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Seth’s Free Idea Emporium

Seth Vatamaris

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This is a place where I'll place all my general story ideas of works I've yet to start on.



Transformers

Heat of Attack - Netflix cartoon and Wreckers inspired, Unit of lesser known Autobots are stuck behind Decepticon lines are now tasked with a secret mission to turn the tide of the war

G1 Movie rewrite - includes other G1 elements

Transformers/Star Wars - IG-88 takes the All Spark and becomes one with the Death Star

Instruments of Destruction - Decepticon focused story


Multicross

Horny Rangers name change pending possibly Arcane Guardian's - based on NicoB's Let's Play of Chroma Squad using interpretations of his interpretations of the game characters he's inserted in his weird headcanon shared universe.


Star Wars

Tribe of Four - meant to feel like a coop shooter with 4 Mandalorian's hunting for a traitor and surviving the fall of their home

Mimban - dark war story of the Empire's war on Mimban

The Ninth Jedi Abridged


Naruto

Waterfall Chronicles - Fuu the Seven Tails Jinchuriki stars in this AU focused on OCs and minor characters elevated to be her supporting cast


DC/Marvel

Planetary Bugle - JJJ and Perry White merged their news combined in the shared New York Metropolis getting into multiverse Office antics with their Star employees Clark Kent and Peter Parker


MHA

Studio AU where the characters are just actors for MHA

40K

Too many for my story universe and the ever changing canon but

Last Chancers The Deadly Mission - my starter about a suicide squad
 
For my FGO Comics ideas

Crusader Boyz - Richard I leads a gaggle of unusual Servants to retake the Holy Land, if they could stay on track
Tomoe Plays - Tomoe ties out being a Let's Player
Tomoe Plays With Friends - She's goes multiplayer
Gaul & Legionary - A Hundred Years War French Soldier and a Roman Legionary have a Guildenstern and Rosencrantz adventure
Nursery Rhyme Storytime - Alice tells and incorrect version of canon events
Detective Bradamante - Bradamante takes an apprenticeship under a reluctant Holmes to be a sleuth
Kamen Rider Kintoki - name change pending Kintoki is a cheesy moral superhero
Kadoc's Inferno - Kadoc died now he's in Hell with Mephy as his parole officer
Judge Solomon - Solomon oversees absurd civil and criminal cases in court
Round Table Shenanigans - name change pending a AU where Mordred and Artoria get along with Camelot going Monty Python
Insane Gudako - Riyo inspired shorts
United States of Edison - Edison runs his own version of the USA with varied results
Africa Squadron - historical fiction of Commodore Matthew Perry
Rebellious Apple Shooter - William Tell's story
Natalia's Life Advice - Kiritsugu telling his children what he learned from his adoptive mother, she wasn't the best role model
Prisma Illya AU, need a Magical Girl title parody - AU where the Prisma Trio are magic girl heroes in a absurd world
Emiya's Unwanted Reunions - as the title says
Space Hulk - Tomoe and friends play the 40K tabletop game in the Simulator
SaberBattles - Star Wars and other SciFi parody involving Saber Wars
Tyrant Wodime and the Crypter Catastrophe - currently having issues as they were separate stories than now conflict with one another
Squadron EX - Insane Gudako sends her most useless Servants on one life only suicide missions
Idol Manager Spartacus - as it says
Bryn's Harem - Bryn tries dating all those listed as her Beloved
Argonauts - working title is New Argonauts/ Neo Argonauts/ Argonauts 2.0 where Jason and his new crew set sail
Pimps At Sea - Teach and his crew set sail
Septem Remake - Nero makes a movie with artistic liberties on how Septem went down
Who Killed Gil? - Murder Mystery Singularity where Gilgamesh is the victim, problem is everyone has motive to kill him
Superhero Goldie - AU Gilgamesh where he tries to be known in the present as a hero
Society of Villainy - Moriarty makes a (un)safe haven for Evil Servants as he takes an apprentice of his own
Fuyuki PD - AU where multiple Servants are cops
Green Thunder - Robin and Billy are buddy cops from the above
Banquet of Kings Part II - Iskandar sets up a new drinking contest with The Hangover consequences
Sakura Family Devalues - BB makes a Sakuraface family, name change pending with Values being a key word, Disvalues?
Knights vs Paladins - Camelot and Charlie's Knights get into competition
Kerry & Santam - Kiritsugu and Emiya are Batman and Robin
Camp Grail War - Scathach's Summer Boot Camp to train all the losers
Cobra vs Hawk - Red vs Blue Battle Royale style shenanigans with Tomoe and Osakabehime
Gangs of Londonium - Based on Moriarty's event where Servants have their own gangs name change pending
All Hail Emperor Mercury - name change pending Qin Shi Haung runs his Chinese kingdom and all its insanity
Fate Zero Sapience - name change pending, Gacha Lottery Winner Ritsuka in Fate Zero
Nobu Adventures - name change pending Chibi Nobu or Mini Nobu? Mini Nobu's take on the world
Farming Team Files - as the title says, life and times of farming teams
Restoring the Bloodline - Ivan and [name withheld] have gone Chirs Redfield
Saga of Shinji's Summons - Shinji Matou's misadventures in different timelines with his Servants
Ghost of Tosa - Izo's story
Reines Survive
Kid Corner
Phantom Thieves
My Servant Academia
FGO Sequel Leaks
Exorcism of Amakusa
Untilted - Caster Gil runs his own version of Babylon with his subjects
Untitled 2 - Eric Bloodaxe's story
Untitled 3 - Lancer Artoria Alter's story
Untitled 4 - Fate Stay Night cast lives in a world like HA with Servants leading into many crossover antics
Untitled 5 - Fujino and Fergus with Jason
Untitled 6 - Sengoku
Untitled 7 -Ganesha family
 
