Bladesunder
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It's to stagger and disrupt he is also water type.Why the hell was Bugsy using electric attacks on a ground type?
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It's to stagger and disrupt he is also water type.Why the hell was Bugsy using electric attacks on a ground type?
I mean, if you want spoiler I can answer that; I'm hoping to answer those two questions soon, hopefully in the next week-ish worth of chapters just trying to make happen at the right time. I am traveling for work this week but hope to still do at least 1 chapter a day to the best of my ability.Im kinda curious whether he's rockin megastones, or has access to his P.C.
Thanks for the feedback yeah, I'll tone it down - this last chapter I thought was warranted due to the overwhelming match win but in general it should be dialed back. I was pretty heavy handed at the earlier chapters for sureNot bad author bro, but you really need to tone down the way literally everyone is nonstop praising the mc and behaving all philosophical, people just don't act like that. The whole interlude chapter was just too much, you should've just kept the parts with Will, Lance, and the end section tbh, everything else was pretty cringe. Hope this helps you in the future chaps, I've just seen this ruin so many fanfics it's not even funny.
Could just let rng decide, roll a dice![A/N: How one sided should this battle be? should Al use 1, 2, or 3 Pokémon?]
I'll try to dial it back some I guess, less theatrical, more natural but the theatrics are part of the fun so they wont go away completely. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯Honestly, you exaggerate everything in the story. Simple moments are drawn out, too. Like, I get trying to set a serious/epic tone, but you force that shit too much. Not every other sentence needs to be you setting up a "cool" quotable moment.
I just thought up the best way to describe this. You're aura farming. Badly. Lmao.
Tempting but I wanted a bit of thought to go into it since it could affect his next steps :3
Thanks for the feedback.Meh. I rather like the constant aura farming in this fic. It takes itself TOO seriously which is amusing to me in the same way Eminence in Shadow's Cid's Chuuni shit is amusing. It's kinda dumb but it has its own charm. Least this MC doesn't make me wanna hit him upside the head with a pipe. It's also the first Pokemon fic I've seen that does things like this so I still give it props for being unique.
Damn I'm the only one who wants Whitney to be something of a challenge? Why does everyone want a Whitney stomp? I hate her Miltank as much as the next guy, but come on? League level normal types are fucking annoying to fight.