Zaheed551g
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This is not bad but it just feels like a forced plot point if I am honest. Either way we'll done chapter and can't wait for more.
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"Well well… So eager! Just wanted to skip the foreplay, hm?"
"Fuck you, you insane whore," Jaune seethed.
"Mmm, yeah, talk dirty to me," Iridescent giggled. Jaune growled, and his skin glowed. He swung his forehead against hers hard, sending a surge of Aura right against her!
"It's worse than you think," Yang shouted with a wicked grin, pulling her fist back as Ilia fell back down, "She's dating a blond human stud! She's gonna have his half-human babies!"
Blake glanced back momentarily, though she kept dodging around Albain's Wind Dust blasts.
Ilia's jaw dropped and her eyes widened as she fell.
"WHA-?!"
Just as Yang's fist met her face and sent her flying down the hallway through the concrete wall.
Can't lie happy to see this arc finishing. Jaune doing the exact thing he complained to Blake about is beyond dumb and well felt forced as hell. He threw out all his character development and put countless endanger just to hunt down Iridescent. The arc was not bad just not my cup of tea. Either way great chapter and cannot wait for more.
"Urk… Yeah…" He looked over at the flaming wreckage. He sighed.
"Yeah… We're done," he muttered.
"Hm?" Pyrrha asked. Jaune shook his head.
"Nothing… It's nothing."
Ruby tensed at that. Jaune looked over at her in concern. She slowly shook her head, and trembled again.
"I… I mean… They didn't find her body," she said carefully, "So…"
Iridescent walked in, naked save for a green poncho hastily thrown around her shoulders. Slick followed her at a respectful distance, lugging along a cylinder wrapped in a black garbage bag. Iridescent's hair had been burned to stumps on her head, but she remained fairly calm as she stepped in front of the holoscreen.
"He's registered as a student at Beacon! He's been attending classes!" Athena barked. "I don't understand what you're doing here but he's a Hunter-in-Training, just like my daughter! And he turned her into his slave-!"
...huh. this line suddenly made me picture Pyrrha as a redheaded and competent version of KonosubhaDarkness, who just wants a good man to collar her and treat her as a sex slave.
Then I realized the other option is that it's not Pyrrha who is Darkness, but her mother who has an Inner Darkness. After all, the lady doth protest too much about someone making her daughter a slave. "Lucky bitch, why couldn't that have been me?!?"
And then I remembered this story is in the Non-NSFW section of QQ, and had to edit some details into less explicit versions.
Denoted. Unless they were blowing up the students.
Jaune sighed and held Ruby tighter. "Ruby, I... kinda got into this a little with Yang, and I know you said she told you, but... I'm in the same boat. Combine my time here in Beacon with the six months it took for me to travel to Vale... I've had to fight way more people than I have Grimm. Honestly, my kill count for people is probably higher than my Grimm kill count."
Hmmm thinking about it, Nora could be a pretty good person to talk about it with Ruby. She and Ren have seen and done a lot of stuff, and bet not all of it was pretty and clean.Ren and Nora might have the highest body count at Beacon, which honestly explains alot about them.
The chapter was wonderful and I'm really loving all the character development!!
I'm glad that Ruby opened up about her thoughts on fighting people and I'm really looking forwards to a follow-up conversation about this.
Hmmm thinking about it, Nora could be a pretty good person to talk about it with Ruby. She and Ren have seen and done a lot of stuff, and bet not all of it was pretty and clean.