up talking to them."
Even though he was a terrible actor, Gohan's lie was plausible enough for none of his friends to suspect him.
'It's better to focus on another subject.'
"To get around this problem I will wish for Piccolo's return", said Gohan, while looking at Krillin and Bulma. "Thus, Earth's Kami-sama will also be resurrected and our planet's dragon balls will become active."
Krillin looked at the orbs with a look of surprise.
"Good idea." Krillin commented. "But I really feel sorry for Chiaotzu."
"Tell me about it, Tien Shinhan will be very sad." Adds Bulma in a depressive tone.
Both Earthlings were mourning the loss of their ally, Gohan on the other hand was confused.
"Chiaotzu?" Gohan questioned without understanding the context.
"He was already resurrected by the earth dragon balls when he was killed by Piccolo Daimaoh." Explains Bulma.
With his mouth open, Gohan stares at the two without words.
"Had you forgotten about him?" Krillin asks suspiciously.
In response Gohan just laughs awkwardly.
"I guess we can resurrect it with the second wish then." Says Gohan.
"Do we have two?" Krillin asks.
"Three actually." Explains Gohan.
"Wow… and what are you going to ask for with the third one?" Bulma asks
Gohan pauses for a second realizing he hadn't decided on a third wish.
Originally he thought that resurrecting Piccolo and defeating Frieza would be enough to "resolve" this story arc.
"But I think it's better to cover all the bases." Gohan says smiling with a new plan forming in his mind. "And for that I'm going to need help."
"Help from whom?" Krillin asks curiously.
With his eyes closed, Gohan takes a deep breath and screams at the top of his throat.
"DO YOU HEAR ME KING KAI?"
Caught off guard, Krillin and Bulma cover their ears as Gohan continues to scream.
"PLEASE, WE NEED YOUR HELP KING KAI!" Shouted Gohan once again, already losing his breath. "KING-!"
"Silence child!" Exclaimed an omnipresent voice in the minds of the three, silencing Gohan. "You don't need to scream, foolish boy."
"It's that voice from the hospital." Bulma muttered in surprise.
"I'm sorry, I forgot." Gohan said, laughing awkwardly.
"I'll let it go this time, just don't do it again, but tell me what you want."
"I have a plan to bring everyone back, but I also want to help the Namekians protect their planet." Explains Gohan.
"That's very noble of you, young man." King Kai says, surprised by Gohan's altruism. "What do you need help with?"
With a smile, Gohan responds.
"Communication."
On Earth, Chi-Chi was sitting in an armchair next to the bed, where Goku was resting. Despite being injured, he emanated a serenity that calmed her.
Her eyes, normally full of life, were dull, reflecting the anguish that consumed her due to her son's absence.
"Goku…" His voice was weak, full of emotion. "I miss Gohan so much. And I'm so afraid that..."
Feeling his wife's pain, Goku made an effort to take his arm off the bed and hold her hand firmly. Their intertwined fingers conveyed a feeling of comfort and security.
"Chichi, you should be proud of Gohan. He is a strong and courageous young man who went on this journey to bring back our friends."
Chichi smiled weakly, but insecurity still hovered in the air.
"I'm sure he'll make it and come back safely, he's very strong." Said Goku smiling at his wife.
"I know he's strong, Goku, but the universe is a dangerous place. What if something happens to him?"
Goku, understanding her fears, pulled her closer.
"Nothing will happen to Gohan, Chi-Chi. And even if something happens, he has Krillin and Bulma to help him."
Chi-Chi and Goku remained like that for a while, finding comfort in each other. The tranquility of the moment, however, was abruptly interrupted by a deafening scream coming from the window.
"GOKU!" Shouted a familiar voice from the Hospital window. "YOU'RE STILL IN BED YOU MISERABLE BASTARD!"
It was Piccolo accompanied by Chiaotzu, both were outside the hospital window.
"Huh?" Goku babbled, confused. "Aren't you supposed to be dead?"
Piccolo shook his head, his voice filled with impatience.
"We'll explain it along the way." Piccolo said sharply. "Get him out of bed."
"Leave it to me." Said the small human with white skin and red cheeks pointing his index fingers at Goku.
A strange blue energy surrounds Goku's body, only to then lift him from the hospital bed.
"Calm down Chiaotzu, I'm still hurt." Goku pleads, having his body manipulated by the little warrior's telekinesis.
Without showing any remorse, Chiaotzu throws Goku out the window.
"AAAAAAAH!" Goku screams terrified.
But instead of falling, his body continued flying.
"What is happening?" Questioned Goku in surprise.
Piccolo and Chiaotzu quickly caught up with Goku and continued on their way.
"Your son resurrected us to retrieve the earth dragon balls and bring back Tien and Yamcha." Piccolo said hastily. "But for that we need Bulma's radar, you're going to convince her parents to give it to me."
Goku's eyes widened in surprise at the explanation.
'Is Piccolo afraid to talk to Bulma's parents?' Goku thought. 'Maybe he thinks they are afraid of him, because of everything Piccolo Daimaoh did when he tried to dominate the world.'
"Okay, I'll help, but then you need to return me to the hospital."
In response Piccolo and Chiaotzu gave him an evil smile and chuckle.
"You're not going back." Says Piccolo. "You're coming with us."
"And we're going somewhere much further away than the hospital." Chiaotzu said in a playful tone.
"Where?" Asks Goku Curiously.
"Namek." Piccolo and Chiaotzu respond at the same time.
With the first two wishes Piccolo and Chiaotzu were resurrected and with the help of King Kai Gohan communicated with the two and gave them instructions to gather the dragon balls of the earth and reunite with Goku.
As soon as Shenron was summoned, they wished to resurrect everyone who was killed by Vegeta, Nappa and the Saibamen.
Meanwhile on planet Namek, Gohan, Bulma, Krillin, Dende and Nail were waiting for King Kai's message to make their third and final wish to Dragon Porunga.
"Everyone is gathered and ready." Said the omnipresent voice.
"Thank you, King Kai." Said Gohan, making a small bow. "You can make your last wish now, Dende."
The little Namekian nodded and turned to the dragon.
"TAKKARAPUTO POPPORUNGA PUPIRITTOPARO!" Gritou Denden na língua de Namek. "AC AROPAR ARRET ATENALP OD ARGORT, CHIAOTZU, TENSHINHAN, YAMCHA, PICCOLO E GOKU."
The dragon's red eyes shine for an instant and in front of them 4 warriors materialize in an imposing posture... and an injured person lying down.
Yamcha, Tien, and Chiatzu welcomed him with open arms and laughter. Piccolo stood with his arms crossed staring at Gohan while Goku lay in his hospital bed.
"Oh my God!" Bulma exclaims in surprise. "Why did you bring Goku if he's still bedridden?"
"For Dende to heal him." Answers Gohan as if it were obvious.
The little Namekian from the dragon clan approached to heal the injured man while the dragon Porunga disappeared.
"You've changed a lot since the last time we saw each other." Piccolo said as he approached Gohan. "And I'm not just talking about your power or appearance."
Piccolo's tone was serious and apprehensive, with his arms crossed he stared at Gohan with the intensity of someone who was preparing for a fight.
'I'm screwed.' Gohan thought silently. 'Piccolo is one of the most perceptive characters in the entire Dragon Ball universe, if anyone has any chance of discovering that someone else took over the boy's body, it's him.'
The reincarnated young man swallows hard under the inquisitive gaze of his former master, analyzing his reactions.
"Maybe the weight of responsibility got to you and your response was to change your ways, or the years you spent training in the time room made you mature to the point where you seemed like someone else." Says Piccolo, uncrossing his arms and trying to relax his posture.
'Is it just me or is he trying to appear less intimidating?' Questions Gohan mentally.
"I just want to say…" Piccolo begins, breaking into a cold sweat as he gathers his strength. "I'm proud of you Gohan, not just of your power, but also your intelligence, your heart in offering to help my race with the approaching enemy and most of all… I'm proud of the man you're becoming."
Gohan's heart swelled with pride as he heard Piccolo's sincere praise. The words echoed in his mind, resonating with the truth he had been striving for.
Only to then have a cold shower drown his feelings when he remembers that he is living a lie.
"Thank you Mr. Piccolo." Murmurs Gohan discouraged. "If you'll excuse me, I'll go train."
The young man quickly takes off without giving Piccolo a chance to question him.
Sitting on the edge of a cliff, Gohan watched the emerald green sea that disappeared from view of the alien planet.
The young man felt filthy for the moment of happiness he had when Piccolo came to praise him. After all, the life he leads is a sham, it belongs to someone else.
Guilt was eating him up inside. The guilt of living a lie, of deceiving everyone who loved him. The guilt of not being able to be who I really was. Gohan closed his eyes, searching for strength somewhere within himself. But all he found was an immense void.
"I'm nothing like you said, Piccolo." Gohan muttered to himself. "I am a coward."
"Why are you a coward?" asked a friendly voice from behind.
Gohan quickly turns around and sees Goku waving at him.
"Goku?" Questions Gohan in surprise.
When asked by his son, Goku is confused and looks at him curiously.
"That's weird." Said the protagonist of the original series. "You've never called me by my name before."
"S-sorry, d-dad." Gohan stutters nervously.
The veteran warrior shrugs and sits down next to his son.
"No need to apologize." States Goku in a fatherly tone towards Gohan. "You can call me dad, Goku or whatever you want… just don't call me late for dinner." Goku jokes, laughing at his own joke.
The young hybrid is paralyzed by the joke, not because it is good or bad. It was just shocking to see Son Goku, one of the most iconic characters in fiction, making dad jokes.
"He-he." The young man fake laughed, failing to appear natural. "Did you come here for a reason?"
"Yes, I heard you saying that you were going to train, but Piccolo told me that you didn't look well and that you needed space, so I waited a little before coming."
"Thanks." Said Gohan looking back at the sea.
"Don't worry son." Said Goku smiling without any worries. "If you want to talk about something, I'm here for it."
"I don't know how." Says Gohan depressed. "If I talk… you will never forgive me."
"Damn." Goku says, surprised, looking at his own son. "It must be something really serious."
The veteran warrior stopped in silence, scratching his head trying to think of something to help his son, until an idea appeared in his mind.
"Why don't you catch a really big fish?" Says Goku.
"Huh?" Gohan grumbles.
"When I married your mother I was always late for dinner, I usually lost track of time because I was training in the mountains." Says Goku in a didactic tone.
"Okay…" Gohan murmurs, following the story, but still not understanding the point.
"When I arrived late with a very large fish, she would be less angry than if I arrived with nothing." Goku ends by raising his arms up.
Swallowing hard, Gohan massages the headache that is starting to form inside his skull.
"Are you suggesting I bribe everyone with a gift?" Gohan asks, in disbelief at the solution proposed by his father. "Isn't that a bit childish?"
"Better than suffering in silence." Says Goku with a shrug. "And you don't have to give something, a grand gesture can do just as well."
"A grand gesture." Gohan repeats thinking about what he could do.
It didn't take long for an idea to spring into the young man's mind.
"I think I know what to do!" Gohan exclaimed excitedly, getting up. "And I'm going to need your help."
"No problem." Says Goku getting up. "Do you already have an idea of what to do?"
"Yes I have." Says Gohan, smiling confidently. "But first we need to train to defeat Frieza."
"Awesome!" Gohan exclaims, jumping up. "I want to test your power now that you're older."
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 31 [97 M / 120 M]
HP: 6,75 M
KP: 7,05 M
PL: 1,35 M
MIGHT: 1,41 M
AGILITY: 1,19 M
SPIRIT: 1,42 M
MENTAL: 1,32 M
Points: 3.200
Boa noite pessoas,
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COMMENTS:
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Go for it.
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Is mental nexus retroactive if it is he just got a huge boost to mind?
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Unfortunately for Gohan, the Boost will not be retroactive.
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The young hybrid wore the new clothes that the Namekians had made for him, although they were comfortable, they weighed 1 ton. With the gravity machine turned on 5 times the earth's gravity, that was a total of 5 tons that Gohan was handling at the moment.
This wouldn't be a problem for the young man who has already trained with more weight in more intense gravity.
"Surround him and attack from all sides!" Shouted Nail.
"Yes sir." The three Namekians from the warrior clan responded, bypassing Gohan.
But he has never had to handle so much weight fighting four opponents at the same time.
As soon as he was surrounded by the Namekians, they began firing ki blasts at him. Gohan managed to dodge one, block two with his hands, but Nail's blast hit him right in the back, causing intense pain to course through his body.
[- 15 K HP]
"Damn it!" Gohan grumbles through clenched teeth.
Despite the agony, Gohan refused to let his guard down.
Nail and the other two Namekians quickly advanced to attack Gohan on melee.
While the three adult warriors delivered fierce blows, Gohan remained on the defensive, dodging, blocking and parrying blows without using any ki techniques.
"He's not giving in." Nail complained, attacking. "Oboe, Guytar NOW!" Shouted Nail at the two warriors attacking with him.
In response to the command, the warriors jumped, grabbing the young hybrid's legs.
"Huh?" Questioned Gohan.
Taking advantage of Gohan's distraction, Nail went behind him and immobilized him by passing his arms under his armpit. Immobilizing the young man, in the same way Goku did with Raditz.
"It's your chance Cello!" Nail exclaims, holding the young man.
Worried, Gohan looked in the direction Nail had shouted and there he saw Cello with his fists glowing with concentrated energy.
"Oh shit!" Gohan cursed for being trapped in the same way as his uncle was before he was killed.
"ROAAAAR!" Cello shouted, firing the double energy beam towards Gohan.
Despite the few moments that pass between the launch of the attack and it reaching the target, Gohan was able to reason at great speed thanks to the great value of his mental attribute added to his Omnimind perk.
'If I use all my strength I can get out of the way of the attack, but not without hurting the warriors holding me.' Thought Gohan as the Ki blast traveled towards him. 'A Ki attack is also out of the question, as the explosion from the collision could hurt these three.'
With no more time to think, Gohan made his decision.
"Crystal Wall!" shouted the young man, summoning a translucent wall of silver Ki in front of him.
[-]Crystal Wall Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: Equal to attack Dmg.
Effect: Creates a wall of Ki five meters long and three meters high.
+Widen: Increases by half a meter by the number of times you spend 500 KP.
+Reflect: Reflects the hard back to the opponent spending double the KP.
+Permanence: User is able to move, leaving the Crystal Wall in the same place, for double the KP cost.
The Ki blast hits the wall only to have its energy dissipate in a flash of light without causing any damage to the silver light construct or the people behind it.
[- 21 K KP]
"Did the barrier block the attack completely?" Cello questioned, mouth open.
"A powerful technique, not even a scratch left of it." Oboe commented.
"So that means…" Guytar murmured without completing
"I lost." Gohan grumbles in a despondent tone.
The green-skinned warriors let go of the boy and hugged each other, celebrating their victory while Nail stayed next to Gohan to talk to him.
"Why did you propose such an unfavorable fight against you?" Curious Nail asks. "Everyone was under the influence of your machine, but you, in addition to wearing heavy clothing and being outnumbered, also placed the condition that if you used a Ki technique you would lose."
Breathing heavily, Gohan smiles at Nail, although he was actually looking out of the corner of his eye at his gains in the floating window.
[+15 K XP]
[+60 K MIGHT]
[+20 K AGILITY]
[+12 K SPIRIT]
[+5 K MENTAL]
[Mental Nexus: 23 K MENTAL]
[NEW ITEM (X4)]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM (X4)]
[+60 K MIGHT]
[+20 K AGILITY]
[+12 K SPIRIT]
[+5 K MENTAL]
[Mental Nexus: 23 K MENTAL]
[NEW ITEM (X4)]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM (X4)]
"No pain no gain."
Nail looks at him for a second with a raised eyebrow, but then nods in agreement with the statement.
'But the XP still it's not much.' Thought Gohan.
While the two talked, Dende healed the other three warriors. None of them had been hurt by Gohan, but the enhanced gravity training was straining them, their muscles were extremely fatigued.
"These earthlings are monsters." Cello complained from afar. "Fighting in this gravity is already draining me, but this kid in this heavy outfit can hold his own against the four of us."
"Don't be a fool Cello, he must be an exception, something like a genius." Comments Oboe.
Gohan smiles at the praise from one of the warriors.
"Or maybe a mutant freak." Guytar adds.
Only to have his smile ripped away by the last comment.
Trying to forget the Namekians' conversation, Gohan picks up the dragon's radar, and as soon as he presses the button, 7 luminous dots appear flying towards him.
"Kuririn already got the dragon balls, he'll be here in about an hour."
Nail sighs, frustrated at the young man's statement.
"I was happy when your friend submitted to our ancient ritual of visiting our villages for the dragon balls, rather than asking us to fetch the dragon balls for him." Said Nail Frustrated. "It demonstrated respect for our culture despite your urgent situation."
"But…" Gohan says awkwardly.
"But this 'radar' of yours turns what should be a journey of discovery between the 7 villages into a simple task."
"Ha! Krillin is an intern." Gohan laughs mockingly.
Nail, on the other hand, became more irritated and frowned at the young man.
"Sorry." Says the young man looking down.
"You don't need to say sorry." Nail speaks in a tired tone. "Regardless of whether or not I like how you got the dragon balls, there is nothing in the ritual that prohibits the use of radar."
Despite Guru reading Gohan's soul in front of him, Nail still behaves coldly and indifferent towards the earthlings.
"Let us meet your friend in front of Lord Guru's dwelling."
In silence they both took off.
[DBI:GG]
"It's about time you arrived." Bulma complained. "Why did you take so long?"
"Even with the radar and my power increased by the Guru, it still took me a while to go to each of the villages with the dragon balls." Explains Krillin.
He brought with him the namekian dragon balls that were much larger than those on earth, so he carried them tied to ropes.
"I bet Gohan would have been faster." Bulma mutters with her arms crossed.
Not wanting to get involved in an argument, Krillin decided to ignore the last comment.
"Now we just wish that everyone killed by Saiyans on Earth comes back?" Krillin said, placing the last sphere on the ground.
Gohan pondered Krillin's question, looking at the orbs he had placed on the ground. He knew it was a rare opportunity and one that needed to be taken advantage of correctly.
"The dragon balls here don't work like those on earth." Explains Gohan. "They only resurrect 1 person at a time."
"Wow, that's a bummer." Comments Bulma Surprise. "And how do you know that?"
"Oh!" Gohan exclaims, caught off guard. "I was training with the warriors here and ended up talking to them."
Even though he was a terrible actor, Gohan's lie was plausible enough for none of his friends to suspect him.
'It's better to focus on another subject.'
"To get around this problem I will wish for Piccolo's return", said Gohan, while looking at Krillin and Bulma. "Thus, Earth's Kami-sama will also be resurrected and our planet's dragon balls will become active."
Krillin looked at the orbs with a look of surprise.
"Good idea." Krillin commented. "But I really feel sorry for Chiaotzu."
"Tell me about it, Tien Shinhan will be very sad." Adds Bulma in a depressive tone.
Both Earthlings were mourning the loss of their ally, Gohan on the other hand was confused.
"Chiaotzu?" Gohan questioned without understanding the context.
"He was already resurrected by the earth dragon balls when he was killed by Piccolo Daimaoh." Explains Bulma.
With his mouth open, Gohan stares at the two without words.
"Had you forgotten about him?" Krillin asks suspiciously.
In response Gohan just laughs awkwardly.
"I guess we can resurrect it with the second wish then." Says Gohan.
"Do we have two?" Krillin asks.
"Three actually." Explains Gohan.
"Wow… and what are you going to ask for with the third one?" Bulma asks
Gohan pauses for a second realizing he hadn't decided on a third wish.
Originally he thought that resurrecting Piccolo and defeating Frieza would be enough to "resolve" this story arc.
"But I think it's better to cover all the bases." Gohan says smiling with a new plan forming in his mind. "And for that I'm going to need help."
"Help from whom?" Krillin asks curiously.
With his eyes closed, Gohan takes a deep breath and screams at the top of his throat.
"DO YOU HEAR ME KING KAI?"
Caught off guard, Krillin and Bulma cover their ears as Gohan continues to scream.
"PLEASE, WE NEED YOUR HELP KING KAI!" Shouted Gohan once again, already losing his breath. "KING-!"
"Silence child!" Exclaimed an omnipresent voice in the minds of the three, silencing Gohan. "You don't need to scream, foolish boy."
"It's that voice from the hospital." Bulma muttered in surprise.
"I'm sorry, I forgot." Gohan said, laughing awkwardly.
"I'll let it go this time, just don't do it again, but tell me what you want."
"I have a plan to bring everyone back, but I also want to help the Namekians protect their planet." Explains Gohan.
"That's very noble of you, young man." King Kai says, surprised by Gohan's altruism. "What do you need help with?"
With a smile, Gohan responds.
"Communication."
[DBI:GG]
On Earth, Chi-Chi was sitting in an armchair next to the bed, where Goku was resting. Despite being injured, he emanated a serenity that calmed her.
Her eyes, normally full of life, were dull, reflecting the anguish that consumed her due to her son's absence.
"Goku…" His voice was weak, full of emotion. "I miss Gohan so much. And I'm so afraid that..."
Feeling his wife's pain, Goku made an effort to take his arm off the bed and hold her hand firmly. Their intertwined fingers conveyed a feeling of comfort and security.
"Chichi, you should be proud of Gohan. He is a strong and courageous young man who went on this journey to bring back our friends."
Chichi smiled weakly, but insecurity still hovered in the air.
"I'm sure he'll make it and come back safely, he's very strong." Said Goku smiling at his wife.
"I know he's strong, Goku, but the universe is a dangerous place. What if something happens to him?"
Goku, understanding her fears, pulled her closer.
"Nothing will happen to Gohan, Chi-Chi. And even if something happens, he has Krillin and Bulma to help him."
