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Chapter #59: Supreme Commander Thor New
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POV: Michael Dresden. The next day.

I stepped out of the Stargate, my team right behind me. The first thing I felt was the sheer cold of the outside. The ground was covered in snow. I hadn't felt cold like this in decades. Nekhara was a temperate planet, and even when it snowed, it didn't get this cold.

Luckily, we had all come prepared with thermal clothing.

Before us was a stone pillar. A large, ornate metallic hammer topped it. The surrounding area was covered with a thin layer of snow. Luckily, it wasn't snowing at the moment, though it was overcast.

"Raines. Start checking the DHD." Hana, the team's engineer, quickly turned her attention away from the statue and rushed over to the DHD. She quickly opened ‌the panel underneath the DHD.

The moment she touched the device, a stream of blue energy was emitted from the center of the hammer. It scanned over each of us, spending several long seconds on a person before moving on to the next. As it scanned the last member of my team, it stopped.

Arthur had told us about the device in advance. Had a Goa'uld or a Jaffa appeared, the beam would have teleported them to the labyrinth in the nearby mountains. With that in mind, it had been decided to leave Khavros behind for this expedition.

I turned to my other team members. "Alright. There should be a village somewhere nearby. Start searching for signs of habitation. There should be something in this clearing."

It took barely two minutes before my radio crackled. "I've found a road. Looks like there are horse tracks, and wheel marks." I quickly responded. "Understood. Return to the gate. Looks like Raines needs a few more minutes."

A few minutes passed as everyone returned. Hana finally spoke as she placed everything back into the DHD. "Everything looks good. There's no damage, and there doesn't appear to be any modifications."

Hana stood up and dusted her hands off. Everyone else did the same, and we made our way up the nearby hills to where the tracks had been spotted previously. These quickly led to a very well-maintained gravel road, which seemed to lead further upwards and over to the next valley.

It was at about this time that we spotted the smoke rising in the distance. As we reached the peak of the road, we finally got a good view of where the smoke was coming from. The valley had several simple homes, each of which had several small holes to allow smoke to escape.

Down the road, I could just barely make out five people guarding the entrance to the village. We continued onward, and it wasn't long before the people saw us. "Halt! What brings you to our town?"

I stepped forward once and spoke. "We've come looking for the Hall of Thor's Might."

The townsman looked totally caught off guard before he spoke again. "Why would you come looking for such a place?"

"We wish to speak with Thor and request his aid." I paused for a moment. "We have heard legends that Thor has prepared a trial, and that you must pass the tests within the hall to gain an audience with him."

The townsman seemed taken aback once more. "Wait here while I go get the village head."

I looked at my team members while he did so, but with nothing better to do, we waited. Several minutes passed before a small group of villagers left one home and approached us. All of them were well dressed for the cold. At their head, an older woman who looked like she was in her 60s or 70s led them.

"You come seeking the Hall of Thor's Might?" She asked, seemingly dubious about the claim.

I nodded. "We do. We seek the aid of the gods, and we hope to find it within the hall."

She stared at me suspiciously for several long moments. "My eldest son will lead you to the hall, but you will permit him to leave before you enter."

I raised an eyebrow, but nodded again. "We understand. You have nothing to worry about either way. Thor is not a wrathful god."

She nodded, and a young man stepped forward. "Please follow me."

The sky cleared up a bit as we began our trek into the forest. The path had clearly been walked before, but definitely not often. We walked for almost two hours before a little shrine became visible.

It was very similar in appearance to the pillar by the Stargate, but it was much shorter. As we came around the front, there was a small red gem embedded in the center of the pillar. The boy pointed at it from a distance. "There it is."

I turned to him. "Thank you. Get going; we don't want you caught up in our problems."

He nodded, turned around, and ran off into the forest. I set a timer for thirty minutes, just to be safe, and we approached the hall. I turned to Hana. "Alright, get to work. Just don't touch anything yet."

From her bag, Hana pulled out the familiar diagnostic tool and waved it all over the statue. "Definitely some really advanced technology. The orb in the middle is just a detector of some kind, but the center of the thing is way too dense for the scanner to get a good read on anything."

