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First thing first! Congrats! It's a pretty solid first chapter in my opinion, not a big fan of ROBs going full taking the role of a manager (or interacting much with the characters) but you're selling it well with the characterization.
Like a lot that you're using a younger Lelouch, cause while I bet he'll have a lot more petulant moments that his canon counterpart (that was already a raging drama queen) he'll be still young enough to learn and drop a bit of his pride, that any deity out there knows fucked him up a lot.
Looking forward for the next chapters! Watched, with ORANGE LOOOOOOYALTY intensity!
damn it, I would like him to have V.IV Rusty as a companion, also a brother in arms, it's a shame there is no AC 6, AC 4 and For Answer crossover to bring this beauty NEXT although it could easily surpass the world of Muv-Luv just for speed and agility can travel at around 300-450 Km/H at the standard boost speed with quick boost punching it up to 800-1200 Km/H for about a second hehe (although it's a double-edged sword only because of the Kojimah particles and that Lynx augmentations are needed so he doesn't die lol)
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The list of harem members poll seemed kind of lacking. Like, from a cold-blooded perspective I'd want useful members, and from a warm-blooded perspective I'd want cute/sexy members, but beyond protagonist-class pilots, there are few options that felt 'correct.' Like, I don't want any mook or side-character pilots, and other skillsets have limited utility in an all-out war. On one hand it feels like the list is missing a lot of the top female pilots that are part of couples (or at least are in love) from most of the listed series . . . but then you have both members of the primary couple of Witch of Mercury. Do . . . do they not count because they are both girls? I am confused.
ahhh, a chapter full of politics lol, I can't wait for the heavyweight mechs that break the entire game or the augmented enemies (alaya-vijnana system) that reach the point of psychics (new-types) excellent work
ahh, so Claude used the trope that Yuuko used to send Takeru to an alternate line
I'll leave this here if you ever think about including a NEXT
I love the smell of cancer educing Kojima Radiation in the morning!!!
good chapter there lelouch stuck and all uncomfortable in a corner while everyone releases their emotions XD, I was reading it while listening to this
View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lBmPvWyQ-HY&pp=ygUWbWVjaGFuaXplZCBtZW1vcmllcyAyMA%3D%3D
Thank you for the story.
Seeing as Claude has been providing the Muv-Luv Earth frankly absurd amounts of aid contingent on allying with Lelouch's faction in the upcoming 7 Kings' War, if the trend of "recruiting doomed timelines" continues this could be shaping up to be a rather dramatic Bokurano-esque showdown.
Each King commanding an entire Earth's worth of fully motivated military, with the full knowledge that defeat in the War results in the death of their planet/civilisation after Claude ceases her aid.
eey nice, I'm looking forward to the next chapter for Lelouch and Yui's school drama
Okay, binged and watched.
This looks and feels interesting.
I am excited to see what happens next...
Especially Yui's gonna see an alternate Japan...
In all it's great and terrible glory.
Ohhhhh, I am excited to see what you're cooking up.up, and Yui will be in for some culture shocks and more, and I am enhancing the chapter with the new info from the Imperial Capital Burns VN, which while I wish it had come out before I made the chapters, but having waited a year producing a stockpile of pre-made chapters, does allow me a chance to enhance them XD.