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Maggot [Worm AU] [Male OC]

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Taylor Hebert isn't unique in her suffering. Especially when you are her brother. Meet Robert Hebert. Shattered from trauma and failing to piece himself together watch the path of another Hebert as he spirals. Taylor did the wrong things for the right reasons. What kind of choices will her twin make?

OC Male Protag, Massive AU, and a whole lot of other stuff. Mainly just my autistic ass wanting to post something and see if I can actually commit to this. AI has been used for grammar spelling corrections. Nothing else.
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I like the concept. You can do a lot of things by allying the twins, making them compete, or setting them against each other. I also like that the male protagonist is apparently not a SI. I think Robert overdid the self-flagellation part a bit. Without the context, it looks a little excessive.
 
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I like the concept. You can do a lot of things by allying the twins, making them compete, or setting them against each other. I also like that the male protagonist is apparently not a SI. I think Robert overdid the self-flagellation part a bit. Without the context, it looks a little excessive.
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Initially, Robert was just going to be an SI of myself without context knowledge. But then that became less appealing as I built up the AU background details. Besides, who wants to see some more SIs curbstomp Worm? I'd rather see this kid I made suffer.

Yeah. I think I might have overdone it a bit. Usually how it goes with me. But it was more of a lapse in judgment on his part. Kinda just him desperate for something to make it bearable. Might revise it but don't have any plans at the moment.
 
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