Chi-Chi and Goku remained like that for a while, finding comfort in each other. The tranquility of the moment, however, was abruptly interrupted by a deafening scream coming from the window.
"GOKU!" Shouted a familiar voice from the Hospital window. "YOU'RE STILL IN BED YOU MISERABLE BASTARD!"
It was Piccolo accompanied by Chiaotzu, both were outside the hospital window.
"Huh?" Goku babbled, confused. "Aren't you supposed to be dead?"
Piccolo shook his head, his voice filled with impatience.
"We'll explain it along the way." Piccolo said sharply. "Get him out of bed."
"Leave it to me." Said the small human with white skin and red cheeks pointing his index fingers at Goku.
A strange blue energy surrounds Goku's body, only to then lift him from the hospital bed.
"Calm down Chiaotzu, I'm still hurt." Goku pleads, having his body manipulated by the little warrior's telekinesis.
Without showing any remorse, Chiaotzu throws Goku out the window.
"AAAAAAAH!" Goku screams terrified.
But instead of falling, his body continued flying.
"What is happening?" Questioned Goku in surprise.
Piccolo and Chiaotzu quickly caught up with Goku and continued on their way.
"Your son resurrected us to retrieve the earth dragon balls and bring back Tien and Yamcha." Piccolo said hastily. "But for that we need Bulma's radar, you're going to convince her parents to give it to me."
Goku's eyes widened in surprise at the explanation.
'Is Piccolo afraid to talk to Bulma's parents?' Goku thought. 'Maybe he thinks they are afraid of him, because of everything Piccolo Daimaoh did when he tried to dominate the world.'
"Okay, I'll help, but then you need to return me to the hospital."
In response Piccolo and Chiaotzu gave him an evil smile and chuckle.
"You're not going back." Says Piccolo. "You're coming with us."
"And we're going somewhere much further away than the hospital." Chiaotzu said in a playful tone.
"Where?" Asks Goku Curiously.
"Namek." Piccolo and Chiaotzu respond at the same time.
[DBI:GG]
With the first two wishes Piccolo and Chiaotzu were resurrected and with the help of King Kai Gohan communicated with the two and gave them instructions to gather the dragon balls of the earth and reunite with Goku.
As soon as Shenron was summoned, they wished to resurrect everyone who was killed by Vegeta, Nappa and the Saibamen.
Meanwhile on planet Namek, Gohan, Bulma, Krillin, Dende and Nail were waiting for King Kai's message to make their third and final wish to Dragon Porunga.
"Everyone is gathered and ready." Said the omnipresent voice.
"Thank you, King Kai." Said Gohan, making a small bow. "You can make your last wish now, Dende."
The little Namekian nodded and turned to the dragon.
"TAKKARAPUTO POPPORUNGA PUPIRITTOPARO!" Gritou Denden na língua de Namek. "AC AROPAR ARRET ATENALP OD ARGORT, CHIAOTZU, TENSHINHAN, YAMCHA, PICCOLO E GOKU."
The dragon's red eyes shine for an instant and in front of them 4 warriors materialize in an imposing posture... and an injured person lying down.
<The boys are back in town!>
"GUYS!" Shouted Krillin running to his friends.
Yamcha, Tien, and Chiatzu welcomed him with open arms and laughter. Piccolo stood with his arms crossed staring at Gohan while Goku lay in his hospital bed.
"Oh my God!" Bulma exclaims in surprise. "Why did you bring Goku if he's still bedridden?"
"For Dende to heal him." Answers Gohan as if it were obvious.
The little Namekian from the dragon clan approached to heal the injured man while the dragon Porunga disappeared.
"You've changed a lot since the last time we saw each other." Piccolo said as he approached Gohan. "And I'm not just talking about your power or appearance."
Piccolo's tone was serious and apprehensive, with his arms crossed he stared at Gohan with the intensity of someone who was preparing for a fight.
'I'm screwed.' Gohan thought silently. 'Piccolo is one of the most perceptive characters in the entire Dragon Ball universe, if anyone has any chance of discovering that someone else took over the boy's body, it's him.'
The reincarnated young man swallows hard under the inquisitive gaze of his former master, analyzing his reactions.
"Maybe the weight of responsibility got to you and your response was to change your ways, or the years you spent training in the time room made you mature to the point where you seemed like someone else." Says Piccolo, uncrossing his arms and trying to relax his posture.
'Is it just me or is he trying to appear less intimidating?' Questions Gohan mentally.
"I just want to say…" Piccolo begins, breaking into a cold sweat as he gathers his strength. "I'm proud of you Gohan, not just of your power, but also your intelligence, your heart in offering to help my race with the approaching enemy and most of all… I'm proud of the man you're becoming."
Gohan's heart swelled with pride as he heard Piccolo's sincere praise. The words echoed in his mind, resonating with the truth he had been striving for.
Only to then have a cold shower drown his feelings when he remembers that he is living a lie.
"Thank you Mr. Piccolo." Murmurs Gohan discouraged. "If you'll excuse me, I'll go train."
The young man quickly takes off without giving Piccolo a chance to question him.
[DBI:GG]
Sitting on the edge of a cliff, Gohan watched the emerald green sea that disappeared from view of the alien planet.
The young man felt filthy for the moment of happiness he had when Piccolo came to praise him. After all, the life he leads is a sham, it belongs to someone else.
Guilt was eating him up inside. The guilt of living a lie, of deceiving everyone who loved him. The guilt of not being able to be who I really was. Gohan closed his eyes, searching for strength somewhere within himself. But all he found was an immense void.
"I'm nothing like you said, Piccolo." Gohan muttered to himself. "I am a coward."
"Why are you a coward?" asked a friendly voice from behind.
Gohan quickly turns around and sees Goku waving at him.
"Goku?" Questions Gohan in surprise.
When asked by his son, Goku is confused and looks at him curiously.
"That's weird." Said the protagonist of the original series. "You've never called me by my name before."
"S-sorry, d-dad." Gohan stutters nervously.
The veteran warrior shrugs and sits down next to his son.
"No need to apologize." States Goku in a fatherly tone towards Gohan. "You can call me dad, Goku or whatever you want… just don't call me late for dinner." Goku jokes, laughing at his own joke.
The young hybrid is paralyzed by the joke, not because it is good or bad. It was just shocking to see Son Goku, one of the most iconic characters in fiction, making dad jokes.
"He-he." The young man fake laughed, failing to appear natural. "Did you come here for a reason?"
"Yes, I heard you saying that you were going to train, but Piccolo told me that you didn't look well and that you needed space, so I waited a little before coming."
"Thanks." Said Gohan looking back at the sea.
"Don't worry son." Said Goku smiling without any worries. "If you want to talk about something, I'm here for it."
"I don't know how." Says Gohan depressed. "If I talk… you will never forgive me."
"Damn." Goku says, surprised, looking at his own son. "It must be something really serious."
The veteran warrior stopped in silence, scratching his head trying to think of something to help his son, until an idea appeared in his mind.
"Why don't you catch a really big fish?" Says Goku.
"Huh?" Gohan grumbles.
"When I married your mother I was always late for dinner, I usually lost track of time because I was training in the mountains." Says Goku in a didactic tone.
"Okay…" Gohan murmurs, following the story, but still not understanding the point.
"When I arrived late with a very large fish, she would be less angry than if I arrived with nothing." Goku ends by raising his arms up.
Swallowing hard, Gohan massages the headache that is starting to form inside his skull.
"Are you suggesting I bribe everyone with a gift?" Gohan asks, in disbelief at the solution proposed by his father. "Isn't that a bit childish?"
"Better than suffering in silence." Says Goku with a shrug. "And you don't have to give something, a grand gesture can do just as well."
"A grand gesture." Gohan repeats thinking about what he could do.
It didn't take long for an idea to spring into the young man's mind.
"I think I know what to do!" Gohan exclaimed excitedly, getting up. "And I'm going to need your help."
"No problem." Says Goku getting up. "Do you already have an idea of what to do?"
"Yes I have." Says Gohan, smiling confidently. "But first we need to train to defeat Frieza."
"Awesome!" Gohan exclaims, jumping up. "I want to test your power now that you're older."
[STATUS]
Name: GohanRace: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 31 [97 M / 120 M]
HP: 6,75 M
KP: 7,05 M
PL: 1,35 M
MIGHT: 1,41 M
AGILITY: 1,19 M
SPIRIT: 1,42 M
MENTAL: 1,32 M
Points: 3.200
[STATUS]
Boa noite pessoas,
And once again I would like to reinforce the request that I am looking for Beta Readers. Anyone interested just send me a message.
And I would like to thank those who left a comment, that always makes me happy.
COMMENTS:
[-]LoveDemon18(fanfiction):
Thanks for the chapter. You are a good writer. I love Dragon Ball stories. I'm looking forward to your next DBZ story.
[-]Renan:
Thanks for the kind words.
[-]Lwit(spiritfanfiction):
You have no idea how much I'm addicted to this fanfic, can you believe there's almost nothing about Goten? Can I make one in your style?
[-]Renan:
Go for it.
[-]hunter(questionablequesting):
Is mental nexus retroactive if it is he just got a huge boost to mind?
[-]Renan:
Unfortunately for Gohan, the Boost will not be retroactive.
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[-] I saw people in the comments saying that Gohan's power increase should have been higher, and although I agree with you that the power boost was greater in the original, I did it differently to reflect how the system is affecting Gohan's body.
[!] I'm posting this chapter early because I'm going to accompany my younger brother to Thailand, he will undergo medical treatment there that will take weeks. So I see you guys in October… probably.
Lying down relaxing before bed, Gohan reflects on the days he spent on Namek.
In the original story it took Gohan, Bulma and Krillin about 34 days to arrive on Namek. Gohan thought silently. (Renan: According to the Manga.)
With the interference of the incarnated Gohan, giving Bulma Goku's ship, she shortened this trip to 15 days using her navigation data.
In other words, the defenders of planet Namek, Earthlings and Namekians had at least two weeks of training until the arrival of Emperor Frieza.
Although Gohan doesn't know how much time he has, he is focused and will guide everyone through training using the gravity machine.
On his first day of training against Goku, Gohan used less than 05% of his power, Goku had just over 30 K Power Level, due to not having done his training on the trip to Namek.
When he finished training, Goku managed to notice how much Gohan was holding back and asked his son to use his true power, or at least half of it.
Knowing that Goku would not be satisfied without a good fight, Gohan promised to use his power at a level close to that of the Oozaru vegeta he faced on earth.
"He will end up using Kaioken X10 to match me in power." Gohan grumbles thinking about the fight with his father the next day. "I'm glad we have Dende to cure him when that happens. The damage the technique causes to the user's body is severe, but at least it should help them activate the zenkai boost more... 'efficiently'." Gohan added in an insecure tone.
Without having anything else to conjecture about the next day, Gohan closes his eyes, letting sleep reach him.
The next morning Nail, Oboe, Guytar and Cello were doing a light sparring match against Krillin, Tenshinhan, Yancha and Chiaotzu using the gravity machine 10 times the earth.
And further away on a desolate plain.
The air crackled with the electricity of an intense battle.
Three individuals engaged in a high-speed exchange of punches and kicks that few on the planet are able to follow. With each blow exchanged, the earth shook and the vegetation was destroyed.
Goku and Piccolo, in turn, were fighting with all their might against Gohan. And this time the young man, despite only using 10% of his strength, did not have any weight or other limitations imposed on himself, such as the prohibition of using Ki techniques.
"Raaargh." Roared Piccolo stretching his arm capturing Gohan.
"Not again." The young man grumbles, immobilized.
Without wasting time, Goku took advantage of the situation to make his move.
"Kamehameha!" Shouted the father firing the Ki beam towards his son.
In response Gohan charges his right leg with Ki preparing a counter attack.
"Rankyaku!" Gohan exclaimed, kicking the air, firing a Ki attack from his leg.
[-]Rankyaku Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 1 K KP
Effect: Throws a Ki slice dealing 5% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
+Rapid Shot: Multiplied the speed of each shot by the number of times you spend 200 KP.
+Many shot: Shots multiplied by the number of times you spend 200 KP.
+Guided: Control the direction of the shots by paying 200 Kp per second per Ki sphere.
The attack flew like a silver air slash, it met the Kamehameha colliding in an explosion of white light.
"Oooh!" Goku muttered in surprise. "A technique using the legs? You need to teach me later, Gohan."
"Shut up and pay attention Goku." Piccolo complained irritably. "And you Gohan."
"Who, me?" Questioned the young man, still tied up.
"I know you're only using 10% of your power, but you're still stronger than me and Goku combined." Explained Piccolo in a serious tone. "So stop being so lazy and fight seriously."
Nodding, Gohan swallows hard and grabs Piccolo's arm that was grappling him. Holding his opponent, Gohan began to spin in place at high speed.
"HAAAAA!" Shouted Piccolo, being spun around by the boy.
When the green-skinned warrior's grip gave way, Gohan released him towards Goku, throwing the Namekian like a living missile.
"I'll catch you." He warned Goku, helping his former enemy.
While the two were distracted recovering, Gohan takes a deep breath, preparing to intensify the fight.
"If it's a serious fight you want…" Murmurs the young man when his ki rises to 50% of its power. "It's a serious fight you're going to have."
A white aura lights up on Gohan's fist. The strange glow in his fist intensified as he pulled it back to waist height, as if he was preparing to throw a Karate punch.
"Another new technique?" Comments Goku curious.
"Now that he is serious, we need to use all our strength." Complains Piccolo carrying two Ki spheres in each hand. "Then stop looking and attack."
Goku nods his head in agreement, then brings his Ki to the surface in a red color.
"KAIOKEN X10!" Shouted Goku, becoming empowered by the technique he learned in the afterlife.
The red aura began to swell Goku's muscles, but in addition to his physique his Ki output had also been increased.
Like a rocket exploding, Goku shot towards Gohan, only for Piccolo to rapid fire Ki blasts from behind him. As the Ki projectiles were guided, Goku was not at risk of being hit, in fact the attack provided cover for the Saiyan warrior.
The combination was perfect, Goku's attack with his fist powered by Kaioken X10 was one of the warrior's most powerful attacks and the coverage of Piccolo's Ki shots made the attack almost indefensible.
Without blinking, Gohan frowned and threw his punch in the direction of Goku and Piccolo's attack with all his strength shouting the attack.
"Lightning Plasma!" Shouted Gohan, using one of his techniques that consumes the most Ki.
The energy concentrated in his fist is fired along with his punch, but the attack was not just a projectile of white light.
The intense glow suddenly appearing blurs Goku's vision for a few moments, he was unable to see his son's attack, but within a few moments he felt impacts on his body and also heard them passing close to him.
The first hits Goku's shoulder, causing pain but without slowing down his attack, Goku was a veteran of many battles and it would take more than that to stop him.
Piccolo rapid shots were hit by the next four projectiles fired by Gohan, decreasing Goku's cover.
'How many attacks did he make at once?' Goku questions himself internally.
With his vision returning to normal, Goku is finally able to take in the full scope of Gohan's attack.
"Crap Baskets." The father murmurs at his son's attack.
Goku stipulated that tens of thousands of shots were flying in front of him.
What he didn't know was that Gohan created this technique to fire 100 million energy projectiles at once.
[-]Lightning Plasma Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 1 M KP
Effect: Throws 100 million Ki shot from his fist, each dealing 5% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
+Rapid Shot: Multiplied the speed of each shot by the number of times you spend 200 KP.
+Focus: Focus a number of shots in one point by the times you spend 200 KP.
+Guided: Control the direction of the shots by paying 200 Kp per second per Ki shot.
The sight of the approaching avalanche of light was frightening. Goku and Piccolo, even with all the experience and power they had, were overwhelmed by the absurd amount of attacks.
Goku tried to dodge, but the projectiles were fast and relentless. He was hit multiple times, each impact knocking down his resistance and halting his charge. Piccolo, likewise, was struggling to dodge the attacks, and his previews rapid shots were swallowed by Gohan technique.
"They are not that powerful, but the amount is annoying!" Goku shouted, through clenched teeth, as he struggled to stay upright. "How did he manage to fire so many attacks at once?"
Gohan just smiled, his eyes shining with pride at the veteran warriors' surprise.
"Low firepower, compensated by the amount of Ki concentrated in one fist." He replied, his voice calm in contrast to the violence of the battle.
With each passing second, the situation became more desperate for Goku and Piccolo. Their bodies were exhausted, and their powers were beginning to fail. The only thing that kept them standing was their willpower to resist.
Suddenly, one of Gohan's projectiles hit Goku square in the face, causing a sharp pain. The Kaioken began to break apart, and the Saiyan felt his body weakening.
"Goku!" Shouted Piccolo.
"Lightning Plasma!"
But before he could do anything, Gohan fired a new wave of attacks, even more powerful than the previous one. Goku and Piccolo received the storm of attacks in full, being thrown against the ground.
When the dust settled, Goku and Piccolo were lying on the ground, completely exhausted. Gohan approached them.
"Serious enough for you, Mr. Piccolo?"
Goku and Piccolo looked at each other, knowing that Gohan had won. They had fought with all their might, but the young man's strength and technique were simply insurmountable.
"You win, Gohan." Goku admitted, panting.
"Despite the lack of experience, you make up for it with raw power and some interesting techniques." Piccolo added with a slight proud smile.
"But I think it's a bit of a cheat to use the same technique twice in a row." Complains Goku with his arms crossed.
"Stop complaining for nothing." Comments Piccolo helping Goku to get up. "Let's go to Dende to heal and fight a few more rounds."
"All good." Gohan responds, arriving next to the two. "But only until lunch, I have other plans for the afternoon."
After a few more sparring sessions, Gohan went to lunch counting the gains from spending an entire morning fighting with two of his childhood heroes.
"Good gains!" Gohan mutters to himself. "I haven't had such good values in a while."
Even with the increase in power, Gohan was still apprehensive, without the super saiyan transformation he was still far from defeating Frieza.
In the afternoon, Gohan joined Bulma to work in a makeshift workshop, surrounded by complex equipment and tangled wires. Their goal is to modify the gravity machine.
"Are you sure these calculations are correct?" Bulma asked, analyzing the numbers on the computer screen.
Currently the machine is capable of simulating up to 100 times Earth's gravity, but now they were looking for something much further.
"Yep." Gohan replied, adjusting parameters on the machine. "If we can stabilize the energy source and adjust the frequency of the gravitational waves, there will be no problem reaching higher levels."
Bulma nodded, concentrating on the monitor diagnosing the machine's structural integrity.
"When I met you I knew you were a smart little boy, but now I see that you are brilliant." She commented, as she typed commands into the computer. "If you are interested, I can see my father so he can mentor you and teach you everything he knows."
Bulma's offer was worth more than her weight in gold to most scientists and students on planet Earth, an offer that anyone wouldn't think twice about accepting.
However, instead of accepting, Gohan said the first thing that came to his mind.
"Why not you?"
Bulma was stunned by the young man's request. Although she was as brilliant a scientist as her father, she hadn't dedicated herself to science like Dr. Brief. So whenever people talked to her about mentoring, internships and things with an academic bias, it was to get her father's contact.
So she was taken by surprise by the boy's request.
"Are you sure about this?" The blue-haired scientist comments in a discouraged tone. "Repairing and upgrading the ship for Namek was the most ambitious project I participated in and unlike my father I was a bit stagnant with my studies, besides I never taught anyone anything."
Moving away from the open panel, Gohan approached the older woman, smiling gently at her, his eyes shining with sincerity.
"I know your father is a genius, and he could certainly teach me a lot. But it's with you that I feel most comfortable. You explain things in a way that I understand, and I love the way you encourage me to think for myself when we encounter a problem in the project."
The boy's sincere praise calms the negative emotions in the blue-haired genius's mind who smiles back at Gohan.
"Besides, I like spending time with you." The young man finished speaking, sure that he had excited the older woman.
"Thanks Gohan, I-." Bulma cuts herself off mid-sentence, giving a mischievous smile. "I think I got you, naughty boy."
"What?" Questions Gohan confused.
She gets up quickly only to then bend over looking Gohan down.
"You don't want an old man as a teacher, do you?" Bulma said in a mocking tone. "You want a beautiful, young, sexy teacher to give you all her attention and give you rewards when you are a good student."
"I-I d-didn't mean to s-say it in that s-sense." Stammered Gohan, shaking as if he was freezing.
"So you think I'm ugly." Bulma said, pretending to be hurt.
"WHAT?" Shouted Gohan outraged. "You are the most beautiful woman I know."
"Hmmm." Bulma hummed, pretending to be surprised. "Thank you Gohan-chan."
To finish embarrassing the young Bulma, she pulled him into a tight hug.
'Oh fuck!' Gohan mentally cursed. 'Omnimind do not fail me now, I need all the mental stamina available, or this woman is going to prematurely kickstart my puberty.
"Let's test the machine!" Shouted Gohan, using all his willpower to 'want' to separate himself from Bulma's arms.
The young man quickly went close to the machine while Bulma monitored from afar.
"Ready?" Gohan asked.
"All right my lovely little student."
"Bulma..." Gohan grumbled irritably.
Laughing Bulma activated the machine using the remote control they built.
With the new configuration, the gravity machine roared, emitting an intense hum. The ground shook, and gravity increased exponentially. Gohan, prepared for the worst, felt his body being crushed by an invisible force.
"Rurgh." Gohan growled, starting to struggle to stay upright as the sensation was as if tons of weight were being thrown at him.
Bulma watched the monitors closely, adjusting parameters as needed.
"The machine is working perfectly." Bulma said, looking at the young man struggling to stay upright. "300 times Earth's gravity doesn't seem to affect the machine's performance."
"Increase more." Said Gohan, holding himself upright.
"You're already struggling to stand in this configuration, why go any higher?" Bulma asked, worried about the boy.