She continued to scan away, hoping to get a good enough reading of what was going on inside the device, but she clearly wasn't getting anywhere. Finally, my watch started beeping and everyone started standing up. Hana put away the diagnostic tool. "Everyone ready?"

We all spoke in affirmative, and she walked right up to the center of the pillar and touched the red stone. The thing lit up, and moments later I watched as a beam of light ran over all of us.

Without waiting, I pulled my flashlight from my pocket and pointed it at the stone floor of the room we found ourselves in. "Count off."

Everyone began turning on their lights as they all confirmed their positions. In the distance, I watched as another identical pedestal came to life. Before the pedestal, the air rippled like a rainbow, and a Viking with a metal helmet appeared. It spoke, "I am Thor. You are brave to come before me."

I tried to interrupt it. "We have come to make contact with Supreme Commander Thor of the Asgard Fleet."

The hologram continued despite my attempt to interrupt it. "However, only the worthy may witness Thor's might."

With a ripple, the hologram disappeared. I winced. I had hoped that would have been enough to get their attention, but it appeared that we would actually have to complete the trials.

The room shook, and all five of us stood back against the far wall. With a crash, the floor disappeared below the center of the room. I gulped, and Hana spoke. "Sir, I don't remember this being in the file."

I smiled bitterly. "Unfortunately, the only thing that Arthur could remember was that circles were involved."

Through the center of the room was a single long, narrow beam, apparently for us to walk across. "I guess this means we're supposed to cross to the other side."

With a deep groan, I got down on my hands and knees and crawled carefully across. As I reached the other side, I turned around and nodded. "Alright. Everyone across, nice and slow."

Hana was next. With a deep breath, she carefully closed up her bag and made sure it was properly sealed. Then she started crawling. It was as she was halfway across that the room shook, and Hana hung on for dear life.

Luckily, it stopped after just a few seconds, and she quickly and carefully hurried across. The last two members of my team got across with no issue.

We stood on the opposite side of the massive chasm, waiting for something to happen. Then, before our eyes, the floor reappeared as if it had never gone. Once more, the hologram was once more before us. "You have shown true selflessness and bravery. I salute you. Now you must add wisdom to courage. Solve the riddle of the runes, and I will show you my true might."

With a flash of light, we suddenly found ourselves in another room. The wall was covered with Norse runes and geometric symbols. I turned to Hana once more. "Alright. Get to work."

I turned to Sakura on my other side. "Get pictures of the walls." She immediately got to it as well.

In the meantime, I got to work looking up the meaning of the runes. Several of the Claymore's researchers were language nuts and had brought digital copies of several hundred textbooks on extinct languages. They had thrown them into the flexi's translation program, and now the flexis had a (mostly) complete list of all the languages of ancient Terra, included among them was the Old Norse language.

The wall translated into 3, 14, 15, 9. I stared at it blankly for several long seconds. "It can't be that simple."

Hana came over and looked. She blinked at the flexi a few times. "Arthur said that the answer was related to circles. I'd say that's a pretty big coincidence."

There were two other circles in the room. One of them was a wheel drawn on a wall. The other was among a group of geometric shapes. First, we examined the drawn wheel. Though we quickly moved on since the diagnostic tool showed nothing.

But when we came to the circle, it was very odd indeed. After a quick scan, it quickly became clear that there was another sensor behind the circle. I pursed my lips. "Well. Definitely the circle then."

I placed my hand on the circle and watched ‌in amazement as the stone turned into sand and then just slowly fell away. Inside, a red crystal with golden decorations appeared. I stared back at everyone and then touched the crystal.

For several seconds nothing happened, then a light appeared behind us. We all turned back to find the same hologram of the Viking from earlier. With a shimmer, the hologram transformed from a human into a diminutive grey alien, nearly identical in appearance to the greys of 21st century Terra.

"I am the actual one…whom you know as Thor," the Asgard hologram spoke.

