I awoke to weightlessness within the void. The world came into shape around me. I glanced...
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I might do that eventually, but not yet. Lemme finish the Half Life Arc first.Seems interesting and I look forward to more. One thing though, you might think about setting up a character sheet with his current perks and explanations of what they do and where he got them. I've seen it done in other jumpchain stories before and it's pretty helpful, especially for new readers.
Interesting start. Decent Dialogue I am looking forward to more.
Thanks! I've been working on improving my ability to do dialogue. It's one of the hardest things for me to actually do in writing.
There isn't an informational tab, only Threadmarks, Index, and Extras. I have it on the extras.I know your pain. As a side note, I'd suggest putting up an informational threadmark where you post the links of the jumps you use. It might be helpful.
Where is the first one? I can't find a Black MeasSpelling mistakes in chapter 1:
"BlackMeas" should be "Mesa"
"based on the explosiveseen" should be "scene"
In the jump build, the location MC is inserted