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[RWBY] RWBY Shorts

Blake is in a horrible bind when she comes to Beacon, thanks to her team. Not only is she a hidden faunus, but her team leader reveals red-black wolf ears under her hood and the Schnee has the long flowing tail of an arctic fox. Making matters worse, their sister team's star member is a red fox faunus with both the ears and the tail of a vixen!

Surely she can bear it. Just a little.

That is, until she accidently blurts out that Ruby's not so bad for a Fido in earshot of both her team and JNPR...
Yang is also a faunus, and she has a dragon's firebreath.
Think of it as a automated timeline correction system. Anyone who messes with time travel it erases their memories, corrects the timeline and pulls out the bit of them that led to them discovering a path to time travel.

But it can't just throw away those pieces so it integrates them into itself. Which has given it a identity of sorts but it's not actually a person.

That's also the reason Ruby got so many chances. The echoes all hoping that this time it works. But eventually it had to do its job.
Interesting. Especially since
I agree with Yang being explosive and then I think she'd turn into a bit of a sad drunk. I also think that ruby would be kinda unaffected by booze
Blake gets super apologetic when drunk and Weiss gets cuddly.

Ruby seems unaffected but in actuality the booze removes her filter.

Everyone's drunk self would be fun to see.
Head canon - Jaune has SEVEN sisters. He knows how to handle drunk women.



Yang sobbing in Jaune's shirt "Don't abandon me" continues to sob hysterically.

Jaune - "I left for two minutes to use the bathroom"
Yang is a sad, but relatively functional drunk, Blake shows a shocking amount of self-loathing, Weiss is cuddly but also her own fear of being abandoned again come out (don't tell me this girl wouldn't have abandonment issues, even if not as bad as Yang), and Ruby acts similarly but without any filter, and has a shocking degree of nihilism to her (we're all going to die in the end, and probably not of old age, so let's have fun while it lasts type of attitude). Jaune begins to see how messed up all of them are, and is extremely concerned. Jaune himself can handle his alcohol with the best, and only gets slightly melancholic (post-fall) or nostalgic (Beacon).

Incidentally, I don't see Weiss getting anywhere near alcohol without something extreme, because of her mother, so this would either be after the Fall, a spiked punch situation, or after some other rough event.
(WHY JAUNE KILLING PENNY?! WHY IS TRAUMA THE ONLY THING YOU CAN DO TO HIM?! JESUS!)
They didn't even really give a good reason for Jaune to not heal her. If she'd been torn in half or something, Penny could have told him that it would take to long, if he could do it at all, and that by the time he'd have even been able to stabilize her, Cinder would probably have beaten and killed Weiss at that point. This definitely doesn't help the "stop traumatizing Jaune" issue, it actually hurts it, since Jaune failed to even stop Cinder, but it does give a reason to not heal Penny.
 
Yang is also a faunus, and she has a dragon's firebreath.

Interesting. Especially since




Yang is a sad, but relatively functional drunk, Blake shows a shocking amount of self-loathing, Weiss is cuddly but also her own fear of being abandoned again come out (don't tell me this girl wouldn't have abandonment issues, even if not as bad as Yang), and Ruby acts similarly but without any filter, and has a shocking degree of nihilism to her (we're all going to die in the end, and probably not of old age, so let's have fun while it lasts type of attitude). Jaune begins to see how messed up all of them are, and is extremely concerned. Jaune himself can handle his alcohol with the best, and only gets slightly melancholic (post-fall) or nostalgic (Beacon).

Incidentally, I don't see Weiss getting anywhere near alcohol without something extreme, because of her mother, so this would either be after the Fall, a spiked punch situation, or after some other rough event.

They didn't even really give a good reason for Jaune to not heal her. If she'd been torn in half or something, Penny could have told him that it would take to long, if he could do it at all, and that by the time he'd have even been able to stabilize her, Cinder would probably have beaten and killed Weiss at that point. This definitely doesn't help the "stop traumatizing Jaune" issue, it actually hurts it, since Jaune failed to even stop Cinder, but it does give a reason to not heal Penny.
I think part of your response got hidden or deleted. That or something is wrong with my view.
 
