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This almost made me fall out of my chair."Oh, God no!" yelped Taylor, hiding her face in her arms. She was pretty sure the tips of her ears were about to catch fire. That was one role she never wanted to think of her Dad in. Why they even had an option for that, she had no idea.
I'm gonna assume that the second time-jump was only for use if Taylor turned them down; because it wouldn't be an option for rewards without "Was it all a Dream"..."Sure," said Tori again, then frowned. "But there's only one more time-jump authorised with your case. To put you back where you came from. If we did this, you wouldn't get back for a year."
Wait... So Annette would be acting as the mother for the parents / married couple owners?So … I guess she gets to be your Mom for the duration? If you want?"
My interpretation is it would be just Taylor living together with Annette on the show instead of with a foster couple. So Annette is replacing the married couple option.Wait... So Annette would be acting as the mother for the parents / married couple owners?
Or would she be on the show at all? And if not.. why revive her now?nuation.And yea, my vote's for a continuation.
I'm gonna assume that the second time-jump was only for use if Taylor turned them down; because it wouldn't be an option for rewards without "Was it all a Dream"...
Wait... So Annette would be acting as the mother for the parents / married couple owners?
Or would she be on the show at all? And if not.. why revive her now?nuation.And yea, my vote's for a continuation.
Annette would replace the "Married Couple" option. (They actually offered her a place as a Contestant too, but she turned them down. So she gets to be the Mom instead.)My interpretation is it would be just Taylor living together with Annette on the show instead of with a foster couple. So Annette is replacing the married couple option.
I've had no resource for the world except from your story. Where's the resource you're using?It looks like you modified the Slut Life world and CYOA a hell of a lot more than I did. I'd definitely be interested in seeing more of this version of Slut Life, though I'll be doing my best to avoid mining for ideas.
Having the ability to modify options, such as replacing the Married Couple with Annette, definitely adds an extra dimension of interaction with the system.
Actually, the thing were you tried your best to justify obvious typos and mistakes in CYOA sheet irked me a bit too... Your story deserves better then to be treated that secondary.Having the ability to modify options, such as replacing the Married Couple with Annette, definitely adds an extra dimension of interaction with the system.
Annette would replace the "Married Couple" option. (They actually offered her a place as a Contestant too, but she turned them down. So she gets to be the Mom instead.)
I've had no resource for the world except from your story. Where's the resource you're using?
I've had no resource for the world except from your story. Where's the resource you're using?
Links please?Eternal Thendony and The Erin Show (another SFW one) are good places to do some research on the setting. Both should really be continued...
I've been looking at the 3.0.3 version. (Whoops, got the hours in the day wrong. Fixed). Now to go check out 3.1.3.Actually, the thing were you tried your best to justify obvious typos and mistakes in CYOA sheet irked me a bit too... Your story deserves better then to be treated that secondary.
..Oh wait, wrong thread. Sorry. :]
Ack, there are picture (3.1.3) and interactive (3.0.3) versions of Slut Life CYOA.
It went more like, "So, before I make my decision, I need to find one thing out."Well done, Ack! You communicated boneheaded retard Taylor very well, but still managed to get her past her black-and-white mental spectrum disorder!
Really? Annette refused to compete?
You'd think having a kid on a crapsack like Earth Bet would have given her enough perspective that "powers that I can use to protect my family, for the low, low price of having some sex that Danny would just shrug off as part of getting me back? YES PLEASE!" would happen...
I'm hoping you decide to change this to "decided not to compete this time so she can play host for Taylor."
As in Chapter 1 starts (or ends if you want to go through the decision-making) like this:
"Uh, Mom?"
"Yes dear?"
"If you refused to compete, why are you..." Taylor made vague motions in front of her chest before settling on the more neutral word of "notably airbrushed?"
"Uh, well, I refused to participate this particular cycle. After all, having powers and not needing them is better than the reverse, so I did participate to get powers and an improved body beforehand. And since your recorded message would not have calmed your father down well enough, I, ah, took the liberty of choosing 'significant other' when I participated... it's been a week since my participation ended, so I've been waiting around for you... and for the chance to get Danny back to past-me where she can screw his head back on straight."
"I'm pretty sure pulling people out of depression or other issues through literally screwing him back to normal is a fictional thing?"
"Not if there are nasty enough shocks that shake him loose and I give him enough time to come to terms with the changes and slowly sidle his way closer."
"I don't think I want to know that."
"Besides, you inherited your A-Cup Angst problems from SOMEWHERE..."
"Moooooooommmm!!!!"
He linked the interactive 3.0.3 version on the first post in his thread IIRC.
There's a 3.1.3 version you can find on 8chan though.
It went more like, "So, before I make my decision, I need to find one thing out."
"What's that?"
"Has my husband found another woman?"
<checks> "Uh, no."
"Then no. If he can wait for me, I can wait for him."
https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/eternal-threnody-cyoa.2635/
Actually... Purely by the COYA, you can't."You can choose an existing Significant Other for a roommate and/or Owner.
They make the significant other for you. Same as the Siblings.Significant other (-50 credits) Thanks to advances in genetic engineering, you get a significant other that will live with you. You can either choose what they look like, or base them off an existing person (real or otherwise)
These are the 1/2 way decent SL fics I'm aware of.
Actually... Purely by the COYA, you can't.
They make the significant other for you. Same as the Siblings.
And you need to have Significant Other as a Roommate, before you can select them as an Owner.
just to see Ack having to deal with the pleasure of having Guardian criticize his story.
...I could see Annette participating because she wants to gain powers, because she wants to have sex (this is Lustrum's former gang member we're talking about), because... probably for several other reasons I couldn't think of immediately. If nothing else, because she wants to relax for a bit.A supposedly competent parent would not let their children do what they perceive is a risky/wrong (but absolutely mandatory in this case) activity on their own, and if given the choice would ALWAYS choose to experience it first so they can provide advice for their kid when it's the kid's turn. Annette is supposedly a good mother, and by that metric... competent modern mothers will choose their children over their husbands every single time.
(I also totally could see Annette saying that she's not participating unless Danny is also brought in, at which point the SL team proceeds to say that it would count as her one time jump and prevent her for showing up in time to meet Taylor. This is probably the easiest way to get the version described by Ack.)
Okay, looking for where I modified the world and CYOA, and I can't find details.It looks like you modified the Slut Life world and CYOA a hell of a lot more than I did. I'd definitely be interested in seeing more of this version of Slut Life, though I'll be doing my best to avoid mining for ideas.
Having the ability to modify options, such as replacing the Married Couple with Annette, definitely adds an extra dimension of interaction with the system.
This is one of the reasons I'm not going to bring Danny into it. "I'm sorry, Mrs Hebert, but we pushed the spirit of the rules enough by allowing you to act as Taylor's mother. Bringing your husband into it wouldn't add any extra sexual tension, and would quite likely reduce your daughter's potential for adventurousness. So we're going to have to decline."I've just got to this again, and I have a thought to contribute.
While bringing Annete back instantly, as well as potentially adding Danny to the mix somehow, works wonderfully for the one-shot (in a sense "and then they lived happily ever after"), for a more prolonged story it would remove both too much tension and a feeling of achievement. It would also limit Taylor's wilfulness to experiment significantly, because she wouldn't want to be seen "improper" by her parents. Alternatively, if no one from Earth Bet would know of her exact actions, she might come up with a slightly more bold choices... She's a hormonal teenager, after all. :]
Okay, looking for where I modified the world and CYOA, and I can't find details.
Kindly elucidate?