Bulma's question echoed in Gohan's mind, bringing to light his fear of the enemies to come.
'Frieza, Androids, Cell, Majin Buu, Berus, Goku Black, Jiren and Broly.' Thought Gohan while being pressed by gravity. 'And I'm still not a super Saiyan, and to add to my incompetence I haven't even started the search for divine Ki.'
Bulma noticed that the young man seemed bothered by some internal distress, but she decided to leave him alone.
'I can't depend only on the emotional trigger.' Gohan decided silently. 'I'm going to have to use Vegeta's strategy, overload my body in intense gravity.'
"PLEASE BULMA!" Gohan shouts in a pleading tone, without having any good arguments to convince her. "I NEED TO GET STRONGER."
The blue-haired scientist sighs tiredly, unsure of what to do.
"Someone so young shouldn't have so many responsibilities." Although still hesitant, she grants the boy's wish. "Putting in 500 times Earth's gravity."
As soon as the new configuration hit the young man with the new intensity he bowed.
"Argh!" Gohan groaned, clenching his fists, refusing to fall.
The young man had to rest his hands on his knees to stay standing. But determined to sustain himself under the gravitational pressure he calls on his Ki to help him.
"HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Shouted Gohan, being overwhelmed by his Ki.
With his chest puffed out and his spine erect, the young man breathes calmly, trying to accommodate his new weight.
"It's still not enough." Gohan grumbles. "Double it!" He speaks as if it were an order.
"You crazy kid-."
"DOUBLE IT!" Shouted Gohan in fury.
Startled by the boy's tone, Bulma complied with his request and increased the earth's gravity to a thousand times.
"Shit!" Gohan cursed, taking a step forward trying to stay standing.
But the weight was too much for the boy's body, his legs trembles as his left knee slowly lowered itself to the ground, supporting him.
"No! No! No! No!" Gohan repeated, falling forward, supporting himself with both hands.
Every second his body was pulled beyond its limit, three points of support were not enough, soon his other knee touched the ground.
Gohan gritted his teeth as he fought against the crushing force of gravity. His entire body shook, and his muscles screamed in protest. He could feel the weight of his own body threatening to crush him into the ground.
"Fuck!" he cursed under his breath.
He had been training for years, pushing himself to the limits of his physical and mental abilities. He was getting stronger, but now, as he struggled to stay upright under the crushing weight of the gravity machine, he realized how far he still had to go.
"NO!" he shouted, slamming his fists on the ground. "I can't believe I'm still so weak!"
Anger and frustration were building inside him, threatening to boil over. He hated feeling this way, hated being reminded of his own weakness.
"Come on, Gohan!" Bulma shouted trying to cheer him up. "You can do it! You are super strong!"
But even with the cheering, he knew it wasn't enough. He needed more than just determination and willpower. He needed to find a way to tap into his saiyan heritage, to unlock the powers that lay dormant within him.
Banging his fists on the ground, Gohan tried to find more strength within himself to overcome himself.
Tears of pure frustration began to well up in his eyes, and Gohan hated himself for it. He didn't want to be weak, he didn't want to be a burden to his friends. He wanted to be strong, he wanted to be able to protect everyone.
Gohan's body shook with rage as his fury began to fuel his Ki, without him realizing it.
The fury increased and raised his Ki to new heights. System messages began to appear in front of Gohan, but the young man ignored them, in his mind all he felt was hatred.
Unlike Goku in the original series, these feelings were not fueled by anger at an enemy but rather by disgust at his own weakness.
Slowly Gohan began to stand up placing his foot on the ground, despite the increasing power the young man was still defied by gravity.
"Let's fucking go…" He mumbles to himself. "Don't give up."
In a sudden movement Gohan throws himself up, taking his hands off the ground and planting his other foot on the ground.
Still with his head down and breathing slow and heavy, Gohan struggles to keep his head up.
"Roargh!" The young man growled, feeling his legs weaken. "I'm so close!"
Without being surprised by the increase in power, the young man instinctively seeks power within himself.
"HYAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Gohan shouted at the top of his lungs, echoing further than any other time he had ever shouted.
As if in response, Gohan emanates a blast of rising Ki, powerful enough to make the ground beneath him shake as dark clouds form overhead.
Lightning flashed across the sky, echoing the fury in Gohan's voice.
The shaking and thunder intensify by the second as Gohan feels his control over himself slipping away in a sea of emotions. Now it was impossible not to notice his power growing, but it was like a wild beast that he could not tame.
The energy growing within him was like fire, burning away all his doubts and fears. He could feel his body changing, becoming stronger and generating more energy.
As his vision began to whiten, he exploded with the final culmination of the surge of energy, resulting in a transformation.
"Go-Gohan?" Stammered Bulma, who even without being proficient with Ki felt the intensity of the boy's new power.
His hair turned golden, and his eyes changed to light blue.
"Finally." Murmured the super saiyan, clenching his fists.
For a moment, Gohan just stood there, looking up smiling serenely.
"Freeza." Said the young man, facing the sky with his fist closed. "I will kick your purple ass."
Smiling, he opened the windows that had appeared during his transformation.
Super Saiyan Lv. 01/100 [Inept] = X 50 Power boost at the cost of 5% of your Ki per minute.
'Ish, this fucker consumes a lot of Ki on lower levels.' Gohan thought silently.
[-]First Super Saiyan:
Effect = You have become the first Super Saiyan of your generation. It will now be easier for others to reach this power, especially if they are under your tutelage.
"Neat." Gohan said, smiling, thinking about training the next day with his father.
Name: Gohan
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 31 [99 M / 120 M]
HP: 10,8 M
KP: 10,75 M
PL: 2,0 M
MIGHT: 2,16 M
AGILITY: 1,67 M
SPIRIT: 2,15 M
MENTAL: 2,02 M
Points: 3.200
Boa noite pessoal,
Pardon my 'Brasileires', but the next chapter…
'A cobra vai fumar.'
Ps: Still looking for a beta reader to help me.
COMMENTS:
[-]Raymond_Hall (web novel):
you mean super kami guru.
[-]Renan:
Good to know that there are gentlemen with great taste among my readers.
[-]Kamito D Midoriya(fanfiction):
Damn goku lost his son again somehow.
…
Nevermind Goku's still the dad
[-]Renan:
Chapter 7 was full of emotions, but I think Gohan can have 2 parents.
[-] I saw people in the comments saying that Gohan's power increase should have been higher, and although I agree with you that the power boost was greater in the original, I did it differently to reflect how the system is affecting Gohan's body.
[!] I'm posting this chapter early because I'm going to accompany my younger brother to Thailand, he will undergo medical treatment there that will take weeks. So I see you guys in October… probably.
Lying down relaxing before bed, Gohan reflects on the days he spent on Namek.
In the original story it took Gohan, Bulma and Krillin about 34 days to arrive on Namek. Gohan thought silently. (Renan: According to the Manga.)
With the interference of the incarnated Gohan, giving Bulma Goku's ship, she shortened this trip to 15 days using her navigation data.
In other words, the defenders of planet Namek, Earthlings and Namekians had at least two weeks of training until the arrival of Emperor Frieza.
Although Gohan doesn't know how much time he has, he is focused and will guide everyone through training using the gravity machine.
On his first day of training against Goku, Gohan used less than 05% of his power, Goku had just over 30 K Power Level, due to not having done his training on the trip to Namek.
When he finished training, Goku managed to notice how much Gohan was holding back and asked his son to use his true power, or at least half of it.
Knowing that Goku would not be satisfied without a good fight, Gohan promised to use his power at a level close to that of the Oozaru vegeta he faced on earth.
"He will end up using Kaioken X10 to match me in power." Gohan grumbles thinking about the fight with his father the next day. "I'm glad we have Dende to cure him when that happens. The damage the technique causes to the user's body is severe, but at least it should help them activate the zenkai boost more... 'efficiently'." Gohan added in an insecure tone.
Without having anything else to conjecture about the next day, Gohan closes his eyes, letting sleep reach him.
[DBI:GG]
The next morning Nail, Oboe, Guytar and Cello were doing a light sparring match against Krillin, Tenshinhan, Yancha and Chiaotzu using the gravity machine 10 times the earth.
And further away on a desolate plain.
The air crackled with the electricity of an intense battle.
Three individuals engaged in a high-speed exchange of punches and kicks that few on the planet are able to follow. With each blow exchanged, the earth shook and the vegetation was destroyed.
Goku and Piccolo, in turn, were fighting with all their might against Gohan. And this time the young man, despite only using 10% of his strength, did not have any weight or other limitations imposed on himself, such as the prohibition of using Ki techniques.
"Raaargh." Roared Piccolo stretching his arm capturing Gohan.
"Not again." The young man grumbles, immobilized.
Without wasting time, Goku took advantage of the situation to make his move.
"Kamehameha!" Shouted the father firing the Ki beam towards his son.
In response Gohan charges his right leg with Ki preparing a counter attack.
"Rankyaku!" Gohan exclaimed, kicking the air, firing a Ki attack from his leg.
[-]Rankyaku Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 1 K KP
Effect: Throws a Ki slice dealing 5% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
+Rapid Shot: Multiplied the speed of each shot by the number of times you spend 200 KP.
+Many shot: Shots multiplied by the number of times you spend 200 KP.
+Guided: Control the direction of the shots by paying 200 Kp per second per Ki sphere.
The attack flew like a silver air slash, it met the Kamehameha colliding in an explosion of white light.
"Oooh!" Goku muttered in surprise. "A technique using the legs? You need to teach me later, Gohan."
"Shut up and pay attention Goku." Piccolo complained irritably. "And you Gohan."
"Who, me?" Questioned the young man, still tied up.
"I know you're only using 10% of your power, but you're still stronger than me and Goku combined." Explained Piccolo in a serious tone. "So stop being so lazy and fight seriously."
Nodding, Gohan swallows hard and grabs Piccolo's arm that was grappling him. Holding his opponent, Gohan began to spin in place at high speed.
"HAAAAA!" Shouted Piccolo, being spun around by the boy.
When the green-skinned warrior's grip gave way, Gohan released him towards Goku, throwing the Namekian like a living missile.
"I'll catch you." He warned Goku, helping his former enemy.
While the two were distracted recovering, Gohan takes a deep breath, preparing to intensify the fight.
"If it's a serious fight you want…" Murmurs the young man when his ki rises to 50% of its power. "It's a serious fight you're going to have."
A white aura lights up on Gohan's fist. The strange glow in his fist intensified as he pulled it back to waist height, as if he was preparing to throw a Karate punch.
"Another new technique?" Comments Goku curious.
"Now that he is serious, we need to use all our strength." Complains Piccolo carrying two Ki spheres in each hand. "Then stop looking and attack."
Goku nods his head in agreement, then brings his Ki to the surface in a red color.
"KAIOKEN X10!" Shouted Goku, becoming empowered by the technique he learned in the afterlife.
The red aura began to swell Goku's muscles, but in addition to his physique his Ki output had also been increased.
Like a rocket exploding, Goku shot towards Gohan, only for Piccolo to rapid fire Ki blasts from behind him. As the Ki projectiles were guided, Goku was not at risk of being hit, in fact the attack provided cover for the Saiyan warrior.
The combination was perfect, Goku's attack with his fist powered by Kaioken X10 was one of the warrior's most powerful attacks and the coverage of Piccolo's Ki shots made the attack almost indefensible.
Without blinking, Gohan frowned and threw his punch in the direction of Goku and Piccolo's attack with all his strength shouting the attack.
"Lightning Plasma!" Shouted Gohan, using one of his techniques that consumes the most Ki.
The energy concentrated in his fist is fired along with his punch, but the attack was not just a projectile of white light.
The intense glow suddenly appearing blurs Goku's vision for a few moments, he was unable to see his son's attack, but within a few moments he felt impacts on his body and also heard them passing close to him.
The first hits Goku's shoulder, causing pain but without slowing down his attack, Goku was a veteran of many battles and it would take more than that to stop him.
Piccolo rapid shots were hit by the next four projectiles fired by Gohan, decreasing Goku's cover.
'How many attacks did he make at once?' Goku questions himself internally.
With his vision returning to normal, Goku is finally able to take in the full scope of Gohan's attack.
"Crap Baskets." The father murmurs at his son's attack.
Goku stipulated that tens of thousands of shots were flying in front of him.
What he didn't know was that Gohan created this technique to fire 100 million energy projectiles at once.
[-]Lightning Plasma Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 1 M KP
Effect: Throws 100 million Ki shot from his fist, each dealing 5% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
+Rapid Shot: Multiplied the speed of each shot by the number of times you spend 200 KP.
+Focus: Focus a number of shots in one point by the times you spend 200 KP.
+Guided: Control the direction of the shots by paying 200 Kp per second per Ki shot.
The sight of the approaching avalanche of light was frightening. Goku and Piccolo, even with all the experience and power they had, were overwhelmed by the absurd amount of attacks.
Goku tried to dodge, but the projectiles were fast and relentless. He was hit multiple times, each impact knocking down his resistance and halting his charge. Piccolo, likewise, was struggling to dodge the attacks, and his previews rapid shots were swallowed by Gohan technique.
"They are not that powerful, but the amount is annoying!" Goku shouted, through clenched teeth, as he struggled to stay upright. "How did he manage to fire so many attacks at once?"
Gohan just smiled, his eyes shining with pride at the veteran warriors' surprise.
"Low firepower, compensated by the amount of Ki concentrated in one fist." He replied, his voice calm in contrast to the violence of the battle.
With each passing second, the situation became more desperate for Goku and Piccolo. Their bodies were exhausted, and their powers were beginning to fail. The only thing that kept them standing was their willpower to resist.
Suddenly, one of Gohan's projectiles hit Goku square in the face, causing a sharp pain. The Kaioken began to break apart, and the Saiyan felt his body weakening.
"Goku!" Shouted Piccolo.
"Lightning Plasma!"
But before he could do anything, Gohan fired a new wave of attacks, even more powerful than the previous one. Goku and Piccolo received the storm of attacks in full, being thrown against the ground.
When the dust settled, Goku and Piccolo were lying on the ground, completely exhausted. Gohan approached them.
"Serious enough for you, Mr. Piccolo?"
Goku and Piccolo looked at each other, knowing that Gohan had won. They had fought with all their might, but the young man's strength and technique were simply insurmountable.
"You win, Gohan." Goku admitted, panting.
"Despite the lack of experience, you make up for it with raw power and some interesting techniques." Piccolo added with a slight proud smile.
"But I think it's a bit of a cheat to use the same technique twice in a row." Complains Goku with his arms crossed.
"Stop complaining for nothing." Comments Piccolo helping Goku to get up. "Let's go to Dende to heal and fight a few more rounds."
"All good." Gohan responds, arriving next to the two. "But only until lunch, I have other plans for the afternoon."
After a few more sparring sessions, Gohan went to lunch counting the gains from spending an entire morning fighting with two of his childhood heroes.
[+2 M XP]
[+755 K MIGHT]
[+488 K AGILITY]
[+730 K SPIRIT]
[+201 K MENTAL]
[Mental Nexus: 493 K MENTAL]
[NEW ITEM (X2)]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM (X2)]
[+755 K MIGHT]
[+488 K AGILITY]
[+730 K SPIRIT]
[+201 K MENTAL]
[Mental Nexus: 493 K MENTAL]
[NEW ITEM (X2)]
Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
Copper Skill Bean(+10)
Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[NEW ITEM (X2)]
"Good gains!" Gohan mutters to himself. "I haven't had such good values in a while."
Even with the increase in power, Gohan was still apprehensive, without the super saiyan transformation he was still far from defeating Frieza.
[DBI:GG]
In the afternoon, Gohan joined Bulma to work in a makeshift workshop, surrounded by complex equipment and tangled wires. Their goal is to modify the gravity machine.
"Are you sure these calculations are correct?" Bulma asked, analyzing the numbers on the computer screen.
Currently the machine is capable of simulating up to 100 times Earth's gravity, but now they were looking for something much further.
"Yep." Gohan replied, adjusting parameters on the machine. "If we can stabilize the energy source and adjust the frequency of the gravitational waves, there will be no problem reaching higher levels."
Bulma nodded, concentrating on the monitor diagnosing the machine's structural integrity.
"When I met you I knew you were a smart little boy, but now I see that you are brilliant." She commented, as she typed commands into the computer. "If you are interested, I can see my father so he can mentor you and teach you everything he knows."
Bulma's offer was worth more than her weight in gold to most scientists and students on planet Earth, an offer that anyone wouldn't think twice about accepting.
However, instead of accepting, Gohan said the first thing that came to his mind.
"Why not you?"
Bulma was stunned by the young man's request. Although she was as brilliant a scientist as her father, she hadn't dedicated herself to science like Dr. Brief. So whenever people talked to her about mentoring, internships and things with an academic bias, it was to get her father's contact.
So she was taken by surprise by the boy's request.
"Are you sure about this?" The blue-haired scientist comments in a discouraged tone. "Repairing and upgrading the ship for Namek was the most ambitious project I participated in and unlike my father I was a bit stagnant with my studies, besides I never taught anyone anything."
Moving away from the open panel, Gohan approached the older woman, smiling gently at her, his eyes shining with sincerity.
"I know your father is a genius, and he could certainly teach me a lot. But it's with you that I feel most comfortable. You explain things in a way that I understand, and I love the way you encourage me to think for myself when we encounter a problem in the project."
The boy's sincere praise calms the negative emotions in the blue-haired genius's mind who smiles back at Gohan.
"Besides, I like spending time with you." The young man finished speaking, sure that he had excited the older woman.
"Thanks Gohan, I-." Bulma cuts herself off mid-sentence, giving a mischievous smile. "I think I got you, naughty boy."
"What?" Questions Gohan confused.
She gets up quickly only to then bend over looking Gohan down.
"You don't want an old man as a teacher, do you?" Bulma said in a mocking tone. "You want a beautiful, young, sexy teacher to give you all her attention and give you rewards when you are a good student."
"I-I d-didn't mean to s-say it in that s-sense." Stammered Gohan, shaking as if he was freezing.
"So you think I'm ugly." Bulma said, pretending to be hurt.
"WHAT?" Shouted Gohan outraged. "You are the most beautiful woman I know."
"Hmmm." Bulma hummed, pretending to be surprised. "Thank you Gohan-chan."
To finish embarrassing the young Bulma, she pulled him into a tight hug.
'Oh fuck!' Gohan mentally cursed. 'Omnimind do not fail me now, I need all the mental stamina available, or this woman is going to prematurely kickstart my puberty.
"Let's test the machine!" Shouted Gohan, using all his willpower to 'want' to separate himself from Bulma's arms.
The young man quickly went close to the machine while Bulma monitored from afar.
"Ready?" Gohan asked.
"All right my lovely little student."
"Bulma..." Gohan grumbled irritably.
Laughing Bulma activated the machine using the remote control they built.
With the new configuration, the gravity machine roared, emitting an intense hum. The ground shook, and gravity increased exponentially. Gohan, prepared for the worst, felt his body being crushed by an invisible force.
"Rurgh." Gohan growled, starting to struggle to stay upright as the sensation was as if tons of weight were being thrown at him.
Bulma watched the monitors closely, adjusting parameters as needed.
"The machine is working perfectly." Bulma said, looking at the young man struggling to stay upright. "300 times Earth's gravity doesn't seem to affect the machine's performance."
"Increase more." Said Gohan, holding himself upright.
"You're already struggling to stand in this configuration, why go any higher?" Bulma asked, worried about the boy.
Bulma's question echoed in Gohan's mind, bringing to light his fear of the enemies to come.
'Frieza, Androids, Cell, Majin Buu, Berus, Goku Black, Jiren and Broly.' Thought Gohan while being pressed by gravity. 'And I'm still not a super Saiyan, and to add to my incompetence I haven't even started the search for divine Ki.'
Bulma noticed that the young man seemed bothered by some internal distress, but she decided to leave him alone.
'I can't depend only on the emotional trigger.' Gohan decided silently. 'I'm going to have to use Vegeta's strategy, overload my body in intense gravity.'
"PLEASE BULMA!" Gohan shouts in a pleading tone, without having any good arguments to convince her. "I NEED TO GET STRONGER."
The blue-haired scientist sighs tiredly, unsure of what to do.
"Someone so young shouldn't have so many responsibilities." Although still hesitant, she grants the boy's wish. "Putting in 500 times Earth's gravity."
As soon as the new configuration hit the young man with the new intensity he bowed.
"Argh!" Gohan groaned, clenching his fists, refusing to fall.
The young man had to rest his hands on his knees to stay standing. But determined to sustain himself under the gravitational pressure he calls on his Ki to help him.
"HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Shouted Gohan, being overwhelmed by his Ki.
With his chest puffed out and his spine erect, the young man breathes calmly, trying to accommodate his new weight.
"It's still not enough." Gohan grumbles. "Double it!" He speaks as if it were an order.
"You crazy kid-."
"DOUBLE IT!" Shouted Gohan in fury.
Startled by the boy's tone, Bulma complied with his request and increased the earth's gravity to a thousand times.
"Shit!" Gohan cursed, taking a step forward trying to stay standing.
But the weight was too much for the boy's body, his legs trembles as his left knee slowly lowered itself to the ground, supporting him.
"No! No! No! No!" Gohan repeated, falling forward, supporting himself with both hands.
Every second his body was pulled beyond its limit, three points of support were not enough, soon his other knee touched the ground.
Gohan gritted his teeth as he fought against the crushing force of gravity. His entire body shook, and his muscles screamed in protest. He could feel the weight of his own body threatening to crush him into the ground.
"Fuck!" he cursed under his breath.
He had been training for years, pushing himself to the limits of his physical and mental abilities. He was getting stronger, but now, as he struggled to stay upright under the crushing weight of the gravity machine, he realized how far he still had to go.
