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I will just want to state in advance that I really like your stories and wish I had some of your talent at writing. Also, I apologize for this wall of text, only second time posting so trying to figure out how to format it so it doesn't look like crap.What Taylor(you) did and how she(you) staying in character was really impressive. The problem though is like some of the other people above have stated, I enjoy your stories, even the more hardcore ones, but for this story I really dislike how this turned out. Slut Life shouldn't have a reason to fuck with her. Her gaming the system like did isn't going to cause problems for the company and actually might bring in more views for people to see someone who did that and how she attempts to further game the system during her time. Slut Life isn't really doing this for professional reasons. The thing is, someone high up just got pissed that she got one over them and decided to be an asshole and screw her over. I want her to push back, if this happens it will really suck and will take out some of my enjoyment of this story.
An idea to get out of the contract is for Taylor and co. to threaten to keep talking about it. Slut Life uses volunteers, people who willingly accept all that the show entails in return for the listed awards. Trust that the company will keep its word is the MOST important thing for the company, otherwise only the sick, desperate, or insane would go on the show. Therefore Taylor could say that if the 2 contracts, Taylor's and the other two's with Arbors, happen as is, she/they will then during her time constantly talk about how when she followed all the rules to get the most of what she wanted while loosing the least, the company decided to screw her and change the contract she made and then send goons to attack her when she protested. Arbor, the person in charge decided to further take advantage of the situation instead of his job. If the company tries to refute it by stating that it was an outside source that caused the issues and place all the blame on Arbor, she can turn it around and say that Slut Life still shouldn't be trusted even if that is true because they obviously don't have good security if they can get hacked and orders falsified as easily as happened. Either way, she will state that no one should trust the Slut Life company. Doing this will cause problems for her, but the situation is already really bad for her. Unless Arbor was the only one involved, unlikely since he stated he will have to spend his own favors to fix this, then the people behind this will go after her again since she got out of it by "sacrificing" her mom and friend.
To get out of this and not cause any problems, she can then bargain that for there to be no issues from her group, her mother and Tori get out of their contract with Arbor and Taylor gets her original contract back. In return they wont say anything about what happened. She can further help Arbor push for this by going alone with this by saying that when they brought this to him, Arbor was very helpful and competent in resolving this situation. Arbor looks good for the company and doesn't spend any favors and Slut Life doesn't have to worry about the complications this scandal will bring. Of course, Taylor will have to have another contract to protect herself from further retaliation. As for staying in character, I'm sure between the three of them they can figure out this idea.
An idea to get out of the contract is for Taylor and co. to threaten to keep talking about it. Slut Life uses volunteers, people who willingly accept all that the show entails in return for the listed awards. Trust that the company will keep its word is the MOST important thing for the company, otherwise only the sick, desperate, or insane would go on the show. Therefore Taylor could say that if the 2 contracts, Taylor's and the other two's with Arbors, happen as is, she/they will then during her time constantly talk about how when she followed all the rules to get the most of what she wanted while loosing the least, the company decided to screw her and change the contract she made and then send goons to attack her when she protested. Arbor, the person in charge decided to further take advantage of the situation instead of his job. If the company tries to refute it by stating that it was an outside source that caused the issues and place all the blame on Arbor, she can turn it around and say that Slut Life still shouldn't be trusted even if that is true because they obviously don't have good security if they can get hacked and orders falsified as easily as happened. Either way, she will state that no one should trust the Slut Life company. Doing this will cause problems for her, but the situation is already really bad for her. Unless Arbor was the only one involved, unlikely since he stated he will have to spend his own favors to fix this, then the people behind this will go after her again since she got out of it by "sacrificing" her mom and friend.
To get out of this and not cause any problems, she can then bargain that for there to be no issues from her group, her mother and Tori get out of their contract with Arbor and Taylor gets her original contract back. In return they wont say anything about what happened. She can further help Arbor push for this by going alone with this by saying that when they brought this to him, Arbor was very helpful and competent in resolving this situation. Arbor looks good for the company and doesn't spend any favors and Slut Life doesn't have to worry about the complications this scandal will bring. Of course, Taylor will have to have another contract to protect herself from further retaliation. As for staying in character, I'm sure between the three of them they can figure out this idea.