February 9th, 1925
Saint Michael's Home for Boys
Hampstead, London.
I was a quiet child...
Saint Michael's Home for Boys
Hampstead, London.
I was a quiet child...
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jldew93 | 42 |
On the surface, yes.Somewhat AU of Potterverse I guess. Cool start though, waiting for the next chapter
First impressions: Very nice, especially by the standards of most stuff on this site. Then again, it's apparently an actual, published book. It shows.
Second: The threadmarks are a bit messed up. Notably, the first chapter doesn't have one.
Except it's now the second threadmark...
Ooofff, and now I fixed that.
Not going by what I see, you haven't.
Yep.
adopted.
I found out after some experimentation, that I could make things happen. I could levitate and move objects with my mind. I could force someone to tell me the truth and knew when they were lying.
I had learned to read early, and frequent trips to the library led me to discover and cultivate a passion for reading. I dove into the classics and the new. I was particularly drawn to fantasy novels for some reason. I knew what I could do was magic, or something similar. The Voice had told me this, and it was always right.
Those literary masterpieces, and a restless urgency from the Voice, gave me an impetus to learn
When copying and pasting stuff onto threads, it often removed the paragraph spacing. Sometimes it doesn't though and sometimes it does. I have no idea why but it annoys me immensely.I've only read the first chapter, but this looks interesting enough. The only complaint I have is that the paragraph spacing is a tad wonky.
For example.
I've only read the first chapter, but this looks interesting enough. The only complaint I have is that the paragraph spacing is a tad wonky.
For example.
When copying and pasting stuff onto threads, it often removed the paragraph spacing. Sometimes it doesn't though and sometimes it does. I have no idea why but it annoys me immensely.
I don't know if this is the author's problem. I'm just complaining.
*waves hand* nothing to see here