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Industrial Commander: Not Enough Pockets

If mc truly wants to do galaxy wide trade he really needs better software for trading, he is really bad at estimating value or selling things for market price.
 
Batarians - 14
The Batarian War Front


I had besieged most planets belonging to the Batarians. Excluding any Batarian Colonies that I don't actually know about. I was making progress on all fronts. Khar'shan being the easiest, surprisingly. The decapitation of leadership had left the Batarians completely headless, and there were requests for reinforcements across the board to Khar'shan. My attacks also started a few slave riots, as they realized the detonation collars that they had, just were not working. I was removing bomb collars by the thousands. As well as taking a ton of POWs.

The Batarians Hegemony and Religious Caste were a real pain though. The higher ups of the Batarian Hegemony were just not giving up. I'm not talking just on Khar'Shan either. Everyone higher up were causing problems. They weren't even indoctrinated yet! They were just assholes! The Reaper corpse was still in the Dis system, where I pretty much killed anything that had visited the site, including the STG Agents and Researchers. I'm almost completely certain that no one has actually realized that the system has gone completely dark as I'm moving the Reaper in a secure hauler, with radioactive lasers evaporating any contaminants that originate from the reaper.

Now then. Technically, I won the war after just a few hours. Achieved completely spacial supremacy, cut off supplies to every Batarian planet, and decapitated the heads of their government from giving out orders. The Relays were impounding traffic into them by the hundreds. I've been capturing many agents from various empires. Politely of course. Much to their displeasure as I confiscated many hidden communication devices. I actually had a Humanitarian Aid Group arrive?! The hell are they doing here? How did they get past the Citadel Patrols?!?!

I can't deal with that right now, letting the side of my mind deal in politics deal with the politics of that. I was deploying Hunter Drones en masse to save hostages taken by the Batarian… patriots? Technically they are patriots? Suicidal slaving patriots, but still patriots none the less. Regardless, things were starting to cool down outside of the combat zones. I was exporting my new citizens by the billions back into my space. I was basically kidnapping an entire race and leaving the Batarian Planets behind for the Citadel to scavenge. I had a City Planet already plotted out and in construction, and better yet. It could support both Dextro and Levo based life. It was technically an Ecumenopolis. It could house the entirety of the population that I was kidnapping.

So, I was basically transporting a bunch of people kept in stasis for safety purposes to a world where I could take care of them as bio-trophies… That sounded bad out loud. Regardless, after they gain true citizenship I'll let them go exploring and do other things. I wonder if I'll get any geniuses from this? Heh, I'd like it if I did. Definitely going to have to promote mandatory schooling. Ah, I need to remind the Civilian Industries part of my mind to learn how to specialize learning for each race. We got to figure out how different they are in terms of learning potential.

— Batarian Oligarch

Three of my eyes had been blinded. I suspect it is a punishment from my ancestors for failing them. The damned machine had practically conquered our worlds in a few hours. I didn't even know we were under attack until it was far too late. We were getting drowned in pure numbers. The Prophet died in the first attack, destroyed by a crashed machine ship. What was even more humiliating… was that our slaves were being stolen right underneath us!

Hmm… at least the Batarian race would survive I suppose. Almost everyone in the ruling caste were still fighting. Slaves long gone. It was a hopeless fight. They would soon run out of thermal clips. I looked at my pistol. Decision made. I wouldn't let myself get locked into this body. I addressed my advisor.

"Store my head somewhere the machine won't find it." I put the pistol to the side of my head…



I wasn't really holding back in my attack. I preserved a couple of lives. But I wasn't hesitating to put people who fought back down. Especially after I already asked them to surrender. I had finally managed to make it deep into Khar'Shans main palace though. They had fought hard against my army. But they were dead, and I was marching my forces to the Oligarch's last safe room. Opening the door revealed two corpses. A quick search through my database revealed that this was the Advisor and the Oligarchs body. I wonder what they did with the head?

What did they think I was going to disrespect their traditions and cut his eyes out? … I wouldn't be surprised if I did that honestly. I have had most of my emotions of anger and guilt completely shut off when I started this war. I really wanted to use the Oligarch as a tool to help remove the culture of pervasive slavery from my new citizens. Was also going to get him to force the other colonies to surrender faster. I put most of my efforts into conquering Khar'shan first in order to take the ruling class and use them to force the others to bend.

Eh, oh well. At most this will cause the war to continue for a few more days as I clean up the remnants. I'll start researching their brainwashing methods in the meantime, and figure out how to reverse that. Out of the roughly sixteen billion residents of Batarian territories, around sixteen billion survived. Yeah, I only killed around sixteen million people. Still a large amount. But, most of the population was actually slaves or lower castes which I was able to conquer pretty easily without a lot of bloodshed.

Only six hundred thousand of them were alien races. Talk about a disproportionate success gap. It also explains a bit on why the Citadel were so against enforcing Citadel law on the Batarians. Most of the time, the Batarians were enslaving their own. It was extremely rare for one of the races on the Citadel to have their colonies actually attacked. The only exception to this were humans.
 