"NO!" he shouted, slamming his fists on the ground. "I can't believe I'm still so weak!"
Anger and frustration were building inside him, threatening to boil over. He hated feeling this way, hated being reminded of his own weakness.
"Come on, Gohan!" Bulma shouted trying to cheer him up. "You can do it! You are super strong!"
But even with the cheering, he knew it wasn't enough. He needed more than just determination and willpower. He needed to find a way to tap into his saiyan heritage, to unlock the powers that lay dormant within him.
Banging his fists on the ground, Gohan tried to find more strength within himself to overcome himself.
Tears of pure frustration began to well up in his eyes, and Gohan hated himself for it. He didn't want to be weak, he didn't want to be a burden to his friends. He wanted to be strong, he wanted to be able to protect everyone.
Gohan's body shook with rage as his fury began to fuel his Ki, without him realizing it.
The fury increased and raised his Ki to new heights. System messages began to appear in front of Gohan, but the young man ignored them, in his mind all he felt was hatred.
Unlike Goku in the original series, these feelings were not fueled by anger at an enemy but rather by disgust at his own weakness.
Slowly Gohan began to stand up placing his foot on the ground, despite the increasing power the young man was still defied by gravity.
"Let's fucking go…" He mumbles to himself. "Don't give up."
In a sudden movement Gohan throws himself up, taking his hands off the ground and planting his other foot on the ground.
Still with his head down and breathing slow and heavy, Gohan struggles to keep his head up.
"Roargh!" The young man growled, feeling his legs weaken. "I'm so close!"
Without being surprised by the increase in power, the young man instinctively seeks power within himself.
"HYAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Gohan shouted at the top of his lungs, echoing further than any other time he had ever shouted.
As if in response, Gohan emanates a blast of rising Ki, powerful enough to make the ground beneath him shake as dark clouds form overhead.
Lightning flashed across the sky, echoing the fury in Gohan's voice.
The shaking and thunder intensify by the second as Gohan feels his control over himself slipping away in a sea of emotions. Now it was impossible not to notice his power growing, but it was like a wild beast that he could not tame.
The energy growing within him was like fire, burning away all his doubts and fears. He could feel his body changing, becoming stronger and generating more energy.
As his vision began to whiten, he exploded with the final culmination of the surge of energy, resulting in a transformation.
"Go-Gohan?" Stammered Bulma, who even without being proficient with Ki felt the intensity of the boy's new power.
His hair turned golden, and his eyes changed to light blue.
<Super Saiyan Gohan >
For a moment, Gohan just stood there, looking up smiling serenely.
"Freeza." Said the young man, facing the sky with his fist closed. "I will kick your purple ass."
Smiling, he opened the windows that had appeared during his transformation.
[New Transformation: Super Saiyan]
Super Saiyan Lv. 01/100 [Inept] = X 50 Power boost at the cost of 5% of your Ki per minute.
'Ish, this fucker consumes a lot of Ki on lower levels.' Gohan thought silently.
[New Achievement: First Super Saiyan]
Effect = You have become the first Super Saiyan of your generation. It will now be easier for others to reach this power, especially if they are under your tutelage.
"Neat." Gohan said, smiling, thinking about training the next day with his father.
[STATUS]
Race: Hybrid [Human/Saiyajin]
Level: 31 [99 M / 120 M]
HP: 10,8 M
KP: 10,75 M
PL: 2,0 M
MIGHT: 2,16 M
AGILITY: 1,67 M
SPIRIT: 2,15 M
MENTAL: 2,02 M
Points: 3.200
[STATUS]
Boa noite pessoal,
Pardon my 'Brasileires', but the next chapter…
'A cobra vai fumar.'
Ps: Still looking for a beta reader to help me.
COMMENTS:
[-]Raymond_Hall (web novel):
you mean super kami guru.
[-]Renan:
Good to know that there are gentlemen with great taste among my readers.
[-]Kamito D Midoriya(fanfiction):
Damn goku lost his son again somehow.
…
Nevermind Goku's still the dad
[-]Renan:
Chapter 7 was full of emotions, but I think Gohan can have 2 parents.
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Five white spherical ships pierced the atmosphere of Planet Namek, announcing the arrival of the emperor of the universe army.
Gohan, who was training with Nail, stopped abruptly when he felt the vibration in the air. He looked up, and saw the ships descending, like white meteors against the blue sky.
"What is that?" Nail asked, his voice full of concern.
"They're Frieza's ships." Gohan replied, frowning. "His forces finally arrived."
Gohan watched as the ships descended towards Namek's surface, leaving trails of smoke and dust in their wake. The ships landed with a deafening crash, creating huge craters in the great desolate plain. The earth shook beneath their feet, and the air filled with dust particles and debris.
"What is happening?" Krillin shouted, approaching Nail and Gohan.
Gohan didn't respond, his eyes fixed on the smoking craters. He knew the enemy had arrived.
From within each ship, figures emerged. Each of them wore white and dark blue armor. They were the elite warriors of the Ginyu Special Forces.
"They are strong." Gohan murmured, warning Krillin.
Nail, at his side, also noticed the threat.
"We can't let them reach the Grand Elder Guru." Nail said.
Gohan nodded, feeling the responsibility weighing on his shoulders.
"Nail! Gather your elite warriors and go protect the Guru." Said Gohan who then turned to Krillin. "Send Yamcha, Chiaotzu, and Tien here as soon as possible."
"But what about your father and Piccolo?" Questioned Krillin confused.
"I don't have time to explain." Said the young man, energizing and flying towards the five invaders.
With no one to complain to, Krillin heads towards his fellow Earthlings before going to call Goku and Piccolo.
"Someone is approaching at great speed, captain." Said the invader with red skin and long white hair. "His power is more than eight thousand."
"Whad did you say, Jeice? Only eight thousand?!" The most muscular invader with orange hair laughs. "That way, even Guldo can beat him by himself."
The small green being with four eyes grumbles irritably, turning on his side with his arms crossed.
"But he has impressive speed for someone with such low fighting power." This is the blue-skinned, red-eyed invader. "How should we proceed, captain?"
The leader after whom the Ginyu Special Forces are named takes a carefree step forward, chuckling softly.
"Let the vermin arrive, if he doesn't tell us where the dragon balls are we can torture him until he cooperates."
His subordinates nodded, smiling excitedly at the promise of a fight.
In a few moments, Gohan landed before the invaders with his Ki still disguised, observing the scene warily.
'What are they doing here?' The young man questioned internally. ' Frieza was supposed to arrive first. What happened to the original canon?'
Quickly Gohan began to devise a plan to deal with their most dangerous member.
He started to tremble, pretending to be in fear, a wide-eyed Gohan stammered.
"W-Who are you?" Said the young man acting badly like a coward.
The invaders laughed in chorus, encouraged by the young man's apparent weakness and blinded by their own arrogance to notice their opponent's dissimulation. Ginyu smiled triumphantly, always happy to perform his team's iconic performance.
"Ah, don't you know who we are? Don't worry, let's introduce ourselves!"
He raised his arms, and the other four members of the Ginyu Special Force lined up beside him, each preparing to strike an exaggerated pose.
But as Recoome began to move, Gohan raised his index finger glowing blood red pointing at one of the five invaders.
"Scarlet Needle!" Gohan shouted, firing a bloody ray of light towards the smallest member of the invaders.
Guldo didn't even have time to react, he just realized he had been hit when the attack went through his skull.
[-] Scarlet Needle Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 10.000 KP
Effect: Concentrated small area ki attack, dealing 500% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
Piercing: Ignores 0,2% of enemy defense per 10.000 KP spent.
Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend extra 20.000 KP.
Critical: Increases the chance to deal critical damage by 0,1% per 10.000 points spent.
Gohan minimizes the alert windows, staying focused on the squad that looked at each other, open-mouthed at the speed and efficiency with which one of their own had been murdered.
But before any of them could comment on the act, Gohan had already approached Ginyu and grabbed him by the throat.
"The green one was the most dangerous with his ability to stop time, then it's you with your annoying power to switch bodies." Said Gohan floating, lifting the purple alien by the throat.
It was bizarre to the rest of the group, how that black-haired boy raised that big muscular purple warrior off the ground like it was no big deal.
"But all I have to do is stop you from talking, and you become harmless."
"CAPTAIN!" Jayce shouted, charging towards Gohan.
CRECK!
But the crack coming from Gohan's hand had announced that it was already too late, the young hybrid had broken the legendary Captain Ginyu's neck.
Guldo's death was only surprising due to the speed with which it had happened, after all, he was the weakest member of the group. But now, with their captain dead like it was no big deal, the rest of the Special Forces began to fear for their lives.
"Clock Up!" Said Gohan, being engulfed by the blue aura of his acceleration technique.
Like a flash of blue lightning, the young warrior passed by Jayce, Burter and Recoome without them being able to notice him, then reappearing away from them holding the scouters that were in his ears.
"Now that I have your attention." Said Gohan breaking the equipment in his hands. "Let's talk about your terms of surrender."
Goku, Piccolo and Krillin cut through the skies of Namek, their bodies tense and ready for battle. The urgency of the situation weighed heavily on them, but nothing prepared them for the scene they found upon arrival.
"What is that?" Goku muttered, landing.
Before them, three alien invaders were in full fight against Yamcha, Chiaotzu and Tien.
The terran warriors fought with all their might, but it was clear that they were at a disadvantage. Yamcha, with his face bruised and his clothes torn, was desperately trying to block the attacks of a muscular fighter with orange hair. Chiaotzu, with his eyes closed in concentration, launched waves of Ki towards a red-skinned, white-haired opponent. Tien, in turn, used his division technique to try to confuse the blue-skinned, red-eyed alien.
"These are the members of the Ginyu Special Forces." Gohan said, sitting on a rock watching the fight.
With a serious face, Krillin assessed the situation.
"We need to help. They won't hold out for long."
Goku nodded, his fists clenched.
"No!" Shouted Gohan, stopping the three.
Krillin turned to the young man, not understanding his inaction.
"Gohan, they need our help. Why don't you let us help them?" Krillin asked worriedly.
"Because they are weak." Gohan replied in a dry and emotionless tone.
Gohan looked at Goku, Piccolo and Krillin, seeing the surprise on their faces. He knew his answer wasn't what they expected, but he couldn't let them interfere.
"What are you talking about?" Goku asked, confused.
Taking a deep breath Gohan closes his eyes, measuring his words before speaking.
"The three of you are at a power level that the five invaders don't present much of a challenge, but our friends down there still have a lot of room for improvement."
Krillin's eyes widened at the young warrior's statement, it's true that he had a year of extra training with Gohan in the time room, but he hadn't realized that the difference in power between him and Yamcha, Chiaotzu and Tien was so big. .
Gohan watched the fight carefully, his eyes fixed on the warriors' movements. Yamcha, with a cry of effort, launched a powerful Kamehameha at the orange-haired fighter, who dodged it with ease. However, the distraction was enough for Chiaotzu, with a quick movement, to launch a wave of Ki towards the great warrior.
"Now, Tenshinhan!" Chiaotzu shouted, while Recoome tried to recover from the attack.
Tenshinhan wasted no time. With one fluid movement, he split into four, surrounding Recoome and launching a series of coordinated attacks. Each Tenshinhan attacked from a different angle, forcing Recoome to defend in all directions.
Yamcha, seeing the opportunity, changed targets and attacked Jeice, the red-skinned fighter. He deftly dodged Jeice's attacks, using his speed to close in and land a powerful blow to his opponent's face. Jeice staggered, momentarily stunned.
Chiaotzu, taking advantage of Jeice's distraction, launched a series of Ki attacks in quick succession. Jeice, unprepared, was hit by several blows before managing to recover.
"Good job, Yamcha!" Tien shouted, as he continued to pressure Recoome.
Gohan watched everything with a mix of concern and admiration. They were using their skills to the fullest, switching opponents and coordinating their attacks to maximize the impact.
"They are improving." Gohan muttered to himself, a slight smile forming on his lips.
Krillin, with his fists clenched, watched the fight carefully.
"They are doing a good job, but it is still not enough. We need to intervene."
Gohan shook his head.
"Not yet. They need to learn to fight without our help. They need to push their own limits."
As Gohan and the others watched, the fight continued to rage. Yamcha, Chiaotzu, and Tien skillfully switched opponents, using their Ki attacks to keep the pressure on the Ginyu Special Forces.
Gohan knew he still had a long way to go, but he felt a growing trust in his friends. They were showing that together they could face any challenge. And for now, that was enough.
The artificial glow of the icy lights reflected off the metallic floor as a heavy silence hung over the throne room. The Emperor of the Universe, Frieza, rested in his elevated seat, watching with sharp eyes the three warriors kneeling before him, the survivors of the once fearsome Ginyu Special Forces.
Their bodies were scarred from battle, their clothes torn and bloody.
"Lord Frieza..." Jayce began, his voice shaky, trying to maintain his composure. "We… we were defeated by a Saiyan! A young Saiyan of monstrous power!"
Frieza raised an eyebrow, but remained silent, letting the red warrior continue.
"This Saiyan…" Recoome interrupted, his voice deep and tired. "He was unlike anything we've ever faced! Not only was it far above the power we expected, but he had bizarre techniques. We did our best, we fought as always, but…"
Burter, the fastest in the universe, finally raised his head, staring directly at Frieza with eyes full of frustration and fear.
"He was fast... faster than me! I couldn't even follow his movements, he's a freak!"
Frieza's smile widened, but still without any sign of empathy.
"Do you really expect me to believe that a simple Saiyan was able to defeat the elite of my special forces?" Frieza spoke with his seductive and poisonous voice. "That strikes me as a pathetic excuse, coming from warriors who underestimated their opponents and were caught off guard."
The trio trembled on their knees. Jayce tried again, this time with desperation in his voice.
"He wasn't just any Saiyan, sir. His power... his aura... was like nothing we've ever seen! He is probably stronger than you."
The entire room froze the moment Jayce uttered those words. The echo of his statement hung in the air like a death sentence. Frieza, who until then had maintained an expression of slight curiosity, had his face slowly taken over by a shadow of uncontrollable fury. His fingers tightened on the arms of the throne, and the members of his special forces could hear the sound of metal creaking under the pressure of his hands.
"Stronger…than me?" Frieza's voice was low, but filled with a threat that was impossible to ignore. "You dared to pronounce such atrocity?"
The atmosphere in the room changed in an instant. An almost crushing weight pressed down on the kneeling warriors. Jayce, Recoome and Burter felt their energy being drained just by the threatening presence of Frieza, who was now slowly rising from his throne.
The Emperor did not need to raise his voice. He simply raised his right hand, his eyes narrowed in pure contempt. Jayce, in a desperate act, tried to speak once more, but the words died in his throat as Frieza's arm glowed with an evil purple energy.
"Allowing a Saiyan to defeat them was already a mistake, but insinuating that he might be stronger than me? That… is an unforgivable offense."
Without further warning, a sphere of energy appeared in Frieza's palm, rapidly growing in power and intensity. He threw it at Jayce first. The attack was not a quick shot, but rather a continuous beam of energy that enveloped Jayce's body, lifting him off the ground as he screamed in pain. His muscles twitched, and his body began to slowly disintegrate, skin and flesh being eaten away inch by inch. The other two watched, paralyzed with fear, as their companion's agonized scream filled the room.
"You dare fail me and then insult me? Maybe they didn't understand their place in this universe."
With a snap of his fingers, Frieza stopped the energy beam, leaving only ashes where Jayce had once been. Recoome, the physically strongest, tried to get up, even though he knew he couldn't win. He released a scream of anger and despair, advancing towards Frieza with his last remaining strength.
"You worm!" Frieza whispered, before simply pointing a finger in Recoome's direction.
An invisible force crushed Recoome into the ground with enough force to break his bones into several pieces. The giant warrior roared in pain, but Frieza didn't stop there. He floated over to Recoome, hovering over the fractured body, and with a look of boredom, stomped hard on his chest, crushing his ribcage. Recoome screamed one last time, as his body convulsed, until the sound of his bones breaking echoed through the room.
Burter, the last remaining one, lay motionless, absolute terror in his eyes. He knew his death was inevitable, but still, he tried to speak, his words coming out choppy with fear.
"Lo-Lorrde Frieza... p-please... we are l-loyal..."
But Frieza interrupted him with a simple gesture, raising his hand and, with one movement, Burter was lifted off the ground by an invisible force. The blue warrior began to struggle, unable to breathe as Frieza slowly choked him from a distance.
"Loyalty?" Frieza said, smiling cruelly. "You are tools. And tools that fail must be discarded."
With one last squeeze, Frieza closed his hand, and Burter's neck broke with a sharp crack. He fell to the floor, lifeless, silence finally returning to the room.
The Emperor took a deep breath, recomposing his posture and returning to the throne, now completely alone. He sat down again, crossing his legs as his red eyes glowed in the darkness.
"A Saiyan... stronger than me?" He muttered to himself, a cold smile forming on his lips. "Enough with being careful, I will take care of this threat personally."
Boa noite pessoal,
[-]My one-shot, Naruto: Isekai Saiyajin, is focused on action and comedy. If I decide to serialize the fanfic, I plan to further explore the bonds between the protagonist and Naruto as brothers. Some readers loved the protagonist's humor, while others were uncomfortable with him being portrayed as an "incel." In my defense, I'm intentionally writing the character to be an asshole, not an incel. What's the difference? If I serialize the story, I promise to make that clear.
[-]As my brother has already shared most of the treatment on Instagram, I think it's okay to give some more details.
He suffered a serious accident, which almost cost him his life. As a result, he was 100% blind, his right leg was amputated and his left leg underwent several procedures to be saved. I went with him to Thailand as an escort, where he underwent stem cell treatment. We are hopeful that he can regain much of his vision.
So far, the treatment has been a success, with no signs of rejection or infection. This brought me a lot of relief as the stem cells were injected into the optic nerves throughout his face and at the base of his spine. An infection in these areas could be extremely problematic.
In Thailand, I didn't have much time to sightsee. I just went out to buy some clothes for my brother, who needed them, and on a free day, I managed to have lunch in a less touristy area. I ended up having lunch with some Thai miners which was really cool... this kind of thing happens when someone with ADHD decides to wander around Asia alone.
[-]Photos from the trip (most are from treatment and physiotherapy), can be seen on my brother's Instagram ( vitor_piva) or mine ( ).
[-]My brother doesn't speak English, but he loves it when I tell him about your comments, so please feel invited to send him a "Hi" or a "You're a medical doctor and your older brother writes fanfic on the internet, does he have no shame or self-love?"
[-] I'm back from Thailand, I'll give more details about my brother's treatment at the end of the chapter.
[-] I posted an isekai oneshot, Naruto: Isekai Saiyajin. There are people angry that I made the protagonist an Incel. Which isn't true, I made him an asshole, there's a difference... I think. More details at the end of the chapter.
[-]From now on I will put the comments before the chapter, as they have to do with the previous chapter, or influence me to write the current one.
COMMENTS:
[-]Draken_JJ(wattpad):
Great chapter continued?
[-]Renan:
Yes, it took a while but I'm back.
[-]AdamMohammad728(wattpad):
Hope it goes well.
[-]Renan:
Everything went well, at the end of the chapter I'll give you some details.
[-]Lillie Jones (qq):
'Chapter summary that looks like the beginning of an episode of the original anime'.
[-]Renan:
This here is more of a virtual high-five than a response, Lillie makes summaries from the chapters that I read with the anime voices in my head. It's always good to see when you comment on the story.
Five white spherical ships pierced the atmosphere of Planet Namek, announcing the arrival of the emperor of the universe army.
Gohan, who was training with Nail, stopped abruptly when he felt the vibration in the air. He looked up, and saw the ships descending, like white meteors against the blue sky.
"What is that?" Nail asked, his voice full of concern.
"They're Frieza's ships." Gohan replied, frowning. "His forces finally arrived."
Gohan watched as the ships descended towards Namek's surface, leaving trails of smoke and dust in their wake. The ships landed with a deafening crash, creating huge craters in the great desolate plain. The earth shook beneath their feet, and the air filled with dust particles and debris.
"What is happening?" Krillin shouted, approaching Nail and Gohan.
Gohan didn't respond, his eyes fixed on the smoking craters. He knew the enemy had arrived.
From within each ship, figures emerged. Each of them wore white and dark blue armor. They were the elite warriors of the Ginyu Special Forces.
"They are strong." Gohan murmured, warning Krillin.
Nail, at his side, also noticed the threat.
"We can't let them reach the Grand Elder Guru." Nail said.
Gohan nodded, feeling the responsibility weighing on his shoulders.
"Nail! Gather your elite warriors and go protect the Guru." Said Gohan who then turned to Krillin. "Send Yamcha, Chiaotzu, and Tien here as soon as possible."
"But what about your father and Piccolo?" Questioned Krillin confused.
"I don't have time to explain." Said the young man, energizing and flying towards the five invaders.
With no one to complain to, Krillin heads towards his fellow Earthlings before going to call Goku and Piccolo.
[DBI:GG]
"Someone is approaching at great speed, captain." Said the invader with red skin and long white hair. "His power is more than eight thousand."
"Whad did you say, Jeice? Only eight thousand?!" The most muscular invader with orange hair laughs. "That way, even Guldo can beat him by himself."
The small green being with four eyes grumbles irritably, turning on his side with his arms crossed.
"But he has impressive speed for someone with such low fighting power." This is the blue-skinned, red-eyed invader. "How should we proceed, captain?"
The leader after whom the Ginyu Special Forces are named takes a carefree step forward, chuckling softly.
"Let the vermin arrive, if he doesn't tell us where the dragon balls are we can torture him until he cooperates."
His subordinates nodded, smiling excitedly at the promise of a fight.
In a few moments, Gohan landed before the invaders with his Ki still disguised, observing the scene warily.