I coughed. "Are you still a program, or are you the actual Supreme Commander Thor of the Asgard Fleet?"

The hologram turned its head. "You know my official title. You are not Cimmerian?"

This was the actual Thor, or at least a direct call to him. I nodded. "We are. Has the war against the Replicators begun yet?"

He stared at me blankly for several long seconds. "Yes. We have been attempting to exterminate the self-replicating robotic hive known as the Replicators for approximately 228 of your years."

That was far less time than I had been expecting. We had all been under the impression that the Asgard had pulled out because of the Replicators, but that clearly wasn't the case. Something to consider later.

I nodded. "We have information on a weapon that will allow you to permanently remove the Replicators, but we need you to remove the specific memories from someone's head."

The grey stared at me for several long moments. "We will not search through the memories of someone who is unwilling to have such a search done."

I nodded. "That isn't a problem. The person in question has a lot of memories of stuff that we'd all like to see. We'd just like copies of the memories in question once you've got them out."

I got the distinct impression that the Asgard was annoyed, but he responded quickly this time. "My vessel will arrive at your world in seven hours."

I blinked at him. "What do you…" I was cut off as the beam of blue light shone over all of us and I suddenly stepped out of the Stargate on Kaelastrum. I quickly recovered my balance and stood back up.

Around us, all the soldiers were holding their firearms at the ready, and I could see the newly constructed buildings in the distance. Thor had sent us back to Kaelastrum directly. We hadn't even gone to Cimmeria directly. We had used several intermediary gates before dialing the world.

I grabbed my radio and turned it on. "This is Dresden. Contact with the Asgard confirmed. We…" I thought about what the Asgard, Thor, had said before he returned us. "We might have a slight problem though."

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Author's Note:
YAY! Asgard! Thor is slightly annoyed that his break is being interrupted by some random humans though.
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Chapter #60: The Dakara Device New
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POV: Arthur Sinclair.

The very air itself was tense. It hadn't even been two years since Kaelastrum had been selected as a haven, and already an external power had become aware of the world. Everyone was panicking.

Everyone who was aware, anyway. It was decided to keep the imminent arrival of the Asgard a secret. That being said, all twelve raptors were fueled and ready to take off at a moment's notice.

The President had a room prepared for meeting Thor, and we waited. Six hours and fifty minutes passed in a flash when three massive kilometer and a half long warships arrived. They were caught on video by one of the many observation satellites placed into orbit.

Rather than enter orbit, they just began hovering at approximately 300,000 kilometers. We all watched as the cameras relayed the footage. And then suddenly, a flash of light filled the room we were in, and, sitting in his chair, was Thor. "Greetings. I am Supreme Commander Thor of the Asgard Fleet."

Arriston smiled and nodded, though I could still see the sweat pouring off him. "I am Arriston Pyrros, President of the Republic of Kaelastrum."

Thor was silent for several moments. "Whose memories will I be retrieving?"

A silent awkwardness filled the room, and I stepped forward. "That would be me." Before Thor decided to just beam me up to his ship, I continued. "I would like a couple of people to join me."

Thor is silent again for several seconds before he responds. "Very well. Who?"

Elder James and Ma'chello both step forward. I nod towards them before suddenly finding myself sitting on a rather comfortable chair.

The room was dark. A large screen covered one half of the room, with parts along the edge where several strange dark blue… beams (I wasn't exactly sure what they were). The back of the room was red, with strange vertical decorations of some sort.

Thor now stood at my side and before one of the strange terminals that were so common among the Asgard. He spoke as he began moving the stones around. "Bring the information that you wish to transmit to the forefront of your mind."

I furrowed my brow. "Do you want me to start from the beginning, or with the important information?"

There was no hesitation in his voice this time. "The important information first. If it is as valuable as you believe, then we will ‌go from the beginning."

I started thinking about the Dakara Superweapon and was amazed at the ease with which I could access my own memories. It was almost as quick as trying to look through the tech blueprints.

In my head, I could rewatch the entirety of Stargate SG-1 Reckoning parts one through three. As my memory ended. Thor was silent. I turned to look at him.

