Mr Zoat
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Thank you, corrected.
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Thank you, corrected.
I was rereading and found that the link for part 14 leads to the story only thread rather than the story part on this thread.
Can't wait to see what Paul makes of this line.
Found another error after rereading. That should say 'Lockhart'.I scan the gynoid, and I can't help but feel a little disappointed. Having seen Danette and Dr. Lochhart, she just isn't all that impressive. Her mind is several orders of magnitude more simple; it's basically a chatbot with a few standard behaviours to act as a framework.
Thnak you, corrected.I was rereading and found that the link for part 14 leads to the story only thread rather than the story part on this thread.
Says "Deliruim"No, that's correct. Power taken directly from Delirium of the Endless.
I'm sorry, but I've got no idea what you're trying to correct or why.
'Then'
'minute'?
'an…'?
'it's in one'
'your'
'ship's weapons'
'seconds'
'PERMANENCE?'
'whose'
'ending up'?
'it's in', or maybe it isn't in such good condition as he thinks.
'it's probably'?
'nearby!'
'militia alike'?
Thank you, corrected.Found another error after rereading. That should say 'Lockhart'.
The link doesn't work due to an extra apostrophe.
I have no further plans for Ahri'ahn in the Renegade timeline.
Hehehe! Wait, dang it- Atlantis is back but there could still be a plot with the real him! Or a version of him from one of the bizarro Earths.
Oh yay, I missed this chapter! Or I read a few lines and got distracted. Like'd. I hope things work out there, and that they don't have to deal with the misery of repairing Nazi Earth via the power of Love. Or something.April 29th, 2013
06:22 UCT +3
"So, this is Themyscira." Johanna looks around the portal chamber. "It is very… Dark."
Look at where the 'i' is compared to the 'u.'I'm sorry, but I've got no idea what you're trying to correct or why.
That already got corrected, I'm fairly sure.
That's not what you have written though. It's apparently taking power from someone named Deliruim, who I can only assume is Delirium's Bizzaroverse counterpart.