Regardless, after they gain true citizenship I'll let them go exploring and do other things.
Good thing he can constantly monitor them. There will always be that one idiot, homegrown or imported, that tries something dumb like causing chaos and strife to amass power for himself.
 
If he were to somehow transfer a star into the rail dimension would it accelerate it's transformation into an iron star as the dimension absorbs the energies it produces?

Thats... actually not a bad idea, the only problem would be preventing the machinery from falling into the star while your building the shunting device. The other issue would be the effects of gravity on the rails in the dimension.

A rough estimate is that the star would turn into a iron star in about two million years. Maybe longer, maybe shorter.
 
Thats... actually not a bad idea, the only problem would be preventing the machinery from falling into the star while your building the shunting device. The other issue would be the effects of gravity on the rails in the dimension.

A rough estimate is that the star would turn into a iron star in about two million years. Maybe longer, maybe shorter.
Kek. That's one way to get a lot of iron and power the expansion of the rail dimension. And if he figures out how to siphon energy from it a pretty good power source and battery till he figures out Zero Point/Vacuum Energy.

If he needs heavier elements he could always make a few transmutation devices.
 
OKay, so hear me out, just had an idea for when he make himself a people sized body.

Cant go wrong with a Cayde 6 model , not only that, but there are so many types you can give to the geth.
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The best type of stars to shunt, I think, would be giants since they burn through their hydrogen supply very quickly. Supergiants in real space could last a scant 10 million years. If he were to shunt them into the rail dimension he'd be expediting that process by a truly astronomical rate. Possibly even within a mortal lifespan(s)!

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That is of course if he's trying to get as much power and expansion in a shorter amount of time. If he wants a constant trickle of power to last long enough for him to almost never worry about refueling the expansion he could go with red dwarf stars. In realspace they can possibly last for 10 trillion years if left alone.
 
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K, I haven't been able to write on this story for a bit. So I am going to put it on pause for about two weeks, I am going to completely put it out of my head till then. So in two weeks from this post, feel free to remind me about this story. Then I will see if I can write on it again
 
That's a shame, just found/binged this, and it's pretty good. Kind of skimmed the first fe chapters that seemed mostly tech porn, but the interactions with other races were really neat.

Hope your muse gets back to it someday, at least.
 
Wait. He the salarian was hit by a kinetic dampener, how was the salarian hearing what was being said? Hearing requires the vibration of ear drums.
He had to ask his advisors how he had actually managed to supplement the U.N.'s control over the colonies beyond Earth.
I think that should be 'supplant'.
 
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Can you drop a link to wherever World Factory is?
 
Couple notes on the science stuff - nuclear reactor can refer to both fission and fusion reactors, and 200GB is way too low to run any kind of full AI. The human brain is estimated to have about 2.5 million gigs of ram equivalent.

Thanks for the story, interested to see where it goes.
 
K, I haven't been able to write on this story for a bit. So I am going to put it on pause for about two weeks, I am going to completely put it out of my head till then. So in two weeks from this post, feel free to remind me about this story. Then I will see if I can write on it again
Well 2 week passed this humble one ask for more
 
Just found and binged this. Apparently it's been the promised two weeks so I am asking for more chapters. Gimme my tech porn.
 
15
BATARIAN HIERARCHY GONE?]

I looked at the headline in the local news on Starport. It had been three months since the loss of the Batarian Hierarchy. I was dealing with a few issues since then. Namely the Citadel Races and their associates demanding their people back, since I let it slip that I had taken them as citizens. I also had active protests against my takeover of the Batarian race. Definitely organized by the Batarians that weren't within Batarian Space. The people I had taken though… they were actually doing fairly well. I had outlawed the Batarian religion. Or, more appropriately I outlawed publicly displaying it. Worshiping the Batarian religion in private is technically not illegal.

It wouldn't immediately upend the Batarian ideology and remove the culture. But give it a couple generations and things will change. In my investigations I found that most are forced into it. Banning the public display would prevent religious persecution. I did have a few protesting for freedom of religion. So I extended the law to all religious ideologies. Technically I am a Christian. So that wasn't easy to declare. I still worshiped Christ in private. Declaring your religion also wasn't technically illegal. It was just the public practice of religion that was banned. I'm uncertain if I'll keep that policy instituted or not. May remove it after a few years. I'll figure it out eventually, the Mass Effect and Terminator universe turns out to have existed, so if I somehow provoke the Chaos I may be forced to strengthen that policy instead of removing it.

The Asari were in a panic, and have been trying to sanction me. Especially since I have started to attack them politically. The Salarian and Turian leaders had decided to work with me to suppress the Asari. I may or may not have revealed the Asari's secret Prothean archives. Which allowed me to get the Dalatrass and Turian Leaders to pressure the Asari and sanction them. What is amusing is that it was hitting them harder than a war would have. You see, the Asari do not control their own economy in the slightest, they rely on their powerful political power to keep the way of life that most Asari live. They honestly remind me of what I know about the Eldar. Except not as independent.

