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Entertaining thread.
The point that Taylor is not safe is aptly made - her options are either school (feels unsafe) or PRT (feels unsafe).
And she's not going to have Undersiders as desperately-grasped friends.
With teenagers as Not Ok and Adults as Not Ok, it only leaves childcare. Which, yeah, not a an option she can seek on her own. Maybe as a babysitter, but that requires level of trust between Taylor and adult.
Though her heart still beats with heroism, unlike Bitch's around S9 arc in canon, so she's not exactly recruitment material, as bittersweet as her telling Lily "You're a Ward, I expected you to kill me from the first day we met." is.
However, she already displayed willingness to risk with Snap, exemplified both by not calling the PRT first (excusable since other people already had phones out) and by snapping the arm. Sooner or later, she'll roll snake eyes.
Danny got written out pretty quick. Not that once per month counts for much either.
Where does the story go from here? I'd guess vigilantism engages her with villains in non-crime situations, possibly via school club or internet. The omakes offer few other possibilities. The whole "I'm not using my power" thing makes this story lean more on relationships, but you can only milk refusal to engage for so long. Already, there's shenanigans with "we order her to socialize". Taylor has very little agency - even considering that she can just phase out of the PRT building what would she do then as of now? Maybe just some more vigilantism.
Alternatively, Lily was wondering why she's still a hero for a reason. Taylor is portraying signs of being easy target for radicalization & cults - she's already isolated and hating the police. Have we seen Fallen! Taylor yet?
(Though, heh, I was really expecting another update after page 15. Luckily there's some nice omakes, didn't expect that idea to pan out.)
Power-related notes:
Anyway, since her powers are clearly patterned more like Sophia's shard and not QA's, who got that shard? Will we see rat-controller Danny?
Not many villains in Boston with power interactions, but Echidna or Blasto clones of Ghost could be fun.
It seems she can leave items phased together, much like Chevalier. This would allow her to produce ultra-thin armor with same weight & toughness as normal, as well as potential use as a discount RPG Backpack. Moderately useful since reaction speed is an issue. One of the ways boosting her base physical ability is multiplicative: Run, Taylor, Run!
Localized omniscience: Strong. This aspect is closest to QA-like, and that in a library might have been quite neat. Braille-reading might be useful just like canon. Not quite as useful for spying on its own though due the short range, but that is somewhat counteracted by being able to walk into walls.
Trump/precog: Probably extends to more than just Thinker powers and physical threats. Perhaps could be make selective or partial. Looks pretty unique (and thus interesting) to biotinkers. Annoys Masters like Cherish. Maybe Accord hates her. Might have backdoor access to shards by partial phasing of few kinds of mover powers. Precog might be linked to omniscience, wonder what Ingenue could do with that.
The point that Taylor is not safe is aptly made - her options are either school (feels unsafe) or PRT (feels unsafe).
And she's not going to have Undersiders as desperately-grasped friends.
With teenagers as Not Ok and Adults as Not Ok, it only leaves childcare. Which, yeah, not a an option she can seek on her own. Maybe as a babysitter, but that requires level of trust between Taylor and adult.
Though her heart still beats with heroism, unlike Bitch's around S9 arc in canon, so she's not exactly recruitment material, as bittersweet as her telling Lily "You're a Ward, I expected you to kill me from the first day we met." is.
However, she already displayed willingness to risk with Snap, exemplified both by not calling the PRT first (excusable since other people already had phones out) and by snapping the arm. Sooner or later, she'll roll snake eyes.
Danny got written out pretty quick. Not that once per month counts for much either.
Where does the story go from here? I'd guess vigilantism engages her with villains in non-crime situations, possibly via school club or internet. The omakes offer few other possibilities. The whole "I'm not using my power" thing makes this story lean more on relationships, but you can only milk refusal to engage for so long. Already, there's shenanigans with "we order her to socialize". Taylor has very little agency - even considering that she can just phase out of the PRT building what would she do then as of now? Maybe just some more vigilantism.
Alternatively, Lily was wondering why she's still a hero for a reason. Taylor is portraying signs of being easy target for radicalization & cults - she's already isolated and hating the police. Have we seen Fallen! Taylor yet?
(Though, heh, I was really expecting another update after page 15. Luckily there's some nice omakes, didn't expect that idea to pan out.)
Power-related notes:
Anyway, since her powers are clearly patterned more like Sophia's shard and not QA's, who got that shard? Will we see rat-controller Danny?
Not many villains in Boston with power interactions, but Echidna or Blasto clones of Ghost could be fun.
It seems she can leave items phased together, much like Chevalier. This would allow her to produce ultra-thin armor with same weight & toughness as normal, as well as potential use as a discount RPG Backpack. Moderately useful since reaction speed is an issue. One of the ways boosting her base physical ability is multiplicative: Run, Taylor, Run!
Localized omniscience: Strong. This aspect is closest to QA-like, and that in a library might have been quite neat. Braille-reading might be useful just like canon. Not quite as useful for spying on its own though due the short range, but that is somewhat counteracted by being able to walk into walls.
Trump/precog: Probably extends to more than just Thinker powers and physical threats. Perhaps could be make selective or partial. Looks pretty unique (and thus interesting) to biotinkers. Annoys Masters like Cherish. Maybe Accord hates her. Might have backdoor access to shards by partial phasing of few kinds of mover powers. Precog might be linked to omniscience, wonder what Ingenue could do with that.