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[AndrewJTalon]

Also, nobody's thought to do anything with Demoman as Nora's mentor/father figure? Nothing at all?

(I am working on more Arc Clan but come on guys!)

I see it this way: Tavish Finnegan DeGroot, aka Demoman's real name, finally retired after the Gravel Wars ended. The Mann Co. warfare ended as per the comics, with the heirs to RED and BLU both deciding this war was stupid and to move on. And so did the Mercs. Degroot moved to the Valley of Peace in Mistral, where he sought inner peace after years of being constantly enraged.

While Ren was taken in as a prodigy in the Jade Palace from the local orphanage, Nora was found to have no talent for Kung Fu at all. But, she fixated on Demoman because she liked things blowing up. Demoman for his part tried to discourage her, but she persisted. She got struck by lightning when she was swinging around one of his old warhammers-He was terrified she was dead, but she was actually superpowered! The blast had activated her Semblance.

And he rather liked her goofy nature. So he trained her in melee combat and how to use/create explosives without blowing herself up. Not that he would admit he liked the lass.


Tavish Finnegan DeGroot: "Awww, ye wee little baby! Get outta here wit' yer boyfriend and blow up some Grimm! Like I care-!"

Nora hugs him tightly

Nora: "I love you, Master!"

Tavish Finnegan DeGroot: "..." Sniffles, hugs her back "Aye... Damnit lass... Ya gotta make me feel these things...?"

Nora: "I mean... I never knew my dad. Only my mom and..."

Degroot: "... Aye..."

Nora: "But Master... If I had a dad, I wish he was like you."

DeGroot: sniffles more "... Ah, get goin' already, ya bint! Before I really lose it!"

Nora: beams "Okay!"

She runs off. DeGroot sighs and watches her go with Ren.

DeGroot: "... He'd better take good care of her..."

 

[Bev]

Ren: I fear no man... But him... He scares me.

Just one little sniffle from Nora, one drop of tear!

I won't be a problem anymore.

 

[Handspan]

I hope Nora doesn't inherit the Degroot curse. The entire family ends up losing an eye at one point or another.

 

[TheFabulousCustodes]

Basically... Which is why RWBY's story went to shit and Jaune is the only real hero left. Such incompetent writing.

And no, no one has. Go for it!

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Wouldn't Jaune be both a regular hero, and superhero?

Huntsmen like Jaune are already regular everyday heroes on Remnant.

But he's also secretly the Rusted Knight, protector of lost children, the Ever Afterans, and beloved by millions.

 

[AndrewJTalon]

Technical Profile: AD-Venture Capitalist

• Type: Luxury Yacht/Command Airship
• Manufacturer: Schnee Dust Corporation (primary design and funding); Nachfolger Industries (engineering and construction)
• Origin: Atlas
• Role: Private luxury transport, corporate command platform, prestige display, defensive operations
• First Deployment: Year 76 Post-Great War
• Cost: Exorbitant (bespoke materials, rare Dust variants, and cutting-edge technology)
• Dimensions:
  • Length: 60 meters
  • Width: 22 meters (including aerodynamic stub wings)
  • Height: 15 meters
  • Weight: 35,000 kg (unladen); 50,000 kg (max takeoff)
• Crew: 15 (2 pilots, 2 navigators, 1 command officer, 2 gunners, 2 Dust technicians, 8 service staff); up to 20 passengers (VIPs, corporate executives, or Huntsmen escorts)
• Cargo: 18,000 pounds (luxury goods, Dust reserves, or personal effects)
• Powerplant: Three Gravity Dust Reactors (silent, high-efficiency lift, augmented with Crystal Dust for aesthetic glow); two Combustion Dust turbines for thrust
• Performance:
  • Top Speed: 220 mph (354 km/h)
  • Service Ceiling: 26,000 feet
  • Range: 1,000 miles (extendable to 1,400 miles with external Dust pods)
• Armament:
  • 1 x Nachfolger Mk. VI 20mm Dust-Accelerated Autocannon (retractable, roof-mounted, Fire and Ice Dust rounds, 700 rounds/min)
  • 20 x Concealed Vertical Missile Launch Tubes (Hard-Light Dust guided rockets, Lightning Dust EMP missiles, Ice Dust suppression bombs)
  • 2 x Concealed Heavy Machine Guns (8mm, Gravity Dust-enhanced, 1,500 rounds/min, AI or crew-operated, hidden in hull panels)
  • 1 x Anti-Grimm Sonic Disruptor Array (80-meter radius, disorients lesser Grimm)
• Defenses:
  • Reinforced titanium-ceramic hull with Crystal Dust-infused plating (resistant to 15mm rounds and Grimm claws, with aesthetic shimmer)
  • Dual-Layer Hardlight Dust Shielding System (sustains 10 minutes of moderate bombardment)
  • Countermeasure Drones (Crystal Dust flares and Hard-Light decoys for visual elegance and Grimm deterrence)
  • Anti-Grimm Sonic Field (continuous low-frequency pulse, 100-meter radius, deters smaller Grimm)
  • Electronic Countermeasures (ECM): Dust-powered jammers to disrupt enemy targeting systems
• Avionics:
  • "Crystal Nexus" Command Suite (thermal, Dust-signature, and motion detection; tracks up to 30 targets for defensive operations)
  • AI-Assisted Defense System (optimizes targeting and countermeasure deployment; prioritizes non-lethal deterrence)
  • Secure Comms Array (encrypted links to SDC headquarters, Atlas command, and private networks)
  • Holographic Display Interface (Crystal Dust-powered, for corporate briefings and navigation)
• Special Features:
  • Luxury Deck: Opulent interior with marble flooring, Dust-infused chandeliers (Crystal Dust for ambiance), private suites, a banquet hall, and a panoramic observation lounge with Hard-Light windows
  • Modular Command Suite: Configurable for corporate meetings, diplomatic negotiations, or emergency Huntsmen operations
  • Dust Refueling Probe: Mid-air Dust canister swaps for extended travel
  • Amphibious Sealing: Sealed hull for water landings and limited submersion (up to 2 meters) for coastal retreats
  • Aura Nexus Core: Amplifies passenger Aura for comfort and minor combat support
  • Stealth Coating: Crystal Dust-based hull paint reduces radar signature and enhances visual elegance
  • Automated Service Drones: Dust-powered robots for catering, cleaning, and guest services
  • Escape Yacht: Compact, Dust-powered sub-vessel (seats 6) for emergency evacuation

