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psychiatric center? Asylum? Pretty sure that with how the Gov. in WORM works, that if they can nail her with those murder charges she would be going to the Birdcage.
Also, I know it does not really fit in this story(since this is not really a lewd, or at least one with Sophia), but personally I always picture Shadow Stalker as a young Teyana Taylor.
I have a suspicion that the person who did get hurt was a non-white member of the staff.Nobody got hurt that time, though. Nobody who mattered, anyway."
Out of all the people they could have spilled the identity of the only black ward to, it just had to be Kaiser's civilian identity. Not that it would have changed much with Taylor putting the pieces together, but still.As soon as they're secure, we open a line to Max Anders. Tell him who Hess is,
Ironically, this is probably the good end for Sophia in this scenario.On the upside, there's a chance we can get her put away permanently into psychiatric holding.
Nah. The Merchants.I have a suspicion that the person who did get hurt was a non-white member of the staff.
Out of all the people they could have spilled the identity of the only black ward to, it just had to be Kaiser's civilian identity. Not that it would have changed much with Taylor putting the pieces together, but still.
That's actually perfect; I've tried to match my mental image of Sophia to a real picture before, but this one is a perfect fit.
Phenomenal story and chapter! I have to wonder how much of Shadow Stalker's recent actions were a result of Alexander's apparent surreptitious mind whammy at the school (outside influence) versus her powers changing her outlook and how she thinks (her own fault). I'm personally leaning toward it being that the mind whammy just unleashed what was already there, since in Chapter 6 Alexander basically said he somewhat reduced Sophia's critical thinking and judgment making abilities temporarily and it would take a while to wear off.
I don't think the mind whammy helped anything, but I honestly think that Shadow Stalker still maintains the majority of the blame. It's kinda like if someone gets drunk and murders their neighbor - the alcohol reduced their critical thinking abilities and impacted their judgement, but they're still culpable for their actions. Plus, even when Sophia was "sober", she'd already attempted murder multiple times and displayed explicitly sociopathic behaviors. I think she'd have turned murderer sooner or later, but Victor's mind-fuck acted as a catalyst, moving a future inevitability up in the queue to the present.
Phenomenal story and chapter! I have to wonder how much of Shadow Stalker's recent actions were a result of Alexander's apparent surreptitious mind whammy at the school (outside influence) versus her powers changing her outlook and how she thinks (her own fault). I'm personally leaning toward it being that the mind whammy just unleashed what was already there, since in Chapter 6 Alexander basically said he somewhat reduced Sophia's critical thinking and judgment making abilities temporarily and it would take a while to wear off.
This is exactly the situation.I don't think the mind whammy helped anything, but I honestly think that Shadow Stalker still maintains the majority of the blame. It's kinda like if someone gets drunk and murders their neighbor - the alcohol reduced their critical thinking abilities and impacted their judgement, but they're still culpable for their actions. Plus, even when Sophia was "sober", she'd already attempted murder multiple times and displayed explicitly sociopathic behaviors. I think she'd have turned murderer sooner or later, but Victor's mind-fuck acted as a catalyst, moving a future inevitability up in the queue to the present.
It won't be a huge part of the plot.Eh not sure if I like the romance sub-plot. Its fine but eh I dunno wasn't an angle that drew me to the story. A good set-up chapter but I look forward to more Medhall scenes as I feel that's the best part of the story.
While i totally get her concern, and under normal circumstances it would absolutely be a valid concern, i can't help but be amused by the idea that he likely ordered the receuitment in the first place.Hell, if I had a total brain meltdown and joined, and Mr. Anders found out, I might end up losing my spot at Medhall. There was no way I wanted to risk that.
But what if he doesn't take credit for it? After all, Gladly is pretty focused on finding the true author.I bet the Book in Gladly's hands is going to cause some sort of fuck-up down the way, though, especially if Gladly tries to claim credit for Accord's ideas or something equally stupid.