He seemed to freeze as he looked through the information before he began moving the stones on his console back and forth in quick succession. I waited for him to stop before he turned back to me. "Now, you may begin from the start."

Rewatching an episode in my head took about 20 to 30 seconds, so replaying the entirety of Stargate, including SG-1, Atlantis, Universe, and all the movies, took about three hours.

As we reached the end, Thor was busy constantly moving around the Asgard Stones. "Fascinating. While there is significant inaccuracy, much of this information is correct. This is likely information from an alternate timeline."

I nodded. "There is still a lot of other stuff as well. I know some of it applies, but a lot of it probably won't."

Thor was quiet for a moment as he moved another one of his stones. "You may continue."

Next up were a series of YouTube videos; Tex Talks from the Black Pants Legion and the BattleTech Lore & History series from Sven Van der Plank. Battletech is a massive franchise, and most of my interaction with the story came from fanfiction. That didn't mean I wasn't interested in the lore though, and the kind people on YouTube had hundreds of hours of explainer videos regarding the lore.

After that was the entire Robert D. Moore Battlestar Galactica. I also ran over all the missions and ships that appeared in BSG Deadlock. I reviewed what little I could remember of the original BSG, but I hadn't seen it and didn't know all that much about the show.

From there, we moved on to other subjects, such as the Red King's Stellaris Lore videos, as well as my own recollections of various Stellaris games. Finally, came Gene Roddenberry's Andromeda and what little I knew of Warhammer 40K.

As my last memories of the Warhammer 40K Lexicanium ended, I turned to Thor, who seemed even busier. "Fascinating. I assume you are some sort of reincarnation, then?"

I raised an eyebrow. "Is reincarnation a common occurrence?"

Thor was quiet for a moment as he continued to move the stones around. At first, he had seemed almost standoffish, or as if we were wasting his time. That attitude had disappeared quickly as he had watched Stargate SG-1 alongside me. Of course, Elder James and Ma'chello in the background were just watching what they could, but the information was passing over the screen much faster than they could see.

"It is most frequent among those who have undergone ascension. It is not uncommon for such people to keep their memories even after returning to the sea of souls."

I kinda shrugged. "That was all the information that I know for a fact is relevant, but there is other stuff that I'm not really sure about."

"Continue. We have time." I raised an eyebrow but continued‌.

The hours continued to pass. The Asgard device was so advanced that I could literally count the number of times I had blinked during the entire process. During that time, I had replayed every work of science fiction I could think of. From Star Trek to Babylon 5, from Halo to Mass Effect to even Fallout and Subnautica. Everything I could think of was replayed inside my head and then saved by the Bilskirnir's computers.

As I finished replaying the last of my Fallout playthroughs, I turned to Thor. "I still have some things I need copies of."

He once more moved his stones. "You may begin."

I started with uploading the THOS. What would have taken me weeks of work just typing away at a computer was uploaded in less than a minute. Then I went through all the Inner Sphere technology, then the Goa'uld technology, and on and on. I didn't realize just how much information I had shoved into my brain.

Rewatching all the videos and TV-shows I had seen had taken so long because I had physically experienced all of them. It was more than just the shows themselves that were being uploaded, but the Qualia as well, or so Thor had told me when I asked him about it.

The blueprints were just pure information that my brain could access with ease and thus didn't need to be reinterpreted by the computer.

Then I got to the most… questionable pieces of information. With furrowed brows. I turned to Thor. "The next two things are more sensitive. Just a heads up."

Thor once more moved some stones and spoke. "Proceed."

Neither of the two pieces of code was particularly large. Just rather sensitive. Thor looked up at the display. "Fascinating. These are from the Contingency?"

I nodded. "That's what my memories tell me. I still have one more thing… this one is… well… more complex."

Next up was the Zoe Graystone Memory Engram. I wasn't really sure what to do about this one, but there wasn't much of a reason not to do anything, so I just uploaded it.

I just barely caught Thor freezing for several moments as he stared at the Engram on the screen, but just as quickly turned away and continued working.