The Girls meets RWBY CHIBI!
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Chibi! Ruby has brought Ruby to the Gremlin Side!
Chibi! Weiss has excepted this


Both Are Cute
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Oh i see! Ruby has her eyes closed in the second pic

Arc Wedding!
During Aqua and Kazuma Crazy Wedding do they have Wedding Armor?
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The Speedster always gets the Buque
 
Jaune Arc, Single Father 3 (Revised) New
The lecture hall for Professor Port's Grimm Studies class was a cavernous space, its walls lined with taxidermied Grimm heads and faded battle maps, the air thick with the scent of old leather and chalk dust. Jaune Arc strode in, his school uniform covered by a garish pink dress that strained across his broad shoulders, the hem swishing awkwardly above his knees. A sparkly tiara perched lopsidedly on his blond hair, glinting under the fluorescent lights.

The room fell silent, Team RWBY and JNPR staring from their seats. Yang's lilac eyes widened, a grin tugging at her lips. Ruby stifled a giggle behind her notebook, while Weiss's jaw tightened, her ice-blue eyes screaming disapproval. Blake's ears twitched under her bow, her expression unreadable. Pyrrha's smile was warm but amused, Nora cackled outright, and Ren's calm facade barely hid a smirk. Cardin Winchester, seated in the back, snorted derisively, but a sharp glare from Jaune silenced him.

Professor Port, mid-anecdote about a Beowolf hunt, paused, his mustache twitching as he adjusted his reading glasses.

"…Mister Arc, is there a reason you are coming into my class in a pink dress and tiara?"

Jaune straightened, his voice steady despite the flush creeping up his neck.

"Tea party with my daughter, sir. Ran a bit long."

Port's eyes lit up, his booming laugh echoing off the walls.

"Ah, say no more! Is she a Wisney princess fan?"

"Very much so, sir," Jaune replied.

"Who is her favorite?" Port asked, leaning forward, genuinely curious.

Jaune's grin softened, his blue eyes warm as he thought of Mia.

"Changes regularly, but right now she really loves Elsa and Anna."

"Jolly good!" Port clapped his hands, his voice booming. "My daughters are more fond of Cinderella and Sleeping Beauty! Why, I remember when I slaughtered a Boarbatusk herd with a Wisney Store's contents strapped to my back! I had 'Let It Go' stuck in my head, and it did raise my spirits, so I sang it loud and proud to keep the Grimm's attention on me!"

Jaune chuckled, adjusting his tiara. "I'll have to remember that one, sir."

"Well! Off with you, off with you," Port said, waving his hands at Jaune's seat. He sat down at his desk, and got down to writing notes as Port resumed his lecture.

"Pink is definitely your color, VB," Yang whispered to him from behind. Jaune smirked.

"You should see me in pumps."
 
So something inspired by things like bleach, space king, beyblade, etc.

What if there's a reason that huntsmen don't usually pass on weapons?

That being that unless your aura is a perfect (or almost perfect) match for whatever aura has saturated the weapon it retaliates. Violently. Sometimes fatally.

Could be part of the reason that even with his early lack of skills nobody suspected him of being a sneak.

Because they know it's a inherited blade and nobody could possibly be dumb enough to just grab a fully aura saturated blade, not test the compatibility, and go out into combat with it.
 
How much says Weiss was jealous and wished somebody would have done that for her growing up?
Or put a twist on that.
Weiss is kinda nostalgic seeing that, as she remembers some of the few times where Willow played with her, together with Klein who wore almost the exact same outfit.
Jacques always got angry at them for "waisting time" and "ruining the family image" he wanted them to project at all times, and kinda retaliated against Willow and Klein (which is why they tried to keep it secret, but still kept trying to play with Weiss whenever they could).
 
Or put a twist on that.
Weiss is kinda nostalgic seeing that, as she remembers some of the few times where Willow played with her, together with Klein who wore almost the exact same outfit.
Jacques always got angry at them for "waisting time" and "ruining the family image" he wanted them to project at all times, and kinda retaliated against Willow and Klein (which is why they tried to keep it secret, but still kept trying to play with Weiss whenever they could).

And of course she starts buying cute outfits for Mia and playing tea party and oh my, wouldn't it be wonderful if she could become Mia's new mommy so she could spoil her like this all the time?
 