The Salarians have decided on a mutual deal of scientific pursuit. I wasn't trusting them. I was vetting the split that I had sent to facilitate research between them constantly. I didn't trust the Salarians in the slightest. Especially since I was finding more and more evidence that the Salarians were preventing the Quarians from actually contacting the Geth. Meaning the Salarians were forcing the Geth War to perpetuate. Preventing Geth paranoia from dying down.

On another note, I have successfully acted as a therapist for several Quarian Terrorists and they were residing on my Starports peacefully, much to many anti-machine Quarians chagrin. I hadn't managed to get them to view the Geth in a positive note, but they weren't outright trying to attack the Geth Platforms on the Starport. The Geth were integrating well on my Starports though. I'm pretty sure they had built relations with several humans on the Starport. One of my stranger human friends has declared a Geth Platform as their girlfriend. The Platform has not denied it. I was examining the code that allowed this to occur to make sure it wasn't some kind of virus. Because there is no way that guy managed to somehow convince someone to go out with him.



The Technological side of things was going at a constant rate. I was successfully recreating Eezo at a faster rate. I was able to integrate Eezo in a lot of my technology at a more reliable rate, which would allow me to build even bigger ships. The ability to reduce the mass of my ships was too reliable to ignore. I wasn't going to ignore the benefits and focus only on the negatives. While I was still investing in non-eezo tech. I was also investing eezo tech. I had the resources after all.

My attempt at a Dyson Sphere failed again though. I got the math wrong and it collapsed into the star in the system I was working in. The Geth were making much better attempts than I was. I wasn't going to be falling behind those children for much longer though. My third attempt will definitely work!



The Systems Alliance civil war with the UEG was going… well. The UEG has been forced to the negotiations table. The UEG alienating the main space power within their system turned out to be a bad idea. As they were practically starved of resources and power. It's kind of hard to pressure the rest of the population when everyone out of the planet is supporting the Systems Alliance. Sure, there were random people who disliked the Systems Alliance and tried to cause terror attacks. But it didn't work out for them. After the events at my second Starport they had escalated their own security.

The Systems Alliance were pressuring the UEG into folding, and the UEG was dealing with mass riots on Earth. As the people there wanted the same freedoms that the people of the Systems Alliance had. It was interesting to watch, I still trading with the Systems Alliance massively boosting their economy as well. Reinforcing the decision to separate from the UEG.



With everything going on, and while I was receiving pushback for things as I had mentioned. On the ground level? I was doing really well. I was communicating and talking with normal citizens all the time. From investing into colonies to making the second coming of Skype/Discord. I gained a massive following among the citizens of the Systems Alliance, I had to start setting up a way for legal immigration. Skills really didn't matter that much for me, I just needed the people to enrich culturally. I am technically a Post-Scarcity race after all.
 
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One of my stranger human friends has declared a Geth Platform as their girlfriend. The Platform has not denied it. I was examining the code that allowed this to occur to make sure it wasn't some kind of virus. Because there is no way that guy managed to somehow convince someone to go out with him.

"Hey baby wanna grab coffee?"

"This platform lacks taste receptors."

"The boss man in charge probably has AI coffee, it's all good."

"This platform has no female characteristics."

"Hey, love is love, I'm down."

"This platform is made up of over one million Geth programs."

"...So you're saying I'll have a harem?"

From "Humanity, Fuck Yeah", to "Humanity Fucks, Yeah". :V

Also, nice to see some more of this one.
 
. I hadn't managed to get them to view the Geth in a positive note, but they weren't outright trying to attach the Geth Platforms on the Starport. The Geth were integrating well on my Starports though. I'm pretty sure they had built relations with several humans on the Starport.

attack*
 
So I extended the law to all religious ideologies. Technically I am a Christian. So that wasn't easy to declare. I still worshiped Christ in private.
Not a problem at all! Christianity historically has done best under persecution, good and easy times actually is detrimental to true faith.
 
I just realized that while dwarf stars might last incredibly long in realspace they might not as long in railspace like the giant stars.
Not a problem at all! Christianity historically has done best under persecution, good and easy times actually is detrimental to true faith.
Kinda like how people seek to get scared. A little pain and discomfort stops the numbness and boredom settling in. Kek.
 
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Kinda like how people seek to get scared. A little pain and discomfort stops the numbness and boredom settling in. Kek.
More like fear and suffering weeds out the true believers from those who says they are, its easy to identify as a Christian when you live a cosy, safe life in a liberal country and not in a place where you get beheaded with a dull knife for doing so. Take for example america, a majority of people there says they are Christians but sure as hell dont live like one and then you have people like the copts of egypt or the russian old believers or nigerian Christians.
 

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