As I finished reviewing the last of the blueprints, I nodded. "Alright. That's everything."

I had been on Thor's ship for three days. Every single thing I could think of had been transferred. Every piece of major science fiction. Movies, TV shows, video games, and even the few actual novels that I had read. I had even spent a few hours reviewing the various wiki pages I had seen.

Thor nodded and with a flash of light, I found myself in President Arriston's office. The man almost jumped as we appeared, but he quickly relaxed once he saw me. "Ahh. Arthur. I hope everything went well."

I shrugged and looked at Thor, who replied. "Yes. The Asgard High Council appreciates your decision to initiate contact."

On the president's desk, five Asgard stones appeared. "These contain copies of all the information we have been provided."

Another stone appeared on the table. "This is a communication device. We have already started eradicating the Replicators, but we have other threats that are more dangerous and more pressing than the Goa'uld that we will be busy dealing with once the Replicators have been defeated."

The President shuddered. "What other threats are we talking about?"

Thor was silent for a moment. "The group you know as the Tyranids. They are currently in the middle of invading three separate minor galaxies in the Local Group."

Arriston and I both froze before I suddenly realized that Thor had just said something rather important. "Wait, you've already started? Don't you need the Dakara Device before you can start?"

Thor stared at me blankly for several moments. "Yes."

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POV: Ra. Two days prior. Seven hours after Thor's arrival at Kaelastrum.

I received several dozen notifications from my Kara'kesh, all at the same time. I turned to my display and had it bring up the reports. A frown instantly graced my lips. The ships I had patrolling Dakara had all been destroyed.

I sent an order to dial Dakara immediately. My frown transformed into a snarl at the appearance of almost three dozen Asgard Bilskirnir-class vessels in orbit of Dakara. A ping hit me as the Asgard initiated contact.

On the display, the diminutive appearance of the little grey vermin appeared. How the mighty had fallen. "I am Sif of the Asgard Fleet. We are here to report 17 violations of the Protected Planet's Treaty."

My snarl deepened. "On what basis do you make these accusations!?"

The reply came in the form of various videos of System Lords sending Jaffa onto various worlds. I felt my snarl deepen even further; the useless fools. It seemed I would have to begin a purge. Before I could even respond. "We will take the Dakara Device as reparation."

I froze as its words settled. Before I could even respond, the transmission was ended. Without hesitation, I immediately ordered‌ something to be sent through the Stargate. The weapon that gave me the title of Sun God.

I connected to several other transmitters within the system and watched as a flash of light went off beside the Stargate. I smiled in satisfaction, only to freeze as the light failed to expand as I expected it to. Worse, the Stargate was still connected.

I changed my view and watched as the ball of white energy caught in beams that were projected from the Asgard vessels. I grit my teeth; they had been expecting me to send a Nova Bomb through. Even worse, they had prevented it from detonating fully.

Seconds passed as the explosion simply dissipated into subspace, and I watched on in horror as the ground surrounding the Dakara Device was dug up to reveal a massive device hidden just behind the ground of the main temple.

I had worked so hard to hide the device — the ultimate weapon of the Ancients, capable of eradicating all life in an entire galaxy, if the need arose. Now it was gone, in the hands of those wretched little pests.

There was nothing I could do but watch, my fury bubbling just beneath the surface. As the last of the stone was removed, the entire mountain, which housed the device, lifted from the ground and was towed into space. Just like that, all the Asgard vessels had left.

I growled and turned to Anubis, my Horus guard. "Prepare the men. Now!"

The second major issue appeared when I began dialing the worlds of the Protected Planets Treaty. The Stargates failed to dial. They must have removed the Stargates from those worlds. There was nothing I could do but scream in rage.

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Author's Note:
Well, writing this chapter was a fun one. I had been dreaming about the scene where the Asgard rock up and steal the Dakara Device since like Chapter #5. Being able to write it was a dream.
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* In an unrelated note, what should we name a Lost Space Amoeba? Asking for a friend. * BUBBLES!
 
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