'What are they doing here?' The young man questioned internally. ' Frieza was supposed to arrive first. What happened to the original canon?'
Quickly Gohan began to devise a plan to deal with their most dangerous member.
He started to tremble, pretending to be in fear, a wide-eyed Gohan stammered.
"W-Who are you?" Said the young man acting badly like a coward.
The invaders laughed in chorus, encouraged by the young man's apparent weakness and blinded by their own arrogance to notice their opponent's dissimulation. Ginyu smiled triumphantly, always happy to perform his team's iconic performance.
"Ah, don't you know who we are? Don't worry, let's introduce ourselves!"
He raised his arms, and the other four members of the Ginyu Special Force lined up beside him, each preparing to strike an exaggerated pose.
But as Recoome began to move, Gohan raised his index finger glowing blood red pointing at one of the five invaders.
"Scarlet Needle!" Gohan shouted, firing a bloody ray of light towards the smallest member of the invaders.
Guldo didn't even have time to react, he just realized he had been hit when the attack went through his skull.
[First Blood]
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[-] Scarlet Needle Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 10.000 KP
Effect: Concentrated small area ki attack, dealing 500% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target.
Piercing: Ignores 0,2% of enemy defense per 10.000 KP spent.
Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend extra 20.000 KP.
Critical: Increases the chance to deal critical damage by 0,1% per 10.000 points spent.
Gohan minimizes the alert windows, staying focused on the squad that looked at each other, open-mouthed at the speed and efficiency with which one of their own had been murdered.
But before any of them could comment on the act, Gohan had already approached Ginyu and grabbed him by the throat.
"The green one was the most dangerous with his ability to stop time, then it's you with your annoying power to switch bodies." Said Gohan floating, lifting the purple alien by the throat.
It was bizarre to the rest of the group, how that black-haired boy raised that big muscular purple warrior off the ground like it was no big deal.
"But all I have to do is stop you from talking, and you become harmless."
"CAPTAIN!" Jayce shouted, charging towards Gohan.
CRECK!
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But the crack coming from Gohan's hand had announced that it was already too late, the young hybrid had broken the legendary Captain Ginyu's neck.
Guldo's death was only surprising due to the speed with which it had happened, after all, he was the weakest member of the group. But now, with their captain dead like it was no big deal, the rest of the Special Forces began to fear for their lives.
"Clock Up!" Said Gohan, being engulfed by the blue aura of his acceleration technique.
Like a flash of blue lightning, the young warrior passed by Jayce, Burter and Recoome without them being able to notice him, then reappearing away from them holding the scouters that were in his ears.
"Now that I have your attention." Said Gohan breaking the equipment in his hands. "Let's talk about your terms of surrender."
[DBI:GG]
Goku, Piccolo and Krillin cut through the skies of Namek, their bodies tense and ready for battle. The urgency of the situation weighed heavily on them, but nothing prepared them for the scene they found upon arrival.
"What is that?" Goku muttered, landing.
Before them, three alien invaders were in full fight against Yamcha, Chiaotzu and Tien.
The terran warriors fought with all their might, but it was clear that they were at a disadvantage. Yamcha, with his face bruised and his clothes torn, was desperately trying to block the attacks of a muscular fighter with orange hair. Chiaotzu, with his eyes closed in concentration, launched waves of Ki towards a red-skinned, white-haired opponent. Tien, in turn, used his division technique to try to confuse the blue-skinned, red-eyed alien.
"These are the members of the Ginyu Special Forces." Gohan said, sitting on a rock watching the fight.
With a serious face, Krillin assessed the situation.
"We need to help. They won't hold out for long."
Goku nodded, his fists clenched.
"No!" Shouted Gohan, stopping the three.
Krillin turned to the young man, not understanding his inaction.
"Gohan, they need our help. Why don't you let us help them?" Krillin asked worriedly.
"Because they are weak." Gohan replied in a dry and emotionless tone.
Gohan looked at Goku, Piccolo and Krillin, seeing the surprise on their faces. He knew his answer wasn't what they expected, but he couldn't let them interfere.
"What are you talking about?" Goku asked, confused.
Taking a deep breath Gohan closes his eyes, measuring his words before speaking.
"The three of you are at a power level that the five invaders don't present much of a challenge, but our friends down there still have a lot of room for improvement."
Krillin's eyes widened at the young warrior's statement, it's true that he had a year of extra training with Gohan in the time room, but he hadn't realized that the difference in power between him and Yamcha, Chiaotzu and Tien was so big. .
Gohan watched the fight carefully, his eyes fixed on the warriors' movements. Yamcha, with a cry of effort, launched a powerful Kamehameha at the orange-haired fighter, who dodged it with ease. However, the distraction was enough for Chiaotzu, with a quick movement, to launch a wave of Ki towards the great warrior.
"Now, Tenshinhan!" Chiaotzu shouted, while Recoome tried to recover from the attack.
Tenshinhan wasted no time. With one fluid movement, he split into four, surrounding Recoome and launching a series of coordinated attacks. Each Tenshinhan attacked from a different angle, forcing Recoome to defend in all directions.
Yamcha, seeing the opportunity, changed targets and attacked Jeice, the red-skinned fighter. He deftly dodged Jeice's attacks, using his speed to close in and land a powerful blow to his opponent's face. Jeice staggered, momentarily stunned.
Chiaotzu, taking advantage of Jeice's distraction, launched a series of Ki attacks in quick succession. Jeice, unprepared, was hit by several blows before managing to recover.
"Good job, Yamcha!" Tien shouted, as he continued to pressure Recoome.
Gohan watched everything with a mix of concern and admiration. They were using their skills to the fullest, switching opponents and coordinating their attacks to maximize the impact.
"They are improving." Gohan muttered to himself, a slight smile forming on his lips.
Krillin, with his fists clenched, watched the fight carefully.
"They are doing a good job, but it is still not enough. We need to intervene."
Gohan shook his head.
"Not yet. They need to learn to fight without our help. They need to push their own limits."
As Gohan and the others watched, the fight continued to rage. Yamcha, Chiaotzu, and Tien skillfully switched opponents, using their Ki attacks to keep the pressure on the Ginyu Special Forces.
Gohan knew he still had a long way to go, but he felt a growing trust in his friends. They were showing that together they could face any challenge. And for now, that was enough.
[DBI:GG]
The artificial glow of the icy lights reflected off the metallic floor as a heavy silence hung over the throne room. The Emperor of the Universe, Frieza, rested in his elevated seat, watching with sharp eyes the three warriors kneeling before him, the survivors of the once fearsome Ginyu Special Forces.
Their bodies were scarred from battle, their clothes torn and bloody.
"Lord Frieza..." Jayce began, his voice shaky, trying to maintain his composure. "We… we were defeated by a Saiyan! A young Saiyan of monstrous power!"
Frieza raised an eyebrow, but remained silent, letting the red warrior continue.
"This Saiyan…" Recoome interrupted, his voice deep and tired. "He was unlike anything we've ever faced! Not only was it far above the power we expected, but he had bizarre techniques. We did our best, we fought as always, but…"
Burter, the fastest in the universe, finally raised his head, staring directly at Frieza with eyes full of frustration and fear.
"He was fast... faster than me! I couldn't even follow his movements, he's a freak!"
Frieza's smile widened, but still without any sign of empathy.
"Do you really expect me to believe that a simple Saiyan was able to defeat the elite of my special forces?" Frieza spoke with his seductive and poisonous voice. "That strikes me as a pathetic excuse, coming from warriors who underestimated their opponents and were caught off guard."
The trio trembled on their knees. Jayce tried again, this time with desperation in his voice.
"He wasn't just any Saiyan, sir. His power... his aura... was like nothing we've ever seen! He is probably stronger than you."
The entire room froze the moment Jayce uttered those words. The echo of his statement hung in the air like a death sentence. Frieza, who until then had maintained an expression of slight curiosity, had his face slowly taken over by a shadow of uncontrollable fury. His fingers tightened on the arms of the throne, and the members of his special forces could hear the sound of metal creaking under the pressure of his hands.
"Stronger…than me?" Frieza's voice was low, but filled with a threat that was impossible to ignore. "You dared to pronounce such atrocity?"
The atmosphere in the room changed in an instant. An almost crushing weight pressed down on the kneeling warriors. Jayce, Recoome and Burter felt their energy being drained just by the threatening presence of Frieza, who was now slowly rising from his throne.
The Emperor did not need to raise his voice. He simply raised his right hand, his eyes narrowed in pure contempt. Jayce, in a desperate act, tried to speak once more, but the words died in his throat as Frieza's arm glowed with an evil purple energy.
"Allowing a Saiyan to defeat them was already a mistake, but insinuating that he might be stronger than me? That… is an unforgivable offense."
Without further warning, a sphere of energy appeared in Frieza's palm, rapidly growing in power and intensity. He threw it at Jayce first. The attack was not a quick shot, but rather a continuous beam of energy that enveloped Jayce's body, lifting him off the ground as he screamed in pain. His muscles twitched, and his body began to slowly disintegrate, skin and flesh being eaten away inch by inch. The other two watched, paralyzed with fear, as their companion's agonized scream filled the room.
"You dare fail me and then insult me? Maybe they didn't understand their place in this universe."
With a snap of his fingers, Frieza stopped the energy beam, leaving only ashes where Jayce had once been. Recoome, the physically strongest, tried to get up, even though he knew he couldn't win. He released a scream of anger and despair, advancing towards Frieza with his last remaining strength.
"You worm!" Frieza whispered, before simply pointing a finger in Recoome's direction.
An invisible force crushed Recoome into the ground with enough force to break his bones into several pieces. The giant warrior roared in pain, but Frieza didn't stop there. He floated over to Recoome, hovering over the fractured body, and with a look of boredom, stomped hard on his chest, crushing his ribcage. Recoome screamed one last time, as his body convulsed, until the sound of his bones breaking echoed through the room.
Burter, the last remaining one, lay motionless, absolute terror in his eyes. He knew his death was inevitable, but still, he tried to speak, his words coming out choppy with fear.
"Lo-Lorrde Frieza... p-please... we are l-loyal..."
But Frieza interrupted him with a simple gesture, raising his hand and, with one movement, Burter was lifted off the ground by an invisible force. The blue warrior began to struggle, unable to breathe as Frieza slowly choked him from a distance.
"Loyalty?" Frieza said, smiling cruelly. "You are tools. And tools that fail must be discarded."
With one last squeeze, Frieza closed his hand, and Burter's neck broke with a sharp crack. He fell to the floor, lifeless, silence finally returning to the room.
The Emperor took a deep breath, recomposing his posture and returning to the throne, now completely alone. He sat down again, crossing his legs as his red eyes glowed in the darkness.
"A Saiyan... stronger than me?" He muttered to himself, a cold smile forming on his lips. "Enough with being careful, I will take care of this threat personally."
Boa noite pessoal,
[-]My one-shot, Naruto: Isekai Saiyajin, is focused on action and comedy. If I decide to serialize the fanfic, I plan to further explore the bonds between the protagonist and Naruto as brothers. Some readers loved the protagonist's humor, while others were uncomfortable with him being portrayed as an "incel." In my defense, I'm intentionally writing the character to be an asshole, not an incel. What's the difference? If I serialize the story, I promise to make that clear.
[-]As my brother has already shared most of the treatment on Instagram, I think it's okay to give some more details.
He suffered a serious accident, which almost cost him his life. As a result, he was 100% blind, his right leg was amputated and his left leg underwent several procedures to be saved. I went with him to Thailand as an escort, where he underwent stem cell treatment. We are hopeful that he can regain much of his vision.
So far, the treatment has been a success, with no signs of rejection or infection. This brought me a lot of relief as the stem cells were injected into the optic nerves throughout his face and at the base of his spine. An infection in these areas could be extremely problematic.
In Thailand, I didn't have much time to sightsee. I just went out to buy some clothes for my brother, who needed them, and on a free day, I managed to have lunch in a less touristy area. I ended up having lunch with some Thai miners which was really cool... this kind of thing happens when someone with ADHD decides to wander around Asia alone.
[-]Photos from the trip (most are from treatment and physiotherapy), can be seen on my brother's Instagram ( vitor_piva) or mine ( ).
[-]My brother doesn't speak English, but he loves it when I tell him about your comments, so please feel invited to send him a "Hi" or a "You're a medical doctor and your older brother writes fanfic on the internet, does he have no shame or self-love?"
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[-] I'M GOING TO RELEASE MY FIRST BOOK! (Only in Portuguese, but next year I plan to release it in English) "Reincarnation Virtue" is an isekai story set in a medieval fantasy world with gender morality reversal. I give more details at the end.
"Excellent!" Exclaims Freeza in his first horned form. "Land 10 km(6.2 miles) from the highest concentration of Power Levels."
Freeza's mothership began to slowly descend towards the surface of Namek, but within minutes the ship's control panel began to emit a high-pitched sound. The pilot, sweating coldly with worry, turns to his leader.
"Lord Freeza, we are detecting a life form directly in our path."
Freeza, with a cruel smile, approached the control panel.
"A life form? Interesting. Could be a curious Namekian. Or perhaps something relevant."
The pilot adjusted the controls, trying to get a clearer reading.
"It looks like he's... still?" Said the pilot, confused.
Freeza laughed softly.
"Probably paralyzed by the approaching end." Freeza added, returning to his throne. "Prepare your weapons, but don't fire yet. I want to see what this worm is capable of."
The ship continued to descend slowly, approaching the figure of a young human-Saiyan hybrid.
"I hope I'm right." Gohan comments, clenching his fists tightly. "If I'm wrong, I'll have committed a massacre for nothing."
Gohan closed his eyes, as he was at the edge of the planet's atmosphere, so he was able to breathe deeply to concentrateand start gathering his Ki. The aura around him began to grow with an intense white light that looked like an ivory beacon.
Inside the ship, the power reading instruments began to flash uncontrollably. The soldiers looked at each other, confused and scared. The pilot, with shaking hands, tried to adjust the controls, but it was useless. The energy emanating from Gohan was overwhelming the ship's systems.
"What is happening?" Shouted one of the soldiers desperately, looking at Freeza for guidance.
Freeza, with a cruel and curious smile, watched the monitors.
"Interesting." He commented, his eyes shining with a mix of curiosity and malice. "He must be the brat who defeated my special squad."
Outside, Gohan extended his hands forward open, and a small sphere of white light formed.
The power reading instruments began to emit a high-pitched sound, getting louder and louder. The ship's lights flickered, and the other control panel began to spark. The soldiers retreated, fearing the worst.
"That's impossible!" exclaimed the pilot, desperately trying to control the ship. "Systems are overloading!"
The monitors exploded in a shower of sparks and smoke, the power reading instruments unable to withstand the amount of energy Gohan was emitting. Freeza, impassive, continued to watch, his eyes fixed on the shining figure.
Gohan, with his eyes still closed, felt the energy flow through him. The aura around him was now a storm of light, so intense that it seemed capable of consuming everything around him.
Suddenly the sphere of energy begins to shine brighter than the planet's three suns, Gohan opens his eyes and throws the sphere towards the ship, shouting the name of his attack.
"GALAXIAN EXPLOSION!" His voice echoes like thunder through the last layer of atmosphere that allows him to breathe.
The sphere explodes in white light rushing forward, engulfing Freeza's ship in a whirlwind of light. Inside the ship, the crew screamed in despair, feeling imminent death. The pilot, with shaking hands, desperately tried to control the ship, but it was useless. The energy fired by Gohan began to disintegrate the ship.
Panic screams echoed throughout the ship, but Freeza, sitting on his throne, watched everything with a strange smile on his lips. His eyes sparkled with a mixture of curiosity and mischief, as if he was enjoying Gohan's display of power.
The ship began to shake violently, and the soldiers tried in vain to find a way out. The heat from the explosion began to spread, and the ship's metal began to melt. The screams of pain and despair mixed with the sound of disintegrating metal.
"Lord Freeza, we need to get out of here!" shouted one of the soldiers, trying to get closer to the throne.
Freeza just laughed.
"Don't worry." He said with a cruel smile. "You are all replaceable."
Pieces of metal and circuitry flew in all directions as most of the ship was obliterated by the young warrior.
A lucky few managed to escape the ship by flying towards the planet as Gohan's energy blast consumed everything, leaving only debris and ash.
Outside, Gohan watched the destruction with a serious expression. The massacre of so many forms of sentient life didn't weigh so heavily on his conscience because they were a genocidal army that killed so many planets... but the fact that his hypothesis was correct also helped.
"Damn!" Gohan exclaims in surprise. "I was expecting the items, but this amount of XP is also impressive."
But before he could allow himself a moment of celebration, a cruel laugh emerged from the rubble. Gohan turned quickly, his eyes narrowing in warning.
"Freeza." Gohan muttered, his fists clenching tightly.
The laughter continued to echo through the air, getting louder and more sinister.
"Are you the worm who dares to stand in my way?" Comments Freeza emerging from the smoke in his first form with his horns showing.
Gohan fell silent, his eyes fixed on the figure emerging from the rubble. Cold sweat began to run down his forehead, and he felt a shiver run down his spine. Freeza's presence was intimidating, even in his first form.
The young man could feel his opponent's energy, and despite being in his first form, Freeza was already on the same level as his father in the Super Saiyan form.
"What happened, boy? Are you paralyzed with fear?" Freeza continued, closing his eyes as he savored the monologue he was delivering. "Or perhaps it is the realization that you are faced with someone far beyond your abilities? Abandon any pathetic hope that your puny power can save you."
Slowly the emperor of the universe began to open his eyes, with the aim of reveling in the terror on his adversary's face.
"What are your last words-." But Freeza cuts himself off noticing that he was alone. "Where did he go?" Questions the confused invader. "How did he escape without me noticing?"
Gohan, using a combination of techniques, had moved during Freeza's arrogant monologue without being noticed.
'It's a good thing I killed Guldo to secure his cheat time-stopping technique.' Gohan thinks silently, still holding his breath.
In a few minutes Gohan arrives at the place where his friends were, letting out his breath. Krillin, Piccolo and Goku quickly approached, worried.
"What happened? Krillin asked, placing his hand on the young man's shoulder. "We felt the explosion followed by several Ki spreading across the planet, then your Ki disappeared and you reappeared here."
"It's much worse than I thought." Gohan replied, trying to catch his breath. "There's no way to beat him."
The statement left everyone tense and worried.
"You and your father, in Super Saiyan form, make mountains shake when you exchange punches." Krillin declares in a cold sweat. "How can Freeza be stronger?"
According to the calculations in his head, Gohan estimates that the current Freeza was at least five times stronger than Super Perfect Cell.
Desperate, Gohan started shouting orders.
"Gather the Namekians and ask our friends to go defend the villages being attacked by Freeza's forces! Try to evacuate as much as possible to Earth and prepare for a possible invasion!"
"But-." Krillin tried to speak before being cut off.
"We don't have time to argue!" Exclaimed Gohan.
Surprised by Gohan's attitude, Krillin stood there, but Piccolo approached to talk.
"Krillin, trust Gohan." Piccolo said, with a serious expression.
Krillin nodded, still with a doubtful expression, but determined to follow Gohan's instructions.
"I'll do what I can. But what about you, Gohan? What are you going to do?"
"I'm going to face Freeza. I need to buy some time."
Piccolo and Goku looked at Gohan with a mix of pride and concern.
"You won't go alone." Piccolo said, taking a step forward.
"That's right." Goku added, also approaching. "If the three of us fight together we'll buy more time for our friends to escape, who knows, maybe we'll even win." Said the veteran warrior with a hopeful smile.
Gohan is transfixed by his childhood heroes' display of companionship and the possibility of fighting a true battle with them.
"Come on kid, no need to be shocked." Said Goku, with a determined smile. "Those who escape can bring us back with the dragon balls of that Guru guy."
"True…" Gohan comments hopefully. "But I think we need more for the fight."
"And use all the resources at my disposal." Gohan comments, already thinking about how to spend the points. "Is 1.386 divisible by 3?"
Freeza lands on planet Namekusei. The dust kicked up by the ship still hung in the air, creating a tense and oppressive atmosphere as its small, horned form was bathed in the light of three suns. Confident, he walked with firm and determined steps, as if the planet was already his.
When he saw a Namekian he stopped.
"Where is the boy who destroyed my ship and my army?" His voice echoed across the planet, filled with an authority that did not allow for questioning.
In response, the green being gave an ironic smile.
"Gohan was right." Piccolo murmurs while Freeza looks at him curiously. "You are as arrogant as you are easy to distract."
Before the emperor of the universe could question, a pair of hands reach out from the earth beneath him, holding him by the legs.
"NOW GOHAN!" Goku shouts, getting off the ground.
Gohan, who was hiding a kilometer away, between two rocks and his Ki completely hidden, holds his breath, concentrating intensely. Time stopped around him, every speck of dust suspended in the air, every sound frozen. Then he jumped off the rock, darting towards the fight.
As he flew, he felt energy pulsing within him. His body began to glow, a golden aura surrounding him like a living flame. His hair stood up, taking on a golden color. Gohan transformed into a Super Saiyan, energy radiating from his body in powerful waves.
The frozen landscape of Namek passed him by in a blur. Bringing his hands to the sides of his body, Gohan felt the strength of his Ki increasing with each second.
'Kame…Hame…' He spoke mentally still with frozen time approaching the battle.
As soon as he was close enough, Gohan took a breath releasing his time stopping technique.
To those who were frozen in time, it seemed as if the young man had simply appeared out of nowhere with a sphere of energy in his hands.
"HAA X100!" He completed the technique by shooting Freeza at close range.
Freeza, still trapped by the surprise of the attack, barely had time to react.
The blast of energy hit Freeza squarely, enveloping him in a blinding light. The Emperor of the Universe is thrown backwards with unbelievable force, his body twisting in the air as the energy pushes him away. Dust and debris scattered in all directions, creating a dense cloud that obscured vision.
