Mr Ritcher
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I like this so far, but is there a reason he doesn't use telekinesis like someone with a brain would instead of a comic book character? If he has the strength to move cars, is he not at the level of being able to rip people's heads off their bodies? Or even trip them with a pull on the leg or yank the weapons out of their hand? If he can't use it on them, why not the environment? Like moving the ground their standing on to trip them or converging a ton of materials to lock them in place?
Sure, telekinetically moving his weapons is neat, but why not the enemies? Overall though, I like it so far. Keep it up.
Sure, telekinetically moving his weapons is neat, but why not the enemies? Overall though, I like it so far. Keep it up.