And of course she starts buying cute outfits for Mia and playing tea party and oh my, wouldn't it be wonderful if she could become Mia's new mommy so she could spoil her like this all the time?

To be fair, Weiss would be the best parent among RWBY.

Yang already did it for Ruby, and I can't help but feel like some part of her still deeply resents her family for foisting that on her. Idk if she'd ever want kids of her own, and while she's definitely qualified and would unquestionably love her kid/s to tears, a part of her would always long for the open road and the adventure & freedom that her childhood lacked. Kids pick up on stuff a lot better than most, even themselves, ever give them credit for, and that would put a growing strain on the relationship between Yang & her child/children unless someone spots it and intervenes. The thing is, Yang's gotten really good at putting up a false front of confidence, so...good luck with that.

Ruby is too obsessed with her Hero/Martyr Complex to do anything less than repeat the cycle that Summer started.

And Blake....well, enough comparisons between her and Raven have been made over the years that I feel anything I have to add would be moot.
 
I had a idea for a semblance for Mia that's kinda related to her dad's while also being perfect for a kid.

She can amp emotions instead of of aura. Which would be hella useful to be honest.

Civilian panicking? Amp bravery. Criminals doing a crime? Amp guilt and empathy.

Accidentally broke a window playing with Aunt Nora's hammer? Boost your adorability
She's a Rioter, huh? That's a strong semblance, and one that you can do a lot of things with. If you haven't read Sanderson's Mistborn, I'd give it a read, and it has a lot of interesting ways to use emotional manipulation present in it.
If I'm being honest? I do like some Adam Redemption Fics. And not just because Blake is such an annoying hypocrite verging on being a Mary Sue in the later volumes.

But because I think he could have been more complex. More interesting than just a one-note obsessive incel.

So! How would you redeem Adam Taurus?
I'm not full of ideas on the redemption, but I have some ideas for how you could flesh out his relationship with Blake (for redemption, tragedy, developing Blake, whatever).

So, I'd make Adam and Blake meet in the earlier days of the White Fang. Both of them saw the injustice, and both hated it. They threw their all into protests, displays, whatever they could do to change things, but still civil. Then, one day, Adam brings news to Blake. There's an SDC mining camp abusing its workers badly. There are humans there too, but it's mostly faunus, since they don't need lights down in the mines, so they're cheaper and less people will fuss about their abuse. Blake and Adam decide to do something about it and go free the workers, since every day they spend protesting things civilly means more people dead and crippled, so they have to act now. It goes well, and the two of them begin doing more operations like that. At first it's just cases of stopping active harm when they can't afford to wait, but as things go on, Adam begins to become more and more hateful, both at the people perpetuating harm and at the civilians he sees as enablers for the abuse. The train is when Blake finally realizes that Adam has completely lost his way, and is fighting for hatred and revenge rather than the justice and equality they once believed in. This could be the push Adam needs to reflect upon what changed, or it could drive him further into his hatred. Either way, it sets him up as a better foil for Blake and allows him to challenge her in ways she needs to grow as a person. I'm not sure where exactly the brand and his career as an SDC worker fits into all of this, but I don't want to just get rid of it. Maybe him working for the SDC was his way of trying to change things through the system?
no he did not have incest babies with his sister, he just fucked his sisters wife while his sister watched on, etc)
To quote a post in the NSFW thread:
"…I only impregnated Terra."
Drives Remnant's equivalent of an old blue volkswagen bug that over the course of the story has had so many parts replaced it's a mix match of different colors.
Is that the Blue Beetle?
I think part of your response got hidden or deleted. That or something is wrong with my view.
I don't remember exactly what it was I said there, but I think it was something to the effect of "interesting that the Silver Eyes had enough weight to make them manifest, and I'm curious as to whether this is the first time Ruby has tried, and if the Silver Eyes come from quantity or a few specific instances with a lot of weight"
 
She's a Rioter, huh? That's a strong semblance, and one that you can do a lot of things with. If you haven't read Sanderson's Mistborn, I'd give it a read, and it has a lot of interesting ways to use emotional manipulation present in it.