Goku watched in surprise as Freeza was thrown back. The Kamehameha's energy continued to push him further and further until he disappeared. The distant sound of the explosion echoed across the planet.
"Gohan, you did it!" Shouted Goku, emerging from the earth with a relieved smile on his face.
Goku hugged Gohan tightly, a smile of relief and pride on his face.
The young man, however, did not share the same enthusiasm. His face was serious, and he pulled away from Goku's embrace.
"He wasn't disintegrated." Gohan said worriedly. "I only managed to push him away."
Goku and Piccolo exchanged worried looks.
"How?" Piccolo asked, the relieved expression quickly disappearing.
"He's still alive." Gohan continued, eyes fixed on the horizon where Freeza had been launched. "I couldn't destroy him. Maybe he's even stronger than I calculated."
Piccolo took a step forward, concern evident on his face.
"That's bad, Goku. If Freeza is still alive, he's going to come back furious."
Gohan looked at the horizon, worry written all over his face. Dust still hung in the air, but something more sinister was beginning to form. Dark clouds gathered in the distance, as if the sky itself was preparing for a confrontation. A shiver ran down his spine as he felt an evil energy growing explosively.
"Crapbaskets." muttered Piccolo, eyes fixed on the approaching clouds.
Goku, alongside Gohan, also felt the change.
Freeza's Ki began to rise, an oppressive presence that seemed to crush the air around them. The evil energy spread like a wave, causing the ground to tremble beneath his feet.
Sensing the imminent battle, Goku brings surge his ki and also transforms into a Super Saiyan like his son.
Suddenly, a figure emerged from the horizon, looking like a white and purple meteor flying towards them in its final form.
"Is he different?" Questions Goku.
"YOU WILL PAY FOR STANDING IN MY WAY!" Freeza roars, flying at maximum speed with a purple aura covering his body.
With Freeza dangerously close, Gohan prepared himself, the golden aura around him intensifying, he jumped forward with the intention of receiving the blow directly.
"Lord Camel-." He tried to use his most powerful defensive technique, but he was cut off when Freeza sped up, hitting him squarely in the stomach with two fists. "ARGH!"
Gohan was thrown away, pain exploding in his stomach. He felt the air escape from his lungs as he was launched through the Namekian sky until he hit a rock.
CRASH!
Burying the young man partially in the stone.
While Gohan tried to compose himself, Goku and Piccolo took the chance to attack Freeza.
Goku, with his golden Super Saiyan aura, and Piccolo, with his pulsing green energy, attacked from all angles, trying to find a gap in the tyrant's defense. Freeza, however, didn't seem fazed at all. He moved with lethal grace, blocking and dodging blows with disconcerting ease. His eyes glittered with cold malice as he smiled, seemingly enjoying the fight.
With a direct punch Goku advances, but Freeza dodges with a subtle movement, spinning in the air and hitting his opponent with a quick kick in the stomach. Goku was thrown back, but quickly recovered, returning to attack with a Kamehameha. Freeza, in turn, raised his hand, creating an energy barrier that absorbed the attack with ease.
Piccolo, taking advantage of the distraction, fired a series of energy spheres towards Freeza. The tyrant, however, simply deflected them with a movement of his hand, as if he were swatting flies.
"Is that the best you can do?" Freeza sneered, his voice thick with disdain. "I expected more from great heroes." He said in a sarcastic tone.
Goku frowning increased his speed, launching a series of punches and kicks that forced Freeza to defend himself. Piccolo, at the same time starts focusing his energy into a single point.
When the energy reached its peak Goku received one of Freeza's punches in the stomach, only to hold his arm and turn it towards Piccolo.
"Makankosappo!" Piccolo shouted, firing a beam of energy towards Freeza.
Freeza, however, was unfazed. He simply let go of Goku and extended his hand, receiving the energy beam in his palm, leaving his hand slightly marked.
"Pathetic." Freeza said, turning around just to kick Goku towards Piccolo. "And to think that you are my last obstacles to getting my body back."
Piccolo tries to hold Goku back, but his ally's body came flying very quickly, despite him having cushioned the impact, the two fell to the ground.
With a sadistic smile, the Tyrant fires a sphere of energy towards the warriors. The sphere flew through the air, leaving a trail of purple light in its wake. Goku and Piccolo, still trying to get up, were hit and thrown back by the impact. Their bodies collided with the ground, raising a cloud of dust.
Freeza, observing the scene with satisfaction, begins to laugh contentedly, walking with slow and deliberate steps as if savoring every moment. He stopped a few meters away from Goku and Piccolo, who lay on the ground, injured and unable to get up.
"After I eliminate you, getting the dragon balls will be child's play." Freeza began, pointing his finger glowing with a red light towards Goku. "And I'll finally be able to end this hellish game."
Before the tyrant could execute the prone warrior, a small ball of white energy was shot high into the sky, catching everyone's attention.
"What is that?" Freeza questioned Confused.
"An attack?" Piccolo asked.
"It can't be." Murmured Goku, recognizing the power.
The sphere rose quickly, cutting through the air with an intense glow. Freeza stopped, his eyes following the path of the energy ball with curiosity and suspicion.
Gohan, still on the ground, also watched the sphere of energy he had released, hope rising within him.
When the sphere reached an impressive height, it began to expand. The white light spread out, growing larger and larger, until it assumed the size of a small celestial body. The light was so intense that it illuminated the entire sky of Namek, creating a light show that even outshines the planet's three suns.
"A beautiful light show, only it's as useless as you acting as guardians of this planet." Freeza commented, laughing, turning back to his opponents.
TUM-TUM!
A sound echoed throughout the valley, resembling the beating of a drum.
TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM!
When it knocked again, it was clear that it was a sound and a beating heart. As the beat intensified, everyone was able to distinguish where it was coming from.
TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM!
It was from the rubble where Gohan had been thrown.
TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM!
The rhythmic and powerful sound resounded through the air, as if announcing the return of something formidable.
Goku, still on the ground, raised his head, his eyes widening as he realized the source of the sound. Piccolo, at his side, also turned around worried about his former disciple. Freeza, in turn, stopped laughing, his eyes narrowing as he surveyed the rubble suspiciously.
TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM!
"What does that sound mean?" He questioned the tyrant for the first time, feeling fear since the beginning of the fight.
TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM!
From the rubble, a figure began to emerge, growing wildly. Gohan felt his body pulse with uncontrollable energy. His muscles contracted and expanded, while intense pain coursed through every fiber of his being.
Gohan's body expanded, his muscles stretching and his veins pulsing with uncontrollable force. Its body began to be covered in shiny golden fur.
His eyes turned wild and bright red, and a primal roar escaped his throat, echoing across the Namek Valley.
"GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!"
The transformation into golden-furred Oozaru was complete. Gohan, now an imposing and terrifying creature, rose above the rubble, his eyes fixed on Freeza. The golden aura around him shone brightly, and the ground shook beneath his feet.
"What is that?" Freeza murmured, his voice shaking for the first time. "I've never seen that."
Gohan, now an imposing and terrifying creature, made the ground shake beneath his feet. Goku's heart accelerated when he saw his son's transformation. He exchanged a worried look with Piccolo.
"Do you think he's in control?" Piccolo asked with a trembling voice.
Goku frowned, eyes fixed on the gigantic figure.
"I don't know for sure. This transformation is different from the others, it seems that the Super Saiyan power intensified the Oozaru's power."
The great golden Oozaru roared again, the sound echoing across the valley. Freeza, still in his final form, watched with caution. He tried to compose himself, but the Oozaru's presence was overwhelming.
The golden Oozaru quickly disappeared, leaving only a trail of golden light.
Freeza, still surprised, barely had time to react. The Oozaru reappeared behind him, its gigantic leg moving with incredible speed. The kick hit Freeza square in the face, launching him away with unbelievable force.
"He-he." Goku laughs, breathing in relief. "I think it's safe to say he's under control."
Boa noite pessoas,
[-]About my book, "Reincarnation Virtue":
It's a dream come true to publish my first book on 12/06/2024.
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Synopsis:
"After an unexpected death, our protagonist awakens in a new world full of monsters and magic, with four moons lighting up the sky.
Reborn as Agnos Drakon, son of one of the powerful advisors of the Elysion Empire, he comes across a universe where women dominate and men with magical abilities are considered abominations.
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[-] I'M GOING TO RELEASE MY FIRST BOOK! (Only in Portuguese, but next year I plan to release it in English) "Reincarnation Virtue" is an isekai story set in a medieval fantasy world with gender morality reversal. I give more details at the end.
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"Lord Freeza." Announces one of the emperor's soldiers. "We are entering the atmosphere of Planet Namek.""Excellent!" Exclaims Freeza in his first horned form. "Land 10 km(6.2 miles) from the highest concentration of Power Levels."
Freeza's mothership began to slowly descend towards the surface of Namek, but within minutes the ship's control panel began to emit a high-pitched sound. The pilot, sweating coldly with worry, turns to his leader.
"Lord Freeza, we are detecting a life form directly in our path."
Freeza, with a cruel smile, approached the control panel.
"A life form? Interesting. Could be a curious Namekian. Or perhaps something relevant."
The pilot adjusted the controls, trying to get a clearer reading.
"It looks like he's... still?" Said the pilot, confused.
Freeza laughed softly.
"Probably paralyzed by the approaching end." Freeza added, returning to his throne. "Prepare your weapons, but don't fire yet. I want to see what this worm is capable of."
The ship continued to descend slowly, approaching the figure of a young human-Saiyan hybrid.
"I hope I'm right." Gohan comments, clenching his fists tightly. "If I'm wrong, I'll have committed a massacre for nothing."
Gohan closed his eyes, as he was at the edge of the planet's atmosphere, so he was able to breathe deeply to concentrateand start gathering his Ki. The aura around him began to grow with an intense white light that looked like an ivory beacon.
Inside the ship, the power reading instruments began to flash uncontrollably. The soldiers looked at each other, confused and scared. The pilot, with shaking hands, tried to adjust the controls, but it was useless. The energy emanating from Gohan was overwhelming the ship's systems.
"What is happening?" Shouted one of the soldiers desperately, looking at Freeza for guidance.
Freeza, with a cruel and curious smile, watched the monitors.
"Interesting." He commented, his eyes shining with a mix of curiosity and malice. "He must be the brat who defeated my special squad."
Outside, Gohan extended his hands forward open, and a small sphere of white light formed.
The power reading instruments began to emit a high-pitched sound, getting louder and louder. The ship's lights flickered, and the other control panel began to spark. The soldiers retreated, fearing the worst.
"That's impossible!" exclaimed the pilot, desperately trying to control the ship. "Systems are overloading!"
The monitors exploded in a shower of sparks and smoke, the power reading instruments unable to withstand the amount of energy Gohan was emitting. Freeza, impassive, continued to watch, his eyes fixed on the shining figure.
Gohan, with his eyes still closed, felt the energy flow through him. The aura around him was now a storm of light, so intense that it seemed capable of consuming everything around him.
Suddenly the sphere of energy begins to shine brighter than the planet's three suns, Gohan opens his eyes and throws the sphere towards the ship, shouting the name of his attack.
"GALAXIAN EXPLOSION!" His voice echoes like thunder through the last layer of atmosphere that allows him to breathe.
The sphere explodes in white light rushing forward, engulfing Freeza's ship in a whirlwind of light. Inside the ship, the crew screamed in despair, feeling imminent death. The pilot, with shaking hands, desperately tried to control the ship, but it was useless. The energy fired by Gohan began to disintegrate the ship.
Panic screams echoed throughout the ship, but Freeza, sitting on his throne, watched everything with a strange smile on his lips. His eyes sparkled with a mixture of curiosity and mischief, as if he was enjoying Gohan's display of power.
The ship began to shake violently, and the soldiers tried in vain to find a way out. The heat from the explosion began to spread, and the ship's metal began to melt. The screams of pain and despair mixed with the sound of disintegrating metal.
"Lord Freeza, we need to get out of here!" shouted one of the soldiers, trying to get closer to the throne.
Freeza just laughed.
"Don't worry." He said with a cruel smile. "You are all replaceable."
Pieces of metal and circuitry flew in all directions as most of the ship was obliterated by the young warrior.
A lucky few managed to escape the ship by flying towards the planet as Gohan's energy blast consumed everything, leaving only debris and ash.
Outside, Gohan watched the destruction with a serious expression. The massacre of so many forms of sentient life didn't weigh so heavily on his conscience because they were a genocidal army that killed so many planets... but the fact that his hypothesis was correct also helped.
[+6,72 M XP]
[CHOOSE NEW ITEM (X 1.375)]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[CHOOSE NEW ITEM (X 1.375)]
[CHOOSE NEW ITEM (X 1.375)]
Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
Silver Skill Bean(+100)
Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[CHOOSE NEW ITEM (X 1.375)]
"Damn!" Gohan exclaims in surprise. "I was expecting the items, but this amount of XP is also impressive."
But before he could allow himself a moment of celebration, a cruel laugh emerged from the rubble. Gohan turned quickly, his eyes narrowing in warning.
"Freeza." Gohan muttered, his fists clenching tightly.
The laughter continued to echo through the air, getting louder and more sinister.
"Are you the worm who dares to stand in my way?" Comments Freeza emerging from the smoke in his first form with his horns showing.
Gohan fell silent, his eyes fixed on the figure emerging from the rubble. Cold sweat began to run down his forehead, and he felt a shiver run down his spine. Freeza's presence was intimidating, even in his first form.
The young man could feel his opponent's energy, and despite being in his first form, Freeza was already on the same level as his father in the Super Saiyan form.
"What happened, boy? Are you paralyzed with fear?" Freeza continued, closing his eyes as he savored the monologue he was delivering. "Or perhaps it is the realization that you are faced with someone far beyond your abilities? Abandon any pathetic hope that your puny power can save you."
Slowly the emperor of the universe began to open his eyes, with the aim of reveling in the terror on his adversary's face.
"What are your last words-." But Freeza cuts himself off noticing that he was alone. "Where did he go?" Questions the confused invader. "How did he escape without me noticing?"
DBI:GG
Gohan, using a combination of techniques, had moved during Freeza's arrogant monologue without being noticed.
[Ki Concealment]
[Time Freeze]
[Time Freeze]
'It's a good thing I killed Guldo to secure his cheat time-stopping technique.' Gohan thinks silently, still holding his breath.
In a few minutes Gohan arrives at the place where his friends were, letting out his breath. Krillin, Piccolo and Goku quickly approached, worried.
"What happened? Krillin asked, placing his hand on the young man's shoulder. "We felt the explosion followed by several Ki spreading across the planet, then your Ki disappeared and you reappeared here."
"It's much worse than I thought." Gohan replied, trying to catch his breath. "There's no way to beat him."
The statement left everyone tense and worried.
"You and your father, in Super Saiyan form, make mountains shake when you exchange punches." Krillin declares in a cold sweat. "How can Freeza be stronger?"
According to the calculations in his head, Gohan estimates that the current Freeza was at least five times stronger than Super Perfect Cell.
Desperate, Gohan started shouting orders.
"Gather the Namekians and ask our friends to go defend the villages being attacked by Freeza's forces! Try to evacuate as much as possible to Earth and prepare for a possible invasion!"
"But-." Krillin tried to speak before being cut off.
"We don't have time to argue!" Exclaimed Gohan.
Surprised by Gohan's attitude, Krillin stood there, but Piccolo approached to talk.
"Krillin, trust Gohan." Piccolo said, with a serious expression.
Krillin nodded, still with a doubtful expression, but determined to follow Gohan's instructions.
"I'll do what I can. But what about you, Gohan? What are you going to do?"
"I'm going to face Freeza. I need to buy some time."
Piccolo and Goku looked at Gohan with a mix of pride and concern.
"You won't go alone." Piccolo said, taking a step forward.
"That's right." Goku added, also approaching. "If the three of us fight together we'll buy more time for our friends to escape, who knows, maybe we'll even win." Said the veteran warrior with a hopeful smile.
Gohan is transfixed by his childhood heroes' display of companionship and the possibility of fighting a true battle with them.
"Come on kid, no need to be shocked." Said Goku, with a determined smile. "Those who escape can bring us back with the dragon balls of that Guru guy."
"True…" Gohan comments hopefully. "But I think we need more for the fight."
[INVENTORY]
[8] Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
[6] Copper Skill Bean(+10)
[8] Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[1.386] Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
[8] Silver Skill Bean(+100)
[8] Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[1] Gold Attribute Bean(+100%)
[0] Gold Skill Bean(+?)
[0] Gold Special Abilities Bean(+?)
[INVENTORY]
[8] Copper Attribute Bean(+10%)
[6] Copper Skill Bean(+10)
[8] Copper Special Abilities Bean(+10)
[1.386] Silver Attribute Bean(+50%)
[8] Silver Skill Bean(+100)
[8] Silver Special Abilities Bean(+100)
[1] Gold Attribute Bean(+100%)
[0] Gold Skill Bean(+?)
[0] Gold Special Abilities Bean(+?)
[INVENTORY]
"And use all the resources at my disposal." Gohan comments, already thinking about how to spend the points. "Is 1.386 divisible by 3?"
DBI:GG
Freeza lands on planet Namekusei. The dust kicked up by the ship still hung in the air, creating a tense and oppressive atmosphere as its small, horned form was bathed in the light of three suns. Confident, he walked with firm and determined steps, as if the planet was already his.
When he saw a Namekian he stopped.
"Where is the boy who destroyed my ship and my army?" His voice echoed across the planet, filled with an authority that did not allow for questioning.
In response, the green being gave an ironic smile.
"Gohan was right." Piccolo murmurs while Freeza looks at him curiously. "You are as arrogant as you are easy to distract."
Before the emperor of the universe could question, a pair of hands reach out from the earth beneath him, holding him by the legs.
"NOW GOHAN!" Goku shouts, getting off the ground.
Gohan, who was hiding a kilometer away, between two rocks and his Ki completely hidden, holds his breath, concentrating intensely. Time stopped around him, every speck of dust suspended in the air, every sound frozen. Then he jumped off the rock, darting towards the fight.
As he flew, he felt energy pulsing within him. His body began to glow, a golden aura surrounding him like a living flame. His hair stood up, taking on a golden color. Gohan transformed into a Super Saiyan, energy radiating from his body in powerful waves.
The frozen landscape of Namek passed him by in a blur. Bringing his hands to the sides of his body, Gohan felt the strength of his Ki increasing with each second.
'Kame…Hame…' He spoke mentally still with frozen time approaching the battle.
As soon as he was close enough, Gohan took a breath releasing his time stopping technique.
To those who were frozen in time, it seemed as if the young man had simply appeared out of nowhere with a sphere of energy in his hands.
"HAA X100!" He completed the technique by shooting Freeza at close range.
Freeza, still trapped by the surprise of the attack, barely had time to react.
The blast of energy hit Freeza squarely, enveloping him in a blinding light. The Emperor of the Universe is thrown backwards with unbelievable force, his body twisting in the air as the energy pushes him away. Dust and debris scattered in all directions, creating a dense cloud that obscured vision.
Goku watched in surprise as Freeza was thrown back. The Kamehameha's energy continued to push him further and further until he disappeared. The distant sound of the explosion echoed across the planet.
"Gohan, you did it!" Shouted Goku, emerging from the earth with a relieved smile on his face.
Goku hugged Gohan tightly, a smile of relief and pride on his face.
The young man, however, did not share the same enthusiasm. His face was serious, and he pulled away from Goku's embrace.
"He wasn't disintegrated." Gohan said worriedly. "I only managed to push him away."
Goku and Piccolo exchanged worried looks.
"How?" Piccolo asked, the relieved expression quickly disappearing.
"He's still alive." Gohan continued, eyes fixed on the horizon where Freeza had been launched. "I couldn't destroy him. Maybe he's even stronger than I calculated."
Piccolo took a step forward, concern evident on his face.
"That's bad, Goku. If Freeza is still alive, he's going to come back furious."
Gohan looked at the horizon, worry written all over his face. Dust still hung in the air, but something more sinister was beginning to form. Dark clouds gathered in the distance, as if the sky itself was preparing for a confrontation. A shiver ran down his spine as he felt an evil energy growing explosively.
"Crapbaskets." muttered Piccolo, eyes fixed on the approaching clouds.
Goku, alongside Gohan, also felt the change.
Freeza's Ki began to rise, an oppressive presence that seemed to crush the air around them. The evil energy spread like a wave, causing the ground to tremble beneath his feet.
Sensing the imminent battle, Goku brings surge his ki and also transforms into a Super Saiyan like his son.
Suddenly, a figure emerged from the horizon, looking like a white and purple meteor flying towards them in its final form.
"Is he different?" Questions Goku.
"YOU WILL PAY FOR STANDING IN MY WAY!" Freeza roars, flying at maximum speed with a purple aura covering his body.
With Freeza dangerously close, Gohan prepared himself, the golden aura around him intensifying, he jumped forward with the intention of receiving the blow directly.
"Lord Camel-." He tried to use his most powerful defensive technique, but he was cut off when Freeza sped up, hitting him squarely in the stomach with two fists. "ARGH!"
Gohan was thrown away, pain exploding in his stomach. He felt the air escape from his lungs as he was launched through the Namekian sky until he hit a rock.
CRASH!
Burying the young man partially in the stone.
While Gohan tried to compose himself, Goku and Piccolo took the chance to attack Freeza.
Goku, with his golden Super Saiyan aura, and Piccolo, with his pulsing green energy, attacked from all angles, trying to find a gap in the tyrant's defense. Freeza, however, didn't seem fazed at all. He moved with lethal grace, blocking and dodging blows with disconcerting ease. His eyes glittered with cold malice as he smiled, seemingly enjoying the fight.