224th Imperial Personnel

  • Major Staz
  • Commander Xodell
  • Lieitenant Alayus Bolandin
  • Sergeant Cordo
  • Sergeant Mattiso Trodu
  • Corporal Danith Nodar
  • Private Collum Woslo
  • Corporal Sharlu Greslin
  • Corporal Wesger Odry
  • Medic Gorji Sandem
  • Private Bokret Humphreys
  • Specialist Gillen Finders
  • Corporal Chakobi Sanwright
  • Specialist Korso
  • Private Slick


Vehicles

Imperial AAT
AS-RX
Juggernaut
AT-DT
AT-RT
AT-AP
TIE Mauler
TIE Crawler
Occupier Tank
Swamp Speeder
AT-OT
ITT
AV-7
Pummel
AT-ST
AT-MP
Saber Tank
BARC
MTV-7
TR-MB
Mobile Artillery
AT-AA
AT-IC
UHMC


Mimbanese Liberation Army

AT-TE
AAT
STAP
AT-RT
BARC
UT-AT Trident
B3 Ultra Battle Droid
Rihkxyrk assault fighter
MAF
Armored Scout Tank
Hailfire Droid
GAT
 
Beserkerisms name change pending

Cast

Beowulf
Heracles
Lu Bu
Darius III
Eric Bloodaxe


Idol Manager Spartacus

Cast

Spartacus
Girls from Idolm@ster



Beast Hunting

Cast

Touta
Beowulf
Tell
Proto Cu

Society of Villainy

Moriarty
Sieg
Lancer Alter
Napoleon
Hyde
Eresh
Shakespeare
Fran
Yan Qing
Saber Gilles
Paracelsus
Antonio Salieri
Tenma Musashi
Duhat


Kadoc's Inferno

Cast
Kadoc
Mephy

Squad Goals

Cast

Team Cobra
Okki
Mecha Elly Mk2
Anne Bonny
Koyanskaya of the Light

Team Hawk
Tomoe
Medb
Qin Liangyu


Neo Argonaughts

Cast

Jason
Roberts
Odysseus
Medea
Medea Lily
Super Orion
Corday
Hektor
Paris
Heracles
Caenis
Castor and Pollux
Achilles
Chrion
Mandricardo
Chiyome
Asclepius
Thesus
Artemis

Pimps At Sea

Cast

Teach
Anne and Mary
Eric Bloodaxe
Caster Gilles
Saber Gilles
Phantom of the Opera
Galatea
Spartacus
Diarmuid Lancer
Chen Gong
Drake


Kid's Corner

Jaguar Warrior
Atalante
Atalante Alter
Teach
Kintoki
Iri
Europa

Illya
Chloe
Miyu
Jack
Bunyan
Jeanne Lily
Nursery Rhyme
Sitonai
Asterios
Andersen
Ibaraki
Da Vinci Lily
Columbus Lily
Medusa Lily
Abby
Paris
Erice
Kiyohime
Chibi Hassan
Altera Larva


United States of Edison

Cast

Edison
Geronimo
Helena
Tesla
Karna
Bunyan
Morgan Freeman
Benjamin Rush
Altera


Fuyuki PD

Cast

Hajime Saito
Raikou
Tamamo
Kiara
Hessian Lobo
MHXX
Okita
Marie
Mordred
Anne and Mary
Kiyohime
Hijikata Toshizou