I'm not full of ideas on the redemption, but I have some ideas for how you could flesh out his relationship with Blake (for redemption, tragedy, developing Blake, whatever).

So, I'd make Adam and Blake meet in the earlier days of the White Fang. Both of them saw the injustice, and both hated it. They threw their all into protests, displays, whatever they could do to change things, but still civil. Then, one day, Adam brings news to Blake. There's an SDC mining camp abusing its workers badly. There are humans there too, but it's mostly faunus, since they don't need lights down in the mines, so they're cheaper and less people will fuss about their abuse. Blake and Adam decide to do something about it and go free the workers, since every day they spend protesting things civilly means more people dead and crippled, so they have to act now. It goes well, and the two of them begin doing more operations like that. At first it's just cases of stopping active harm when they can't afford to wait, but as things go on, Adam begins to become more and more hateful, both at the people perpetuating harm and at the civilians he sees as enablers for the abuse. The train is when Blake finally realizes that Adam has completely lost his way, and is fighting for hatred and revenge rather than the justice and equality they once believed in. This could be the push Adam needs to reflect upon what changed, or it could drive him further into his hatred. Either way, it sets him up as a better foil for Blake and allows him to challenge her in ways she needs to grow as a person. I'm not sure where exactly the brand and his career as an SDC worker fits into all of this, but I don't want to just get rid of it. Maybe him working for the SDC was his way of trying to change things through the system?

To quote a post in the NSFW thread:
"…I only impregnated Terra."

Is that the Blue Beetle?

I don't remember exactly what it was I said there, but I think it was something to the effect of "interesting that the Silver Eyes had enough weight to make them manifest, and I'm curious as to whether this is the first time Ruby has tried, and if the Silver Eyes come from quantity or a few specific instances with a lot of weight"

Ah ok so maybe I didn't make it clear in my explanation. He took a soul piece, not physically taking her eyes or rewriting her genetics not to have silver eyes.

He just pulled out a tiny part of her soul that would have allowed her to develop a path to time travel.

When he adds it to himself he gets tainted with a echo of her. Like a snapshot image of her taken when he pulled out that soul piece.

Put in a blender with all the other echoes.
 
Ah ok so maybe I didn't make it clear in my explanation. He took a soul piece, not physically taking her eyes or rewriting her genetics not to have silver eyes.

He just pulled out a tiny part of her soul that would have allowed her to develop a path to time travel.

When he adds it to himself he gets tainted with a echo of her. Like a snapshot image of her taken when he pulled out that soul piece.

Put in a blender with all the other echoes.
I understand that he's not actually using genetics, which is why I found the silver eyes notable. If he has silver eyes, it means that someone else with silver eyes tried this, and there were either enough of them or a particularly influential one for that to manifest over other possible. I don't know, I'm probably just explaining this poorly.
 
I understand that he's not actually using genetics, which is why I found the silver eyes notable. If he has silver eyes, it means that someone else with silver eyes tried this, and there were either enough of them or a particularly influential one for that to manifest over other possible. I don't know, I'm probably just explaining this poorly.
Oh, yes maria and summer both tried time travel at some point.

Along with

Ozpin
Jaune
Pietro
Ironwood
Yang
Nora
Weiss
Salem
Salem again through a different method
Actually you know what let's just put a * next to Salem.
Tai
Watts
And a few unknown people throughout history
 
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BY luimnigh
Aug 24, 2021
RWBY Described Badly
Volume 1: A bunch of teenagers go to trade school, learn the benefits of friendship and actually taking the prerequisite courses.
Volume 2: A bunch of teenagers go on an unsupervised and a supervised field trip. Surprisingly, the supervised one goes worse.
Volume 3: Intercollege tournament goes badly wrong when a series of injuries leads to an exchange student finding another college's equipment in the basement, an infestation, equipment malfunctions and unwanted guests. The college closes as a result.
Volume 4: Worst Roadtrip Ever, featuring manmade natural disasters, that one guy who knows you but you don't know them, that horse that traumatized your friends when they were kids, your drunk uncle passing out and you having to carry him to the hospital, and half the group starting the trip later and promising to catch up.
Volume 5: Everyone's waiting for school to start, but before it can, the worst parent-teacher conference of all time happens.
Volume 6: Worst Roadtrip Ever 2, featuring a small town so empty it's depressing, bumping into your ex's mom, adopting a grandmother, breaking your ex's heart with your gf, and just the worst airport security lady of all time.
Volume 7: The students finally graduate and enter the working world, but it turns out their boss is a control freak with terrible ideas, so after a season of trying to make him see reason, the students are fired. However, they take the IT girl with them, who the boss needs to get his project off the ground.
Volume 8: With the help of the IT girl, our heroes restore internet access for about five minutes. With the help of an exchange student and her father figure, our heroes manage to get the youngest of them away from his ex. One of our heroes suspects her mom might be a furry. Unable to access medical help, our heroes seek a cure from a naked man. Due to a walkway's lack of railings, half our heroes take a tumble. Newly sober uncle makes friends with a socialist lesbian in a holding cell.
 