With a direct punch Goku advances, but Freeza dodges with a subtle movement, spinning in the air and hitting his opponent with a quick kick in the stomach. Goku was thrown back, but quickly recovered, returning to attack with a Kamehameha. Freeza, in turn, raised his hand, creating an energy barrier that absorbed the attack with ease.
Piccolo, taking advantage of the distraction, fired a series of energy spheres towards Freeza. The tyrant, however, simply deflected them with a movement of his hand, as if he were swatting flies.
"Is that the best you can do?" Freeza sneered, his voice thick with disdain. "I expected more from great heroes." He said in a sarcastic tone.
Goku frowning increased his speed, launching a series of punches and kicks that forced Freeza to defend himself. Piccolo, at the same time starts focusing his energy into a single point.
When the energy reached its peak Goku received one of Freeza's punches in the stomach, only to hold his arm and turn it towards Piccolo.
"Makankosappo!" Piccolo shouted, firing a beam of energy towards Freeza.
Freeza, however, was unfazed. He simply let go of Goku and extended his hand, receiving the energy beam in his palm, leaving his hand slightly marked.
"Pathetic." Freeza said, turning around just to kick Goku towards Piccolo. "And to think that you are my last obstacles to getting my body back."
Piccolo tries to hold Goku back, but his ally's body came flying very quickly, despite him having cushioned the impact, the two fell to the ground.
With a sadistic smile, the Tyrant fires a sphere of energy towards the warriors. The sphere flew through the air, leaving a trail of purple light in its wake. Goku and Piccolo, still trying to get up, were hit and thrown back by the impact. Their bodies collided with the ground, raising a cloud of dust.
Freeza, observing the scene with satisfaction, begins to laugh contentedly, walking with slow and deliberate steps as if savoring every moment. He stopped a few meters away from Goku and Piccolo, who lay on the ground, injured and unable to get up.
"After I eliminate you, getting the dragon balls will be child's play." Freeza began, pointing his finger glowing with a red light towards Goku. "And I'll finally be able to end this hellish game."
Before the tyrant could execute the prone warrior, a small ball of white energy was shot high into the sky, catching everyone's attention.
"What is that?" Freeza questioned Confused.
"An attack?" Piccolo asked.
"It can't be." Murmured Goku, recognizing the power.
The sphere rose quickly, cutting through the air with an intense glow. Freeza stopped, his eyes following the path of the energy ball with curiosity and suspicion.
Gohan, still on the ground, also watched the sphere of energy he had released, hope rising within him.
When the sphere reached an impressive height, it began to expand. The white light spread out, growing larger and larger, until it assumed the size of a small celestial body. The light was so intense that it illuminated the entire sky of Namek, creating a light show that even outshines the planet's three suns.
"A beautiful light show, only it's as useless as you acting as guardians of this planet." Freeza commented, laughing, turning back to his opponents.
TUM-TUM!
A sound echoed throughout the valley, resembling the beating of a drum.
TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM!
When it knocked again, it was clear that it was a sound and a beating heart. As the beat intensified, everyone was able to distinguish where it was coming from.
TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM!
It was from the rubble where Gohan had been thrown.
TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM!
The rhythmic and powerful sound resounded through the air, as if announcing the return of something formidable.
Goku, still on the ground, raised his head, his eyes widening as he realized the source of the sound. Piccolo, at his side, also turned around worried about his former disciple. Freeza, in turn, stopped laughing, his eyes narrowing as he surveyed the rubble suspiciously.
TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM!
"What does that sound mean?" He questioned the tyrant for the first time, feeling fear since the beginning of the fight.
TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM! TUM-TUM!
From the rubble, a figure began to emerge, growing wildly. Gohan felt his body pulse with uncontrollable energy. His muscles contracted and expanded, while intense pain coursed through every fiber of his being.
Gohan's body expanded, his muscles stretching and his veins pulsing with uncontrollable force. Its body began to be covered in shiny golden fur.
His eyes turned wild and bright red, and a primal roar escaped his throat, echoing across the Namek Valley.
"GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!"
The transformation into golden-furred Oozaru was complete. Gohan, now an imposing and terrifying creature, rose above the rubble, his eyes fixed on Freeza. The golden aura around him shone brightly, and the ground shook beneath his feet.
"What is that?" Freeza murmured, his voice shaking for the first time. "I've never seen that."
Gohan, now an imposing and terrifying creature, made the ground shake beneath his feet. Goku's heart accelerated when he saw his son's transformation. He exchanged a worried look with Piccolo.
"Do you think he's in control?" Piccolo asked with a trembling voice.
Goku frowned, eyes fixed on the gigantic figure.
"I don't know for sure. This transformation is different from the others, it seems that the Super Saiyan power intensified the Oozaru's power."
The great golden Oozaru roared again, the sound echoing across the valley. Freeza, still in his final form, watched with caution. He tried to compose himself, but the Oozaru's presence was overwhelming.
The golden Oozaru quickly disappeared, leaving only a trail of golden light.
Freeza, still surprised, barely had time to react. The Oozaru reappeared behind him, its gigantic leg moving with incredible speed. The kick hit Freeza square in the face, launching him away with unbelievable force.
"He-he." Goku laughs, breathing in relief. "I think it's safe to say he's under control."
Boa noite pessoas,
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[-]I know you're asking, "You said you weren't going to publish anything this year. What happened?" I decided to try my best and took a combo of Ritalin with caffeine (DON'T DO THAT!) and publish another chapter of each of my three fanfics. Why did I do this? To make a shoutout to my book "Virtude da Reincarnação" which is now on sale on Amazon.
[-]FOR SALE ON AMAZON! "Virtude da Reincarnação" is an isekai story set in a medieval fantasy world with gender morality reversal. The digital copy is R$ 10,00 (US$ 1,99) and the physical copy is not available outside of Brazil due to contractual reasons with the publisher... And if you like my work, help me by leaving a review on Amazon. I'm a newbie writer and I need all the help I can get.
[-]At the end of the chapter will have an important notice about the future of this story.
COMMENTS:
AustinUkken6(wattpad):
I'm pretty sure Gohan's gonna be transformed to Super Saiyan 4.
Renan:
Many are predicting this, and I've been surprised by how popular that form is.
Diego_Cisneros_7112(webnovel):
What will happen with telekinesis, brother?
Renan:
I had plans to use this power in the future, but my plans changed.
Frieza cut the air in a downward arc. His body spun uncontrollably, but his eyes were always alert, catching the dizzying approach to the ground. With a quick movement, he reoriented himself, his feet hitting solid ground with an impact that kicked up a cloud of dust.
"Damn monkey," he growled, his voice thick with anger and humiliation.
Dust was still in the air when Frieza felt the vibration. The ground was shaking, a clear sign of the golden Oozaru's approach. He raised his head, eyes narrowing at the sight of the imposing figure flying towards him. The golden shine of the fur reflected the light, creating a light show that contrasted with the darkness of the valley.
"Apparently, I underestimated you," he murmured, a distorted smile forming on his lips. "But that only makes his death more interesting."
Frieza raised one of his hands, energy concentrating at the tip of his finger.
"Let's see if you can handle this," he said, his voice thick with malice.
A disc of purple energy forms at the tip of his finger and with a quick movement, Frieza shoots towards Gohan.
The reincarnated man was already familiar with the tyrant's teleguided technique, so instead of dodging he raised his arm to intercept the disc.
"Ha! Stupid monkey." Frieza mocked. "You're going to lose your arm."
Smiling with his simian face, Gohan shouted his defense technique.
"Busoshoku!"
The Oozaru's golden fur darkens, turning black on the arm that was raised. When the energy disc connected with the reincarnated arm, sparks flew as the disc tried to penetrate the member hardened by the technique.
"Impossible." Frieza muttered.
[-]Busoshoku Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 15.000 KP/Minute.
Effect: Infuses Ki into the body to increase resilience and physical toughness in a body part.
Multiple: Double the cost to use in two body parts, triple it to use in three parts, and so on.
Infuse: Can apply the effect to objects by doubling the cost.
Deputy: Can project inside the target's body by multiplying the cost by 10.
The energy disc dissipates, leaving only the echo of the impact. Gohan, still in golden Oozaru form, looked at Frieza with a teasing smile.
"Is that all you have, Frieza? I know all your techniques. You're too predictable."
Frieza's face contorted into a mask of fury. The eyes, once cold and calculating, now glowed with incandescent anger. He lunged with strength and speed with his foot aiming for the big gorilla's stomach.
"Die!"
The impact was brutal. Frieza's foot hit Gohan's stomach with devastating force, causing the air to escape from the Oozaru's lungs in a violent jet. Pain exploded in his abdomen, spreading like shockwaves throughout his body. Gohan felt the bitter taste of bile in his mouth, his vision blurring as he fought to maintain consciousness.
"I'll break you into a thousand pieces," growled Frieza, his voice full of evil satisfaction.
With surprising speed and strength, the Emperor continued to pummel Gohan, each blow more devastating than the last.
"Despite the increase in power, you are still weak compared to my magnificence," sneered Frieza.
The blows came from all directions, fast and precise. Gohan was trying to block, but Frieza's speed was overwhelming. Each impact resonated through his body, pain spreading like shockwaves.
"Pathetic," Frieza continued, his voice full of evil satisfaction. "Once I eliminate you, I will make my wish to the dragon."
Gohan gritted his teeth, anger building inside him.
"It would be a shame if you didn't get your wish," growled Gohan, his voice filled with determination. "After all, the dragon balls are inactive."
Frieza's body freezes for a second, confused by the statement.
"We've already used the wish, so they'll be inactive for a long time," the reincarnated man commented in a superb tone.
"It can't be..." Frieza stammered, shocked.
Pain throbbed in every inch of Gohan's body, but the satisfaction of seeing the shocked expression on Frieza's face was worth every blow. The tyrant, always so controlled and arrogant, now displayed great vulnerability. It was a gratifying but dangerous sight.
"You will not become immortal, Frieza," Gohan declared, his voice firm despite the pain. "Your plan failed."
Frieza's eyes widened, fury taking over his face. He let out a guttural scream, his voice echoing across the valley.
"IMMORTALITY!?" roared Frieza, his voice filled with anger and contempt. "You think I want this? That I want to live forever in this ridiculous form!"
Fury was something Gohan expected, but the desire to alter his body was something new that caught the reincarnated man off guard.
"This body... this form... is a prison," Frieza growled, his voice shaking with emotion. "I was beautiful and sexy. And now, I'm an abomination from a kids cartoon."
"It's not a kids cartoon!" Gohan responds instinctively. "It's called anime!"
...
"What?" They both asked, realizing the situation at the same time. "You also reincarnated here?" They both questioned, pointing at each other.
The revelation hung in the air, heavy and uncomfortable. The wind howled around, carrying with it palpable tension. Gohan hesitated for a moment, not knowing how to proceed. He took a deep breath, trying to calm his erratic thoughts.
"I was reincarnated a few months ago, at the end of the Saiyan saga, when Vegeta was defeated," he explained, hoping Frieza would understand.
Frieza's eyes narrowed upon hearing Vegeta's name.
"Ah, the short one with the big mouth," she sneered. "I remember him. It was from his communicator that I got information about the dragon balls... Wait!" Frieza said, cutting himself when he realized something. "Did you say months?" Frieza's voice trembled, his fury barely contained. "I've been trapped in this body for years, and you... besides stealing my wish, reincarnating in a normal body, you are here for less than a year."
Gohan's eyes widen as he feels Frieza's Ki increasing along with her fury.
'It seems like her anger is making her stronger.' Gohan thought silently. 'I'll have to be careful with what I say so I don't irritate her.'
"I didn't choose this," he replied, his voice firm despite the situation. "It was Lord Zeno. He pulled me from another world and put me here."
Frieza let out a bitter laugh, the sound echoing across the valley crackling with bolts of purple energy.
"That's not fair! I had a natural dump-truck ass, perky tits, long hair and a bikini line," she murmured, her eyes shining with a mixture of anger and despair. "Now, I'm...a purple alien dildo."
'So you were a woman.' Thinks Gohan better understands the personality that inhabited the body of the emperor of the universe. 'Let's see if I can calm her down.'
Gohan took a deep breath, trying to remain calm. The air around him crackled with Frieza's energy, but he knew he needed to calm it down.
"Everything will be fine," he began, his voice firm but conciliatory. "I can help you make your wish come true."
Frieza begins to calm down at the possibility of having her wish come true.
"Could you please just calm down?" Gohan said without realizing the mistake he was making."Stop being so emotional, you're overreacting like a crazy hysterical psycho."
Frieza's eyes widened, fury taking over her face. Her body began to tremble, purple energy pulsing around her.
"What did you call me?" Frieza questioned, full of anger and indignation.
Frieza's power grew uncontrollably. The muscles swell, the slender form transforming into a mass of pure strength. The ground shook beneath Gohan's feet, the pressure of Frieza's Ki increasing by the second.
"No one, least of all a nerdy virgin who is a fan of Chinese cartoons, is going to call me a PSYCHO!" shouted Frieza, her voice echoing across the valley.
With a lunge with both hands, Frieza collided with Gohan's stomach and he flew away.
The Oozaru's giant body destroys three mountains before slowing down and falling into Namek's ocean.
Flying over the water mirror, Frieza carries a large sphere of purple energy.
"DIE!" The conqueror shouts, shooting a beam of light at the submerged gorilla.
Still underwater, Gohan summons his Ki.
"Lord Camelot," said the submerged reincarnated being, covered by the protective aura of his technique.
"Kinetic Healing."
The beam of light hits him squarely, the concentrated energy making the water around him boil, burning his body.
"ROARRRGH!" Gohan roared in pain.
The beam of purple energy intensified, the water around Gohan boiling and evaporating into a cloud of steam. The heat was unbearable, the pain searing, but he refused to give in. With a guttural roar, he forced his body to move, fighting the gravity and agony of the attack.
"Die! Die! Die!" Frieza's voice echoed, distorted by fury and the sound of lightning cutting through the air.
Gohan felt every cell in his body scream in protest, but he couldn't give up. Not now, not after everything he had been through. With a superhuman effort, he managed to stand, the water around him bubbling with the residual energy from the attack.
Lucky for the great Oozaru who managed to use his defensive technique with additional healing.
[-]Lord Camelot Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 100 KP/Minute
Effect: Resist 25% of your SPIRIT in damage.
Kinetic Healing: Absorb 20% of damage taken to be used to heal your body for 5.000KP/Minute.
"You... won't... beat me..." muttered Gohan, each word a fight against pain. "Busoshoku!" shouted Gohan with one of his arms darkening, increasing his defense even further.
The attack continued, relentless, but thanks to his techniques Gohan remained standing. He could feel the Ki flowing through him, the healing energy of his technique working to repair the damage he was still receiving. It was an internal battle, his body fighting to keep itself together as Frieza's destructive energy tried to disintegrate him.
"Why... don't you fall?" Frieza questioned angrily.
Without the energy to speak, Gohan answers to himself internally.
'If I fall here, this crazy bitch will screw Canon even more.' Gohan thought, staring at his opponent. 'The androids and Buu will be free to do whatever they want on earth. And I don't even want to think about the damage if she bumps into Broly.'
Conflicting feelings of anger and despair began to bubble up inside Gohan. Physical pain mixed with internal anguish, creating a chaotic storm within him. Ki, once a controlled force, now pulsed uncontrollably, reflecting the chaos within.
Using all his concentration he manages to speak.
"You will not destroy this world that I love," Gohan swears as a white light begins to emanate from his body, intense and blinding.
Frieza, noticing the change, cut off her attack, eyes narrowing in curiosity and caution. The beam of purple energy dissipated, leaving only the echo of its destruction.
"What's going on with that monkey?" muttered Frieza, her voice full of distrust.
Gohan didn't respond, unable to form words as the white light completely enveloped him. The Oozaru's giant body began to shrink, the imposing form shrinking by the second. The light pulsed, the energy concentrating and transforming.
The pain was unbearable, but Gohan clung to consciousness, refusing to give in. He felt every muscle, every bone, every cell in his body reorganizing, adapting to the new shape. The white light intensified, and then just as abruptly as it began... it disappeared.
Silence hung heavy over the devastated battlefield as the ocean water receded into the crater, while the dust clouds slowly dissipated. In the center of the chaos, Gohan emerged on his knees in intense silence. His eyes, previously red, now had yellow irises. His body was enveloped in a cloak of golden energy with shades of blood red.
His skin, covered in red fur and dense except for his chest and abdomen, reflected the primal strength of a warrior who will unite human and wild. His hair, longer and spikier than ever, fell like black flames, while his monkey tail swayed with the electricity emanating from his every movement.
Every muscle seemed carved from stone and his clenched fists shook containing his almighty power. Gohan slowly stood up, the ground beneath his feet cracking under the pressure of his aura.
"Another form of monkey?" Frieza questioned. "How this retarded cartoon had so many fans?"
Gohan took a deep breath, feeling Ki flow through him like an electric current. The pain was gone, replaced by fierce determination.
"I was willing to try and calm you down and have a talk," Gohan said, his voice firm despite the situation. "But after that shit you said, I need to teach you to respect the work of the great master, Akira Toriyama."
Frieza let out a bitter, mocking laugh, the sound echoing across the devastated valley.
"Respect? For the autistic creator of this shitty cartoon-." Frieza's insult was cut off by a punch to his stomach.
The speed increased by the new form was too much for the universe emperor to keep up with.
With his arm still connected to his enemy's stomach, Gohan channeled a large amount of Ki into his other fist, making his enemy tremble in anticipation.
"No need to be scared," Gohan whispered in an icy tone. "Your race is very resilient."
"Because-"
"KI STRIKE!" Gohan shouted, punching Frieza in the face, throwing him away.
[-]Ki Strike Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 1.000 KP
Effect: Adds 300% of your MIGHT on physical attack. Ignores 50% of enemy damage reduction.
Frieza almost lost consciousness with the impact of the blow, but he was woken up when he crossed a rock, only to then open a crater in the ground with the impact of his body.
Frieza tried to get up, her arms shaking with the effort. The pain was excruciating, every movement an agony. The body, before so powerful and imposing, now seemed fragile, brittle. She felt a metallic taste in her mouth, blood dripping from the corner of her lips.
"No... it can't be..." she stammered, her voice shaking with despair. "I... I've never... never felt this way since I came into this world..."
The eyes, once so cold and calculating, were now wide, filled with fear and confusion. Frieza tried to move, but every muscle screamed in protest. The pain was something new, something she had long forgotten. It was as if every cell in her body was on fire, the agony spreading like shockwaves.
"Pain... I... I had forgotten... what it was like... to feel pain..." she murmured, her voice filled with panic.
Looking up, she saw her opponent with his middle and index finger on his forehead, charging with Ki sizzling as if it were electricity.
"Please... stop..." begged Frieza, her voice shaking with desperation.
Frieza's breathing was ragged, each breath a fight against pain. The body trembled, the muscles contracting involuntarily. She tried to get up again, but her legs gave out, causing her to fall to her knees.
"Spare me..." Frieza murmured, trying hard to stay upright.
As if responding, energy began to pulse even more violently in Gohan's fingertips.
"YOU IDIOT MONKEY!" Frieza screamed in terror. "YOU WILL DESTROY ME AND THE WHOLE PLANET WITH YOUR ATTACK."
In response, Gohan just smiled and held his breath, disappearing without leaving any trace from Frieza's point of view.
"Uuh?" The reincarnated woman muttered, confused.
From the Super Saiyan 4's point of view, he had stopped time and moved his position to be closer to his opponent, at an angle where he wouldn't destroy the planet.
"Makankosappo!" shouted the young hybrid, activating the extra effects of his attack mentally.
'Piercing X10; Empower X10; Critical X10'
[-] Makankosappo Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 5.000 KP
Effect: Concentrated ki attack on fingers, dealing 300% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target. Critical Damage X10.
Piercing: Ignores 10% of enemy defense per 5.000 KP spent.
Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend extra 10.000 KP.
Critical: Increases the chance to deal critical damage by 10% per 10.000 KP points spent.
The energy beam shot out of Gohan's finger, a thick line with a glowing spiral circling the attack, cutting through the air with a sharp sound. The energy, amplified by the combo of the extra effects of his attack, glowed with an intensity that reached.
The ground around Frieza exploded, the earth crumbling under the impact of the energy concentrated in the stomach of the universe emperor.
Frieza, still on her knees, tried to move, but it was too late. The lightning hit her squarely, the energy penetrating her body like a hot blade cutting through butter. The pain was instant and unbearable, every cell of her being screaming in agony. Her body shook, her muscles contracting involuntarily as the energy coursed through her.
"AAAHHH!" Frieza's scream echoed across the valley, a sound of pure agony and despair.
Her body arched, arms stretching out in a futile effort to escape the pain. The energy kept flowing, relentless, cutting through her like a hot knife through butter.
Gohan watched with his heart pounding in his chest. The fury he had felt moments before was beginning to dissipate, replaced by a sense of dark satisfaction. He knew he had gone too far, that he had crossed a limit from which he could not return.
But...
"No one fucks with Akira Toriyama's name and legacy..." Gohan grumbled in a cold and threatening tone.
"H-help..." Frieza begged, her voice shaking in agony.
With his thirst for revenge quenched, Gohan returned to his normal form with black hair and approached to help the almost dead creature.
"I'll help you... but without giving Ki or instant healing," said the young man, remembering what Goku had done in the original series.
When Gohan took the form of a golden Oozaru, Piccolo and Goku kept their distance so as not to interfere with the battle.
Piccolo, with his superior senses, was able to observe the fight from a great distance and told Goku everything about the fight that had just ended.
"Damn," said Goku, scratching the back of his head. "When I turned Super Saiyan, I thought I had caught up to him, but I see that Gohan is on another level."
Piccolo turned to Goku and shook his head in agreement with his former enemy.