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Design Philosophy and DevelopmentThe AD-Venture Capitalist was commissioned by Jacques Schnee to embody the Schnee Dust Corporation's wealth and influence, serving as both a private yacht for leisure and a mobile corporate headquarters. Nachfolger Industries, known for its performance-driven designs, collaborated with SDC to blend opulence with combat-ready survivability, ensuring Jacques could travel Remnant's skies in safety and style. The airship's modest size balances prestige with a lower target profile, avoiding the overt aggression of larger military vessels. Development took 36 months, with Nachfolger adapting their military spec Gravity Dust reactors and Hardlight Dust systems for luxury and defense. The hull incorporates rare Crystal Dust for a shimmering aesthetic, while the interior features bespoke craftsmanship—marble, velvet, and Dust-infused decor. Tested in controlled Atlasian airspace and against simulated Grimm attacks, the AD-Venture Capitalist proved its ability to withstand threats while maintaining elegance. Its high cost reflects its bespoke nature, reserved exclusively for Jacques and select SDC elites.

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Capabilities in Remnant's Context

• Luxury Transport: The AD-Venture Capitalist is Jacques' personal palace in the sky, offering unmatched comfort for corporate retreats, diplomatic missions, or leisure trips. Its observation lounge and banquet hall host high-profile guests, while automated service drones cater to every whim.
• Command and Control: The modular command suite doubles as a corporate boardroom or tactical hub, coordinating SDC operations or Huntsmen escorts. The "Crystal Nexus" suite tracks threats and allies, ensuring Jacques' safety during travel.
• Defensive Firepower: Though not a primary combat vessel, its 20mm autocannon and hardpoint munitions deter aerial Grimm or rogue airships. Concealed machine guns and sonic arrays handle smaller threats, preserving the airship's pristine exterior.
• Survivability: The titanium-ceramic hull and dual-layer Aura shields withstand moderate attacks, while Crystal Dust stealth coating and ECM reduce its visibility. Countermeasure drones add flair and function, deterring Grimm without compromising aesthetics.
• Strategic Reach: A 1,000-mile range (1,400 with Dust pods) and 26,000-foot ceiling enable transcontinental travel, from Atlas' elite circles to Mistral's trade hubs. Amphibious sealing supports landings on private coastal estates.
• Psychological Impact: The airship's shimmering hull and grandiose design project SDC's dominance, intimidating rivals and reinforcing Jacques' status. Its presence signals untouchable wealth, even in Remnant's dangerous skies.

 

[cavalal386]

Basically... Which is why RWBY's story went to shit and Jaune is the only real hero left. Such incompetent writing.

And no, no one has. Go for it!

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sadly i have no talent as a writer, otherwise i would already done it.

 

[IvanR1314]

sadly i have no talent as a writer, otherwise i would already done it.

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on the pbright side, even if you want to make drafts for critiquing, the RWBY later Volumes are what NOT to do.