So, I'd make Adam and Blake meet in the earlier days of the White Fang. Both of them saw the injustice, and both hated it. They threw their all into protests, displays, whatever they could do to change things, but still civil. Then, one day, Adam brings news to Blake. There's an SDC mining camp abusing its workers badly. There are humans there too, but it's mostly faunus, since they don't need lights down in the mines, so they're cheaper and less people will fuss about their abuse. Blake and Adam decide to do something about it and go free the workers, since every day they spend protesting things civilly means more people dead and crippled, so they have to act now. It goes well, and the two of them begin doing more operations like that. At first it's just cases of stopping active harm when they can't afford to wait, but as things go on, Adam begins to become more and more hateful, both at the people perpetuating harm and at the civilians he sees as enablers for the abuse. The train is when Blake finally realizes that Adam has completely lost his way, and is fighting for hatred and revenge rather than the justice and equality they once believed in. This could be the push Adam needs to reflect upon what changed, or it could drive him further into his hatred. Either way, it sets him up as a better foil for Blake and allows him to challenge her in ways she needs to grow as a person. I'm not sure where exactly the brand and his career as an SDC worker fits into all of this, but I don't want to just get rid of it. Maybe him working for the SDC was his way of trying to change things through the system?

Also good! Sorry I haven't been replying to all your quotation posts, I wasn't sure where to start. Again, fascist and radical movements throughout history do tend to attract young women, especially young bored rich women who want to feel authentic. Blake falling into that thanks to Adam, and Adam falling into it due to his own issues, and both doing some reflection on how deep they're falling would have been far more interesting than what we got.
 
Again, fascist and radical movements throughout history do tend to attract young women, especially young bored rich women who want to feel authentic.
There would also definitely be an aspect of wanting to be like her parents in there, having grown up on stories of the injustice they fought against, which would only compound the guilt and shame at losing her way. Also, she was a kid at the time, and she grew up knowing that the White Fang was a force for good, something to respect, and wasn't mature enough to understand the nuances and why the new White Fang was fundamentally different than the old one.

Basically, it's a lot more personal than just bored rich girl.
 
There would also definitely be an aspect of wanting to be like her parents in there, having grown up on stories of the injustice they fought against, which would only compound the guilt and shame at losing her way. Also, she was a kid at the time, and she grew up knowing that the White Fang was a force for good, something to respect, and wasn't mature enough to understand the nuances and why the new White Fang was fundamentally different than the old one.

Basically, it's a lot more personal than just bored rich girl.

True, which drastically improves Blake as a character. And Adam too.
 
Huh I wonder if menagerie has specialty classism like transformers did?

You're a aquatic faunus so you have to work fishing or navy.

You're a predator faunus so naturally you have to be military or hunter.

You're a herbivore faunus so you must be good at farming.
 
Huh I wonder if menagerie has specialty classism like transformers did?

You're a aquatic faunus so you have to work fishing or navy.

You're a predator faunus so naturally you have to be military or hunter.

You're a herbivore faunus so you must be good at farming.
I'd say keep it subtle in the big cities, and mainly have it out in the countryside, so Blake can keep her idealized version of Menagerie. (She was what, twelve when she was last there?) I'm not saying Menagerie has to be bad, but it would only make sense if Blake's perception of it was tinted by youth and her parents' dream of the perfect utopia they threw themselves into creating, while the reality was far more human.
 

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