But what if he doesn't take credit for it? After all, Gladly is pretty focused on finding the true author.
It would be so funny if helping out with a random homework assignment is what finally gets one of Accord's save-the-world plans set in motion.
I like the sort-of resonance between this chapter and Slippery Slope. It's nice to balance out the "Taylor joins the E88" story with "Taylor joins Medhall but is in no way remotely sympathetic to the neo-Nazis, and will be horrified when she learns of the connection."
I think it would be even more amusing if Taylor says something to the effect of not wanting to risk her position at Medhall by joining the E88 and that she wouldn't want to disappoint Mr. Anders by her joining a gang like the E88.While i totally get her concern, and under normal circumstances it would absolutely be a valid concern, i can't help but be amused by the idea that he likely ordered the receuitment in the first place.
I can just imagine the barely controlled groan of frustration when he finds out about it.I think it would be even more amusing if Taylor says something to the effect of not wanting to risk her position at Medhall by joining the E88 and that she wouldn't want to disappoint Mr. Anders by her joining a gang like the E88.
Of all the ways you've handled Sophia over the years... I think this might be my favourite."I assure you, it's true." Emily turned away from the cell and started back down the corridor. "I learned about it first thing this morning. And that's what's all over PHO. How Void Cowboy took down Shadow Stalker. Assault is still laughing about it. So are the Wards." She paused and looked back to where Hess' face was pressed against the bars. "Everyone on the internet is laughing at you. Personally. Shadow Stalker is a joke."
As the guard let Emily back through the barred gate, Hess' screams of frustrated rage continued to echo along the corridor.
I can't wait. It will he hilarious.Also, if it ever comes out that Bradley is Hookwolf, Greg is going to have a moment where he completely shorts out when he realizes he got hand to hand combat training from Hookwolf.
What some people forget is that Piggot dislikes capes. She will go out of her way to be legally unfair to them, if they've pissed her off. Note how she forbids Gallant from paying for the mess in the bank, and instead takes the money from some of the team members who can't afford it.Ok, Ack. It's time for me to make some comments. Scary ones. That will spook not only you, but me. Buckle up.
Boring but pretty detailed I guess.
This part of the chapter felt a bit off. It felt very SOD breaking for her to do this.
...Really? Delicious. Bruh. Piggot sounds weird IMO.
Why is Piggot saying this to her?
Again, why? To antagonize her?
I see that you tried to reason the chapter with these lines, but still felt like the Piggot/Shadow Stalker interaction was weird IMO.
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Taylor feels like batman during the night. And during the day, she feels like a damsel in distress. I hope the analogy makes sense.
I like this dialogue.
Me to Taylor. Me too. I like this.
Ok this is weird. Why would a father say this? Maybe I'm the weird one.
Nice meme.
Yes... she's good at sniffing out moles, traitors and rats.
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Overall a good chapter, but felt more like a filler chapter. But maybe my desire for Taylor to do more, to realize what her friends are, or to perhaps to get powers. I feel like a lot of things go in Taylors favour, more so than normal. I know this reply seems like I'm being ungrateful, I'm not. I'm just hoping you can see my perspective a bit, and maybe that will influence your writing forward (for any story and in a good way).
Here's the thing. Greg isn't so much being friendzoned as they're each friendzoning each other, while at the same time crushing hard on each other. (Handholding, leaning on each other, sharing deepest secrets, etc).Man, this was a great chapter. Poor Greg getting friend zoned that hard. I'll be curious to see how the Grue situation plays out. Especially since Taylor is crushing on him and it is on her word that Brian is getting offered a job.
Pure speculation, but I will be incredibly entertained if it comes out that Grue is a supervillain, which breaks Taylor's trust and heart, and ends up with Taylor dating Greg. Especially if Lisa uses Brian's job to betray Medhall to Coil.
Also, if it ever comes out that Bradley is Hookwolf, Greg is going to have a moment where he completely shorts out when he realizes he got hand to hand combat training from Hookwolf.