"He is... far beyond our capabilities," the ever-firm voice of the green-skinned being faltered for a second, not out of fear but out of uncertainty. "It's as if Gohan is on another power level... No! Another... reality perhaps."
Goku, on the side, smiled. There was no worry on his face, just a bright glow in his eyes.
"It's amazing!" Exclaimed the veteran warrior with his fists clenched, as if he was already ready to fight. "I'm all excited, I can't wait to train and reach that level."
Piccolo sighs tiredly, reflecting on how ignorance really is bliss in some cases.
"Let's go, Goku," commented Piccolo, taking flight. "Gohan is going to Guru's house."
"OK," Goku responded, following him.
"By the way, Goku, I wanted to ask you a question," Namek said, drawing the attention of his ally. "Who is Akira Toriyama?"
Boa noite, pessoas,
[-] About the future of this story:
I'm going to leave this story on hiatus indefinitely. Despite having great affection for it, I'm no longer having fun writing. I attribute this to the gamer system I created for this story, something that I might remove from the story in the near future if I were to rewrite it.
Thank you to everyone who read, commented and a special thank you to those who gave me tips and suggestions on how to work on this story.
[-] About my book Virtue of Reincarnation:
I'm not going to put a link to buy the product here in the body of the Fic because I post the same text on several sites... and some of them don't like links in their text.
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Overall, the excerpts from "Virtue of Reincarnation" offer a promising start to a fantasy adventure. While some areas could benefit from further development, the story's captivating premise, engaging characters, and thrilling action sequences have the potential for an enjoyable reading experience.
#= Positive Reviews:
- Intriguing Premise: The story features a unique blend of reincarnation, fantasy, and RPG elements, creating a potentially captivating narrative. The protagonist's journey through an unknown world with "gamer-like" skills holds the promise of adventure and discovery.
- Engaging Characters: The characters, particularly Galene and Hadriana, are portrayed as caring and supportive figures, adding depth and warmth to the narrative. Galene's motherly nature and Hadriana's loyalty create strong emotional connections with the protagonist and the reader.
- Fast action: The excerpts show intense action sequences, such as battles with bandits, injecting excitement and a sense of danger into the story.
- World-building potential: The excerpts offer glimpses into a unique world with distinctive features such as four moons, a matriarchal society, and a complex magical system, leaving room for further exploration and development.
#=Negative reviews:
- Limited character development: Although the excerpts introduce several characters, their backstories and motivations remain largely unexplored. A deeper exploration of the characters' pasts and their relationships with each other could enrich the story.
- Info-dumping: the protagonist receives a significant amount of information about the world and his abilities through exposition and system messages, potentially overwhelming the reader. Integrating these details more organically into the narrative can improve the reading experience.
- Potentially problematic topics: the excerpts suggest a society where magic is forbidden to men and a hierarchy exists between men and women, raising concerns about potential gender inequality and power dynamics. It is crucial to deal with these topics sensitively and avoid perpetuating harmful stereotypes.
[-]I know you're asking, "You said you weren't going to publish anything this year. What happened?" I decided to try my best and took a combo of Ritalin with caffeine (DON'T DO THAT!) and publish another chapter of each of my three fanfics. Why did I do this? To make a shoutout to my book "Virtude da Reincarnação" which is now on sale on Amazon.
[-]FOR SALE ON AMAZON! "Virtude da Reincarnação" is an isekai story set in a medieval fantasy world with gender morality reversal. The digital copy is R$ 10,00 (US$ 1,99) and the physical copy is not available outside of Brazil due to contractual reasons with the publisher... And if you like my work, help me by leaving a review on Amazon. I'm a newbie writer and I need all the help I can get.
[-]At the end of the chapter will have an important notice about the future of this story.
COMMENTS:
AustinUkken6(wattpad):
I'm pretty sure Gohan's gonna be transformed to Super Saiyan 4.
Renan:
Many are predicting this, and I've been surprised by how popular that form is.
Diego_Cisneros_7112(webnovel):
What will happen with telekinesis, brother?
Renan:
I had plans to use this power in the future, but my plans changed.
(#)Now… let's go to the story!(#)
Frieza cut the air in a downward arc. His body spun uncontrollably, but his eyes were always alert, catching the dizzying approach to the ground. With a quick movement, he reoriented himself, his feet hitting solid ground with an impact that kicked up a cloud of dust.
"Damn monkey," he growled, his voice thick with anger and humiliation.
Dust was still in the air when Frieza felt the vibration. The ground was shaking, a clear sign of the golden Oozaru's approach. He raised his head, eyes narrowing at the sight of the imposing figure flying towards him. The golden shine of the fur reflected the light, creating a light show that contrasted with the darkness of the valley.
"Apparently, I underestimated you," he murmured, a distorted smile forming on his lips. "But that only makes his death more interesting."
Frieza raised one of his hands, energy concentrating at the tip of his finger.
"Let's see if you can handle this," he said, his voice thick with malice.
A disc of purple energy forms at the tip of his finger and with a quick movement, Frieza shoots towards Gohan.
The reincarnated man was already familiar with the tyrant's teleguided technique, so instead of dodging he raised his arm to intercept the disc.
"Ha! Stupid monkey." Frieza mocked. "You're going to lose your arm."
Smiling with his simian face, Gohan shouted his defense technique.
"Busoshoku!"
The Oozaru's golden fur darkens, turning black on the arm that was raised. When the energy disc connected with the reincarnated arm, sparks flew as the disc tried to penetrate the member hardened by the technique.
"Impossible." Frieza muttered.
[-]Busoshoku Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 15.000 KP/Minute.
Effect: Infuses Ki into the body to increase resilience and physical toughness in a body part.
Multiple: Double the cost to use in two body parts, triple it to use in three parts, and so on.
Infuse: Can apply the effect to objects by doubling the cost.
Deputy: Can project inside the target's body by multiplying the cost by 10.
The energy disc dissipates, leaving only the echo of the impact. Gohan, still in golden Oozaru form, looked at Frieza with a teasing smile.
"Is that all you have, Frieza? I know all your techniques. You're too predictable."
Frieza's face contorted into a mask of fury. The eyes, once cold and calculating, now glowed with incandescent anger. He lunged with strength and speed with his foot aiming for the big gorilla's stomach.
"Die!"
The impact was brutal. Frieza's foot hit Gohan's stomach with devastating force, causing the air to escape from the Oozaru's lungs in a violent jet. Pain exploded in his abdomen, spreading like shockwaves throughout his body. Gohan felt the bitter taste of bile in his mouth, his vision blurring as he fought to maintain consciousness.
"I'll break you into a thousand pieces," growled Frieza, his voice full of evil satisfaction.
With surprising speed and strength, the Emperor continued to pummel Gohan, each blow more devastating than the last.
"Despite the increase in power, you are still weak compared to my magnificence," sneered Frieza.
The blows came from all directions, fast and precise. Gohan was trying to block, but Frieza's speed was overwhelming. Each impact resonated through his body, pain spreading like shockwaves.
"Pathetic," Frieza continued, his voice full of evil satisfaction. "Once I eliminate you, I will make my wish to the dragon."
Gohan gritted his teeth, anger building inside him.
"It would be a shame if you didn't get your wish," growled Gohan, his voice filled with determination. "After all, the dragon balls are inactive."
Frieza's body freezes for a second, confused by the statement.
"We've already used the wish, so they'll be inactive for a long time," the reincarnated man commented in a superb tone.
"It can't be..." Frieza stammered, shocked.
Pain throbbed in every inch of Gohan's body, but the satisfaction of seeing the shocked expression on Frieza's face was worth every blow. The tyrant, always so controlled and arrogant, now displayed great vulnerability. It was a gratifying but dangerous sight.
"You will not become immortal, Frieza," Gohan declared, his voice firm despite the pain. "Your plan failed."
Frieza's eyes widened, fury taking over his face. He let out a guttural scream, his voice echoing across the valley.
"IMMORTALITY!?" roared Frieza, his voice filled with anger and contempt. "You think I want this? That I want to live forever in this ridiculous form!"
Fury was something Gohan expected, but the desire to alter his body was something new that caught the reincarnated man off guard.
"This body... this form... is a prison," Frieza growled, his voice shaking with emotion. "I was beautiful and sexy. And now, I'm an abomination from a kids cartoon."
"It's not a kids cartoon!" Gohan responds instinctively. "It's called anime!"
...
"What?" They both asked, realizing the situation at the same time. "You also reincarnated here?" They both questioned, pointing at each other.
The revelation hung in the air, heavy and uncomfortable. The wind howled around, carrying with it palpable tension. Gohan hesitated for a moment, not knowing how to proceed. He took a deep breath, trying to calm his erratic thoughts.
"I was reincarnated a few months ago, at the end of the Saiyan saga, when Vegeta was defeated," he explained, hoping Frieza would understand.
Frieza's eyes narrowed upon hearing Vegeta's name.
"Ah, the short one with the big mouth," she sneered. "I remember him. It was from his communicator that I got information about the dragon balls... Wait!" Frieza said, cutting himself when he realized something. "Did you say months?" Frieza's voice trembled, his fury barely contained. "I've been trapped in this body for years, and you... besides stealing my wish, reincarnating in a normal body, you are here for less than a year."
Gohan's eyes widen as he feels Frieza's Ki increasing along with her fury.
'It seems like her anger is making her stronger.' Gohan thought silently. 'I'll have to be careful with what I say so I don't irritate her.'
"I didn't choose this," he replied, his voice firm despite the situation. "It was Lord Zeno. He pulled me from another world and put me here."
Frieza let out a bitter laugh, the sound echoing across the valley crackling with bolts of purple energy.
"That's not fair! I had a natural dump-truck ass, perky tits, long hair and a bikini line," she murmured, her eyes shining with a mixture of anger and despair. "Now, I'm...a purple alien dildo."
'So you were a woman.' Thinks Gohan better understands the personality that inhabited the body of the emperor of the universe. 'Let's see if I can calm her down.'
Gohan took a deep breath, trying to remain calm. The air around him crackled with Frieza's energy, but he knew he needed to calm it down.
"Everything will be fine," he began, his voice firm but conciliatory. "I can help you make your wish come true."
Frieza begins to calm down at the possibility of having her wish come true.
"Could you please just calm down?" Gohan said without realizing the mistake he was making."Stop being so emotional, you're overreacting like a crazy hysterical psycho."
Frieza's eyes widened, fury taking over her face. Her body began to tremble, purple energy pulsing around her.
"What did you call me?" Frieza questioned, full of anger and indignation.
Frieza's power grew uncontrollably. The muscles swell, the slender form transforming into a mass of pure strength. The ground shook beneath Gohan's feet, the pressure of Frieza's Ki increasing by the second.
"No one, least of all a nerdy virgin who is a fan of Chinese cartoons, is going to call me a PSYCHO!" shouted Frieza, her voice echoing across the valley.
With a lunge with both hands, Frieza collided with Gohan's stomach and he flew away.
The Oozaru's giant body destroys three mountains before slowing down and falling into Namek's ocean.
Flying over the water mirror, Frieza carries a large sphere of purple energy.
"DIE!" The conqueror shouts, shooting a beam of light at the submerged gorilla.
Still underwater, Gohan summons his Ki.
"Lord Camelot," said the submerged reincarnated being, covered by the protective aura of his technique.
"Kinetic Healing."
The beam of light hits him squarely, the concentrated energy making the water around him boil, burning his body.
"ROARRRGH!" Gohan roared in pain.
The beam of purple energy intensified, the water around Gohan boiling and evaporating into a cloud of steam. The heat was unbearable, the pain searing, but he refused to give in. With a guttural roar, he forced his body to move, fighting the gravity and agony of the attack.
"Die! Die! Die!" Frieza's voice echoed, distorted by fury and the sound of lightning cutting through the air.
Gohan felt every cell in his body scream in protest, but he couldn't give up. Not now, not after everything he had been through. With a superhuman effort, he managed to stand, the water around him bubbling with the residual energy from the attack.
Lucky for the great Oozaru who managed to use his defensive technique with additional healing.
[-]Lord Camelot Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 100 KP/Minute
Effect: Resist 25% of your SPIRIT in damage.
Kinetic Healing: Absorb 20% of damage taken to be used to heal your body for 5.000KP/Minute.
"You... won't... beat me..." muttered Gohan, each word a fight against pain. "Busoshoku!" shouted Gohan with one of his arms darkening, increasing his defense even further.
The attack continued, relentless, but thanks to his techniques Gohan remained standing. He could feel the Ki flowing through him, the healing energy of his technique working to repair the damage he was still receiving. It was an internal battle, his body fighting to keep itself together as Frieza's destructive energy tried to disintegrate him.
"Why... don't you fall?" Frieza questioned angrily.
Without the energy to speak, Gohan answers to himself internally.
'If I fall here, this crazy bitch will screw Canon even more.' Gohan thought, staring at his opponent. 'The androids and Buu will be free to do whatever they want on earth. And I don't even want to think about the damage if she bumps into Broly.'
Conflicting feelings of anger and despair began to bubble up inside Gohan. Physical pain mixed with internal anguish, creating a chaotic storm within him. Ki, once a controlled force, now pulsed uncontrollably, reflecting the chaos within.
Using all his concentration he manages to speak.
"You will not destroy this world that I love," Gohan swears as a white light begins to emanate from his body, intense and blinding.
Frieza, noticing the change, cut off her attack, eyes narrowing in curiosity and caution. The beam of purple energy dissipated, leaving only the echo of its destruction.
"What's going on with that monkey?" muttered Frieza, her voice full of distrust.
Gohan didn't respond, unable to form words as the white light completely enveloped him. The Oozaru's giant body began to shrink, the imposing form shrinking by the second. The light pulsed, the energy concentrating and transforming.
The pain was unbearable, but Gohan clung to consciousness, refusing to give in. He felt every muscle, every bone, every cell in his body reorganizing, adapting to the new shape. The white light intensified, and then just as abruptly as it began... it disappeared.
Silence hung heavy over the devastated battlefield as the ocean water receded into the crater, while the dust clouds slowly dissipated. In the center of the chaos, Gohan emerged on his knees in intense silence. His eyes, previously red, now had yellow irises. His body was enveloped in a cloak of golden energy with shades of blood red.
His skin, covered in red fur and dense except for his chest and abdomen, reflected the primal strength of a warrior who will unite human and wild. His hair, longer and spikier than ever, fell like black flames, while his monkey tail swayed with the electricity emanating from his every movement.
Every muscle seemed carved from stone and his clenched fists shook containing his almighty power. Gohan slowly stood up, the ground beneath his feet cracking under the pressure of his aura.
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Gohan took a deep breath, feeling Ki flow through him like an electric current. The pain was gone, replaced by fierce determination.
"I was willing to try and calm you down and have a talk," Gohan said, his voice firm despite the situation. "But after that shit you said, I need to teach you to respect the work of the great master, Akira Toriyama."
Frieza let out a bitter, mocking laugh, the sound echoing across the devastated valley.
"Respect? For the autistic creator of this shitty cartoon-." Frieza's insult was cut off by a punch to his stomach.
The speed increased by the new form was too much for the universe emperor to keep up with.
With his arm still connected to his enemy's stomach, Gohan channeled a large amount of Ki into his other fist, making his enemy tremble in anticipation.
"No need to be scared," Gohan whispered in an icy tone. "Your race is very resilient."
"Because-"
"KI STRIKE!" Gohan shouted, punching Frieza in the face, throwing him away.
[-]Ki Strike Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 1.000 KP
Effect: Adds 300% of your MIGHT on physical attack. Ignores 50% of enemy damage reduction.
Frieza almost lost consciousness with the impact of the blow, but he was woken up when he crossed a rock, only to then open a crater in the ground with the impact of his body.
Frieza tried to get up, her arms shaking with the effort. The pain was excruciating, every movement an agony. The body, before so powerful and imposing, now seemed fragile, brittle. She felt a metallic taste in her mouth, blood dripping from the corner of her lips.
"No... it can't be..." she stammered, her voice shaking with despair. "I... I've never... never felt this way since I came into this world..."
The eyes, once so cold and calculating, were now wide, filled with fear and confusion. Frieza tried to move, but every muscle screamed in protest. The pain was something new, something she had long forgotten. It was as if every cell in her body was on fire, the agony spreading like shockwaves.
"Pain... I... I had forgotten... what it was like... to feel pain..." she murmured, her voice filled with panic.
Looking up, she saw her opponent with his middle and index finger on his forehead, charging with Ki sizzling as if it were electricity.
"Please... stop..." begged Frieza, her voice shaking with desperation.
Frieza's breathing was ragged, each breath a fight against pain. The body trembled, the muscles contracting involuntarily. She tried to get up again, but her legs gave out, causing her to fall to her knees.
"Spare me..." Frieza murmured, trying hard to stay upright.
As if responding, energy began to pulse even more violently in Gohan's fingertips.
"YOU IDIOT MONKEY!" Frieza screamed in terror. "YOU WILL DESTROY ME AND THE WHOLE PLANET WITH YOUR ATTACK."
In response, Gohan just smiled and held his breath, disappearing without leaving any trace from Frieza's point of view.
"Uuh?" The reincarnated woman muttered, confused.
From the Super Saiyan 4's point of view, he had stopped time and moved his position to be closer to his opponent, at an angle where he wouldn't destroy the planet.
"Makankosappo!" shouted the young hybrid, activating the extra effects of his attack mentally.
'Piercing X10; Empower X10; Critical X10'
[-] Makankosappo Lv. 01/100 [Grand-Master] Cost: 5.000 KP
Effect: Concentrated ki attack on fingers, dealing 300% of your SPIRIT in damage to your target. Critical Damage X10.
Piercing: Ignores 10% of enemy defense per 5.000 KP spent.
Empower: Multiplied the damage by the number of times you spend extra 10.000 KP.
Critical: Increases the chance to deal critical damage by 10% per 10.000 KP points spent.
The energy beam shot out of Gohan's finger, a thick line with a glowing spiral circling the attack, cutting through the air with a sharp sound. The energy, amplified by the combo of the extra effects of his attack, glowed with an intensity that reached.
The ground around Frieza exploded, the earth crumbling under the impact of the energy concentrated in the stomach of the universe emperor.
Frieza, still on her knees, tried to move, but it was too late. The lightning hit her squarely, the energy penetrating her body like a hot blade cutting through butter. The pain was instant and unbearable, every cell of her being screaming in agony. Her body shook, her muscles contracting involuntarily as the energy coursed through her.
"AAAHHH!" Frieza's scream echoed across the valley, a sound of pure agony and despair.
Her body arched, arms stretching out in a futile effort to escape the pain. The energy kept flowing, relentless, cutting through her like a hot knife through butter.
Gohan watched with his heart pounding in his chest. The fury he had felt moments before was beginning to dissipate, replaced by a sense of dark satisfaction. He knew he had gone too far, that he had crossed a limit from which he could not return.
But...
"No one fucks with Akira Toriyama's name and legacy..." Gohan grumbled in a cold and threatening tone.
"H-help..." Frieza begged, her voice shaking in agony.
With his thirst for revenge quenched, Gohan returned to his normal form with black hair and approached to help the almost dead creature.
"I'll help you... but without giving Ki or instant healing," said the young man, remembering what Goku had done in the original series.
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When Gohan took the form of a golden Oozaru, Piccolo and Goku kept their distance so as not to interfere with the battle.
Piccolo, with his superior senses, was able to observe the fight from a great distance and told Goku everything about the fight that had just ended.
"Damn," said Goku, scratching the back of his head. "When I turned Super Saiyan, I thought I had caught up to him, but I see that Gohan is on another level."
Piccolo turned to Goku and shook his head in agreement with his former enemy.
"He is... far beyond our capabilities," the ever-firm voice of the green-skinned being faltered for a second, not out of fear but out of uncertainty. "It's as if Gohan is on another power level... No! Another... reality perhaps."
Goku, on the side, smiled. There was no worry on his face, just a bright glow in his eyes.
"It's amazing!" Exclaimed the veteran warrior with his fists clenched, as if he was already ready to fight. "I'm all excited, I can't wait to train and reach that level."
Piccolo sighs tiredly, reflecting on how ignorance really is bliss in some cases.
"Let's go, Goku," commented Piccolo, taking flight. "Gohan is going to Guru's house."
"OK," Goku responded, following him.
"By the way, Goku, I wanted to ask you a question," Namek said, drawing the attention of his ally. "Who is Akira Toriyama?"
(#)End of chapter!(#)
Boa noite, pessoas,
[-] About the future of this story:
I'm going to leave this story on hiatus indefinitely. Despite having great affection for it, I'm no longer having fun writing. I attribute this to the gamer system I created for this story, something that I might remove from the story in the near future if I were to rewrite it.
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Overall, the excerpts from "Virtue of Reincarnation" offer a promising start to a fantasy adventure. While some areas could benefit from further development, the story's captivating premise, engaging characters, and thrilling action sequences have the potential for an enjoyable reading experience.
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- Intriguing Premise: The story features a unique blend of reincarnation, fantasy, and RPG elements, creating a potentially captivating narrative. The protagonist's journey through an unknown world with "gamer-like" skills holds the promise of adventure and discovery.
- Engaging Characters: The characters, particularly Galene and Hadriana, are portrayed as caring and supportive figures, adding depth and warmth to the narrative. Galene's motherly nature and Hadriana's loyalty create strong emotional connections with the protagonist and the reader.
- Fast action: The excerpts show intense action sequences, such as battles with bandits, injecting excitement and a sense of danger into the story.
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- Limited character development: Although the excerpts introduce several characters, their backstories and motivations remain largely unexplored. A deeper exploration of the characters' pasts and their relationships with each other could enrich the story.
- Info-dumping: the protagonist receives a significant amount of information about the world and his abilities through exposition and system messages, potentially overwhelming the reader. Integrating these details more organically into the narrative can improve the reading experience.
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