aoirann
All of the Kink. None of the guilt.
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I do have some ideas for it, but it's going to be rather slice of life.
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I do have some ideas for it, but it's going to be rather slice of life.
This is a super awkward description. If all sides are the same, it's a cube. The dimensions of one face are the dimensions of all faces. 'An 18-inch cube' is a much easier way to say it, even if visually measuring something that length in inches is something I don't expect out of people who aren't wargamers or carpenters. 'A cube a foot and a half across' is probably best.
Yeah I spent a lot of time working on that. Still wasn't stastified with it but I spent 20 minute on a single sentence as is.This is a super awkward description. If all sides are the same, it's a cube. The dimensions of one face are the dimensions of all faces. 'An 18-inch cube' is a much easier way to say it, even if visually measuring something that length in inches is something I don't expect out of people who aren't wargamers or carpenters. 'A cube a foot and a half across' is probably best.
I am considering writing a SI cyoa with a jailbroken Dauntless. Instead of charging objects the MC will be able to charge only himself with a charge every 24h. It would be slow getting results, but once you get going you keep getting stronger and stronger, after two years you can be as strong as the Triumvirate
I ran some numbers on Dauntless. He gets some visible effects when he hits 20 charges and a Triumvirate-level power upon hitting 20*20 (400) charges. By WoG, Dauntless rotates evenly between his objects. We also know that he would have become Triumvirate-tier by Golden Morning and that his armor wasn't visibly charged by the Leviathan fight on May 15, 2011 (meaning February 24, 2011 was the earliest he could have because begun charging it). If we make the following assumptions:Actually, Dauntless had four things he constantly charged. Boots, spear, armor and shield. If he charged those for around 3 years or so, he'd be near-Triumvirate strength. He had been around for some time when Leviathan killed him, after all. So if you pop up with a jailbroken shard of Dauntless' power, if your character focus on one thing only, he'd become a beast a lot quicker.
I'm sort of imagining this wedding being described (by a precognitive troll) to the original Vicky. Something like: "A couple of years after your death fighting Crawler, an abomination partially created by Bonesaw and known to the world as Victoria Dallon will attend the wedding of two more such abominations who are supposed to be Skitter and your sister. The only one who really sees them for what they are is Tattletale, whom your abomination torments."
Is his Cape name.... dare I say it?Army of Dorkness: Greg Veder triggers with the powers of Multiple Man, and goes out to try to be a hero. Sadly, he's still clueless, and more importantly, all his bodies are equally wimpy.
You should probably share that on the SB worm idea thread. It'll get a lot more traffic than here. The SFW fiction and idea threads are pretty dead around here.Apologies if this idea has already been done; I couldn't think of a good search term for it, and I don't have time to read through 51 pages of posts just to check. Anyway, I just got to Imp's interlude in the audiobook last night, and was struck by just how few small changes in canon it would have taken for the Undersiders to curb-stomp the Slaughterhouse Nine even faster and harder than Hope and friends (with a little under-the-table assistance from Contessa) did in Hope Comes to Brockton Bay.
First, somewhere along the line the Undersiders would have to have gotten hold of a sampling of Bakuda's ordnance. There are a few places in the story where that could have happened -- if the fight with Bakuda in Arc 4 had gone a little better for them, if they'd run across a stash of her stuff during the gang war in Arc 5, if they'd raided the arsenal as well as the databanks during their incursion into the PRT HQ in Arc 10, or if they'd managed to ally with the heroes and convince Miss Militia that they had a Stranger who could make effective use of the stuff against Crawler and/or Siberian (that last one's a stretch, but not impossible to sell in-story). Second, Imp would need to borrow the Bakuda grenades before going looking for the Nine.
So then we get a scenario where Imp strolls into the Nine's apartment, sticks a few Bakuda bombs (including crystallization and time-stopper, both of which are plausible Crawler-killers) under the couch where Burnscar and Shatterbird are sitting, and detonates them by remote control from the building lobby. Burnscar, Shatterbird, Bonesaw, and Crawler get turned into glass statues and frozen in time without ever knowing what hit them. On the way out, Aisha runs into Jack and Cherish, so she plants another bomb in the stairwell. Cherish goes into the mailroom to hide the dead detectives, so only Jack enters the stairwell and gets hit by the bomb effect (maybe a copy of the vibration bomb that liquefied Park Jihoo).
Cherish will still want to strike a deal, since she's afraid of being hunted down by the Siberian and/or Mannequin. With all the other members of the Nine in the building dead, she can just go with Imp to meet the other Undersiders, avoiding Bonesaw's wolf trap on the way out of the neighborhood.
With no Burnscar to drop in and take over his testing round, Mannequin then gets crunched by Grue with a sixty-pound chunk of rubble at the end of Snare 13.3. It might take a few hits, but his chest armor had already been cracked by Sirius chewing on it, so he probably wouldn't last long once Brian started pounding on him. That leaves only Siberian. Cherish will tell the Undersiders much sooner than in canon about her Achilles heel and point them in the right direction, because she expects Siberian to track her down and eat her alive if someone doesn't take out Manton first. With all six Undersiders and four Travelers hunting him, Manton probably doesn't stand a chance; Ballistic can nail him from a rooftop before he knows they're there, or Imp can stick a limpet mine on his truck (Coil could probably come up with one from his arsenal, or rig one up), or Grue and Sundancer can hide her sun under his darkness in a side alley and hit him with it as he drives by, or Trickster can swap him with a dummy that's just been thrown off the roof of a ten-story building -- between them, they have a lot of options for instantly lethal surprise attacks.
