Immoral Saint
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Aleh said:Also, Issei is seriously OOC as of the confrontation with Sun Wukong's divine beasts.
It's a continuation of the one on Fanfiction.net.Silver W. King said:Is this a rewrite? It flows a lot better than the one of FF.Net.
touhou ranfuku said:Would you mind elaborating this? I'm trying to improve the story so this thread is the beta stage.
Aleh said:Issei hiding his power when girls are in danger? Yeaaaaaaah.
Hiding his perversion even that long? Yeaaaaaaaaaah.
Etc., etc., etc. He's a really straightforward guy, Touhou. Treat him accordingly.
Reasonable. Problem is, Issei isn't the brightest bulb in the pack by a long short, and has a libido powerful enough to make him act stupid most of the time. Unless being a dragon and being in Campione verse massively screw up his brain, soon enough Issei will fall back on his perverted side. And staying in Campione verse to train because he wants to be strong, without his friends/lovers? I give him less than a month before going "screw you" and go back.touhou ranfuku said:At least one Campione was presented at that scene, Issei himself considered Campione is stronger than him due to their god-slaying nature, there's a factor of fearing to fight them every time after his real identity got discovered, then it could lead them to follow him back to his homeworld to challenge gods and god-like beings (his first impression was Luo Hao).
I thought the trunks part was showing his true nature? Beside in canon whenever the female was too strong (Grayfia) he didn't show any perverted thought to them, this was true in the early vol where he feared that Rias might turn him to ash if he did anything stupid to her without permission.
touhou ranfuku said:At least one Campione was presented at that scene, Issei himself considered Campione is stronger than him due to their god-slaying nature, there's a factor of fearing to fight them every time after his real identity got discovered, then it could lead them to follow him back to his homeworld to challenge gods and god-like beings (his first impression was Luo Hao).
I thought the trunks part was showing his true nature? Beside in canon whenever the female was too strong (Grayfia) he didn't show any perverted thought to them, this was true in the early vol where he feared that Rias might turn him to ash if he did anything stupid to her without permission.