Yes, indeed. As the fires fade from a somber world of darkness, passionate flames burn brightly...
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It is. When exactly will become apparent soon enough. Much fun will be hadA very promising start. I guess this is set in the early days of the Fairy Tail story?
This part sounds incredibly anachronistic for Priscilla. The term "social construct" was coined in 1966 and was relegated to academia in the humanities until very, very recently where it gained mainstream use via tumblr, whereas Priscilla speaks in a very much more Shakespearean manner and likely would never have even conceived of postmodern ideas like social constructionism. Or postmodernism itself for that matter.
That is quite interesting. I need to ponder what to replace the term with, then; nothing concise comes to mind right now and I do not want to bloat that particular sentence.This part sounds incredibly anachronistic for Priscilla. The term "social construct" was coined in 1966 and was relegated to academia in the humanities until very, very recently where it gained mainstream use via tumblr, whereas Priscilla speaks in a very much more Shakespearean manner.
You could just remove that bit and just have her say she thought humans wore clothes to protect themselves from the elements, though that raises the question of why she thinks gods wear clothes. Especially Nito. Decoration, perhaps? Religious regalia? Doesn't actually matter for what's supposed to be a simple nudity gag, so not addressing that question at all is likely the winning move here. It's just the social construct bit that is jarring due to how out of place it is. The only time I've ever heard anyone use the term IRL was when I was talking to a gender studies major during a family dinner.That is quite interesting. I need to ponder what to replace the term with, then; nothing concise comes to mind right now and I do not want to bloat that particular sentence.
A fair point. I replaced that segment.You could just remove that bit and just have her say she thought humans wore clothes to protect themselves from the elements, though that raises the question of why she thinks gods wear clothes. Especially Nito. Decoration, perhaps? Religious regalia? Doesn't actually matter for what's supposed to be a simple nudity gag, so not addressing that question at all is likely the winning move here. It's just the social construct bit that is jarring due to how out of place it is. The only time I've ever heard anyone use the term IRL was when I was talking to a gender studies major during a family dinner.
Something you might want to fix: Gildarts didn't know that Cana was his daughter until the Tenrou Island arc. She herself knew, but she hadn't told him due to anxiety about it. It was a whole big emotional moment when she finally did tell him. The character arc of building up to it and stuff was more or less the whole thing that finally made Cana into more than just "quirky named side character #6."She shuffled inside and was immediately the center of attention. The Master slid down her shoulder at this point, shaking hands with a redheaded man clad in rugged clothes from pants to cloak. Cana surged forward as well, throwing her arm over the man's shoulder and waving up at Priscilla. "Heya, Pris! Meet my old man, Fairy Tail's best builder! He made the door for you! He's our most dangerous battlemage, too!"
This is not an error. I threw out that entire part because it always felt iffy to me. Fairy Tail is already somewhat unkind to most of its female cast, so Cana having daddy issues this severe (as in, was ready to leave the guild she calls home) was simply overblown in my opinion.Something you might want to fix: Gildarts didn't know that Cana was his daughter until the Tenrou Island arc. She herself knew, but hadn't told him. It was a whole big emotional moment when she finally did tell him. The character arc of building up to it and stuff was more or less the whole thing that finally made Cana into more than just "quirky named side character #6."
Narrator: "Fairy Tail was not, in fact, alright without her for those few extra days."Fairy Tail would be alright without her for at least a few more days.
oh yeah. Phantom attacks soon don't they? I guess Priscilla would arrive at everything is over or just when it is ending and she steals the spotlight?"Fairy Tail was not, in fact, alright without her for those few extra days."
Yet. She doesn't break everything she touches yet. She can learn! There's still time!She stopped herself there and chuckled. "Well, we kinda also want you because you don't break everything you touch."
As may be apparent, I am not a fan of stations of canon where it can be avoidedI love how you're weaving Priscilla into the canon story, without just throwing her into it as a plus one like usually happens. She's relevant, but she's just not part of the canon subgroup of 'main characters,' so she's off doing her own things, having her own adventures that are still just as interesting instead. It's a refreshing change of pace.
Hah. I guess Gray would like to know he isn't the only one who likes to take off his clothes.under cover of trees, she quickly disrobed and pushed everything into her item box.