Amy might be a bit more amenable to accepting aid and hospitality from the Undersiders if they manage to save her from the Siberian before she loses any fingers, and wipe out the rest of the Nine into the bargain. (If Cherish is being really helpful, which she might in exchange for protection from her family, she could subtly tone down Amy's guilt and self-loathing while Taylor is talking to her, slowly enough that it feels natural. Cherie could have been the world's most successful psychotherapist if only she hadn't been so twisted by her upbringing. She'd also be motivated to get Amy cooperating with the group, because Amy's power could fix what she did to herself to pass Mannequin's test and alter her appearance to the point that she'd have a chance of evading both her brothers and people looking to carry out the kill order on her head.)
Dinah gave Coil a 9.5% chance of solving the Travelers' problem after Leviathan attacked, and he notes that it had been seven points higher prior to the Endbringer's arrival. I suspect that the possible futures in which Noelle was cured were the ones where the Undersiders succeeded in recruiting Amy, and the seven-point drop came from her antagonistic interaction with Skitter in the hospital after the fight. Even if Amy's power isn't the cure for Noelle, it might be able to alleviate the side-effects of Dinah's power, allowing her more leeway to use it without the crippling headaches. Then they might be able to have Dinah zero in on a possible future in which Noelle was cured and explain how it happens.
Getting Amy on their side also gives Taylor and Lisa options for beating Coil that his power can't defeat -- insect-borne bioweapons tailored just for him, with a long enough incubation period that they can be sure he's not running a timeline where he wasn't infected before they strike. He uses his power frequently enough that, if you can remember infecting him two days ago, you can be certain he's really infected in both his current timelines; if he'd been running an alternate timeline back then where you didn't infect him, and kept that one, you wouldn't have a memory of succeeding. Basically the way TanaNari had them take him down in Amelia, though it wouldn't have to be guinea worms; Amy could make something that would send him into a three-day coma, from which he then wakes up in PRT custody in both his timelines. If he wakes up at all -- as slippery as his power makes him, once the PRT finds out what it does, who he is, and what he did to Dinah, they might just issue a kill order and summarily execute him before he has the chance to attempt an escape.
So what does the government do when the "villain" group that just exterminated the Slaughterhouse Nine (and collected millions of dollars in bounties on them, most of which probably aren't conditional on the legal status of the person carrying out the kill order), then for an encore delivered Coil in chains to the PRT (revealing, to their consternation, that he was a traitor in their ranks) and brought Dinah Alcott home to her parents (freshly cured of her opiate addiction by Amy) says, "You know, we'd really rather be good guys if it's all the same to you; any chance of a pardon?" Probably in more formal terms than that, delivered via Quinn Calle or another high-priced lawyer. Between the bounties on the Nine and Lisa taking control of all Coil's legitimate business operations, they could pay back the money they stole in the bank job, cover the repairs to the building, and settle any lawsuits from people who got hurt during the robbery or the raid on the fundraiser out of petty cash.
Problem: Jack would not get caught like that. His Communication power would warn him to get out of the way as soon as Imp decided to plant the bomb.Cherish goes into the mailroom to hide the dead detectives, so only Jack enters the stairwell and gets hit by the bomb effect (maybe a copy of the vibration bomb that liquefied Park Jihoo).
eh, it's arguable just how much influence his shard has. it's certainly subtle enough that Jacks not aware his power has that ability and I dont know if it was ever shown to trump Imps power.Problem: Jack would not get caught like that. His Communication power would warn him to get out of the way as soon as Imp decided to plant the bomb.
Recently got a Like on this, and had an idea for this Taylor's power: Surveillance (and/or Drone) Tinker plus multitasking Thinker. It sounds like something pretty close to her canon power, but the results really don't need to be all that close.Shortly after Sarah Livesy arrives in Brockton Bay and starts calling herself 'Lisa', possibly even before she's on Coil's radar, she witnesses a girl being bullied outside a mall. As the bullies leave, the girl turns to stare at a building, and the Inference Engine tells its host that she's trying to work out if the building is tall enough to kill her instantly if she jumped off the roof, or if she'd suffer more, first. Lisa immediately decides to cheer the girl up, and they become friends.
It should not surprise the reader that the girl's name is Taylor Hebert.
Some time thereafter, Lisa disappears, having been kidnapped by Coil, and having decided to protect Taylor by cutting ties, without telling her anything that could make her depressed again.
Taylor, of course, isn't going to just accept her new best friend just mysteriously vanishing like that. Unfortunately, the police don't care about the disappearance of some random homeless girl, and somebody could be doing horrible things to Lisa RIGHT NOW and Taylor needs to sa-
DESTINATION
AGREEMENT
TRAJECTORY
AGREEMENT
-ve her.
... and now she can.
Not sure what power Taylor gets from this, but something Tinker-related should be possible. Whatever it is, it should be something she can munchkin into really scary crazy-awesome stuff.
Once the tourists wise up and stop wearing hats she'll have to find something new to steal.Prompt: Taylor triggers with the power to become completely unnoticeable(unknown to her it also works with shards) but as a side effect it gives her a major case of kleptomania, not wanting to become a villain she decides to sate her thieving needs by stealing hats from tourists. Meanwhile Contessa is investigating the disappearance of her beloved fedora.