Green Thunder

Robin Hood and Billy


Servant 7

Billy
Hektor
Leonidas
Hundred Hassan
Spartacus
Mephy
Diarmuid Lancer


Judge Solomon

Cast

Solomon/ Roman
Sheba
Dantes
Jekyll and Hyde
Caesar


Amazones Earth

Cast

Amazones CEO Penth
Cleapatara
Ceasar
Okki
Jing Ke


Sakura Family Disvalues

Cast

BB
Melt
Lip
Kingprotea
Parvati
Kama and clones
Robin
Suzuka
Emiya


Detective Bradamante

Cast

Bradamante
Holmes
Mata Hari
Tristan
Sei
Prince of Lan Liang
Lamdba Melt


Doctors name change pending

Cast

Nightingale
Asclepius
Jack
Iri
Medea Lily
Sanson
Martha


Kerry and Santam

Cast

Kiritsugu
Emiya
Mephy
Hajime Saitou


Gangs of Londonium

Cast

Diarmuid Saber
Izo
Yang Qing
MHXA

Banquet of Kings or King's Banquet Part II

Iskandar
Gil
Artoria
Emiya
Saber Gilles
Andersen
Maxwell
Moriarty
Angra Mainyu
Caren
Diarmuid Lancer
Berserker Lancelot
OG Cu
Musashi
Napoleon
Ushiwakamaru
Kiyohime
Atalante Alter
Sasaki
Jing Ke


Sengoku History

Cast

Storyteller


Nursery Rhyme Storytime

Cast

Nursery Rhyme
Storyteller


Unnamed but clothing makers

Cast

Habetrot
Medea
Vlad III Berserker

Trending

Cast

Marie
Sei
Suzuka
Okki
Ganesha


My Servant Academia

Cast

Edison
Helena
Babbage
Jeanne

MHX
MHXA

Jalter
Arash
Hektor
Caster Gilles
Alex
Siegfried
Arjuna



Bryn's Harem

Cast

Bryn
Sigurd



Crusader Boyz

Cast

Richard I
Robin Hood
Sanzang
Gramps
Artemis
Martha
Semiramis
George



Saberbattles

Cast

MHX

Septem Remake

Cast

Nero
Boudica
Sigurd
Bryn
BB
Lobo
 
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Honey Rangers epsidoes


Season 1

Vs Boxing Box
Vs Rescue
Vs Barrel Man Squay
Vs Fatty Alien
Vs Zombies
Vs Slimey
Vs Mutant Dove and Red Samurai
Vs Transitmancer and Dr. Miah Soap

Movie - Transitmancer

Season 2
Vs Tv Tubbie
Vs Portals
Vs Hexapod
Vs Ironing Man and Fishmaid
Vs
 
Like in canon Mimban was an overlooked primitive planet in the Expanse that only gained importance when the Seps invaded it for the resources and the Republic retaliated.

Mimbanese and Coway who while having impressive underground architecture were just a tribalistic society still using stone spears as they are now caught up in a conflict on of their own with both sides seeing them as uncivilized idiots. They would get exploited by mining corporations who were performing cultural genocide in the erase of their language and traditions.

The Empire took over but simply minded their own business by focusing on the ore fissures as the natives negotiated on unequal terms, it was better for them but they are slowly feeling the boot on their faces.

The conflict exploded when a xenophobic tribe of Mimbanese massacred and entire refinery and nearby residential district including a hospital filled with innocent humans using reprogrammed leftover battle droids, while they were condemned by most tribe the rest saw it as a call to arms and resisted the Empire planet wide.

Empire responded how you expected but didn't want to commit too much effort so their throw away equipment from the Clone Wars and disposable Imperial Army was meant to make an "easy" subjugation.

Mercenaries from across the Galaxy took this as an invitation to get back at the Empire, most don't care about Mimban, Imperial soldiers consisting of washouts, unluckily, moralistic, decommissioned Clones, and former anti Separatist partisans are in a meat grinder campaign for the uncaring leadership.

Mimbanese Liberation Army is nominally united but the tribes are fractured with extreme ideals on all sides, some side with the Zann Consortium who gave them the weapons they use in exchange for their ores and being a spice lane, others just hate all non Mimbanese and this might extend to their cousins the Coway for being neutral, Elder Isaento the most recent leader has to keep them together.
 
Im going by their original appearance in the Marvel comic. Mimban was the first time Luke and Vader fought, yes modern Marvel did it again.

Avoiding the monoculture as there are two species living there, Im not focusing on that too much given how corporations have eroded their culture into becoming just like any culture in the galactic public which I directly parallel how real corporations do commit cultural genocide by having theirs absorb and erase some minor people you never heard about. About 2 languages die every week due to both in part a smaller population with very little native speakers and well larger cultures pushing their ideas including language as more favorable.

I think is in the transitionary period of a rapid shift between "primitive" and "almost modern" like Meiji Restoration Japan or Italian occupied Ethopia.

