In moments of despair, you receive the strength that will help you become something more than...
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although I do not deny that I could be wrongEnglish is not my native language or the language I am learning. so I don't understand where I should press to start uploading. it seems like other authors posts looked different than normal comments, so I'm not sure if I'm doing something right
in fact, the fic has already been written for 7 chapters + Pertinax's classification from PRT. so he already has good regeneration and a bunch of other ways to heal his handthe MC should try to make "Slow Regeneration", I think it would only cost a level 2 charge. It may take a several hours for the arm to regenerate, but later you can upgrade it with another level 2 charge to make it a level 3 power.
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I think level 4 regeneration would put him up to wolverine level. minor wounds heal in seconds and limbs regenerate in minutes.
and the improvement from strength grows exponentially. therefore, level 4 will allow him to grow an arm within a minute.
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I think level 4 regeneration would put him up to wolverine level. minor wounds heal in seconds and limbs regenerate in minutes.
He knows his power is manipulating him but it doesn't seem to worry him that much? Is it his power that prevents him from paying attention to it? Because I would tend to think that by realizing the manipulation he would have started to doubt all these decisions, not knowing if it was he or his power who chose...but I will be glad if you ask something or even try to criticize (because I like to argue and I already have an explanation in my head for almost everything written)
he once tried to resent this fact, but his strength just made him a little indifferent to itHe knows his power is manipulating him but it doesn't seem to worry him that much? Is it his power that prevents him from paying attention to it? Because I would tend to think that by realizing the manipulation he would have started to doubt all these decisions, not knowing if it was he or his power who chose...
With such a distinctive physical trait as the absence of an arm, doesn't that make it easier to discover one's identity?[/
Not that Pertinax cares about his secret identity right now.
Unwritten rules don't really work and he saw it with his own eyes
You are doing soo much better than most people that it's not even funny, i think you really should ignore that post and continue wiht the fic. i wish I had the guts to post mine because I an such a idiot lol
You are doing soo much better than most people that it's not even funny, i think you really should ignore that post and continue wiht the fic. i wish I had the guts to post mine because I an such a idiot lol
I wouldnt quite put it in this way, but unfortunately I do agree with the sentiment.I'm out. This mc is so stupid. The grammar is trash and the story plot is boring as fuck.
in general, if you criticize, you should offer something yourself. and if you really don't like something, you should just leave, there is no need to write about itI wouldnt quite put it in this way, but unfortunately I do agree with the sentiment.