Benjamin Plutsick
Getting out there.
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In "Segregate This!!!!" Two minor mistakes: "An excerpt from Maya Angelou's 1977 book: We just wanted to be free"
and then a little further in:
"In what would become his final interview—given from his deathbed in 1983 and broadcast live—he said this:"
This whole chapter is from the POV of an in universe book chapter, yes? So she couldn't have possible known about the 1983 interview just yet, but maybe you can edit it to be like an in universe reprinted edition that has minor updates or something to excuse the addition?
and then a little further in:
"In what would become his final interview—given from his deathbed in 1983 and broadcast live—he said this:"
This whole chapter is from the POV of an in universe book chapter, yes? So she couldn't have possible known about the 1983 interview just yet, but maybe you can edit it to be like an in universe reprinted edition that has minor updates or something to excuse the addition?