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My American friends kept trying to change 'pot plants' to 'potted plants'. I doubled down and added more instances of 'pot plants'.
Also, her personality seems to partially depend on the specific adaptation (novel/comic/cartoon), so depending on which one the author is taking most from, you can get wildly different fanfiction voices.
I think the more militant 'rarr rarr, low-patience belligerent Tanya' fics are from people who liked the anime the most, but the kind of character you can extrapolate from that is wildly different to the godawful light novel rambling that is novel Tanya.
One of the races on Terra is the Sarkaz. Basically they're based off of demons, and have subraces ranging from vampires, through gargoyles, to banshees. Nobody really likes them because a gorillion years ago they tried to conquer the world under their demon king, and their mortal enemies, the Sankta (angels) also run one of the largest religions in the world. Worse yet, they have a reputation for using all sorts of terrifying hereditary Arts (witchcraft), and they're also very prone to catching Oripathy.
Long story short, the nation of the Sarkaz, 'Kazdel', has risen and fallen multiple times throughout Terra's long history. Part of that is due to the strong influence the leaders of each Sarkaz subrace holds, and part of that is due to external forces that would rather not see Kazdel rise again.
Most recently, Kazdel was reformed again under Queen Theresa. Some stuff happened, her brother and general Theresis staged a coup, a loyalist organisation called Babel tried to stop him, but Queen Theresa ultimately died. A scant few years later, the remnants of Babel reorganised around Theresa's heir, Amiya, into a pharmaceutical company named Rhodes Island.
No, an AI drew that. I do have a commissioned artwork though. It's just very big, so I wasn't sure I wanted to post it on Ao3. Err, I'll post it here.
QQ is behind FF. I'm keeping it one chapter behind, since even though I have the next three 'arcs' roughly planned out, I keep having to go back to previous chapters and stealth-changing things. The worst affected is usually whichever the latest published one is.
Thank you! That was my favourite part.the drunken rambling at the beginning of the chapter was especially entertaining.
Yeah, it's a struggle for me too lol.
Also, her personality seems to partially depend on the specific adaptation (novel/comic/cartoon), so depending on which one the author is taking most from, you can get wildly different fanfiction voices.
I think the more militant 'rarr rarr, low-patience belligerent Tanya' fics are from people who liked the anime the most, but the kind of character you can extrapolate from that is wildly different to the godawful light novel rambling that is novel Tanya.
So, being a Youjo Senki fanfiction, you probably already guessed, but Amiya really is kind and idealistic. Rhodes Island does have some shady history, but I'm 99.9% sure it's not working as a wetworks outfit for the Brinley Group lol.
One of the races on Terra is the Sarkaz. Basically they're based off of demons, and have subraces ranging from vampires, through gargoyles, to banshees. Nobody really likes them because a gorillion years ago they tried to conquer the world under their demon king, and their mortal enemies, the Sankta (angels) also run one of the largest religions in the world. Worse yet, they have a reputation for using all sorts of terrifying hereditary Arts (witchcraft), and they're also very prone to catching Oripathy.
Long story short, the nation of the Sarkaz, 'Kazdel', has risen and fallen multiple times throughout Terra's long history. Part of that is due to the strong influence the leaders of each Sarkaz subrace holds, and part of that is due to external forces that would rather not see Kazdel rise again.
Most recently, Kazdel was reformed again under Queen Theresa. Some stuff happened, her brother and general Theresis staged a coup, a loyalist organisation called Babel tried to stop him, but Queen Theresa ultimately died. A scant few years later, the remnants of Babel reorganised around Theresa's heir, Amiya, into a pharmaceutical company named Rhodes Island.
Nice to see this here! Is QQ in the same boat as FF, where only betad chapters will be posted and only ao3 will be getting the unbetad ones? Just wondering cause chapter 6 is up there but not here.
Was that portrait commissioned? It looks great, thanks for the chapter!
No, an AI drew that. I do have a commissioned artwork though. It's just very big, so I wasn't sure I wanted to post it on Ao3. Err, I'll post it here.
QQ is behind FF. I'm keeping it one chapter behind, since even though I have the next three 'arcs' roughly planned out, I keep having to go back to previous chapters and stealth-changing things. The worst affected is usually whichever the latest published one is.
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