TricMagic
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Welcome to crackville, enjoy your fluffy tails~ (Will read later.)Okay, great chapter and I'm happy for it but there is a little to much chaos, where is the focus. The plot in the invasion, but there are so many threads all over the place it's hard to follow.
Danny is Amy's father and he and Taylor are now throwing around powers.
Greg got powers and that's a thing.
Xcom is a thing. Star Gate is a thing.
Skidmark is a thing . Prt is failing as usual but that's nothing new. There is alot going on, can I just ask for some focus please and thanks.