You could have the process malfunction or not work at all because the Eden shards are dead and mutilated, if you don't want to bring that plotline in too soon.
Well Alucard is a demonic vampire, as is Seras (if slightly less so).
Fun fact Alucard's character sheet on TV Tropes lists him as an Eldritch Abomination.
So while she can do without normal food, she can't do without blood. That would certainly put an interesting spin on things if she ever gets captured for an extended period of time.
It's awkward to give information in the narrative and then have one character say the same information out loud. I suggests gutting the first paragraph, keeping only the stuff before "stuttered" and making a new independent clause to stick it to. That way, the dead/alive is just in Amy's dialog.
Alucard is shown to have the souls of all of the chipped vampires he's eaten. This means that vampires DO get the souls of other monsters they eat.
Nope, never mentioned. Chipped vamps were just more free in the making of ghouls.
Taylucard: "Are you telling me that all those villains... all this time... I've been eating sluts?"
These two things mentioned together makes me suspicious... And excited.
Not what I was going for; but hey, you can dream, right?
Checked both the original series and Ultimate, don't know why I thought original series named the dog Cerberus, but it actually never names them (unless it was in a bit I skipped over, only places I could find with the dog were the fight with Luc, and the last episode against Incognito). Fixed in snippet.
