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She checked the toilets. She can't be expected to think of everything.Given that Taylor went to school with these people, the fact that she didn't check the storage closets bothers me.
EDIT: Not just that it didn't occur to her that someone might be hiding in one (I can easily believe kids going in there to smoke, do other drugs, or make out), but that she didn't think that anyone might have been tied up in one by a bully, or was cutting class to take a nap.
Gladly turned to face her, clipboard held defensively. "All out except for, uh, Greg Veder. I'm not sure about him, ma'am."
Carrie took the clipboard and eyed the results. "You marked him out of the classroom, so he was present then," she observed.
Gladly nodded. "Uh, yes."
She sighed. "I've been checking with the other teachers. We've got ninety percent attendance here. This is better than the last time we held a fire drill. However." She fixed the dull-looking student with a hard gaze. "Tell me exactly what you know about Greg Veder."
The kid wilted after about three seconds. "Said he had to take a wicked leak," he mumbled.
"Ah." Carrie rolled her eyes. "Which means he's probably finished and out here already. But just in case." She pulled out her phone, then retrieved the slip of paper from her pocket. Carefully, she tapped in the number.
"You've reached the Samaritans. This is Sparx. How can I help you?" The voice was young, female and brisk.
"This is Principal Blackwell," Carrie said carefully. "We think there might be one or more of our students in the bathrooms."
"One second." She heard a muffled conversation, but could not make out the words. Moments later, Sparx spoke to her again. "All bathrooms have been checked. Classrooms and hallways have already been swept, but we'll do it again. No students have yet been found. If we do find any, we'll escort them out immediately."
Carrie Blackwell felt a sense of relief wash through her. "Thank you."
"Was there anything else?"
"Uh, no, no, there wasn't."
"Well, we're a little busy, so I'm going to hang up now. Have a good day."
The call ended; she took deep breaths, feeling just a little light-headed. With the Slaughterhouse Nine on the way, there was no way in hell that she wanted to go back into that school and search for missing students. Some will have wandered off already, or gone home, or whatever. So long as they're not in the damn school.
Gladly was still looking at her, like a dog expecting a treat. She smiled thinly. "He's not in the school." With a firm hand and a clear conscience, she drew a line through Greg Veder's name and handed the clipboard back.
He took it, examining it, then finally nodded. "Yes, Principal Blackwell."
She nodded curtly. "All right then." Raising a loudspeaker to her mouth, she continued in a much louder voice. "Everyone, I would like your attention. Buses have been provided. You will now proceed to the bus stop and board the buses. Move. Move. Move."
Seriously, wow? You're hung up on that?The fact that Taylor did not check the closets, lockers, and so forth is going to keep bugging me (I can believe Greg being this unwise, but Taylor not checking, or Greg being able to hide from her if she did check, is rather far beyond my SoD - sure, characters should make mistakes, but this isn't one that I can believe), but that's apparently something that won't be changed.
Like I said, I can accept people making mistakes, because people do make mistakes. I know this, because I went to high school in Florida. This is not a mistake I find plausible (she went to school with these people, after all, so I would think she'd expect multiple people to be hiding or napping in out of the way locations, otherwise pushing back the bounds of human stupidity, or possibly tied up somewhere by bullies), but I cannot think of a way to make it work, and I have accepted that you are not going to change it (as I said in the post you quoted).Seriously, wow? You're hung up on that?
Okay, several reasons:
1) It's a big fucking school. Taylor has a (relatively) limited number of bugs on hand (due to pyrethrum bombs driving her bugs into hiding). She can sweep big areas quickly. Every single locker, every single closet, not so much.
2) Bugs have shit vision. The storage closet has a door that's flush with the wall and painted the same colour as the surrounding walls. The bugs, flying down the middle of the corridor, missed it.
3) The storage closet has had bleach and insecticide spilled in it. No bugs are living in there. Therefore, Taylor didn't pick it up when he entered.
4) She's not actively expecting anyone to be so stupid as to hide.
5) She's not perfect. Everyone can make mistakes. Trust me; I'm a professional security guard. I know.
Hiding in the bathrooms or other normally-human accessible locations (including the roof) is something she swept for.Like I said, I can accept people making mistakes, because people do make mistakes. I know this, because I went to high school in Florida. This is not a mistake I find plausible (she went to school with these people, after all, so I would think she'd expect multiple people to be hiding or napping in out of the way locations, otherwise pushing back the bounds of human stupidity, or possibly tied up somewhere by bullies), but I cannot think of a way to make it work, and I have accepted that you are not going to change it (as I said in the post you quoted).
... and this is not what I have a problem with, as I've already said (those were examples, less generalized than 'otherwise pushing back the bounds of human stupidity'). Greg not being found by her bugs bugs my SoD, for reasons I am not going to repeat so as not to continue the derail. I cannot think of a way to fix the issue, and you seem determined to have this happen, so I am done with this conversation. I will most likely read the next part, as it is a good story, and I've not dropped other mostly-good fics that had SoD-straining events in them (you may take it as a credit to your writing skills that I'm willing to do this).Hiding in the bathrooms or other normally-human accessible locations (including the roof) is something she swept for.
Nobody was waylaid by bullies and tied up and left during the actual evacuation.
People in lockers would be making lots of noise. Her bugs would have picked that up, too.
Like I said, I can accept people making mistakes, because people do make mistakes. I know this, because I went to high school in Florida. This is not a mistake I find plausible (she went to school with these people, after all, so I would think she'd expect multiple people to be hiding or napping in out of the way locations, otherwise pushing back the bounds of human stupidity, or possibly tied up somewhere by bullies), but I cannot think of a way to make it work, and I have accepted that you are not going to change it (as I said in the post you quoted).
Is criminal stupidity a chargeable offence?Just caught up on this and quickly weighing in on Greg hiding in the closet and Taylor missing him, it's very possible, as Ack said the door was flush and the same colour as the wall and honestly when you were at high school how often did you remember every closet, nook and cranny in the place especially when you were under a known time limit?
So yes I can very easily believe Greg managed to hide, although he should be expelled at the very least along with reckless endangerment charges. Criminal stupidity would be good as well.
Should be, but sadly isn't.
True.It depends; if your stupidity results in, say, driving while drunk then yes, yes it is.
Usually falls under negligence, reckless endangerment and/or manslaughter.
Methinks Greg is going to be charged under reckless endangerment.Usually falls under negligence, reckless endangerment and/or manslaughter.
If it's not a chargeable offense, it's not criminal stupidity, now is it? (Well, I suppose non-illegal stupidity committed by people who are criminals would also qualify as 'criminal stupidity'. But that doesn't apply here.)
Well, the problem with that is that prions actually cause (minor) brain damage. Constantly rewriting the way her brain works would be ... problematic.Hey, now that Amy has access to a power disabling prion and its antidote, could she add an artificial organ in Lisa that could synthesize either, under voluntary control?
No need for additional nerve connections, it could be tied to some muscle controls and activate only on a movement that people normally never do.
It'd be a good way to avoid headaches, and it would allow her to date people if she wants.
By looking at your post count and join date, I can tell that you've only joined QQ recently, but we have rules about thread necromancy here on this site. Specifically, you shouldn't bump a thread that's gone more than one month without a post unless you ask the author's permission.Minor??? look up "Spongiform Encephilopathy". Prions literally eat holes in your brain, making your brain like Swiss cheese, or a sponge.