From what little equipment the Mimbanese at least had Vibroblades and blasters. I find it hard they gave the genocidal Empire so much trouble for so long unless they had more than that.

Plus an excuse to use obscure weapons

Mercenaries just jumping at the chance to stick it to the Empire is based on the battles of Fallujah.

Ill prepared invasion has been done many time but I won't lie its Ukriane.

Though the hellish war is WW1 x Vietnam

Thinking of what language to use for them to make them sound alien without unfortunat implications so no Vietnamese or Arabic.

Ewoks had a lot more advantages like a tree line plus I viewed the "Emperor's Best Legion" more of cronyism which he wasn't aware of. Only filled with those who know the right people and say the right words. Like any dictator's favored.


There are hundreds of languages I can choose from, but it's the Imperial human perspective hearing them to make the enemy seem more intimidating, plus no translation is needed as the ambiguity works, or you can gather from the subtext of what it means, or just plug it in translate and be disappointed. and from the Mimbanese perspective it's <them speaking like this in their native tongue> and then not.


Theyre not Alliance yet, but I'm showing a black and grey morality. Yes the Mimbanese are justified in defending their home but most of them would be charged are war criminals for the lengths they go, scroll upwards as all my info is on this page. Remember the Mimbanese in my story are solely responsible for starting and escalating the conflict.

Most of them sell out out to the Zann Consortium which you can argue is worse for playing both sides. The Imperials are just sent there to die for being an inconvenience to their superiors. And not every scoundrel is like Han and Chewie.

Its pure nightmare fuel when the Empire takes the conflict seriously and wins.
 
I keep this here for parasite influence https://scape-and-run-parasites.fandom.com/wiki/Scape_and_Run:_Parasites_Wiki



Imperial Units

224th Armored Division

3rd, Brigade, 101st Regiment, Hawkbat Battalion, K Company
Bacta Company
13th Iron Battalion
201st Squadron
Cattena Squadron

96th Regiment
282nd Regiment
39th Recon
27th Recon
121st Regiment
76th Regiment
221st Mechanized Assault
88th Mechanized Assault
98th Mechanized
71st Mechanized
442nd Siege Battalion

38th Armored Division
181st Armored Division


Mimban Deployment
Alion Nova Guard

323rd Bomber Group
276th Bomber Group

Avenger
Storm
Dark
Spear
Sword
Ebon
Scythe

TIE Fighters

Venator

Guarlara
Vigilance

Acclamator

Prosecutor
Arrestor
Defiant
Galactic Guardian

Arquitens

Surrogator
Centicore
Hand of Justice

V-Wing Squads 1-7


Mimbanese Liberation Army

Nebula Front, Nebula Elite - Z-95 Headhunters
Neimoidan Gunnery Battalion
Sabaoth Squadron
Tognath Marksman
Koorivar Fusiliers
Karkarodon Enforcers
Freelance Mercenary Corps
Kota's Militia

X33 Droid Division

Lucrehulk - Profusion
 
It's a good story outline, but you need to put some actual meat into it to transform this idea into an actual story with living breathing characters living their lives inside your world.

What kind of story are you looking forward to? Is it a war story? And if it is, is it a story about the war itself or is the story about the main character living his/her life while inside a war? If you want to focus on the conflict itself, then that can allow you to switch between different characters so your audience can understand how the war started, how it progress, and how it will end. This, then, can then give you a list of potential POV characters that you can sketch and then flesh out based on what you need. While with the other option, you have a single character, and now you just need to build the plot around that character.

So, what kind of story are you looking for?
 
It's a good story outline, but you need to put some actual meat into it to transform this idea into an actual story with living breathing characters living their lives inside your world.

What kind of story are you looking forward to? Is it a war story? And if it is, is it a story about the war itself or is the story about the main character living his/her life while inside a war? If you want to focus on the conflict itself, then that can allow you to switch between different characters so your audience can understand how the war started, how it progress, and how it will end. This, then, can then give you a list of potential POV characters that you can sketch and then flesh out based on what you need. While with the other option, you have a single character, and now you just need to build the plot around that character.

So, what kind of story are you looking for?
Oh this is for multiple different ideas

I'll assume you mean my Mimban story

Title TBA as I tend to be bad with those.

I switch perspective from a lot of characters but keep the cast tight as I'm using at best minor characters and most need a wiki surf. It's easier to mold characters that are there into something else.

Though I had to add a lot of crap for the Mimban side seeing how they are lacking in diversity and firepower.

Gaunt's Ghosts served as my inspiration. Though I don't want it to be too much superweapon of the story arc as I see it as a video game and several obscure vehicles and droids serve as bosses. Also shows how desperate the Mimbanese are and they deplete their best early on as the war goes downhill when the Empire tries harder.
 

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